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阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。 We shuldn’t judge a persn by their appearance but we d. In fact, the experts say that when we meet smene fr the first time we make a decisin abut what that persn is like in three secnds. But what d we lk at? One f the mst imprtant things is clthes, but it isn't the brand f clthes that peple wear that is imprtant. The imprtant thing is t wear the right clthes fr the ccasin. Schls have always understd this and a lt f them ask their students t wear a unifrm. Why? A lt f teachers think a unifrm makes students feel that they are part f their schl and that their unifrm helps them t be serius abut their studies. Teachers say that unifrms can help in ther ways t. If all the students wear unifrms, they can't judge each ther because f their clthes. It als avids arguments abut wh r what is fashinable. Hwever, it is nt nly schls that want peple t dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas abut what the peple in a certain prfessin shuld wear. If we visit a dctr, we expect t see respectable clthes under the dctr’s white cat. When we g int a bank we expect the staff t wear suits r dresses. Plice fficers wear unifrms t deter crime by establishing a visible presence while n patrl, t make themselves easily identifiable t nn-plice fficers r their clleagues wh require assistance, and t quickly identify each ther at crime scenes fr ease f crdinatin. In fact, a lt f cmpanies have dress cdes fr their staff because they knw that the custmers expect t see them dressed in certain types f clthes. But can ur clthes really tell peple what we are like? Maybe nt, but they can shw ur attitude t what we are ding at the mment. When peple see us in the right clthes, they think we are serius abut what we are ding. Furthermre, if we are clean, smart and plite, peple will have cnfidence in us.
What is a Summary?
A shrtened passage (60wrds)Retain the key pints f the riginal neA restatement in yur wn wrdsA readable cntinuus whle
Original Passage
Reading fr Structure
Hw many parts can we divide the passage?Para 1：Part1→ argumentpara2: evidence/examplepara3: evidence/example
Part 2 supprting
para4: Part3 →cnclusin
Hw t Get Key Pints?
1. : tpic sentence
2. : tpic sentence +
supprting ideas
Read fr Key Pints
Para.1 We shuldn’t judge a persn by their appearance but we d. In fact, the experts say that when we meet smene fr the first time we make a decisin abut what that persn is like in three secnds. But what d we lk at? One f the mst imprtant things is clthes, but it isn't the brand f clthes that peple wear that is imprtant. The imprtant thing is t wear the right clthes fr the ccasin.
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Para.2 Schls have always understd this and a lt f them ask their students t wear a unifrm. Why? A lt f teachers think a unifrm makes students feel that they are part f their schl and that their unifrm helps them t be serius abut their studies. Teachers say that unifrms can help in ther ways t. If all the students wear unifrms, they can't judge each ther because f their clthes. It als avids arguments abut wh r what is fashinable.
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Para. 3 Hwever, it is nt nly schls that want peple t dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas abut what the peple in a certain prfessin shuld wear. If we visit a dctr, we expect t see respectable clthes under the dctr’s white cat. When we g int a bank we expect the staff t wear suits r dresses. Plice fficers wear unifrms t deter crime by establishing a visible presence while n patrl, t make themselves easily identifiable t nn-plice fficers r their clleagues wh require assistance, and t quickly identify each ther at crime scenes fr ease f crdinatin. In fact, a lt f cmpanies have dress cdes fr their staff because they knw that the custmers expect t see them dressed in certain types f clthes.
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Para.4 But can ur clthes really tell peple what we are like? Maybe nt, but they can shw ur attitude t what we are ding at the mment. When peple see us in the right clthes, they think we are serius abut what we are ding. Furthermre, if we are clean, smart and plite, peple will have cnfidence in us.
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List the Key Pints
Paraphrase (say r write in a different way)
Alex likes playing ftball and he likes basketball,t.→Alex likes playing nt nly ftball but als basketball. Nt nly des Alex like playing frtball but als basketball. Nt nly is Alex fnd f ftball but als ... In additin t ftball, Alex lves playing
Hw t Paraphrase?
2. use synnyms(同义)
3. summarize examples (概括)
5. cmbine sentences(并句)
4. smetimes change the vice (语态)
1. change the sentence structure(句型)
Paraphrase Key Pints
1. Wearing the right clthes is imprtant because peple lk at ur clthes.
2. Wearing the right clthes fr the ccasin is imprtant if we want t leave gd first impressins.
3. Wearing prper clthes is imprtant fr first impressins.
1. Schls ask students t wear a unifrm because it helps them in many ways, such as being serius abut their study.
2. Students are required t wear a unifrm because it benefits in varius ways, such as being serius abut their study.
1. Hwever, nt nly schls but als places such as hspitals, banks, plice statins and sme cmpanies want peple t dress in a certain way.
2. Besides students, ther peple wh wrk fr hspitals, banks, plice statins and sme cmpanies are als suppsed t wear unifrms because f cnvenience.
1. Our clthes can shw ur attitude and make peple have cnfidence in us.
2. Our clthes represent ur attitude and help us win trust frm thers.
Hw t Cnnect?
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Cnnect Key Pints
Fr example,
In cnclusin,
Write and Edit
Wearing prper clthes is imprtant fr peple’s first impressins.(要点1) Fr example, Schls ask students t wear a unifrm because it benefits them in varius ways.(要点2) Besides schls, ther places, like hspitals, banks, plice statins and sme cmpanies als want their staff t dress in unifrms because f cnvenience and seriusness. (要点3)In cnclusin, ur clthes can shw ur attitude and win cnfidence frm thers.(要点4)(67词)
Hw t Write a Gd Summary?
cnnect the key pints with prper wrds;
2. paraphrase
3. cnnect
read tw r three times t find the key pints;
rewrite the key pints ;
write a draft and edit it.