福建高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假如你是某健康专栏的顾问李华，收到学生Tony的来信，信中谈到他每天学习注意力不集中，昏昏欲睡，询问如何才能拥有健康的生活，请给他回信并提出相应的建议(至少三个建议)。

例如：1. 合理膳食；2. 适量运动。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。

Dear Tony,  

You’ve asked my advice on how to lead a healthy life. Here are some suggestions for you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Harry来信向你咨询怎样才能学好中文。请写封回信。

内容包括：

1.学好汉语的重要性及理由；2. 学好汉语的方法；3. 鼓励学好汉语。

注意：1.词数120词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当增加细节。

Dear Harry,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on learning Chinese.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，你的英语朋友Peter来信向你询问如何才能学好中文。请你根据如下要点给他写一封回信提供建议。

内容要点：1. 参加中文学习班； 2. 看中文书刊、电视；3. …

注意：

1. 词数50词左右，开头结尾已经为你写好，不纳入总词数；

2. 第三点为其他建议。

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4．假定你是李华，你的美国网友Tom来信说他的家人都很喜欢吃中餐，向你请教如何在中餐馆选择健康的中餐。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容主要包括：

1.蔬菜为主，少油少盐；

2.蒸、煮为佳，不加味精(MSG)；

3.份量适当，避免浪费。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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5．假如你是李华，你的英国网友Robert对汉语很感兴趣，本学期选修了汉语课程。近期他来信询问提高汉语水平的方法，请你给他写一封回信，内容要点如下：

1. 表达问候；

2. 提出建议及其理由；

3. 祝愿。

注意：1. 词数为100词左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。

Dear Robert,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件，内容包括：

1.你的建议；

2.你的理由。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

Dear English radio station,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，她不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你写一封建议信，词数100左右,内容包括

1.向Jenny表示问候和安慰。

2.针对她的问题提出建议:

(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动;

(2)向老师求助

(3)制定可行的日程安排，专注于学习

Dear Jenny,

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Yours sincerely ,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，在你校学习了一个月的英国男孩Tom不太适应这里的生活，请给他写一封信，内容包括：

1.安慰；

2.提建议；

3.邀请他参加你的生日聚会。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的好友Jack面对即将到来的高中第一次半期考感到紧张不安，请你给他写一封信，谈谈备考中的注意事项及建议，帮助他缓解压力。

注意：

1.词数80左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）；

2.可适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Robert是你校高一年级交换生。目前，因学业任务繁重，他无法适应新的高中生活而写信向你求助。请你给该同学写一封回信，内容要点如下：

1.表达安慰与理解；

2.提出合理建议；

3.你的祝福。

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Robert,

I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to the new school life.

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Tony,

You’ve asked my advice on how to lead a healthy life. Here are some suggestions for you.

    First, It is advisable to keep a balanced diet. Nutrition which helps make your body strong can be found in different kind of food. Second, have regular daily habits. Arrange your everyday time properly and stick to it strictly. Enough sleep is important because the right amount of sleep can make you energetic. As a well-known proverb says, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Finally, you should take some exercise and most importantly, be in a good mood every day.

    I sincerely hope that you find my suggestions helpful.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】这是一篇应用文，要求考生以李华的身份针对学生Tony的来信中提到的每天学习注意力不集中，昏昏欲睡的问题，给出合理的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

重要的：important → significant

有名的：well-known→ famous

有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Second, have regular daily habits.

拓展句：Second, have regular daily habits, which is very important.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Nutrition which helps make your body strong can be found in different kind of food.（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 As a well-known proverb says, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.（运用

2．Dear Harry,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on learning Chinese.

Chinese is one of the most ancient languages in the world, which is also one of the official languages of the United Nations. With the increasing growth of China’s economy, Chinese will play a more important part in international communication. Therefore, if you have a master of Chinese language, you will have more opportunities in the future.

As for suggestions, it is important to take a Chinese course, which will enable you to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Besides, it is also helpful to watch Chinese TV programs and read Chinese articles online whenever possible. In addition, it may be a good idea to learn classic Chinese songs.

Try and write to me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求针对朋友提出的如何学好中文的问题写封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

收到某人来信：receive one’s letter→hear from sb

掌握：have a master of→have a command of

此外：besides →what’s more

有帮助的：helpful→beneficial

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It may be a good idea to learn classic Chinese songs.

拓展句：There is no doubt that learning classic Chinese songs is a good idea.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese is one of the most ancient languages in the world, which is also one of the official languages of the United Nations. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Therefore, if you have a master of Chinese language, you will have more opportunities in the future.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

3．Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.

It is advisable to take a Chinese course, where you can learn Chinese properly under the guidance of a teacher. Being exposed to Chinese books and TV programs is recommended. Besides, it is beneficial for you to learn some Chinese songs, which can make your learning more interesting and effective.

Hopefully, you will make great progress in Chinese learning.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英语朋友Peter写封信，给他提一些学好中文的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

明智的：advisable→wise

另外：besides→moreover

有益的：beneficial→advantageous

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

拓展句：I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

【点睛】[高分句型1] It is advisable to take a Chinese course, where you can learn Chinese properly under the guidance of a teacher. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, it is beneficial for you to learn some Chinese songs, which can make your learning more interesting and effective. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

4．Dear Tom,

I’m very delighted that your family are in favor of Chinese cuisine, but it can be high in oil and salt.

To choose a healthier Chinese cuisine, my first suggestion is to choose dishes with lots of vegetables. Additionally, you should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebab and red braised pork, and ask the chef to use less oil, cut down salt and cut out MSG in your food’s preparation. Beyond this, studies show that eating foods that are steamed or boiled is of great benefit to your health. Last but not least, you’d better order fewer dishes, because main dish portions are often quite large. And it is highly recommended that you should divide the dishes and eat up.

Hope my advice will be helpful to you and wish you a healthy life!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国网友Tom来信说他的家人都很喜欢吃中餐，向你请教如何在中餐馆选择健康的中餐。请你用英语给他写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

有益的：be of great benefit→beneficial

建议：advice/ suggestion→tip

许多：lots of→a lot of

此外：additionally→besides

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To choose a healthier Chinese cuisine, my first suggestion is to choose dishes with lots of vegetables.

拓展句：If you want to choose a healthier Chinese cuisine, my first suggestion is to choose dishes with lots of vegetables.

【点睛】[高分句型1] To choose a healthier Chinese cuisine, my first suggestion is to choose dishes with lots of vegetables. (运用了不定式作目的状语)

[高分句型2] Additionally, you should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebab and red braised pork, and ask the chef to use less oil, cut down salt and cut out MSG in your food’s preparation. (运用了which引导定语从句)

5．Dear Robert,

Knowing that you are longing for some advice on how to improve your Chinese, I am very glad to offer you a few suggestions.

First of all, it is helpful to watch TV programs in Chinese whenever possible, which can provide you with enjoyable context and make your learning appealing. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. What’s more, keeping on writing diaries will give you a good opportunity to promote your language.

May you make greater progress! And welcome to China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给本学期选修了汉语课程的英国网友Robert写一封信，告诉他一些提高汉语水平的方法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

提升、改进：improve →promote

有益的：helpful→beneficial

机会：opportunity→chance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：What’s more, keeping on writing diaries will give you a good opportunity to promote your language.

拓展句：What’s more, if you keep on writing diaries, you will gain a good opportunity to promote your language.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, it is helpful to watch TV programs in Chinese whenever possible, which can provide you with enjoyable context and make your learning appealing.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Knowing that you are longing for some advice on how to improve your Chinese, I am very glad to offer you a few suggestions. (运用了现在分词短语作原因状语以及“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语)

6．Dear English radio station,

Knowing that you will adjust the broadcast time slot, length and column, I am writing to give my suggestions.

First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students get to know national events and stimulate their listening ability. Secondly, English pop songs can be played for ten minutes after school at noon, which can relieve students’ study pressure . Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.

Hoping my suggestions can be helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考写一封邮件，就学校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整情况给出自己的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestions→ advice/tips

缓解，放松：relieve→ relax/ease

压力：pressure→ stress

优秀的：excellent→ terrific/outstanding

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.

拓展句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays which are published by students can be played.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students get to know national events and stimulate their listening ability.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)

【高分句型2】Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.(运用了非谓语动词作后置定语。)

7．Dear Jenny,

I am really sorry to hear that you are having trouble in fitting in with the new environment and making new friends after entering the high school．Don't worry about it. In fact, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you．

To begin with, why not invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school? This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others. In addition, try your best to help others when they are in trouble. Just as the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, it would be a good idea to ask them to help you when you have difficulty. It is well known to us all that good friends should share happiness and sorrow. I hope you will find these ideas useful. I believe, through your effort, you will get along well with your new classmates and make a lot of friends.

Best wishes.

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jenny写信提出一些关于适应环境和交朋友的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

困难：trouble→difficulty

建议：tips→ suggestions

首先：to begin with→firstly

此外：in addition→ what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To begin with, why not invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school? This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others.

拓展句：To begin with, invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school, which will help you understand each other better by communicating with others.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Just as the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】It is well known to us all that good friends should share happiness and sorrow.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）

8．Dear Tom，

I’m Li Hua, one of your schoolmates. Learning that you fail to adapt yourself well to the school life here, I am writing to express my earnest comfort to you. Meanwhile, I’d like to share with you some constructive suggestions.

On the one hand, you can try communicating with us more, sharing with us your concerns as well as joys and pleasure. On the other hand, it must be very helpful to you to fit into the life here if you can join us in our activities, experiencing our life more and exploring our culture more. By the way, would you like to join our school basketball team?

My birthday is approaching and it’s my honour if you would come to my birthday party. Let’s have fun together!

Yours，

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在校学习一个月的英国男孩Tom写信，就他不太适应这里的生活这一情况表示安慰并给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

与此同时：Meanwhile→ At the same time

玩得开心：have fun → enjoy oneself

建议：suggestion→ advice

真诚的：earnest→ sincere

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Meanwhile, I’d like to share with you some constructive suggestions.

拓展句：Meanwhile, I’d like to share with you some constructive suggestions, which can benefit you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】On the one hand, you can try communicating with us more, sharing with us your concerns as well as joys and pleasure.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作伴随状语）

【高分句型2】My birthday is approaching and it’s my honour if you would come to my birthday party.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）

9．Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that you feel anxious about the coming mid-term exam. Here are some suggestions for you.

First, it’s normal to feel stressed when we face a challenge. So you’d better learn to relax yourself. Why not go out for a walk or do some exercise? Additionally, it would be beneficial to have enough sleep which can make you full of energy and perform well in the exam. With these done, I’m convinced that you will have a good performance during the exam.

Looking forward to your good news.

Yours，

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Jack写封信，谈谈准备高中第一次半期考中的注意事项及建议，帮助他缓解压力。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

紧张的：stressed→strained

另外：additionally→moreover

有益的：beneficial→helpful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are some suggestions for you.

拓展句：Here are some suggestions that can help you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you feel anxious about the coming mid-term exam. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Additionally, it would be beneficial to have enough sleep which can make you full of energy and perform well in the exam. (运用了which引导的定语从句)

10．Dear Robert,

I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to the new school life. It is not unusual for a freshman to meet the challenge. Here I am writing to put forward some advice.

First, I would like to suggest that you take an active part in various activities, through which you may make more Chinese friends. Besides, you had better spend time learning about the cultural differences between Chinese and English. In addition, it is a good idea/choice to ask the teachers or the School’s Helping Center for help. Last, it is of great importance to learn to speak Chinese well, since it can contribute you to communicating with the Chinese more freely.

Hope that my suggestions would be helpful to you. May you adapt to the new school life quickly.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因学业任务繁重、无法适应新的高中生活而写信向你求助的英国高一交换生Robert回信，给他提出建议，内容要点如下：1.表达安慰与理解；2.提出合理建议；3.你的祝福。

【详解】1.词汇积累

遇见：meet→encounter

首先：first→to begin with

向某人求助：turn to sb. for help→ask sb. for help

有益的：helpful→beneficial

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, you had better spend time learning about the cultural differences between Chinese and English.

拓展句：Besides, you had better spend time learning about the cultural differences between Chinese and English, because it can help you conquer cultural misunderstandings.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I would like to suggest that you take an active part in various activities, through which you may make more Chinese friends. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Last, it is of great importance to learn to speak Chinese well, since it can contribute you to communicating with the Chinese more freely. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)