云南省昆明市盘龙区2020-2022年三年中考一模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

云南省昆明市盘龙区2020-2022年三年中考一模英语试题分类汇编

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2022年云南省昆明市盘龙区中考一模英语试题

81．Hope in my heart

提示：在我们的学习或生活中，困难和失败在所难免，但只要我们不失去信心和希望，就能战胜它们。请以“Hope in my heart”为题目，写一篇英语短文来讲述自己坚持希望后获得成功的一次经历及感受。

要求：

1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上做答，一律不得分。

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2021年云南省昆明市盘龙区中考一模英语试题

81．在你的成长过程中，总有一些人陪伴着你、关心着你和帮助着你，让你内心充满希望， 让你脸上荡潇着甜美的笑容，让你感受到满满的爱。请以The person I grow up with为题，写一篇短文。

要求：

1.注意紧扣主题，语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。

2.不得使用真实姓名和学校，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用 Guanming Middle School。

3.词数不少于60个。

The person I grow up with

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2020年云南省昆明市盘龙区中考一模英语试题

61．懂得感恩是一种美德，请你以“The person I want to thank most”为题， 写一个你最想感谢的人，作文要求如下：

1. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。

2. 不得使用真实

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2022年云南省昆明市盘龙区中考一模英语试题

81．例文

Hope in my heart

I had trouble learning English before, I got bad grades, so I even lost heart. My teacher had a long talk with me, and I knew I should keep hope in my heart. I found confidence again. So I kept on practicing English every day and working hard on it. Each time I had problems in English, I went to my teacher and asked for the solutions.

About half a year later, I caught up with others, and I got an A in the final exam. I felt so happy. I think if you have hope in your heart, you will be able to face the difficulties bravely and succeed one day.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，要求以“Hope in my heart”为题目，写一篇英语短文来讲述自己坚持希望后获得成功的一次经历及感受。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时，使用第一人称来行文。可以进行两段式描写，第一段讲述在学习或生活中的困难及失败，自己是怎样心怀希望的；第二段讲述自己坚持希望后获得成功的感受。写作时要注意涵盖所有要求的内容，注意细节，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。

2021年云南省昆明市盘龙区中考一模英语试题

81．例文

The person I grow up with

My father always loves me and tries to help me.

When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and do homework every day. I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books.

No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“和我一起长大的人”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。描述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述过去和爸爸之间发生的一件事；第三段表达自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

2020年云南省昆明市盘龙区中考一模英语试题

61．例文

The person I want to thank most

In my life, many people have helped me a lot, but Miss Chen is one of the most important persons in my life. I want to thank her most.

Miss Chen is my English teacher. She’s very kind and outgoing. She likes to help with others. She has helped me a lot in learning English. She is so energetic that her classes are very interesting and funny. Sometimes she’s too strict with us. I couldn’t do well in English before. With her help I started to take much interest in learning English. I’m good at English now. Not only did she helped me with my English, she also taught me how to face the trouble.

I love her so deeply. I want to say to her: “Miss Chen, I won't let you down. I will study harder and harder. Thanks for giving me so much help. I won’t forget you forever!”

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作；文章主题是“我最想感谢的人”，写作时要紧扣主题；第一段指明我最想感谢的人是谁；第二段具体叙述为什么她是我最感谢的人；第三段叙述对她的承诺，感情的升华。

2.例文解读：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时，运用得当合理；叙述最感谢她的理由非常具体详细，充满感激之情；叙述情感真切。

3.高分亮点：

短语：one of；help with；be strict with sb.；do well in；take interest in；let sb. down；be good at; harder and harder；thanks for…。

句型：not only...but also；so…that…；宾语从句。