云南省昆明市2021-2023年三年中考一模英语解析版试题分类汇编：书面表达

云南省昆明市2021-2023年三年中考一模英语解析版试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年云南省昆明市中考一模英语试题

56．______ Give(s) Me More Than Knowledge

提示：成长时光里，一个个熟悉的身影，一堂堂生动有趣的课，一次次丰富多彩的活动，一项项弥足珍贵的技能……都让我们终生受益。请以“______ Give(s) Me More Than Knowledge”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述帮助你获得知识、启迪智慧、点燃心灵的人或一次经历。

要求：1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；

2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。

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2022年云南省昆明市中考一模英语试题

61．提示： 在初中三年的学习生活中，一定有许多事如运动会、艺术节、演讲比赛、外出旅行、夏令营或者一次重要的考试给你留下了深刻的印象，成为你的美好的记忆，请以“A Great Memory”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享一件你记忆中美好的事及你的感悟。

要求：语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60词；文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。否则以零分计算。

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2021年云南省昆明市中考一模英语试题

81．2020年新冠疫情期间，为了保障各级学生完成学业，各地在国家教育部的要求下都开设了网上课程。请你以Air classroom为题目，谈谈你在学校网课中学习的内容、方式及感受。

要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。

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2023年云南省昆明市中考一模英语试题

56．例文

My English Teacher Gives Me More Than Knowledge

When I was new in the middle school, I couldn’t speak English confidently because of my poor pronunciation. Many students laughed at me. I even didn’t dare to answer questions in class. Finally, I failed in the final exam. My English teacher noticed my silence. She encouraged me to overcome these difficulties and told me not to give up. With the help of her, I could speak confidently in public and won the first prize in the English speaking competition.

From this experience, I understand that we should face the difficulties bravely. The harder we work, the better we will get.

【详解】

[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，讲述自己的经历；

第二步，表达自己的感悟和哲理。

[亮点词汇]

①because of因为

②laugh at嘲笑

③give up放弃

④with the help of在……的帮助下

[高分句型]

①When I was new in the middle school, I couldn’t speak English confidently because of my poor pronunciation.（when引导时间状语从句）

② The harder we work, the better we will get.（“the+比较级，the+比较级”的结构）

2022年云南省昆明市中考一模英语试题

61．                                                                                                                                A Great Memory

Mother’s love is true love. She does much for us. Now I am in Grade Three, I have grown up, so I want to do something for her to show my love in this winter.

I decided to help her wash clothes. I collected the dirty clothes and sorted them according to the colour. I put the big ones into the washing machine, like: jeans, coat and so on. Put the lotions into them. Then it got to work. Then I put socks and underwears into a basin. After that, I put some water and lotions onto the clothes. A few minutes later, I began to put forth my strength to wash them. With time going by, I finished.   

Looking at the clean clothes, I felt proud of myself, meanwhile I knew how hard my mother worked before. I made my mind to help her everyday.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“A Great Memory”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享一件记忆中美好的事及感悟。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称；时态采用一般过去时为主。结合自我亲身经历分享一件记忆中美好的事及感悟。保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。

2021年云南省昆明市中考一模英语试题

81．例文：

Air classroom

I studied at home in the first few weeks of this term. I usually learned online at home. We had classes from Monday to Friday and we had eight classes every day. We began our class at eight in the morning and finished it at four in the afternoon. In my free time, I spent an hour reading every day. I think reading is good for us. We did eye exercises between classes to protect our eyes every day.

I think air classroom is good because we don’t have to get up early. In this way, we can have more time to sleep, which is good for our health. Although online learning is good, I miss my school, my teachers and my classmates. I hope we can return to the school as soon as possible.

【详解】

1.题干解读：题目要求以“Air classroom”为题写一篇短文谈谈自己在网课学习中学习的内容、方式及感受，要求不少于60词。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，结合一般现在时和一般过去时来谈自己网课学习的内容、方式及感受，要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。