Module 3模块主题写作详解与训练--2022--2023学年外研版九年级英语上册

外研版英语九（上）Module 2模块主题写作详解与训练

模块主题写作

整体感知

话题分析

本模块以“Heroes”为话题，讲述了邓亚萍、白求恩等民族英雄和世界英雄的故事。通过本模块的学习，同学们应该运用简单的原因、目的、结果状语从句来描述自己最喜欢的英雄人物的故事。本模块的作文类型属于人物介绍的说明文，写作时一般要写清楚人物的姓名、出生年月、个人的主要经历和影响等。要求对人物有比较全面的了解，简明扼要而突出重点地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外貌、性格、生活经历或所作出的贡献等方面去写，在文章最后要有结论性的评语。

常用表达

1. My favourite hero is... 我最喜欢的英雄是……

2. He/She was born in... 他/她出生于……

3. He/She is famous for... 他/她因为……而出名。

4. I like him/her because... 我喜欢他/她是因为……

5. We can learn a lot from him/her. 我们能从他/她身上学到很多。

6. From him/her, we can learn a lot, such as... 从他/她身上，我们可以学到很多东西，例如……

实例分析

典型例题

请根据下表提供的信息, 用英文写一篇介绍中国第一位航天英雄杨利伟的短文。

注意：1. 所提供的信息必须都用上；2. 条理清楚, 语意连贯, 句式规范, 字迹工整；3. 80个词左右；4. 标题已给出。

思路点拨

1. 体裁：说明文；2. 人称：第三人称；3. 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。

写作模板

连句成篇

China’s First Spaceman

Yang Liwei is a national hero in China. And he is also famous around the world. He was born in Liaoning in 1965. He was an excellent pilot. He was sent into space by China’s Shenzhou V Spacecraft at 9: 00 a. m. on October 15th, 2003. He successfully returned to the Earth after a 21-hour trip to space. He is China’s first spaceman. He will be remembered by all the people both in China and all over the world.

范文欣赏

（一）假如你们学校校报举行英语征文活动，主题是“我心目中的成功人士”，请你写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的成功人士(可以使你身边熟悉的人或名人)。(2010年深圳市中考)

文章必须包含以下内容：1. 人物简介；2. 人物事迹；3. 给你的启发。

要求：1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确、逻辑清晰；2. 假如写的是你身边的人物，文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；3. 80词左右。

A Successful Person in My Mind

The successful person in my mind is Lang Lang. He is one of the youngest and most famous pianists of our time. However, his success came at a price. He spent most of his time practicing playing the piano when he was a little boy. At the age of 17, he became famous after he was chosen to play at a musical event in the U. S. A. Lang Lang’s experiences tell me that hard work leads to success and chances belong to those who have made good preparations.

A Successful Person in My Mind

Jim, one of my classmates, is a successful person in my mind. He is from England. He is 16 years old. He is very tall and handsome. He is my classmate and my best friend. He does well in both his studies and sports. He has won a number of prizes in many different competitions. What’s more, he is helpful and gets on well with the classmates and teachers. However, Jim’s success came through his hard work. From his experiences, I understand the meaning of “No pains, no gains.” And I will try my best to realize my dream.

（二）南丁格尔是一个心地善良、乐于助人的人，她终生奉献于护士事业，为纪念她，人们把她的生日5月12日定为世界护士日（International Nurses Day），请你依据下面的信息，写一篇短文简要介绍她的生平。

要求：1. 文章字数在80-100词之间，可根据要点作适当发挥。2. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等信息。(2015年桂林市中考作文)

A famous British nurse – Florence Nightingale

 Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse. She was born in a rich family on May 12, 1820. She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others, especially the sick. In 1851, she was trained as a nurse. During the war, she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers’ lives. When she came back after the war, she became a national hero. Later, Florence Nightingale opened the world’s first nurse school. Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910. In 1974, her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people.

自我展示

根据提示和要求，以“Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：1. 出生年：1930年；2. 毕业时间和学校：毕业于西南农业大学（Southwest Agricultural University）；3. 主要贡献：1973年成功培育出杂交水稻（develop hybrid rice），使得中国现在每年能够生产足够的稻米养活中国人。4. 业余爱好：拉小提琴、听音乐、看书和游泳。

要求：以上内容不能遗漏，可以适当发挥。

外研版英语九（上）Module 3模块主题写作自我展示答案

Yuan Longping

Yuan Longping is one of the greatest scientists in China. He was born in 1930 in Hunan Province. He graduated from the Southwest Agricultural University in 1953. After many years of hard work, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1973, Just because of this, China now produces enough rice to feed her people every year. In his spare time, he loves playing the violin, listening to music, reading and swimming.

It’s said that he is one of the richest people in China. But he cares about nothing but his research.