高考英语书面表达读后续写——The Last Delivery 课件

这是一份高考英语书面表达读后续写——The Last Delivery 课件，共31页。PPT课件主要包含了A story，The porter，Strangers ，故事情节， ，porter，Idea 1，Idea 2等内容，欢迎下载使用。

Interpretatin f the text 文本解读
A rich cuple
Interpretatin f the text 文本解读 (Wh)
Interpretatin f the text 文本解读(When)
1. After purchasing everything they wanted, they called a prter t carry everything and drp it ff at their hme. (Para. 2)
2. …and finally he settled fr $15. (Para. 3)
3. They reached their hme and an hur passed, tw hurs passed…(Para. 4)
Interpretatin f the text文本解读(Hw)
一对有钱的夫妇为了举办新年晚会去超市置办了很多昂贵的物品，然后让一位年老多病的搬运工以廉价的劳动力帮他们运到家里，因搬运工迟迟未送到而以貌取人怀疑搬运工的人品，最后从另一名搬运工那里了解真相后感到十分羞愧。
情感线： 文中的年老多病的搬运工生活窘迫，即使充当最廉价的劳动力吃了亏也愿意帮助有钱的夫妇搬运新年货物。有钱的夫妇购买新年货物时挥金如土，而面对廉价的搬运费时还要讨价还价，非但没有同情心，而且还因为占了老人的便宜而沾沾自喜。最后结合所给的续写的两段首句可以发现，这对有钱的夫妇对老人的态度的前后反差较大，从沾沾自喜，埋怨愤怒到羞愧感动的过程。
Interpretatin f the title 标题解读 (G-N策略）
1. 这位年老的搬运工因为身体原因而无法承担得起这次搬运任务而叫他的工友帮他完成最后一次搬运，表现出了老人的强烈的责任心； 2. 这对有钱的夫妇受老人的品质感动，而帮他解决了经济上的困难作为回报，让老人结束了这种超负荷的体力活，启发我们善良的品质能够感染他人。 ...
market, purchasing, prter, delivering, $15, earn, address, trust, angry, disappeared
market; address
Interpretatin f the underlined wrds 划线词解读
purchasing; delivering; earn; disappeared
trust; angry
Interpretatin f the first sentences f the tw cntinuedparagraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
1. Interpretatin f given infrmatin首句解读：Para. 1 The angry wife asked him, “Where is that ld thief? This is ur stuff.”
Given Infrmatin
His clthes were trn, and he lked as if he wasn’t even able t meet his daily needs. (Para. 2) They stpped him t inquire abut the ld prter but then nticed that he was carrying their stuff in his cart! (Para. 6)
New Infrmatin
① What was the new prter’s reactin when hearing the angry wife’s wrds? ② Where was the ld prter?③ What happened t the ld prter?④ Why did the ld prter ask the new prter t help deliver the gds?
1. Interpretatin f given infrmatin首句解读：Para. 2 Upn hearing that, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned t his wife.
The prter wh came was f an ld age, nt very healthy lking.（Para.2) The cuple was very happy thinking abut hw well they had bargained with the pr prter…（Para.4)
① What did the husband say t his wife? ② Hw did the wife react t her husband’s wrds?③ What a life lessn did the wife learn?
Interpretatin f writing ideas 写作思路解读
glaring at her resentfully,retrted...
was abut t add mre cntemptuus cmments
was struck dead with shame
regretted, embarrassed， aplgized, t visit...
Baffled, respnded at nce,
smiled and cntinued his delivering in the sun
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I.词汇的积累：名词： cmplaint 动词： thrw, mind, argue, bargain, settle fr, struggle, trust, inquire, file, stp形容词：rich, fixed, mere, single, pr, happy, angry 副词：still, always, immediately
II. 词块和句的积累： 1. thrw a party, be f high cst, fixed price, purchase, , healthy, lking, trn, meet ne’s daily needs, qute, bargain with, settle fr, be struggling t d..., get angry at sb., feed neself, inquire, file a cmplaint against sb. 2. They wanted t maintain their high living standards s they didn't mind paying a lt fr it. 3. His clthes were trn, and he lked as if he wasn’t even able t meet his daily needs. 4. Yet, the cuple argued and bargained with the prter, and finally he settled fr $15.
5. The prter was struggling t make mney fr every single meal, s he needed anything he culd earn. 6. The cuple was very happy thinking abut hw well they had bargained with the pr prter, paid him $15 in advance and left after giving the prter their address fr delivery. 7. I am sure that, instead f delivering it t ur hme, he must have disappeared with everything.
III. 课外拓展Emtinal languages: “Surprise ” r “ Embarrassment”1. Adjectives`She std besides her chair, surprised and embarrassed.她站在椅子旁边，又是惊讶又是尴尬。S embarrassed was she that she std there clumsily, feeling the bld rushing t her face.她是如此的尴尬以至于她笨拙地站在那里，感到血液都冲到了脸上。
III. 课外拓展Emtinal languages: “Surprise ” r “ Embarrassment”2. Bdy language:She frze, her muth hanging pen.她呆住了，嘴巴张开着。She cupped her face with her hands, scratched her head, breathed and breathed until she felt calm.她用手托着脸，挠挠头，不停地呼吸，直到感到平静下来。She lwered a bit f her bdy, hesitated fr a mment, wndering hw t hide her inner embarrassment.她微微低下身子，犹豫了一会儿，在想如何去掩饰内心的尴尬。
3. Facial expressinsShe pened her muth with her eyes widening and face turning red.她张大着嘴巴，同时瞪着眼睛，脸顿时变红。Suddenly, she leapt up, embarrassment written in her red face.突然，她跳了起来，涨红的脸上写满了窘迫。4. Other indirect descriptinsAll the air seemed t disappear and she felt as if the whle wrld was watching her.所有的空气似乎都消失了，她觉得整个世界好像都在注视着她。She was struck dead with embarrassment, heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs.她尴尬得要死，心脏在剧烈地跳动着，撞击着她的肋骨。
2.妻子尴尬地站在那里，满脸涨得通红。 ① The wife std there with embarrassment, ________________________________________. (运用并列句结构)
Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换又累又饿，老人在灼热的大中午再也走不动了。① The ld ______________________________ g any further in this heat f the nn.(运用句型))② ___________________, the ld prter culdn’t g any further in this heat f the nn.(运用形容词作主语补足语)
Tired and hungry
t tired and hungry t
and she felt the bld rushing t her face
② The wife std there with embarrassment, ________________________________________. (运用现在分词作状语) ③ The wife std there with embarrassment, ________________________________________. (运用介词with的复合结构) ④ The wife std there with embarrassment, ________________________________________. (运用独立主格结构)
feeling the bld rushing t her face
the bld rushing t her face
with the bld rushing t her face
老人诚实的品质让妻子深受触动，脸上写满了愧疚之情。① ________________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.(运用…结构)②________________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.(运用放句首的倒装句型) ③_____________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.(运用强调谓语动词句型)
The hnesty f the ld prter did strike the wife a great deal
S hnest was the ld prter that the wife was struck a great deal
The ld prter was s hnest that the wife was struck a great deal
④ The wife std there with embarrassment, ________________________________________. (运用独立主格结构)
the bld rushing t her face
4. 那时，她才意识到不能以貌取人。① ________________________ that we can’t judge a bk by its cver.(运用“nly+状语”放句首的倒装句句型)② __________________________ that we can’t judge a bk by its cver.(运用“Nt until”放句首的倒装句句型)③ _____________________________ that we can’t judge a bk by its cver.(运用“It was nt ”的强调句型)
Nt until then did she realize
Only then did she realize
It was nt until then that she realized
Pssible versin 1
Para.1The angry wife asked him, “Where is that ld thief? This is ur stuff.” She was abut t add mre cntemptuus cmments n the ld prter when she suddenly nticed that the man was glaring at her resentfully. “Madam, please calm dwn. Jack is nt a thief! ” retrted the prter, “He is actually terribly sick and isn’t able t earn enugh t even have a single meal f the day. Just nw, n the way t deliver yur stuff, he was t weak t g any further in this heat f the nn. Despite falling dwn, he never frgt his prmise and handed me $15, keeping telling me t deliver it as fast as pssible”
Pssible versin 1
Para.2Upn hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned t his wife. “He was hungry, he was pr, but he was truly an hnest man,” the husband admitted with trembling vice. At that, the wife was struck dead with shame, heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs. Hw culd she be angry with such a kind and respnsible man? Like a child wh made a mistake, she had n curage t lk int her husband’s eyes. Thrugh all these unexpected things, it eventually dawned n her that hnesty has n class and she shuld respect everyne regardless f their financial and scial status.
评点：妻子的傲慢与年轻工友的义愤填膺，丈夫的热泪盈眶与妻子的满脸窘迫，这些细节的描写，都使人物的鲜明的性格跃然纸上。 “cntemptuus”, “resentfully”, “retrt”, “struck dead with shame”等与情感有关的高级词汇的使用，使文章变得有血有肉，读起来津津有味。最后，妻子的幡然悔悟对文章进行了一个主题上的升华，通过人物的改变给故事画上了圆满的句号。
Pssible versin 2
Para.1The angry wife asked him, “Where is that ld thief? This is ur stuff.” Baffled, the prter respnded at nce, “ Yu mean Jack? He is nt a thief ! He is the best guy I’ve ever knwn.” Hwever, the wife sneered, “ Yu must be his accmplice, r ur stuff culdn’t have ended in yur cart.” The prter, his face flushing with irritatin, retrted, “We are nt thieves. We earn ur living in an hnest way! Actually Jack had a car accident after he set ff with yur shpping. Thugh badly injured, he anxiusly called me up and handed me $15 t help him deliver it fr yu.”
Para.2Upn hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned t his wife. “ Hney, we did misunderstand such an hnest man. We we him a sincere aplgy,” regretted the husband, seeking fr his wife’s advice. But then came a dead silence fr a while. The wife std there embarrassed, the bld rushing t her face. Never did she realize such a pr man shuld be s hnest and respnsible. With quivering vice, the wife plitely aplgized and then decided t visit Jack at nce. Gazing after the rich cuple until they vanished frm his sight, the prter smiled and cntinued his delivering in the sun. Amazingly, he didn’t feel unbearably ht any lnger.