突破05 顺叙方式理清叙述中心(原卷版)-备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破

备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破突破05 顺叙方式理清叙述中心（以报道、日记和周记的写作为例）【技法演练】【典例分析】(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华， 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道， 内容包括：1.参加人员；2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3.活动反响。注意：写作词数应为80左右。【写作示例】第一步　审五要素， 三段谋篇 审主题审体裁审语言审格式审内容5公里越野赛跑活动活动类报道人称： 第三人称报道类可分三段第1段(简要介绍)说明活动和参与人员的情况时态：一般过去时第2段(说明活动细节)说明赛跑的具体路线和赛跑过程尾段(巧妙收尾)介绍这次活动的反响 第二步　雕词酌句，设计亮点1．上周日，我校举行了一场5公里越野跑比赛，我校师生参加了比赛。【技法强化】①高级词汇和句式(并列句)：Last Sunday                          , and both students and teachers of our school                        .②高级句式(利用定语从句升级)：Last Sunday witnessed a 5km cross­country running race,                                      .2．我们非常重视这项活动，因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会，而且对我们的身体和心理健康也有很大的好处。①高级词汇和句式(并列句)：We thought highly of the activity, because it not only provided an opportunity for us to exercise,                                                    .②高级句式(利用被动句＋倒装句升级)：                                                                                                                        
第三步　巧妙过渡，完美成篇【语篇整合】1．活动报道报道常用于学校或单位的报纸，将最新发生的事情告诉读者。报道常由标题、导语、主体和结束语组成满分句式记忆开头句(简要叙述活动的时间、地点、人物和事件)①To avoid food waste and promote food­saving actions, a “half­dish” plan has been launched.为避免食物浪费和宣传节约食物的行为，“半份计划”被推出了。②To raise our awareness of labor, the social practice was held at the Gardening Base near our school last Friday.为提高我们的劳动意识，社会实践活动于上周五在我们学校附近的园艺基地举行。篇中句(活动发生的主要细节)①On arriving at the farm, we began with the area of fruit trees and then moved on to the vegetable field.一到农场，我们就从果树区开始，然后转到菜地。②While picking melons, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields.在摘西瓜时，我意识到在地里劳作太辛苦了。③The activity began with a video showing the history of painting facial masks in Peking Opera.活动从一段展示京剧脸谱画历史的视频开始。结尾句(对活动进行简要的总结和评论)①It is through the fruit­picking activity that we are aware of the value of working hard.正是通过采摘活动，我们意识到辛勤劳动的价值。②All students think highly of the volunteer activity, from which they benefit a lot.所有学生高度评价这个志愿者活动，他们从中受益匪浅。2．日记/周记日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情；周记没有标准的格式，只需把自己的所见、所闻、所做或所想的东西记下来，形成一篇文章即可。日记的正文是主要部分，写在日期和天气下方。满分句式记忆开头句(事情的背景)①Last week I took part in a farm program with my classmates, which has impressed itself on my memory.上周我和我的同学参加了一个农场实践活动，这在我的记忆中留下了深刻的印象。②The other day, my parents and I went to visit Mount Huang for the first time, which lies in the south of Anhui Province.前几天，我和父母第一次去安徽省南部的黄山游玩。 篇中句(说明事情的经过)①On my way home this afternoon, I saw a backpack lying on a bench with nobody else there.今天下午在我回家的路上，我看到长椅上有个背包，周围没人。②Hardly had we reached the foot of the mountain when we were attracted by the breathtaking natural scenery of Huangshan.刚到山脚下，我们就被黄山令人叹为观止的自然景色迷住了。结尾句(说明感受)①I was very tired, but I was delighted that I did a good deed.我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。②What an unforgettable experience it is!这真是一次难忘的经历！【技法强化】Writing 1假设你校上周开展了一次以“阅读名著，再现经典”为主题的活动。请给校刊“英语园地”写一篇英文周记，记述你和同学参加此次活动的全过程。内容包括：1．被选为编剧和导演，确定名著；2．写剧本、排练、成功表演；3．活动反响。注意：写作词数应为80左右。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Writing 2你校上周组织了以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道， 内容包括：1．活动内容；2．你参加的活动及收获 (参加社区服务，公益活动等)；3．你的感想。注意：写作词数应为80左右。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              【拓展运用】1近日，你校组织观看了“中国航天成就展”。请你写一篇短文，给学校英文报投稿，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.主要内容：听报告、看视频等。3.个人感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Achievement Expo of China Aerospace________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2假定你是李华，在英语课上，外教Smith要求每位同学写一篇周记，谈一谈自己进入高中这一阶段内的感受。请你根据以下要点，用英语完成你的周记。1. 新旧学校对比；2. 给你留下印象最深刻的事。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3假设昨天是9月27日（周日），是世界旅游日 (World Tourism Day)，天气晴朗，你和几位同学去了趵突泉公园（the Spouting Spring Park）游玩。请根据以下内容，以日记的形式记叙你昨天的出游情况。  1. 上午乘车1小时到达目的地，游玩、唱歌、做游戏；  2. 中午发现有些游客乱扔垃圾等不文明行为,吃完午餐后决定组织一个小活动，向游客宣传文明出游、保护环境等；  3. 下午三点返回，很有意义的一天。不文明immoral /uncivilized注意：1. 词数：120-150; 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。September 28, Monday                               Fine________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Wrapping paper flew everywhere as Cali opened her gift. Then, a pair of shining skates caught her eyes! Cali thanked her uncle and aunt but looked embarrassed. She didn't know how to skate.Aunt Lisa, who seemed to have read Cali's mind, told her not to worry and that learning skating was fun, while Uncle George promised to take her to the ice rink（溜冰场）and teach her to skate.Cali wasn't sure. Sometimes she had a hard time learning new things. She looked again at the skates and imagined herself skating on the ice cheerfully. It should be fun! Then she nodded, "Let's do it!"The next day all of them went to the skating rink. Cali's eyes twinkled in excitement when watching the other skaters around her. She sat down on the bench and put on the skates. Uncle George then placed her helmet on and fastened it."Time for us all to hit the ice!" her uncle said, "we will hold your hands and you stand between us." Cali did so and made her first step onto the smooth ice."Whoa! This is slippery!" Cali nearly fell over, but her aunt and uncle pulled up on her arms and she found her balance again. She grinned and tried taking a few steps. Her legs wanted to slide out in front of her, so she made her steps smaller. That seemed to help."Good, Cali. Now try to glide on one foot for just a second longer on each foot as you walk," suggested Aunt Lisa. Then Uncle George skated in front of her while Lisa guided her from behind."Skate to your uncle now," she said, pushing her on the back a little to get more speed. Cali glided unsteadily towards her uncle, taking small steps and holding her arms wide for balance. Her uncle caught her and gave her a hug."Well done, Cali!" he said. "Now try it on your own." Cali wasn't too sure. Everyone else was rushing past her. Skating seemed easy for them. She started to get nervous. She lost her balance.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Struggling to rise to her feet, she determined to skate on her own._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Seeing Cali made amazing progress, Aunt Lisa skated up to her and praised her efforts._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Struggling to rise to her feet, she determined to skate on her own. She closed her eyes, trying not to cry. In a moment, she was picked up and put back on her feet. Her uncle smiled into her eyes. "Everyone falls down the first few times. You just have to get back up again. Cali took a deep breath, trying to resist the pain. “Okay, I can do this.” She skated away from her uncle toward the crowd as she glided unsteadily, and she encouraged herself to be brave and keep going. Soon she skated almost all the way around the rink by herself! Seeing Cali made amazing progress, Aunt Lisa skated up to her and praised her efforts. She took her hand, saying, “Look at you! You are working so hard and doing so well. We're proud of you.” Cali grinned. Learning skating was really great fun. Cali was very grateful to her aunt and uncle, not only for the skates they gave her, but also for their great patience and support to teach her how to skate. 5阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Many changes are taking place in food styles in the United States. The United States is traditionally famous for its very solid and unchanging diet, chiefly made up of meat and potatoes. Now people in America have many different choices: ethnic food, health food, and fast food, in addition to the traditional home-cooked meal.Ethnic restaurants and supermarkets are common in the United States. Being a country of immigrants, the United States enjoys a wide variety of ethnic food. Most American cities and towns are filled with restaurants serving international cooking. Many even have ethnic sections: Chinatown, Little Italy, or Germantown. Having vast ethnic choices, Americans can enjoy food from all over the world. Besides sections of cities, there are ethnic regions, which are well-known for certain food because of the people who have settled there. For example, in southern California, there are many Mexican restaurants.Health food became popular when people began to think more seriously about their physical well-being. Health food is fresh, natural, and unprocessed food, which does not contain preservatives to make it last longer or chemicals to make it taste or look better. People who are keen on health food are usually vegetarians. They don't eat meat, but live on beans, cheese, and eggs.Fast food restaurants are now expanding rapidly all over the country. In the United States, speed is a very important concept. People usually have a short lunchbreak because they just do not want to waste their time eating. Fast food restaurants are places that take care of hundreds of people in a short time. There is usually very tittle waiting, and the food is always cheap. Burger and pizza places are just two examples.Americans' attitude toward food is changing, too. The traditional big breakfast is no longer popular. However, coming to rediscover the social importance of food, Americans find that dinner with family and friends is a very special of enjoying time together. Like so many people in other cultures, many Americans are taking time to relax and enjoy a wider variety of tastes at dinner, even if they still rush through lunch at a hamburger stand.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________