突破08 直截了当陈述事实流程(解析版)-备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破

备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破突破08 直截了当陈述事实流程（以通知、演讲和倡议为例）【技法演练】【典例分析】 (2018·全国卷Ⅱ改编)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together。内容包括：1.短片内容：学校的发展；2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：写作词数应为80左右。【写作示例】第一步　审五要素，三段谋篇审主题审体裁审语言审格式审内容通知观看英文短片书面通知人称：第一人称、第二人称通知可分为三段第1段(说明短片内容)介绍短片内容——学校的发展第2段(具体说明放映事宜)说明短片放映的时间和地点时态：一般现在时和一般将来时尾段(表达愿望)希望大家对短片提意见 第二步　雕词酌句，设计亮点【技法强化】1．有一个由我们老师和高年级学生制作的英文短片《我们一起成长》。①高级词汇和句式(限制性定语从句)：There's an English short film Growing Together                                                .②高级句式(利用分词作定语升级)：There's an English short film Growing Together                                                .2．按照安排，影片将在学校大厅放映，放映时间是周五下午两点到三点。①高级词汇：As it is                 ,_we are                                               in the school hall from 2：00 to 3：00 this Friday afternoon.②高级句式(利用省略句＋被动句升级)：                                           in the school hall from 2：00 to 3：00 this Friday afternoon.第三步　巧妙过渡，完美成篇【语篇整合】1．通知通知分为书面和口头通知，书面通知应包含时间、地点、参加者、内容及注意事项。发布口头通知首先需说明被通知的对象，在正文前加称呼。满分句式记忆开头句(说明通知的事宜及其目的)①To encourage us students to take physical exercise, our school will hold a marathon race.为鼓励我们学生锻炼身体，我们学校将举行一场马拉松比赛。②Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.请注意，我有重要的事要告诉你们。篇中句(陈述具体的内容：时间、地点、参加者等)①The lecture is scheduled to last 3 hours, from 2：00 pm to 5：00 pm on Friday in the school hall.讲座于周五下午2点到5点在学校大厅举行，预计持续3个小时。②As scheduled, the contest is supposed to launch next Sunday in the school lecture hall. 按计划，比赛将于下周日在学校演讲厅举行。③Those interested in the activity can sign up by the deadline.对活动感兴趣的人可在截止日期前报名。结尾句(提出要求和注意事项)①This is a unique learning opportunity. I hope all can make it on time. 这是一个独特的学习机会。我希望大家能准时来。②All are required to come on time. Your participation will surely make a difference.要求所有人按时到达，你的参与一定会起作用。③All the staff and students on campus are required to wear masks. 所有在校员工和学生都必须戴口罩。2．演讲稿演讲主要表达个人或群体的主张或看法；致辞包括欢迎辞、欢送辞和告别辞，常表达情感和祝福、回顾和感想等。满分句式记忆开头句(明确主题，或表欢迎/欢送)①It's my great honor to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on how to take online courses more effectively.我很荣幸有机会与大家分享我对如何更有效地上网课的。②It's my turn to make a speech here. I'd like to stress the importance of having a positive attitude to study. 轮到我在此发言了。我想强调有积极的学习态度的重。③It's my great honor to stand here on behalf of all the students, and I'd like to offer you my warmest welcome. 我很荣幸能代表所有的学生站在这里，在此向你们表示最热烈的欢迎。篇中句(分析问题提出建议/陈述接待和活动安排/回顾往昔)①In my view, important though it is for students to have better performance in exams, health is of equal significance.依我看，虽然考好成绩对学生们而言很重要，但健康也同样重要。②No one can deny the fact that the environment pollution is getting increasingly serious.毋庸置疑，环境污染日益严重。③I'm convinced that honesty is the best policy in most situations.我相信在大多数情况下诚实是上策。结尾句(提出解决办法/表示期待)①By way of conclusion, I'd like to quote what Newton once said.我想借用牛顿曾经说过的话结束我今天的发言。②I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship. 我希望大家都在这里过得愉快，你的来访一定会促进我们的友谊。3．倡议书倡议书是由个人或组织发出倡导做某事的应用文，常涉及公益功德主题。满分句式记忆开头句(说明背景和原因)①I'm appealing to you to pay attention to proper and frequent hand washing.我呼吁大家正确而且经常洗手。②It develops rapidly and now has become one of the hottest topics.But still, problems cannot be overlooked.它发展迅速，现在已成为最热门的话题之一。但问题仍然不容忽视。篇中句(列举倡议的内容和用处)①Never does it produce pollution, contributing to a low­carbon lifestyle.它从不产生污染，有助于低碳的生活方式。②It's everyone's responsibility to protect the environment. If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth.保护环境是每个人的责任。如果我们能改变我们的生活方式，我们就能使地球大为改观。③Our environment can benefit from such a sport, which can make our world a better place to live in.这样的运动有益环境，它能使我们的世界成为一个更宜居住的地方。④Everyone ought to have a positive attitude to the campaign against the disease.人人都应对抗击疫情持积极的态度。结尾句(发出倡议)①Hoping to see you participate in the activity! Take action now and you won't regret it!希望看到你参加活动！现在就采取行动，你不会后悔的！②Let's take action right now! I'm convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.让我们现在就采取行动吧！我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。【技法强化】Writing 1演讲稿假定你是李华，将代表你班参加学校英语俱乐部的演讲比赛。请以“What are we studying for？”为主题写一篇英语演讲稿，内容包括：1．学习目的因人而异；2．不同学习目的及原因；3．你的学习目的及原因。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．开头和结束语已为你写好。Dear members，I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here.                                                                                                                                                    That's all. Thank you!Writing2倡议书　假定最近你校不少同学得了流感，你应学校英文报邀请，写一封倡议书。呼吁大家做好预防工作。要点如下：1．说明流感状况；2．预防的措施(不少于三条)；3．表达信心。注意：写作词数应为80左右。       参考答案【技法演练】1．有一个由我们老师和高年级学生制作的英文短片《我们一起成长》。①高级词汇和句式(限制性定语从句)：There's an English short film Growing Together that/which_is_produced_by_our_teachers_and_us_senior_students.②高级句式(利用分词作定语升级)：There's an English short film Growing Together produced_by_our_teachers_and_us_senior_students.2．按照安排，影片将在学校大厅放映，放映时间是周五下午两点到三点。①高级词汇：As it is arranged,_we are going_to_show_the_film in the school hall from 2：00 to 3：00 this Friday afternoon.②高级句式(利用省略句＋被动句升级)：As_arranged,_the_film_is_to_be_shown in the school hall from 2：00 to 3：00 this Friday afternoon. 【语篇整合】Writing 1演讲稿Dear members，I'm very glad to have the chance to speak on behalf of my class here. What are we studying for? Different people may have different answers to this question. People may study for money, or social status.Actually, each learning goal illustrates its own aim of life. For those above, they study mostly for their own benefits. But can they really reach their goals if they study only for themselves? Maybe you'll ask what I am studying for. Frankly speaking, I'm studying for “the rise of China”．I want to be a Lu Xun because I want to help those who are well in health but ill in mind to build up a better China.That's all, Thank you!Writing2倡议书Dear schoolmates，The past week has seen many students asking for a sick leave because of the flu. Unless handled properly, this infectious disease may seriously affect our normal life and study.Firstly, wash hands with liquid soap often and frequently air your classroom and dormitory.Furthermore, we can never pay too much attention to a balanced diet. It may also be helpful to drink more water and eat fresh fruits containing much Vitamin C. Most importantly, take exercise regularly to strengthen our body, thus boosting immunity.Only by keeping a healthy lifestyle and exercising regularly can we keep healthy and energetic.Student Union 【拓展运用】1假如你是校学生会主席李华，你校学生会组织了一场急救知识讲座，请你写一则通知，通知国际部交换生参加，内容包括：1. 讲座目的2. 讲座时间、地点3. 讲座主要内容注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出。NoticeAll the international students! Attention, please!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】NoticeAll the international students! Attention, please! With the intention of raising students’ awareness and equipping students with the basic knowledge of first aid, a lecture concerning first aid is scheduled to be held at 3 pm this Friday in the school hall.During the lecture, an expert in first aid will deliver the basic knowledge of first aid vividly. Besides, a variety of hands-on activities will be provided for the students to carry out in person the skills of first aid under the guidance of professionals.Please attend this lecture punctually. It will certainly be a meaningful trip for you.【写作步骤】1. 词汇积累 目的：purpose→intention    关于：about→concerning安排：plan→schedule准时：on time→punctually2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：With the intention of raising students’ awareness and equipping students with the basic knowledge of first aid, a lecture concerning first aid is scheduled to be held at 3 pm this Friday in the school hall.拓展句：In order to raise students’ awareness and equipping students with the basic knowledge of first aid, a lecture concerning first aid is scheduled to be held at 3 pm this Friday in the school hall.【写作亮点】[高分句型1]  Besides, a variety of hands-on activities will be provided for the students to carry out in person the skills of first aid under the guidance of professionals.(运用了一般将来时的被动语态和不定式作目的状语)[高分句型2] Please attend this lecture punctually.  (运用了祈使句)2假设你现在正参加一场英语演讲比赛，你抽到的演讲题目是Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine. 请你就该话题展开演讲。你的演讲必须包含以下三个方面的内容：1. 你对此话的理解；2. 用一个事例来支持你的理解； 3. 总结发言。注意：词数120左右。首尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Ladies and Gentlemen,It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for your attention!【参考范文】Ladies and Gentlemen,     It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”. It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life. Once we adopt a positive attitude towards life, we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way, realize our dreams and gain success.     Here I share one of my experiences with you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I was filled with great anxiety. Under great pressure, I couldn’t apply myself to study, resulting in failing an important examination. As you can guess, I got very frustrated. I remember clearly when I was in a bad mood, my headteacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and gave me a badge with a big smile on it and said, “In life we all have those moments when we can’t achieve what we want. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, but turn them into motivation and let them inspire you.” The badge she gave to me was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved in the next examination.     As we can see in the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and with smile, you can improve your result to achieve anything you want in life.【解析】考察半开放性作文写作。本文的话题是“微笑面对生活，每一天都充满阳光”；讲述的是乐观向上的情绪对我们的影响。当我们用积极向上的态度对待一切的时候，我们会非常开心。工作的效率也会非常高。另外还可以从相反的方面做进一步的阐述，如果我们不能微笑面对生活，我们可能会遇见很多困难。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。3假定你是学生会主席李华，学校正在创建“无废学校”(Zero-waste School)，请你围绕这一主题给全校学生写一封倡议书，内容包括：1. 倡议的原因；2. 倡议的具体内容；3. 发出倡议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。Zero-waste school__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】  Zero-waste schoolAs is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. Food is thrown away simply because it doesn’t taste good. Newspapers and magazines are discarded as soon as they are read. What’s worse, many students seem to be quite accustomed to such waste. We have the responsibility of our behaviors. Here are some suggestions.First, propagandize the basic state policy of protecting the environment and using resources rationally. Second, we should start from the little things around ourselves. Finally, take practical actions to publicize and save resources. Calling on more schoolmates to fight against waste will be a good choice. Let us all unite to refuse waste. Only through these measures can we hope to build a zero-waste school.【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 倡议的原因；2. 倡议的具体内容;3. 发出倡议。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）as is known to all; throw away; as soon as; be accustomed to; the basic state policy of; start from; call on; a good choice; unite to do第三步：连词成句1. As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. Newspapers and magazines are discarded as soon as they are read. 2. Food is thrown away simply because it doesn’t taste good.3. Newspapers and magazines are discarded as soon as they are read.4. What’s worse, many students seem to be quite accustomed to such waste.5. Propagandize the basic state policy of protecting the environment and using resources rationally.6. We should start from the little things around ourselves.7. Take practical actions to publicize and save resources. 8. Calling on more schoolmates to fight against waste will be a good choice. 9. Let us all unite to refuse waste.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second, Finally2.表并列补充关系：What is more3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考）4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【写作亮点】[高分句型1] Calling on more schoolmates to fight against waste will be a good choice. （非谓语动词动名词作主语）[高分句型2] Only through these measures can we hope to build a zero-waste school.（only引导的部分倒装） 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It all began when my younger brother, Chris, and I went over to Aunt Barbara and Uncle Howard’s for Thanksgiving. My aunt and uncle lived on a farm at the opposite end of town, and Chris and I loved going there. We lived on a farm, too, and we had to do the morning work before we left. When we finally got to my aunt and uncle’s, Chris and I went outside to see if Uncle Howard needed help with anything. He and Dad had decided to clean out the yard before dinner. Chris and I both helped. But we still found time to ask Uncle Howard a lot of questions about turkeys. He thanked our help, and handed us two turkey eggs when we finished the cleaning work. “You kids put those under a setting hen,” he said, “and in twenty-five days, you’ll have a couple of fine turkeys” Chris was so excited that he nearly dropped his egg on the way to the house. At dinner, we both couldn’t wait for the grownups to finish talking so we could go home and tend to our eggs. Dad put the eggs under an old hen, and every day Chris and I would check to see if they’d hatched yet.Twenty-five days seemed like forever. Finally, on the twenty-sixth day, Chris and I walked home after school to find the old hen scratching on the floor. Behind her were two little turkeys, falling over their feet and looking sort of confused.It wasn’t long before the little turkeys began growing feathers. The old hen would stare at her two strange-looking babies, obviously puzzled as to why they looked so different from her other babies. When they got older, we could tell that they were both toms (雄性) Chris named one Bill, and I named the other Timothy. Day by day, both of them grew up and became stronger and stronger.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thanksgiving day arrived again, but somehow we couldn’t find Bill.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________We decided to save Timothy from ending up on Thanksgiving table.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Paragraph 1:Thanksgiving day arrived again, but somehow we couldn’t find Bill. There was nothing we could do but went to mom and told her that Bill was missing. My mom looked at us and said briskly, “My dear, don’t worry, we give Bill to Uncle Howard as a Thanksgiving Turkey.  When your dad comes back, we will also make plump Timothy for our Thanksgiving dish.” Hearing this, Chris’s face began to pucker and he started to cry. “Don’t worry, Chris,” I said comfortingly. “We’ll save Timothy, somehow.”  Paragraph 2:We decided to save Timothy from ending up on Thanksgiving table. We worked on an escape plan, and finally decided that we would build a small shack in the woods and keep Timothy there. We managed to take Timothy away before mom noticed it. My brother and I both felt very proud of ourselves. But at the same time, a sense of guilt came over us. We decided to be honest with our parents. After listening to our story, dad wasn’t angry. Instead, he seemed to know that kids did crazy things when growing up. Not only were we not punished, but also we were given the responsibility to take care of Timothy from that day on.【文章大意】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者和弟弟Chris从叔叔那里得到了两枚火鸡蛋，他们把蛋带回家，让一只老母鸡把小火鸡孵了出来。小火鸡Bill和Timothy越长越大。感恩节到来的时候，Bill被送给了Uncle Howard，妈妈告诉他们也要用Timothy做感恩节火鸡。作者和弟弟不希望这样，于是他们想办法把Timothy藏了起来，让它躲过一劫。父母知道真相后非但没有责备他们，反而让他们照顾Timothy。【写作步骤】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“感恩节又到了，可我们怎么也找不到Bill。”可知，第一段可描写Bill被送给了Uncle Howard，妈妈告诉他们也要用Timothy做感恩节火鸡，Chris哭了起来。②由第二段首句内容“我们决定不让Timothy出现在感恩节餐桌上。”可知，第二段可描写作者和Chris不希望这样，于是他们想办法把Timothy藏了起来，父母知道真相后没有责备他们。2.续写线索：Bill不见了——寻找无果——Bill被送走——准备杀Timothy——决定营救——藏起Timothy——坦白经过——没被责备3.词汇激活行为类①丢失：miss / disappear②制定逃跑计划：work on an escape plan / make an escape plan③照顾：take care of / look after情绪类①轻松地：briskly / breezily②自豪：proud of / glory in / with pride③生气：angry / annoyed【写作亮点】[高分句型1]. There was nothing we could do but went to mom and told her that Bill was missing.(运用了省略that引导的限制性定语从句和由that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2].When your father comes back, we will also make plump Timothy for our Thanksgiving dish.(运用了由when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型3]. Not only were we not punished, but also we were given the responsibility to take care of Timothy from that day on.(运用了not only...but also...句式和部分倒装句)5阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Nowadays, an increasing number of young Chinese spend money because they are “lazy”. According to a report issued in December by China’s e-commerce platform Taobao on China’s “lazy economy”, Chinese people spent 16 billion yuan on products and services online in 2018. The post-1995 generation was the “laziest” as its consumption increased by 82 percent, compared with that in 2017.The so-called lazy economy refers to a new type of consumption of products and services which are designed to save time and labor. According to the report, many people of the post-1995 generation buy high-tech electronic devices such as floor mopping robots and automatic window cleaners, which save the trouble of doing household chores. Meanwhile, take-out food delivery services are also popular among people born after 1995.Young people are willing to spend money on such products because they want to enjoy hard-earned leisure time after a busy and stressful day at work or school, reported Global Times. Because they need to focus on their studies or jobs, these so-called lazy people tend to use their leisure time more efficiently. For example, Wei Duo, a 21-year-old college student, is a frequent user of take-out food delivery services. “I once had a birthday cake delivered to my friend who lives far from my home. It cost me 50 yuan but it saved me almost half a day that would have been needed to deliver it myself My friend was also happy because she got to eat the cake instantly.” Wei told the Global Times.While the “lazy economy” might be convenient for young people, it might also create problems. The lazy economy’ on campus is expressed in things like people buying food or other things without leaving the dormitory. As a result, they stay in their dormitories all day long, playing on computers and smart phones. According to Jinan Daily, this situation could lead to young people becoming less sociable and even developing problems of communicating with others. Young people should be alert (警觉的) to it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】概要写作参考范文1Currently, the “lazy economy”, a new model of consumption, has occurred in China because young people, especially the post-1995 generation, tend to purchase products and services online due to laziness.(要点1) Such popular products are intended to be time-saving and labor-saving, ranging from high-tech products to food delivery services. (要点2) Therefore, to concentrate on work and use leisure time wisely, they are willing to do so. (要点3) However, despite the convenience the“lazy economy" brings, problems, like poor communication, may arise. (要点4)【75字】概要写作参考范文2：A report indicates that more young Chinese, especially the post-1995 generation tend to spend money due to their laziness. (要点 1) That's what we call “lazy economy”, featuring the purchase of time and labor-saving products and services. (要点2)In this way, those occupied with study and work can make the best of the limited leisure time. (要点 3) However, despite the convenience the“lazy economy”brings, the young should be aware that it can also result in their lack of social contact.(要点4)【70字】【文章大意】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，目前，中国出现了一种新的消费模式“懒惰经济”，因为年轻人，特别是1995年后的一代，由于懒惰而倾向于在网上购买产品和服务。这类受欢迎的产品意在省时省力，从高科技产品到食品配送服务应有尽有。因此，为了集中精力工作和明智地利用闲暇时间，他们愿意这样做。然而，尽管“懒散经济”带来了便利，但也可能出现沟通不畅等问题。【写作步骤】以第一篇范文为例：1 要点摘录①Nowadays, an increasing number of young Chinese spend money because they are “lazy”. ②The so-called lazy economy refers to a new type of consumption of products and services which are designed to save time and labor. ③According to the report, many people of the post-1995 generation buy high-tech electronic devices such as floor mopping robots and automatic window cleaners, which save the trouble of doing household chores.④Meanwhile, take-out food delivery services are also popular among people born after 1995. ⑤Young people are willing to spend money on such products because they want to enjoy hard-earned leisure time after a busy and stressful day at work or school, reported Global Times.⑥While the “lazy economy” might be convenient for young people, it might also create problems. 2.缜密构思：将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4、5三个要点进行整合，将第6个要点作为总结。3.遣词造句 Currently, the “lazy economy”, a new model of consumption, has occurred in China because young people, especially the post-1995 generation, tend to purchase products and services online due to laziness. Such popular products are intended to be time-saving and labor-saving, ranging from high-tech products to food delivery services.  Therefore, to concentrate on work and use leisure time wisely, they are willing to do so.【写作亮点】[高分句型1] Currently, the “lazy economy”, a new model of consumption, has occurred in China because young people, especially the post-1995 generation, tend to purchase products and services online due to laziness.运用一个because引导的原因状语从句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括，表达高级。[高分句型2]：Such popular products are intended to be time-saving and labor-saving, ranging from high-tech products to food delivery services.用现在分词作状语概括了“懒散经济”带来的便利，表达非常高级。