浙江省绍兴市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05 作文

这是一份浙江省绍兴市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05 作文，共5页。试卷主要包含了材料作文，电子邮件等内容，欢迎下载使用。

一、材料作文
1．（2021·浙江绍兴）上个月，你们班为Children’s Hme的孩子们组织了一次爱心义卖活动。请根据下表信息用英语写一篇短文，向某英语网站投稿，谈谈本次活动和你的体会。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的体会至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：义卖活动 charity sale
短文首句：Last mnth, ur class had a charity sale.
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2．（2020·浙江绍兴）学生喜欢在家还是在电影院看电影？就该话题你在班中做了调查(结果见下图）。请你据此写一篇短文在校英语社团主题活动中进行交流，并谈谈你的选择和理由。
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二、电子邮件
3．（2022·浙江绍兴）假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。
注意：
（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的建议至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavir；编辑editr
Dear editr,I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Liu Jun
Things yu did
Things yu’ve learned
hand ut ntices
make things like …
sell the things
give away the mney
develp life skills
…
Watch mvies at hme r in the cinema?
Uncivilized behavirs
Suggestins
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flwers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish int bins
● …
参考答案：
1．例文：
Last mnth, ur class had a charity sale. Tw days befre the sale, we handed ut ntices t make ur sale knwn by thers. Then we made different things like fd and tys. It was s much fun! When everything was ready, we started t sell the things. T ur surprise, all the things were sld ut in a shrt time! At last, we gave away the mney we made t Children’s Hme.
I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develp ur life skills. Meanwhile, we can learn hw t cmmunicate with thers well. Last but nt least, helping peple makes us happy.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格信息写短文，谈谈班上组织的爱心义卖活动及自己的感受。要包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，以一般过去时介绍班上的爱心义卖活动，以一般现在时为主表达自己的感受。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
2．高分范文
Recently, I’ve dne a survey abut whether students like t watch mvies at hme r in the cinema. 64% f the students like t watch mvies at hme. Fr ne thing, they can spend less mney. Fr anther, they will have mre chices f what t watch.
Hwever, thers prefer ging t the cinema. Frm their pint f view, they will have the chance t enjy huge screens and fell excellent sund in the cinema, which can always give them a wnderful watching experience.
As fr me, watching mvies in the cinema is a better chice. I can hang ut with my friends and it’s really exciting. At the same time, it’s a gd way t develp friendship.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇应用文写作，考查语言运用能力。本文属于典型的观点类作文，是关于在家还是在电影院看电影话题的调查，并谈谈你的选择以及理由。审题清楚后，发现其实作文难度不大，但在表达个人观点的时候理由还是要充分些，所以要花些时间思考。同时，注意文章的语句衔接，表达清晰，建议学生们平时应多积累观点类文章书写的固定框架句型及相应的连接词汇并注意生活素材的积累。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，结构清晰，叙述条理。文章采用三段式结构，第一段点明文章主旨，并阐述了一些学生的观点及理由；第二段阐述另外一些学生们的观点和理由；最后一段阐述了自己的选择和理由。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中像fr ne anther, at the same time 等都能让文章衔接顺畅。
3.高分亮点：
短语：Fr ne thing…fr anther；frm ne’s pint f view；as fr；hang ut；at the same time。
句型：Recently, I’ve dne a survey abut whether students like t watch mvies at hme r in the cinema.；Fr ne thing, they can spend less mney. Fr anther, they will have mre chices f what t watch.；Frm their pint f view, they will have the chance t enjy huge screens and fell excellent sund in the cinema, which can always give them a wnderful watching experience.；As fr me, watching mvies in the cinema is a better chice.。
3．例文
Dear editr,
I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. Sme visitrs threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying arund. Sme picked flwers withut permissin t take phts s that they culd shw ff nline. And sme climbed trees fr fun, which might result in serius accidents.
I think it wrng t enjy neself at the cst f thers. Visitrs are suppsed t prtect the envirnment, like putting rubbish int prper bins. And they shuld be careful nt t cause truble t the lcals and keep away frm danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and mre civilized new village will be there fr us all t enjy.
Yurs sincerely
Liu Jun
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。