高中英语外研版 (2019)选择性必修 第三册Unit 5 Learning from nature精品ppt课件

Period Five　Writing—Picture writing about a lesson from nature

写作指导

本单元的写作目标是“看图作文”。看图作文要求对一幅或多幅图画进行分析，表达出其内容和寓意。可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作：

第一部分：写出标题。标题要切合图画内容。

第二部分：图画内容。适当分析并简要描述图画内容，注意语言的简练，切记冗杂拖拉的表达。

第三部分：图画隐喻。这部分要充分发挥想象，根据图画内容，详细描述图画隐含的寓意。提出的观点要有说服力，隐喻恰当，充满哲理。

常用表达

1．描述图画：

(1)The picture shows that...

(2)From the picture we can see that...

(3)It is illustrated in the picture that...

(4)In the picture there is...

2．阐明寓意：

(1)We can conclude that...

(2)The picture symbolizes that...

(3)In my opinion/view...

(4)As far as I’m concerned...

(5)Personally speaking...

下面是一幅有关自然现象的图画，根据这幅图画写一篇80词左右的短文，说一说这幅图画表现的自然现象以及你从中领悟到什么样的道理。

审题

写作要求是看图作文，通过自然现象学习到人生哲理。写作时应注意下面几点：

1．确定文体：这是一篇看图作文，是学生熟悉的文体。

2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。

3．主体人称：由于是先描写图画内容，再讲述图画的隐含比喻，所以人称应该以第三人称或第一人称为主。

谋篇

第一段：应开门见山，描写图画内容。

第二段：由浅入深，说明图画的隐喻意义。

核心词汇

1．落叶the fallen leaves

2．象征symbolize

3．留学的，海外的overseas

4．培养，滋养cultivate

5．返回return to

6．营养nourishment

7．有助于contribute to

8．建造，建设construct

连词成句

1．落叶聚集在树的周围滋养树根。(in order to)

The fallen leaves gather around the tree in order to cultivate the tree’s roots.

2．树根象征祖国。

The tree’s roots symbolize one’s motherland.

3．他们已经在国外待了很长时间。

They have spent a long time abroad.

4．他们将回归祖国。

They will return to their homeland.

句式升级

1．请用定语从句将句1和句2合成一句话

The fallen leaves gather around the tree in order to cultivate the tree’s roots，which symbolize one’s motherland.

2．请用while将句3和句4合成一句话

While they have spent a long time abroad，they will return to their homeland.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

Fallen Leaves Are Destined to Return to Their Roots

The picture above shows when autumn arrives，leaves from trees will fall to the ground.The fallen leaves gather around the tree in order to cultivate the tree’s roots, which symbolize one’s motherland.

More and more overseas Chinese are returning or have already returned to China. While they have spent a long time abroad，regardless of the life they may have led，they will return to their roots, home.Because they are grateful for their motherland’s nourishment and support，they return to contribute to constructing their homeland with the knowledge，experience and wealth gained abroad.