专题08 与父母相处-2021年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分必背

这是一份专题08 与父母相处-2021年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分必背，共11页。试卷主要包含了 语句通顺，书写工整;，词数在60-80左右等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen t，mther's lve，care abut，cmmunicate with，get alng with，smile
写作要求：
1. 语句通顺，书写工整;
2. 可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;
3.词数在60-80左右
Dear Han Mei，
I'm afraid I've gt a big prblem recently. My mther talks t much t me. She always tells me，“Be careful while crssing the street。” “Put n mre clthes。” “Did yu d a gd jb at schl?”And s n. I'm annyed(烦恼)。What shall I d?
Alice
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【答案】
Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same prblem as yu. But nw I can get alng better with my mther. Here are sme ideas fr yu。
Yur mther talks much，because she cares abut yu. Maybe it's nt a gd way，but it shws yur mther's lve. S I think yu shuld listen t her. If yur pinins are different frm yur mther's，yu can cmmunicate with her，and tell her what yu are thinking abut。
If yur mther desn't take yur advice，just keep silent and give her a smile。
I hpe what I say here can help yu a lt。
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某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“Hw t keep a gd relatinship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:1. 父母规矩太多, 过于强调学习成绩, 不理解自己等问题;2. 你对这些问题的看法;3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。 Hw t keep a gd relatinship with parents,In my pinin, I have t many rules at hme. My parents never allw me t g ut
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【答案】
Hw t keep a gd relatinship with parents, In my pinin, I have t many rules at hme. My parents never allw me t g ut with my friends at night. They dn’t allw me t chse my wn clthes, either. And they pay t much attentin t my exam results. I think my parents dn’t quite understand me. Hwever, I try my best t understand them. Althugh they dn’t allw me t make my wn decisins and give me t much pressure, I knw that it is because they really lve me and want me t have a bright future. In rder t keep a gd relatinship with my parents, I study hard, listen t them, talk t them as friends, tell them my trubles, and help them d mre husewrk.
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假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen t，mther's lve，care abut，cmmunicate with，get alng with，smile
写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整;
2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;
3.词数在60-80左右
Dear Han Mei，
I'm afraid I've gt a big prblem recently. My mther talks t much t me. She always tells me，“Be careful while crssing the street.”“Put n mre clthes.”“Did yu d a gd jb at schl?”And s n. I'm annyed(烦恼)。What shall I d?
Alice
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【参考范文】
Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same prblem as yu. But nw I can get alng better with my mther. Here are sme ideas fr yu.
Yur mther talks much，because she cares abut yu. Maybe it's nt a gd way，but it shws yur mther's lve. S I think yu shuld listen t her. If yur pinins are different frm yur mther's，yu can cmmunicate with her，and tell her what yu are thinking abut.
If yur mther desn't take yur advice，just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hpe what I say here can help yu a lt.
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提示：当前，大多数孩子普遍存在逆反心理，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大。作为一名初中生，你会怎样与自己的父母相处呢？请以“Hw t get n well with ur parents”为题，写一篇英语作文。
要求：
1．根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2．语言流畅、书写规范，卷面整洁。
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【参考范文】
Hw t get n well with ur parents?
Nwadays，we can nt cmmunicate with ur parents well. I think it’s because we are t busy.We dn’t have enugh time t stay tgether.Hw t cmmunicate with yur parents? Here are sme suggestins.
First, bth yu and yur parents shuld spend time with each ther. Secnd, try t talk t yur parents plitely, r they will nt feel like talking t yu. Third, try t think abut yur parents mre, s yu will find that yu can understand them.
If yu fllw these, yu can get n well with yur parents.
【解析】
1.题干解读：因为当前大多数孩子普遍存在逆反心理，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大。作为一名初中生，谈谈怎样和父母相处。以“Hw t Get n Well with Our Parents?”为题，写一篇英语作文。
2.例文点评：本文第一段写出了我们作为孩子不能和家长很好地沟通的原因。第二段和第三段，提出问题：应该怎样和父母沟通？并且给出了三条建议。最后总结：如果能做到以上三点，就能和父母沟通的好。层次清晰，语言流畅，符合写作要求。
3.高分亮点：
短语：cmmunicate with；talk t sb.；feel like ding；try t d sth；think abut；get n well with。
句型：I think it’s because we are t busy.；If yu fllw these, yu can get n well with yur parents.
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在提倡和谐的社会里，我们怎么样才能成为一名“讲文明，礼貌，守纪律”的中学生？请根据下面的提示，以“Hw t be a cl student?”为题写一篇词数80词左右的短文。
提示：1.家庭表现：爱父母，帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务等。
2.学校表现：遵守校规，与同学友好相处。
3.公共场合表现：勿大声喧哗，坐公车时应主动让位给老人等。
要求：文章必须包括所给提示中1—3项的内容，可展开思路，自由地适当发挥。文章中不能出现真实姓名，校名和其他真实信息。
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【参考范文】
Hw t be a gd student?
As a student. it`s necessary and imprtant t behave well.
When we cme back hme frm schl, we shuld try ur best t help ur parents. When we are at schl, we shuld get n well with ur schlmates and teachers. We shuld als help each ther .We shuld fllw the schl rules, t. In public ,we shuld be ready t help thers wh are in truble. We`d better nt talk r laugh ludly. When we are n a bus, we shuld ffer ur seats t the ld and the wmen with babies.
In a wrd, wherever we are, we shuld behave well t be gd students. If we d, ur sciety will be better and better.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以“Hw t Be a Cl Student?”为题，就怎样成为一名“讲文明，礼貌，守纪律”的中学生写一篇短文。短文可以从“在家庭的表现”、“在学校的表现”、“在公共场合的表现”几个方面展开讲述。短文用一般现在时态，可以用when引出的时间状语从句，if引出的条件状语从句等等来设置不同的情境来谈论人们的行为规范。要注意语言的选择及句型的运用。要做到主题鲜明，思想积极向上。
写作亮点：短文开门见山，直奔主题：行为规范、举止文明很必需而且重要。第二段具体讲述如何成为一名“讲文明，礼貌，守纪律”的中学生。本段用“When we…，we shuld…”排比句型，从“在家庭的表现”、“在学校的表现”、“在公共场合的表现”几个方面展开讲述。条理文明，生动具体。其中的try ne's best, get n well with, be ready t d , had better等等结构为本文增色不少。第三段再次强调中心：无论在哪儿，我们都应该举止文明做好学生。并进一步升华主题：如果我们举止文明，我们的社会就会越来越好。
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良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以Hw t get n with parents ？为题写一篇80词左右的文章。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数)
与父母友好相处的要点
Hw t get n with parents ？
Fr teenagers, it's imprtant t get n with parents.What shuld we d?
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【参考范文】
Hw t get n with parents？
Fr teenagers, it's imprtant t get n with parents. What shuld we d?
Firstly，we shuld spend sme time cmmunicating with ur parents. Fr example, we may talk abut ur teachers, classmates r the things that happen in schl. Secndly, we shuld d smething with ur parents each week, such as making dinner r ging shpping. We'll imprve ur relatin with them in this way. Thirdly, we'd better discuss ur prblems with them. They will help us find better ways t slve them.
It's nt easy t get n with parents. S we shuld learn t be understanding first.
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲作文。提纲作文，要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。写作要涉及所有提示要点。提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。语言表达要符合英语习惯。短文用一般现在时态。
写作亮点：短文结构合理，层次清楚。第一段提出自己的观点：和父母相处融洽重要；第二段就如何与父母相处提出详细的建议；第三段简要地概括结尾。第二段中用firstly, secndly, thirdly等等引出各要点，让人一目了然。短文详略得到，中心突出。第一、三段略写，第二段对短文中心内容则作了非常详细的表达。短文生动具体，词汇运用得当。文中用到的spend sme time ding sth,定语从句等等，给本文增色不少。
常用表达：
1. I get n well with my parents.
2. I enjy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends.
3. They are prud when I d smething well and they try their best t help me when I have truble. We lve each ther.
4. Let’s get n well with ur parents because they are ur parents.
5. It’s very imprtant fr us t get n well with ur parents.
6. There is lts f lve arund me in my everyday life.
7. On the ther hand, I spent at least tw hurs playing cmputer games every day.
8. I think we shuld ften cmmunicate with my parents.
9. In this way, we can get n well with ur parents.
In a wrd, wherever we are, we shuld behave well t be gd students.
10. If we d, ur sciety will be better and better.
11. I think it’s because we are t busy.
12. If yu fllw these, yu can get n well with yur parents.
13. If yur mther desn't take yur advice，just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hpe what I say here can help yu a lt.
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最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“Hw t Get n Well with Our Parents?”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。
一、写作要点提示
1.与父母和谐相处很重要。
2.与父母和谐相处的做法或建议：
（1）理解与尊重父母（如倾听与有礼貌表达想法）；
（2）多与父母交流（如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼）；
（3）为父母做一些力所能及的事。
3.与父母和谐相处的感受。
二、写作要求
短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在80－100词。
【参考范文】
Hw t get n well with ur parents?
It’s very imprtant fr us t get n well with ur parents. But hw can we get alng well with ur parents? Here is sme f my advice.
We shuld understand and respect ur parents. Parents talk much because they care abut us. We are suppsed t listen t them. When we want t tell them ur pinins, we’d better be in a plite way. We shuld als talk with them abut ur happiness and tell them abut ur prblems. When we are free, we’d better help them d sme things.
I get n well with my parents. I enjy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are prud when I d smething well and they try their best t help me when I have truble. We lve each ther.
Let’s get n well with ur parents because they are ur parents.
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇提纲作文，要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。本题要求谈论怎样与父母和谐相处，根据提示，短文要从与父母和谐相处的重要性、怎样相处及自己的生活感受几个方面进行写作。短文用第一人称，一般现在时态，可以用恰当的情态动词来帮助表情达意。
写作亮点：短文第一段提出观点：与父母融洽相处很重要。开门见山，直奔主题。第二段是对如何与父母融洽相处的建议，详略得当，重点突出，中心明确。第三段谈论自己的生活感受；最后号召人们同父母融洽相处结尾。短文层次清楚，语言连贯。短文用shuld, be suppsed t, had better等等不同的形式来表示人们的责任与义务，生动具体。其中用到的动词不定式，时间状语从句，宾语从句等，也增加了本文的文采。
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我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……请以“Lve Arund Me（我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。内容要点如下：
写作要求：1. 根据表格提示父母的爱、老师的爱、同学的爱和朋友的爱都要写齐。
2. 词数90词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名
参考词汇： receive lve； get n ； chat nline;
There is lts f lve arund me in my everyday life.
【参考范文】
Lve arund me
There is lts f lve arund me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive lve frm my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the mrning, my lvely mther cks delicius fd fr me. Then my father drives me t schl. At schl all the teachers nt nly lk after me well but als teach me lts f useful knwledge. My dear classmates and I study tgether happily, getting n well with each ther. I chat nline with friends in my spare time. They ften share my pleasure and truble. I ften feel happy and excited when I get lve frm them. I make a decisin t study hard and make great prgress. Here, I shuld say t them, “Thank yu fr all yur lve.”
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以“Lve Arund Me（我身边的爱）”为题，写一篇短文。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There is……., Every day I can……, my lvely mther cks……, I chat nline with……, I make a decisin t……, I shuld…….等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
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在微信上，Jack 跟Bruce谈到他跟父母关系不好，并向Bruce寻求帮助。假设你是Bruce，请根据下面的提示，给Jack回复信息。
要求：
1) 必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥(至少两点)；
2) 词数：100左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
内容提示：
Jack, dn't wrry! I didn't get n well with my parent either. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes t yu.
【参考范文】
Jack, dn't wrry! I didn't get n well with my parents, either. I used t argue with my parents, smetimes we didn’t say a wrd fr a few days. Because my parents really wrried abut my grades, it gave me t much pressure. I didn’t help them d any husewrk, because I didn’t think it was imprtant t d husewrk. On the ther hand, I spent at least tw hurs playing cmputer games every day. But nw I can get n well with my parents. I think we shuld ften cmmunicate with my parents. In ur free time, we can d sme husewrk with parents. We can als spend weekend with ur parents. We can share ur happiness and sadness with ur parents. In this way, we can get n well with ur parents.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以Bruce的身份给Jack写一封信，背景是Jack与他的父母关系不好，想寻求你的帮助。题目中用表格的形式呈现了具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过审题可知：1.这篇短文应用第一人称来叙述，根据表达的需要用I或者we；2.短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，具体来看，第一个内容和第二个内容应用一般过去时态，谓语动词用过去式形式；第三个内容应用一般现在时态。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，我们不能逐词去翻译表格里的内容，而应用英语中的句式结构来表达，如常见的主谓宾和主系表结构，构成简单句；在文章中穿插使用并列句或者复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等，提升文章的档次，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感。同时语句之间应注意使用恰当的连接成分，如副词、连词或者短语等，使文章整体意思连贯。
· 主动交流：每天花些时间，与父母谈谈老师，同学和学校的事；
·创造机会：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做饭、逛商店等；
·讨论问题：遇事多与父母讨论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题。
爱你的人
爱的表现
父母
为你做早餐；送你上学……
老师
传授知识；照顾你……
同学
一起学习；和睦相处……
朋友
在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼……
现象
我过去经常跟父母吵架，有时几天不说话。
原因
父母过分担心我的成绩，给我太大的压力。我不帮父母做家务，也没有意识到帮父母的重要性。相反地，我每天花至少两个小时玩电脑游戏。
措施
现在我能和父母相处得好。我认为我们该和父母沟通。……