突破10 妙用好词热词的四原则(原卷版)-备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破

备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破突破10 妙用好词热词的四原则【技法演练】在阅卷的过程中，由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳，普通的词汇只会让我们产生视觉疲劳。但如果文章中有几个不落俗套的高级词汇，会让我们眼前一亮。下面就是好词妙用的4个原则：1．不“人云亦云”原则写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。【技法强化】①tell→inform/share 告诉·(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)I'm writing to          you that we will have a volleyball match next month.我写信告诉你我们下个月有一场排球赛。②proper→appropriate 合适的·(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)In my view, you'd better bring an         gift to your Chinese friend. 我认为，你最好给你的中国朋友带一份合适的礼物。③chance→opportunity 机会·(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)If offered the          to be a volunteer, I will do it well and live up to your expectations.如果提供给我这个做志愿者的机会，我会努力做好以不辜负你的期望。④be sure to→be bound to一定·(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)You          have a good knowledge of the history of our school.你一定会了解我们学校的历史。2．短语优先原则在写作中，要想吸引阅卷老师，就要多使用短语来代替一些单词，这样会使表达更生动。【技法强化】①should→be supposed to应该·(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)You              arrive on time or a little earlier.你应该按时或早点儿到达。②believe→be convinced (of) 相信·(2018·天津高考)I             your participation will surely contribute to our winning the competition.我相信你的参与肯定会助我们赢得比赛。③master→have a good command/knowledge of 精通·(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)I                 spoken English，thus making it easy for me to communicate with visitors.我精通英语口语，因此我很容易与游客交流。④about→concerning/regarding/related to 关于·(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)I'd like to share with you some details                  Chinese table manners. 我想向你讲述一些与中国餐桌礼仪相关的细节。⑤therefore→as a result/consequence 因此·(2018·全国卷Ⅱ) There are not enough seats available,                 , just arrive a little earlier. 因为座位不多，因此，早点到场。3．表达手法多样化原则在表达相近或相同意思时，要尽量避免重复使用相同的词汇，而是灵活运用其他恰当的同义词、近义词或利用构词法进行词形转换，从而给阅卷老师耳目一新之感。【技法强化】·(2018·北京高考)What a meaningful/         experience it is to promote traditional Chinese culture!传播中国传统文化是多么有意义的经历啊！·(2018·天津高考)We have been occupied/engaged/         making preparations for the competition.我们一直忙于准备比赛。4．准确恰当使用高级词汇原则在写作时，不能为了一味追求高级词汇而堆砌高级词汇或使用难词和生僻词汇，应根据写作要求选用恰当的词汇，以完成规定的写作任务。【整合演练】用高级词汇升级下面句子中的加黑体部分1．Besides, you may have the chance to play with outstanding players. 2．I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. 3．Developing a good habit is also important. 4．We all have the same opportunity. 5．The answer is certainly the latter. 6．I have decided to be a teacher when I grow up. 7．I would appreciate it if you could consider my advice. 8．Finally, I found the book really interesting and that it was well worth reading.   【拓展运用】15月16日是我国第三十一个全国助残日。某英语报社以“关爱残疾人从我做起”为主题，面向中学生进行征文。请你用英语写一篇题为“Caring for Disabled People Is Our Duty”的文章向其投稿。内容包括：1. 助残的必要性；2. 自己所做的事；3. 感悟与期望。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2最近你们班上开展了一次关于是读纸质书还是电子书的讨论，请你就这个话题给校英语报写一篇文章，内容包括：1. 有学生支持纸质书及原因；2. 有学生支持电子书及原因；3. 你的看法。注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Paper Books or E-books?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3学校诗歌社团在近期将招募 (recruit) 新成员。假如你是社团负责人李华，请你根据所给提示，代表社团用英语写一则招募启事，内容包括：1. 招募条件：热爱诗歌；2. 参加英语诗歌社团的好处；3. 报名方式及其他注意事项。注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；2. 请按要求在答题卡的相应位置作答。Members Wanted______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Poetry Club4阅读下面材料，根据其内界和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。On July 8, 2017, eight members of a family in total, were enjoying an evening together at the beach in Panhandle, Florida. As the sun sank lower on the horizon, the two boys Noah 11 and Stephen 8 swam into the waves without the grown-ups noticing. Soon they realized that the ocean had pulled them into the sea. After trying and failing to swim back, they started waving and screaming for help. But the lifeguards had been off duty for the evening.The boys had been struggling for several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha, a couple from Georgia, heard them. They dived into the water and s0on reached the two brothers. But after a few minutes, they were all trapped in a rip current (离岸流),a powerful one that could sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea! By then, some teenagers had heard the cry. One of the teens rushed into the water, grabbed Jacky. and pulled him back to shore. Meanwhile, Tabatha could feel herself being pulled farther out. She was already exhausted and beginning to feel desperate as she was trying to save both boys alone.Onshore, Jacky was terrified. A man stopped. “What’s wrong?” asked Shaun, who was heading back to his car. “My wife is drowning!" Brittany said. Shaun immediately strode (大步跨) into the water. But several minutes later, a gaping 15 feet still lay between him and Tabatha and the boys. He knew that if he continued, he’d become another victim. He turned around to seek help.It was about that time that Roberta, the boys’ mother, returned from the bathroom and looked around for her children. She was shocked to spot them floating much farther out than they were allowed to go. She fought the waves to get to her screaming sons and the stranger who was trying to save them, but she quickly discovered it was nearly impossible to make headway in any direction. Looking around, Roberta sighed with relief to see some more people coming to help.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha, a risky idea came to them.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2By then, more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。It's not just your mom's arbitrary rule; across cultures and throughout history, elbows(手肘）on the table have long been considered unacceptable behavior. Indeed, the Bible warns of putting your elbows on the table, and in 1530, Dutch philosopher Erasmus repeated the same rule. Even the etiquette(礼节） experts don't advise it. So, why have elbows on the table always been considered rude?For earlier civilizations, this rule functioned to prevent possible violence at the table."Table manners prevented us from leaving our space and starting a" fight. It was important that people saw you-as considerate or trying hard," says Margaret Visser, author of The Rituals of Dinner. Our place setting's fork and knife already act as an imaginary boundary for bur space at the table, so ignoring" or breaking that border indicates that you have no regard for order and are therefore potentially mentally ill-who: knows what else you're capable of!Today,while keeping your elbows off the table can't be traced back' to a single culture or civilization, it more belongs to the universal language of principle, which expresses two ideas, that at mealtime one shouldn't do anything that inconveniences other diners, and that a meal is a formal occasion where' one shouldn't behave in a casual way.However,that's not to say that in the here and now leaving your' elbows on the" table will bring dishonor upon your family. Manners develop with the times to meet our needs and feelings. In fact,some body language now suggests that elbows on the table are a sign of appearing engaged and focused on the conversation at hand.Above all,being considerate, respectful, 'and honest is more important 'than knowing which fork to use. Whether it's a handshake or a hug, it's the sincerity behind and good intentions of the action that matter most______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________