06++书面表达（中考真题+模拟试题）--+备战2025年中考英语题型专项训练（深圳专用）

这是一份06++书面表达（中考真题+模拟试题）--+备战2025年中考英语题型专项训练（深圳专用），共29页。
1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容；
2. 选择这张照片的原因；
3. 参赛感受。
Dear Classmates,
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That’s all! Thank Yu!
2．（2022·广东深圳·中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlg），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlg作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括：
1. 海边活动：
下午：①沙滩排球；②……；
晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意：
1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyne! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure t present my vlg t yu.
Last Saturday, we went t the seaside t celebrate ur graduatin. In the afternn, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
S much fr my vide. I hpe yu have enjyed it. Thank yu.
3．（2021·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城，为培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道，介绍这次活动。
要点：
1. 活动目的
2. 活动项目： 模型制作比赛
3. 活动亮点：学生发明的服务于校园的机器人：外表、功能
4. 学生感受
提示词：
1. 科技节 science festival 2. 实验 experiment
Shenzhen is well-knwn as a city f technlgy and innvatin. Last week,
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4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）很多同学在暑假期间做过多种多样的创意性作业，如海报，小调查，Vlg制作等。创意性作业可以帮助同学们发展多种能力。最近，校英文报开展以“My Creative Hmewrk”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇文章，讲述自身经历，并提出合理建议。
内容：
1.让你印象最深刻的一次创意性作业（内容、收获）；
2.对创意性作业的建议（形式或内容、理由）；
3.呼吁同学们重视创意性作业。
要求:
1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
4.书写规范，卷面整洁。
My Creative Hmewrk
During the summer vacatin, many students cmpleted a variety f creative assignments, such as designing psters, cnducting surveys, and making lgs.
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5．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你的学校将举办“Creative Reading Week”活动，请你根据以下给学校外教Mr. Archer 写一份邮件，告知活动安排并邀请他致开幕词。
内容包括：
1. 发出邀请；
2. 告知安排；
(1)开幕时间、地点：下周一下午2点学校智能图书馆
(2)活动目的：以创新的方式激发学生阅读兴趣
(3)活动内容：体验AI工具辅助阅读……
3. 期待与感谢；
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6．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，临近中考冲刺阶段，你将向同学们分享如何提高复习效率，请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。要点如下：
1.制定学习计划；
2.养成好习惯: ①早睡早起 ②勤锻炼 ③……；
3.有乐观的态度。
……
注意：
1.词数为 80 左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇: high schl entrance exam （中考）
It’s my hnr t be here t give a speech. ______________________________________________
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Thank yu fr listening.
7．（2024·广东深圳·三模）你校英文报打算增加一个栏目“用英语讲好中国故事”（“Telling China’s Stries in English”）。你是栏目负责人李华，请给外教Ray写封邮件咨询建议。
内容包括：
1．介绍栏目意义：弘扬中国文化（自行补充2—3点）；
2．询问他的建议；
3．表达感谢和期望。
栏目 clumn
要求：
1．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4．标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Ray,
My name is Li Hua. As the leader f the new clumn “Telling China’s Stries” fr ur schl’s English newspaper, I’m writing t _______________________________________________________________________
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
8．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，你校交流生Tm将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关礼仪。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.提前5—6分钟到；
2.带合适的礼物；
3.餐桌礼仪：①用餐时，需等长辈先动筷子，②吃饭时避免发出声响，③……
要求：1.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3.书写规范，卷面整洁；
4.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：风俗 (custm)
Dear Tm,
Hw are yu ding? Learning_______________________________________________________________
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Yurs,
Li Hua
9．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是学生李华，你校下周将举办主题为“节俭让你更美丽”的英文演讲比赛活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。
要求：
1. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数内)；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。
Saving makes yu mre beautiful
Dear teachers and fellw students,
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10．（2024·广东深圳·三模）近些年来，刷短视频(shrt vide)占据了许多人的空闲时间。有人担心短视频最终会取代文本阅读，但也有人认为不会。针对此现象，英文校刊社 Green Buds 面向全体同学发出征文倡议，请你就此写一篇文章投稿，发表自己的看法。
要点：
1. 阐述目前过度刷视频的现象；
2. 此现象引发的负面影响（至少两点）；
3. 呼吁大家理性刷视频。
要求：
1. 短文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于 80 词；(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
提示词: brwse shrt vides(刷短视频)
My View n Shrt Vides
Over the past few years, it is cmmn that peple spend excessive time n brwsing shrt vides which may bring sme negative effects.
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11．（2024·广东深圳·二模）假如你是学生李华，你校下周将举办主题为“我最敬佩的人”英文征集比赛活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。
要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
The persn I admire mst
Dear teachers and fellw students,
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Thanks fr yur attentin!
12．（2024·广东深圳·二模）在口语课上，外教 Alex 让学生分小组交流大家的睡眠状况。请你代表你们组分享讨论结果，内容包括：
1. 六位组员的睡眠状况；
2. 睡眠对学习和生活的影响；
3. 分享保证良好睡眠的做法：
① 规律的作息；
② 营造舒适睡眠环境；
③ 其他做法。
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节, 以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
I’d like t share ur grup’s discussin n sleep.
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That’s all. Thank yu!
13．（2024·广东深圳·二模）按要求写作短文。
为了贯彻落实习近平总书记关于教育、体育的重要论述，深圳市教育局印发了《深圳市加强和改进学校体育工作的实施意见》，要求从2024年1月1日起，义务教育阶段学校每天开设一节体育课。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter对此十分感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍“每天一节体育课”的实施情况，内容包括以下要点:
1. 每天一节体育课的意义；
2. 介绍你校体育课的活动内容；
3. 你对保持健康的其它建议(不少于两条建议)。
要求：
1. 80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：每天一节体育课政策The plicy f daily PE class
Dear Peter,
Knwing that yu are interested in the plicy f daily PE class,
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D yu have ther advice t keep healthy? Hpe t hear frm yu sn!
Yurs
Li Hua
14．（2023·广东深圳·三模）随着社会竞争日益激烈，中学生的压力也日趋增加。对于中学生早上的进校时间是否应该被推迟到八点，大家各抒己见。你认为推迟入校时间的做法好不好？你觉得最合理的入校时间是几点？请以“When shuld schl begin?”为题写一篇短文。
要点：
1.中学生是否有充足的睡眠？
2.你是否赞同进校时间推迟到八点。（写出至少两点理由）
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；
2.文中不得提及个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；
3.词数80—100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
词汇：推迟put ff；合理的reasnable
When shuld schl begin?
Recently, the latest survey released by the China Yuth Research Center shws that _____________________
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15．（2023·广东深圳·三模）新冠疫情悄然过去，人们的生活、工作都归于平淡和正常：出门旅游的人多了；外出就餐购物的人也多了……但是，后疫情时代，作为学生的我们应该如何应对呢?请根据提示，写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，告诉同学们在后疫情时代需要做的事情。
要点提示：
心理上：
1.保持积极乐观的心态；
2.保持对于生活学习的热情；
3.……
生活学习中：
1.继续做好自我保护；
2.积极锻炼身体；
3.……
要求：
1.词数100词左右；所给开头不计入总词数；
2.保持卷面整洁，书写工整；
Gd mrning, everyne. COVID-19 has cme t an end. But what can we d during the pst-pandemic time?
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Dear classmates,
My name is Li Hua, wh is interested in phtgraphy. Here I wuld like t share my picture with yu.
The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen n a sunny mrning in April, which shws a beautiful park with clrful flwers and green grass. If yu are careful enugh, yu will als find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. Hw cute they are!
It is such a nice picture that I chse it fr the phtgraphic cntest. Actually, it als shws us the harmny between the animals and nature. Taking part in this cmpetitin makes me realize the beauty f nature and let us prtect ur Earth tgether!
That’s all! Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片；
第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容；
第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因；
最后，表达自己的参赛感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
③harmny和谐
④take part in参加
⑤realize意识到
[高分句型]
①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen n a sunny mrning in April, which shws a beautiful park with clrful flwers and green grass.（which引导定语从句）
②If yu are careful enugh, yu will als find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.（If引导条件状语从句）
③It is such a nice picture that I chse it fr the phtgraphic cntest.（such a/an adj.+名词+that从句）
2．例文
Hi, everyne! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure t present my vlg t yu.
Last Saturday, we went t the seaside t celebrate ur graduatin. In the afternn, we had a beach vlleyball game. Then, we enjyed the fun f surfing in the sea. Befre dark, we picked up the litter n the beach. Hw meaningful it was! At night, we put up tw tents and had a picnic. The fd cked by us was s delicius. Finally, all f us shared ur feelings abut this fantastic experience. Nt nly can it prmte ur friendship, but als it leaves us a valuable experience.
S much fr my vide. I hpe yu have enjyed it.
Thank yu.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up the litter捡垃圾
②nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Hw meaningful it was!（hw引导的感叹句）
②The fd cked by us was s delicius.（过去分词作定语）
③Nt nly can it prmte ur friendship, but als it leaves us a valuable experience.（部分倒装结构）
3．范文：
Shenzhen is well-knwn as a city f technlgy and innvatin. Last week, ur schl held a science festival, which aims t develp students’ interest in science and technlgy and braden their hrizns.
At the festival, sme students tk an active part in the mdel-making cmpetitin. Many f their rbts, which were the highlight f the festival, drew peple’s attentin. These rbts were in the shape f lvely animals, such as rabbits, mnkeys and dgs. They were ding sme simple tasks like sweeping the flr and thrwing away rubbish. Besides, sme ther students carried ut science experiments. The students wh were present at the festival were all surprised at the exhibits and gave them a big arund f applause.
Our schl hpes that mre and mre students can learn science and technlgy better t serve ur cuntry.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于新闻报道的写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，介绍科技节的目的，活动项目以及活动亮点和学生们的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
4．例文：
My Creative Hmewrk
During the summer vacatin, many students cmpleted a variety f creative assignments, such as designing psters, cnducting surveys, and making lgs. Ding hmewrk helps us t practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Ding creative hmewrk makes us mre interested in English.
Once ur teacher asked us t write a letter t a freign friend f hers. We were tld t intrduce the Mid-Autumn Festival in the letter. It nt nly helped me imprve my written skills but als prvided a gd chance t spread Chinese traditinal culture. In my pinin, it’s als a gd chice t draw mind maps. It helps us t have a better understanding f the lessns. Besides, we can learn t watch English mvies, since mst f us lve mvies.
Creative hmewrk is f great value fr us. Let’s try ur best t d mre creative hmewrk. I hpe we’ll becme smarter by ding creative hmewrk.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己观点；
第二步，描述自己经历；
第三步，提出呼吁和希望。
[亮点词汇]
①nt nly... but als不仅……而且
②In my pinin在我看来
③f great value很有价值
[高分句型]
①Ding hmewrk helps us t practice and use what we’ve learned in class.（what引导宾语从句）
②I hpe we’ll becme smarter by ding creative hmewrk.（省略that的宾语从句）
5．例文
Dear Mr. Archer,
My schl will hld the “Creative Reading Week” activity in the schl intelligent library at 2 p.m. next Mnday, and I wuld like t invite yu t participate. The purpse f this activity is t stimulate students’ interest in reading in an innvative way. The cntent f this activity mainly includes experiencing AI tls t assist reading and sharing reading experience.
Lk frward t yur arrival and thank yu fr yur supprt.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“邀请对方致辞开幕式”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，发出邀请；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，告知详细的安排；
第三步，期待对方的到来并表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. t d邀请某人做某事
②lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①My schl will hld the “Creative Reading Week” activity in the schl intelligent library at 2 p.m. next Mnday, and I wuld like t invite yu t participate.（and连接并列句）
②The purpse f this activity is t stimulate students’ interest in reading in an innvative way.（不定式作表语）
6．
It’s my hnr t be here t give a speech. As the high schl entrance exam is cming, we shuld learn t be self-disciplined. T make us review ur lessns effectively, I’ve made a list f things I need t d. I’d like t share my ideas with yu.
The first thing fr me is t make a gd learning plan fr myself. Secndly, I think frming a gd living habit will benefit me a lt in bth f my study and health. As we knw, early t bed and early t rise makes me healthy, wealthy and wise. Als I need t eat healthily and say n t junk fd. Besides, t make myself active and strng, I plan t d an hur’s exercise at least a day. Additinally, I will manage t have a psitive attitude twards the stress and face difficulty bravely. If I am happy, I can study better. In all, I believe being self-disciplined will bring me enjyment and success. I hpe mre and mre students can jin the grup f being self-disciplined like me.
Thank yu fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。表明“中考即将到来，分享关于‘提高复习效率’的一些观点和建议”；
第二步，介绍具体要做的事情，并阐明如何实施。围绕“制定学习计划、养成好的学习习惯、树立积极乐观的的态度”等方面展开；
第三步，书写结语。“感谢大家聆听”。
[亮点词汇]
①give a speech 做演讲，发言
②self-disciplined 自律
③have a psitive attitude twards 对……有积极的态度
④make a gd learning plan 制定一个好的学习计划
⑤early t bed and early t rise 早睡早起
[高分句型]
①As the high schl entrance exam is cming, we shuld learn t be self-disciplined.（as引导状语从句）
②As we knw, early t bed and early t rise makes me healthy, wealthy and wise.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
7．例文
Dear Ray,
My name is Li Hua. As the leader f the new clumn “Telling China’s Stries” fr ur schl’s English newspaper, I’m writing t discuss and seek yur valuable advice.
Our aim with this clumn is t share infrmative and engaging stries abut Chinese culture. The reasns will be illustrated as fllws. T begin with, this initiative aims t celebrate and prmte Chinese culture. What’s mre, we believe it will encurage students t develp their English language skills thrugh strytelling. Anther purpse f it is t enhance students’ crss-cultural understanding and fster a deeper appreciatin fr ur rich cultural heritage. Besides, it will als make ur newspaper mre cmprehensive and help us gain mre ppularity.
Given yur expertise in strytelling and cultural exchange, we highly value yur suggestins r advice regarding the cntent plan, r any ther aspects f the clumn.
Thank yu fr yur time. We’re eager t hear yur thughts and excited abut the pssibility f cperating with yu n this exciting prject.
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍这个栏目，并向外教咨询建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作目的；
第二步，介绍这个栏目的意义；
第三步，询问他的建议；
第四步，表达感谢和期望。
[亮点词汇]
①t begin with首先
②encurage sb. t d sth.鼓励某人做某事
③be eager t d sth.迫切要做某事
[高分句型]
①Our aim with this clumn is t share infrmative and engaging stries abut Chinese culture. (动词不定式作表语)
②Given yur expertise in strytelling and cultural exchange, we highly value yur suggestins r advice regarding the cntent plan, r any ther aspects f the clumn. (过去分词作状语)
8．参考范文
Dear Tm,
Hw are yu ding? Learning that yu are abut t pay a visit t a Chinese friend and wndering abut the Chinese custms, I am writing t put frward sme advice.
Firstly, try t arrive 5 t 6 minutes earlier, which is cmmn in Chinese traditinal culture. Secndly, bringing sme apprpriate gifts fr the hst is a kind actin. Things like small gifts frm yur hme cuntry can serve as nice gifts. Besides, understanding table manners is als imprtant. When dining with a Chinese family, remember t wait fr the elderly t start the dinner first. Try nt t make any nise when eating. Als, please avid sticking yur chpsticks int yur fd, and instead, lay them n yur dish.
If yu have any ther prblems, please feel free t cntact me.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中餐桌礼仪的介绍要点，适当添加细节，语句连贯，条理清楚，突出重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“交流生汤姆将去中国朋友家做客”来引出重点建议的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间”“礼物”“餐桌礼仪”三个维度进行阐述，每个部分都包含具体细节，如提前到达5-6分钟、合适的礼物类型以及餐桌上的注意事项。
第三步，书写结语。表达“如有问题，随时联系我”。体现了友好和支持的态度。
【亮点词汇】
①pay a visit t拜访；参观
②put frward提出
③serve as充当
【高分句型】
①Learning that yu are abut t pay a visit t a Chinese friend and wndering abut the Chinese custms, I am writing t put frward sme advice.（现在分词作原因状语）
②Firstly, try t arrive 5 t 6 minutes earlier, which is cmmn in Chinese traditinal culture. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
③Secndly, bringing sme apprpriate gifts fr the hst is a kind actin.（动名词短语作主语）
④When dining with a Chinese family, remember t wait fr the elderly t start the dinner first.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文
Saving makes yu mre beautifulDear teachers and fellw students,
As we knw, ne f tday’s ht tpics is t save resurces. Hwever, many peple waste fd, water, electricity and s n. We ften see lights and fans left n when peple leave the rm. They dn’t realize the bad effect f their behavir. It can make them becme mre selfish. What’s mre, it can cause the reductin f energy and resurce. It’s time fr us t say “NO” t unnecessary waste. It is very necessary t save smething t make yu mre beautiful. Here is my advice as fllws.
First, we shuldn’t leave the tap n after using it. Besides, eat up the fd we rder in the restaurant, r pack the leftvers. Furthermre, remember t turn ff the lights r the air-cnditiners befre leaving the rm. Let’s take actin t stp wasting resurces. We can make a difference.
Thank yu fr listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格内的提示要点，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“众所周知，当今的热门话题之一是节约资源”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——浪费现象、节俭的必要性以及节俭的做法等一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①eat up吃光
②turn ff关闭
③take actin采取行动
[高分句型]
①Besides, eat up the fd we rder in the restaurant, r pack the leftvers. (祈使句）
②We ften see lights and fans left n when peple leave the rm. (状语从句)
10．例文
My View n Shrt Vides
Over the past few years, it is cmmn that peple spend excessive time n brwsing shrt vides which may bring sme negative effects.
First f all, watching shrt vides wastes lts f time. Smetimes, students spend t much time watching shrt vides, which can influence their schlwrk. Sme even stay up late watching shrt vides and ften feel tired and sleepy in class. Next, watching shrt vides is als bad fr ur eyes. Students may have less time fr sprts and that’s nt gd fr their health. What’s wrse, sme f the bad shrt vides may lead t negative values r bad behavirs. Finally, sme even argue with their parents because their parents stp them watching shrt vides.
In my pinin, vides might change the way we entertain urselves, but texts are like immrtal stars which shine frm the past t the future. S, vide will never replace text. As students, we shuld take ur schlwrk and hme lives mre seriusly. It’s necessary fr us t cntrl the time f watching shrt vides. When we are free, we can share the husewrk, read sme bks r d sme sprts. Wrk hard and enjy urselves.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，阐述目前过度刷视频的现象；
第二步，重点阐述过度刷视频的负面影响；
第三步，表达自己的观点：呼吁大家理性刷视频，控制时间。
［亮点词汇］
① take … seriusly 认真对待……
② stay up late 熬夜
［高分句型］
①Smetimes, students spend t much time watching shrt vides, which can influence their schlwrk. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
② It’s necessary fr us t cntrl the time f watching shrt vides. (it作形式主语)
11．One pssible versin:
The persn I admire mst
Dear teachers and fellw students,
Everyne has a persn they admire in their heart. Fr me, I respect my mther mst. She wrks as a dctr in a hspital. She is tall with shrt hair and big eyes.
My mther is a rle mdel with many gd qualities. First, she is very respnsible. She wrks s hard that she wins the praise f many patients. What’s mre, she has a warm heart. She always gives a helping hand t peple in need. In additin, she is a supprtive mther. She nt nly celebrates my success but als ffers encuragement when I feel dwn.
My mther sets a gd example fr me in many ways. She teaches me hw t care abut peple arund me and deal with difficulties in my life.
Thanks fr yur attentin!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍自己最敬佩的人是谁，以及她的职业、外貌等；
第二步，具体介绍他/她的品格，例如有责任、工作努力、热心、乐于助人等；
第三步，表达他/她对自己产生的影响，例如教会我如何照顾他人、面对生活中的困难等。
[亮点词汇]
①a rle mdel 榜样
②respnsible 负责的
③ 如此……以至于……
④the praise f ……的赞扬
⑤what’s mre 而且
⑥in additin 另外
⑦nt als 不仅……而且……
⑧set a gd example 树立一个好榜样
[高分句型]
①She nt nly celebrates my success but als ffers encuragement when I feel dwn.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②She teaches me hw t care abut peple arund me and deal with difficulties in my life.（特殊疑问词+动词不定式结构）
12．例文
I’d like t share ur grup’s discussin abut sleep.
Amng us, sme find it hard t sleep smetimes, while thers sleep t much. We all agree that sleep really affects hw we study and live every day.
T sleep better, we talked abut a few simple things. First, keeping a regular sleep schedule is imprtant. Als, making yur sleep area czy helps a lt. Finally, ding relaxing things befre bed, like reading, can help yu sleep better.
By ding these things, we hpe t sleep better and d better in ur daily lives.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍六位组员的睡眠状况，并分享保证良好睡眠的做法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍六位组员的睡眠状况以及睡眠对学习和生活的影响；
第二步，分享保证良好睡眠的做法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①talk abut谈论
②keep a regular sleep schedule有规律的睡眠
[高分句型]
①We all agree that sleep really affects hw we study and live every day. (宾语从句)
②T sleep better, we talked abut a few simple things. (动词不定式作目的状语)
13．例文
Dear Peter,
Knwing that yu are interested in the plicy f daily PE class, I’m writing this email t tell yu mre details.
As we all knw, health is the mst imprtant thing in ur daily life. It’s necessary t spend enugh time exercising utdrs. It is such a great plicy that we all benefit a lt frm it.
In my schl, we d many activities in PE class. Fr example, we will run r play basketball.
In rder t keep healthy, I als eat mre vegetables and fruits every day. Besides, I will sleep early t make sure I have enugh rest.
D yu have ther suggestins n keeping healthy? Hpe t hear frm yu sn!
Yurs
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校“每天一节体育课”的实施情况，以及对保持健康的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍每天一节体育课的意义；
第二步，介绍你校体育课的活动内容；
第三步，介绍你对保持健康的其它建议。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time ding sth.花费时间做某事
②benefit frm从……中获益
③in rder t为了
④make sure确保
[高分句型]
①It is such a great plicy that we all benefit a lt frm it. (引导的结果状语从句)
②In rder t keep healthy, I als eat mre vegetables and fruits every day. (动词不定式作目的状语)
14．例文
When shuld schl begin?
Recently, the latest survey released by the China Yuth Research Center shws that middle schl students haven’t gt enugh sleep every night. The issue “When shuld schl begin” has arused the cncern f sciety.
Frm my pint f view, starting the schl day later culd benefit students a lt. My reasns are as fllws. First, sufficient sleep time enables students’ bdies t get enugh rest, which is gd fr their health. Secnd, a later start can give students mre time t eat breakfast at hme. Finally, it als means that lessns finish later s that parents can pick their children up n their way hme.
In brief, delaying the schl day is helpful nt nly t students but als t their parents. I think that schl beginning at eight ’clck every mrning is reasnable.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明中学生是否有充足的睡眠；
第二步，介绍你是否赞同进校时间推迟到八点并给出理由；
第三步，最后总结文章。
[亮点词汇]
①frm my pint f view在我看来
②be gd fr对……有好处
③in brief总之
[高分句型]
①First, sufficient sleep time enables students’ bdies t get enugh rest, which is gd fr their health.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Finally, it als means that lessns finish later s that parents can pick their children up n their way hme.（s that引导的目的状语从句）
15．例文
Gd mrning, everyne. COVID-19 has cme t an end. But what can we d during the pst-pandemic time?
First, we need t stay psitive. It’s imprtant t have a gd attitude. Stay hpeful and believe that better days are ahead. Secnd, we shuld keep ur enthusiasm fr life and learning. Stay interested in everything and enjy every mment. Dn’t lse ur passin fr studying and explring new things. In ur daily life and studies, we shuld cntinue t prtect urselves. Wear masks, wash hands frequently, and keep a safe distance frm thers. These habits are imprtant t prevent any future utbreaks. Mrever, it’s necessary t exercise regularly. Exercise helps us stay healthy and strng. Last but nt the least, d nt frget t supprt and care fr each ther, shwing kindness.
In cnclusin, in the pst-pandemic time, we shuld keep psitive, stay passinate, and take gd care f urselves. Let’s cntinue t prtect urselves, exercise regularly, and fill life with enthusiasm. Thank yu.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分别从心理上和生活学习上给到建议，注意不要漏要点并且每个都要补充一条建议；
第二步，书写结语，总结下建议。
[亮点词汇]
①need t d需要做某事
②stay hpeful保持希望
③cntinue t继续做某事
[高分句型]
①Mrever, it’s necessary t exercise regularly.（it作形式主语）
②Let’s cntinue t prtect urselves, exercise regularly, and fill life with enthusiasm. （祈使句）
生活中的浪费现象
请简述至少两种。
节俭的必要性
请列出至少两点。
节俭的做法
至少两点做法并适当举例说明。
人物介绍
如职业等。
人物品格
请列出至少三点，如有责任感等，并适当举例说明。
人物影响
请列出至少一点他/她对你的影响。