Unit 3 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister?

单元话题满分范文必背

1．根据提示，以“My Best Friend and I ”为题写一篇英语短文，比较你俩的特征，至少10句话。除提示外，可适当发挥。

提示：1.我的好友名叫琳达；

2.在某些方面，我们看上去一样；在某些方面，我们看起来不同；

3．我们都有黑眼睛，黑头发；

4.她比我高，比我文静，很认真；

5.我外向一点，而且比她风趣；

6.都喜欢读书。

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【答案】My best friend and I

     My name is Linda. I have a good friend. Her name is Tina. We are in the same grade but in different classes. My friend and I look the same. We have black eyes and long black hair. But we are different anyway. Tina is taller than I. She is quieter and more careful than I. But I am more outgoing than her. And I am much funnier than her. Both of us like reading books.

【解析】

【详解】

亮点说明：本文从外貌和性格多方面介绍了我和我的朋友的异同。运用比较级叙述使文章的语言鲜明生动，有可读性强。在不同语言逻辑关系中用but和and连接，让我们更容易理解作者的心情。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．根据表格中提供的信息, 写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之处和不同之处。

要求: 1. 包含表格信息, 可适当发挥；

2. 不少于70个词。

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【答案】范文:

Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. Both of us like sports. We are both hard-working and good at our subjects. We both like reading, and we usually go to the library together on weekends. But in some ways we are different. She is taller and more outgoing than me. She is better at singing and dancing. She likes going to the concert. For me, I like surfing the Internet. And I love traveling. In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本题为记叙文写作，要求按照表格的信息，描写自己和好朋友Nancy在兴趣、运动、学习等方面的共同点和不同点，适当运用等级比较结构。

2.写作指导：本文用一般现在时写作，注意等级比较句式及动词单数第三人称形式的运用，书写时文句的表达要完整、逻辑清楚、语法正确。

3．假如你是张亮，请根据下表，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你和你弟弟张翔的相同之处和不同之处，以便你们的美国朋友加深对你们的了解。

要求：70词左右，可适当发挥。

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【答案】Zhang Xiang is my brother. He is younger than me, but he is as tall as me. His hair is long, but my hair is longer than his. He is much more outgoing than me, so he has many friends. He often goes out with them. However, I like to stay at home. He has cooler clothes than me. He is less hard-working, though. So he often gets worse grades than me.

【解析】

【详解】

本篇书面表达应抓住图表所提供的信息，两人的不同点和相同点。先介绍不同点再介绍相同点，或者先介绍相同点再介绍不同点。注意文章的层次脉络。动笔前要认真阅读提示，列好提纲，根据提纲写作文。本文的时态是一般现在时，主要使用的句型：（1）主语+be+形容词比较级+than+比较的对象。（2）同级比较：主语+be+as 形容词原形as+比较的对象。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，先介绍相同点，再介绍不同点。能够运用中心句，脉络清晰。本文中运用了的固定句式和短语，特别连词的使用，使上下文连贯，流畅，如: He is younger than me, but he is as tall as me. stay at home等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。写完以后，注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

4．看下面关于双胞胎兄弟Peter 和Paul 的信息，对比他们的异同，写一篇英语短文对它们进行描述。

要求：

1. 必须包括所有信息，可适当发挥；

2. 注意比较级的使用；

3.   80词左右。

【答案】七、Peter and Paul are twin brothers. In some ways ,they look the same, but in other ways，they look different. They are both tall ,but Peter is heavier and Paul is thinner. They both have black hair, but Peter has straight hair and Paul has curly hair. Peter is more outgoing, but Paul is quieter. Both of them like sports and study hard at school.

【解析】

【详解】

时态：一般现在时

人称：第三人称为主

重点词汇：in other ways在其他方面；heavier更健壮的；thinner更瘦的：straight hair直发；curly hair卷发，

重点句型：形容词比较级的运用

表示"比...更"，主语+比较级形容词（+than+比较成分）。Peter is more outgoing, but Paul is quieter. 彼得比较外向，但保罗比较安静。

5．昨天在回家的路上,你遇到了几年未见面的小学同学周艳。你发现她与几年前相比有了很大的变化。请写一篇英语短文描述一下她的变化,要求不少于80词。

参考词汇：primary, taller, stronger, clever, talk, tennis

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【答案】例文

Yesterday on my way home I met a classmate of mine. We were in the same primary school several years ago. Her name is Zhou Yan. I found she was much taller than before. She told me that she liked playing tennis. She was on the school team and she was very popular in her school. So she looked much stronger than before. Then she told me that she studied well in her class. All her classmates and teachers said she was very clever. We talked for a long time. We talked a lot. She told me a lot of her funny stories. I thought she was more outgoing and polite than before. At last we decided to play tennis together.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，主要要求描述小学同学的变化。写作时注意交代背景：昨天在回家路上遇见许久未见的小学同学；同时写清楚该同学哪些方面有所不同；最后别忘记合理结尾。

2.例文点评：例文审题仔细，用第三人称进行客观描述；时态以一般过去时为主；很好地运用了比较级句型。文章结构完整，内容丰富，条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：on one’s way home; a classmate of mine; be popular in; a lot of; at last; decide to do。

句型：比较级句型：比较级+than；宾语从句。

6．今天网上讨论的主题是“My best friend and I”。假如你有一个最好的朋友Lucy，请根据表格所提供的信息进行跟帖，对你和Lucy的相同之处和不同之处做一个简单的描述。字数70词左右。

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【答案】My best friend’s name is Lucy. She is 12 years old, and I am one year older than her. Lucy is shorter than me. She is 1.5 meters tall and I’m 1.55 meters tall. Lucy is quiet and calm.

She is good at thinking of ideas. She is smarter than me, but I am more outgoing. I like to play sports and I'm good at them. We have something in common, though. We both enjoy going to parties.

【解析】

【详解】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如my best friend.，one year older，shorter than，quiet and calm，be good at，think of，like to do，play sports，in common，enjoy doing，go to parties等。而She is 12 years old, and I am one year older than her./Lucy is shorter than me.等比较级结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．Tim 和Tom是一对孪生兄弟，Tim比Tom早出生5分钟。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，介绍他们的相同点和不同点。

提示：

相同点：长相一样；都喜欢踢足球；学习刻苦；都讨厌吃肉类食物和垃圾食品。

不同点：Tim活泼外向，擅长音乐、体育；Tom 安静，擅长英语和语文；Tim 喜欢度假、露营；Tom 喜欢在家看电视或电影。

【答案】Tim and Tom are twin brothers. Tim is five minutes older than Tom. They look the same. They both like playing football, but hate to eat meat and junk food. They study hard.

However, they also have some differences. Tim is more outgoing than Tom. And he likes going camping and going for vacations. Tom is quiet. He doesn't like going out. He likes to stay at home to watch TV or movies. Tim is good at music and P. E. Tom is good at English and Chinese.

All their classmates like them very much.

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，介绍孪生兄弟Tom和Tim的相同点和不同点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如than，the same，both用于be动词后，实意动词前，however，go for vacations，stay at home，be good at。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

8．《学习周报》联袂阳光中学正在举行“我的闺蜜我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之处和不同之处。

要求：

1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚；

2. 80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。

Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】One possible version:

Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. Both of us like sports. We are both hard-working and good at all subjects. We both like reading, and we usually go to the library together on weekends.

But in some ways we are different. She is taller and more outgoing than me. She is better at singing and dancing. She likes going to the concert. For me, I like surfing the Internet. And I love traveling. In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me. I think my best friend can help me bring out the best in me.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段主要叙述我和我的好朋友Nancy之间的共同点；第二段主要叙述我和我的好朋友Nancy之间的不同点以及我对朋友之间异同点的看法。

2.写作指导：本文应该采用第一和第三人称叙述，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述时应按照表格中所给的内容认真组织语言，做到语句通顺，条理清楚，在最后阐述自己的观点时应有理有据，言简意赅，在写作的过程中，注意语言符合英文表达的习惯。

9．假设你是Susan，你有一个好朋友叫Linda，请根据要点写一篇文章。

要点如下：

1、你们俩都 很高，都喜欢中国文化，每周去一次图书馆。

2、上周Linda 去爬了长城，她认为是世界上最伟大的奇迹之一。

3、Linda比你更外向，更擅长运动。但你们在学习上一们地努力， 并相互帮助。

4、你们能够谈论和分享一切。

5、你看过功夫电影《长城》。谈谈你的感受。

注意：

1、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

2、词数：60-80；

3、内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；

4、短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：culture 文化；     climb 爬；   wonder奇迹

My name is Susan, I have a good friend, Linda. _________________________________________

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【答案】My names is Susan, I have a good friend, Linda. We are both tall, and we both like Chinese culture. We go to the library once a week. She is more outgoing than me, and she is better at sports. But we are both—working and often help each other. We can talk about and share everything . Last week Linda went to climb the Great Wall. She thinks it is one of the greatest wonders in the world. I also saw an action movie named The Great Wall. I like it because it is very exciting.

【解析】

【详解】

首先确定作文的时态：一般现在式为主；人称：第一人称和第三人称。

这是属于介绍类作文，介绍自己与朋友。要点1、你们俩都 很高，都喜欢中国文化，每周去一次图书馆。关键词:both like都喜欢；Chinese culture中国文化.组织句子“We are both tall, and we both like Chinese culture”，要点2.上周Linda 去爬了长城，她认为是世界上最伟大的奇迹之一.关键词：climb the Great Wall爬长城；one of the +形容词最高级+名词复数，最…之一。要点3、Linda比你更外向，更擅长运动。但你们在学习上一起努力， 并相互帮助。关键词：more outgoing更外向；be better at更擅长。句型：比较级句型。要点4、你们能够谈论和分享一切。关键词：talk about and share sth谈论和分享。要点5、你看过功夫电影《长城》。谈谈你的感受。关键词：feeling感受，穿插过去时态。最后组织语句，检查第三人单数形式。

10．育才中学八年级五班的同学正在开展以“Should friends be the same or different？”为主题的班会，请根据提供的信息谈谈你的观点。

提示：1.喜欢与自己个性不同的人；

2．我喜欢安静，比较内向，但是好友Linda喜欢交友，性格比我外向；

3．Linda 喜欢运动和音乐，体格强健(athletic)，而我擅长数学和语文；

4．我们都喜欢红色的外套，喜欢读有趣的故事，喜欢做同样的事，喜欢流行歌曲。

要求：80词左右。

【答案】It's not necessary to be the same. I hope my friends are different from me. I'm shy and quiet,so I have few friends. But my friend Linda likes to make friends and she is more outgoing than me. She likes sports and music very much. She is athletic,so she always wins in the sports competition. But I'm better at math and Chinese than her.

However,in some ways we are the same. We both like red clothes and reading interesting stories,so we enjoy reading books together. We both like doing the same things and listening to pop songs.

Although we have some differences,we are still good friends.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目要求包含提示里内容，写出朋友是否应该相似或者不同，写出自己的观点。可以分两段，提示内容可以放一段，后面自己的观点写一段。

2.例文点评：例文通过写出朋友是否应该相似或者不同，写出自己的观点等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。

3.高分亮点：It's +形容词+to do；different from；比较级；be good at；in some ways；the same等。

【点睛】

①作者在开篇使用了一个固定句式：It is ＋adj.＋to do sth.，动词不定式作真正的主语，使本句表达显得与众不同；

②宾语从句的使用丰富了文章的句式，是文章的亮点之一，且灵活运用本单元所学短语be different from，表达得十分到位；

③连词so，but和and的大量使用增加了文章的条理性和连贯性；

④more outgoing，better等形容词的比较级的正确运用，将人物性格等方面的差异性描写得淋漓尽致；

⑤高级词汇athletic的使用让人眼前一亮；

⑥However起过渡作用，表示转折，使上下文的信息形成对比，增加了行文的逻辑性；

⑦方式状语in some ways用得别致、出彩；

⑧该让步状语从句用得好，为文章档次的提升起到了很大的作用。此外，作者用这样一个句子收尾，很自然地表明了自己的观点。