2024年上海市16区中考二模英语分类汇编 专题12 书面表达（16区满分范文）（解析版）

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选 题 目 录
2024·上海杨浦·二模 2024·上海奉贤·二模
2024·上海浦东·二模 2024·上海青浦·二模
2024·上海黄浦·二模 2024·上海闵行·二模
2024·上海普陀·二模 2024·上海金山·二模
2024·上海徐汇·二模 2024·上海静安·二模
2024·上海松江·二模 2024·上海长宁·二模
2024·上海嘉定·二模 2024·上海崇明·二模
2024·上海虹口·二模 2024·上海宝山·二模
一、书面表达
1．（2024·上海杨浦·二模）Write a paragraph in at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin (根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字)
提示：
① 参考词汇： electric scter电动自行车， nn-mtr vehicle park非机动车停车场，charge the battery给电瓶充电。
② 若选择任务一，请在答题纸写作部分的首行书写 Dear friends；若选择任务二，请在写作部分答题纸的首行书写T all electric scter wners。以上内容不计入总词数。
③ 写作内容中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。
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【答案】参考范文：
Dear Friends,
I’m Zhang Lei wh lives in the Rse Garden estate. Due t the severe fires caused by inapprpriate charging and illegal parking f the electric bicycles in Nanjing and Shanghai recently, I wuld like t recmmend yu a cuple f measures that can be taken t avid the recurrence f similar events. First and fremst, parking yur e-bikes in the crridr is definitely nt allwed, which means that yu shuld park them in the designated places. In additin, charging the battery f e-bikes at hme is likely t result in uncntrllable fires, which is why yu can nly d it in the pen-air areas. Mrever, it is illegal behavir fr peple t use the elevatrs with their e-bikes. If there is a fire in an elevatr, peple will have n chance t escape frm it. Therefre, when yu see peple riding e-bikes int the elevatr, it is necessary fr yu t warn them abut the ptential cnsequences. Hpefully, we can create a safe living envirnment.
Thank yu fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述演讲稿的目的。
第二步，提出需要注意的内容。
第三步，最后结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①due t因为，由于
②recmmend推荐，提醒
③ptential潜在的
[高分句型]
① I wuld like t recmmend yu a cuple f measures that can be taken t avid the recurrence f similar events.（that引导的定语从句，动词不定式用作目的状语）
②Therefre, when yu see peple riding e-bikes int the elevatr, it is necessary fr yu t warn them abut the ptential cnsequences. （it is+adj.+t d 句型）
2．（2024·上海浦东新·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校呼吁师生共建美好校园。学生会 (the student unin) 收到来自同学们的众多提议(prpsal)。请代表学生会选取以下一项提议写一份倡议书。谈一谈提出该倡议的理由并给出具体实施建议。
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【答案】参考范文：
The student unin has received many prpsals n hw t make ur schl better. Amng them, recycling wastepaper caught ur eye, and we appeal all students t recycle it. Every day, the schl prints hundreds f papers which are made frm trees. We cut dwn millins f trees every year and replace hardly any f them. T save paper, yu can write n bth sides f a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks befre drpping it. Yu can als take waste papers t the schl recycling centre t reuse them. By making a few small changes daily, yu can have a huge impact n the amunt f paper that gets used.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何使我们学校变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①caught ur eye引起我们的注意
②hundreds f几百
③make sure确保
④have a huge impact n有巨大影响
[高分句型]
①Every day, the schl prints hundreds f papers which are made frm trees.（which引导的定语从句）
②T save paper, yu can write n bth sides f a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks befre drpping it.（省略that的宾语从句）
3．（2024·上海黄浦·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
“世界地球日”即将来临，学校将举办公益宣传活动，具体活动安排如下表格所示。请你为校园网站写一篇通知，邀请同学们踊跃参与，通知内容包括活动主题、目的，以及具体活动安排等。
Yu can begin like this:
It’s time t celebrate Earth Day. Yu are welcme t jin us!
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Ntice
It’s time t celebrate Earth Day. Welcme t jin us!
On the ccasin f Wrld Earth Day, ur schl will be hsting a series f public welfare activities t raise awareness abut envirnmental prtectin. The theme f this event is “Lve the Earth, Prtect Our Hme”. We hpe t inspire ur students t take actin and cntribute t the preservatin f ur planet.
The event will start checking in frm 8:00 am t 8:30 am. All participants are required t register upn arrival. Frm 9:00 t 10:00 am, there will be a drawing cmpetitin, prviding students with the pprtunity t shwcase their artistic talents while expressing their lve fr nature. Fllwing that, frm 10:00 t 11:00 am, we will rganize a tree planting activity. After a lunch break frm 12:00 t 1:00 pm, a science experiment sessin will take place frm 1:30 t 2:30 pm. T cnclude the day, a pht shw will be held frm 3:00 t 3:30 pm, shwcasing phtgraphs taken by students that capture the beauty f nature.
Thank yu fr yur attentin and we lk frward t yur active participatin!
Schl Administratin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点出“世界地球日”的主题和目的。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，阐述具体活动安排。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①preservatin保持，维护
②shwcase展示优点
③cntribute t为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①Frm 9:00 t 10:00 am, there will be a drawing cmpetitin, prviding students with the pprtunity t shwcase their artistic talents while expressing their lve fr nature. （there be句型）
②T cnclude the day, a pht shw will be held frm 3:00 t 3:30 pm, shwcasing phtgraphs taken by students that capture the beauty f nature.（定语从句）
4．（2024·上海普陀·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
你校计划举办主题为“发现城市之美（Discver the beauty f the city）”的活动，现就活动方案征求大家意见。假设你是本校学生张明，请阅读以下活动方案，写一封邮件给该活动负责人李老师，邮件须包含以下内容：
（1）你是否会参加此活动，并简述理由；
（2）针对方案中的至少一项内容，提出修改建议。
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr Li,
I am very happy t learn that ur schl will have an activity called “Discver the beauty f the city”. I want t take part in this activity because we can enjy the beauty f ur city.
Students frm Grade six t eight can take part in this activity. They can g hiking and sightseeing. It says the activity begins at 7:30 a.m n 2 May, and we will meet n the schl playgrund. I think we can begin earlier s that we can have enugh time t play at Chen Yi Bund Plaza.
I am lking frward t that day.
Zhang Ming
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：要求根据提示内容进行写作。
［写作步骤］
第一步，简述是否会参加活动并给出理由；
第二步，针对一项给出建议。
［亮点词汇］
① take part in 参加
② s that 为了
［高分句型］
① I want t take part in this activity because we can enjy the beauty f ur city.（原因状语从句）
② I think we can begin earlier s that we can have enugh time t play at Chen Yi Bund Plaza.（目的状语从句）
5．（2024·上海徐汇·二模）初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduatin ceremny)，部分学生将有机会在毕业典礼上演讲，演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Je，请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等中选择一项内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的感受，给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。
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【答案】例文
My dear teachers and classmates,
I’m very glad t make a speech n the graduatin ceremny. It has been three great years fr us t study in this beautiful schl. The schl life is full f happiness and sadness, which is a precius treasure in my life.
I still remember when I began t learn English, I fund it t difficult. N matter hw hard I tried, I still culdn’t d well in it and almst gave it up. As sn as my English teacher fund my prblem, she had a talk with me abut hw t learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve becme interested in English and I’m gd at it. Here I want t say, thank yu, my best teacher. Finally, I hpe that all the students will have a gd future and ur schl will becme better and better.
Thank yu fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸在毕业典礼上发言”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等选一项内容、结合经历、谈感受、给建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达感谢您的聆听”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech做演讲
②Little by little一点一点地
③a precius treasure一个珍贵的财富
[高分句型]
①The schl life is full f happiness and sadness, which is a precius treasure in my life. (定语从句）
②I hpe that all the students will have a gd future and ur schl will becme better and better. (宾语从句)
6．（2024·上海松江·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given infrmatin. (根据以下信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。)
短文中的主人公Luke用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍，取得了看似不可能的成功，体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。
你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或成功。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I used t be really shy and was afraid f speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech cntest in ur schl. I admired thers’ cnfidence and was ashamed f my shyness.
T deal with the situatin, I began t read alud at hme, practicing in frnt f a mirrr again and again. My parents encuraged me and ften wrked as the listeners, which gave me great hpe. I became mre cnfident than I used t be. With my parents’ encuragement, I tk part in an English speech cntest. Imagining there was a mirrr in frnt f me, I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and ther students als cheered me n.
Practice makes perfect. Believe urselves and dn’t give up, and we will win.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变；
第三步，表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①used t be过去常常
②tk part in参加
③give up放弃
④deal with解决
⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
①T deal with the situatin, I began t read alud at hme, practicing in frnt f a mirrr again and again. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②My parents encuraged me and ften wrked as the listeners, which gave me great hpe. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．（2024·上海嘉定·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the situatin given.(请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
你所在的学校即将欢迎一批国际交流生(internatinal exchange students)，学校正在策划一系列精彩纷呈的活动。目前，学校正积极征集学生们对于具体活动及国际交流生住宿地点的建议。假设你是李华，请给学校负责人张老师写一封邮件，详细描述你推荐的一个活动及住宿地点的建议，并说明理由。请撰写一篇不少于60个词的短文，展现你对这次交流活动价值的深刻理解。
(注意：1.短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’d like t share my advice. I recmmend that they shuld learn smething abut Chinese traditinal art, such as paper-cutting, Peking pera, etc. It is a gd way t shw ur clrful culture and help internatinal exchange students have a better understanding f China. As fr accmmdatin, I think students’ drmitries are the best because it allws students t cmmunicate with each ther freely and build friendships.
I hpe my advice is helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体针对活动及住宿地点给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②have a better understanding f... 对……有了更好的了解
③As fr 至于
④cmmunicate with each ther freely 彼此自由交流
[高分句型]
①I recmmend that they shuld learn smething abut Chinese traditinal art, such as paper-cutting, Peking pera, etc.（宾语从句）
②As fr accmmdatin, I think students’ drmitries are the best because it allws students t cmmunicate with each ther freely and build friendships.（宾语从句和原因状语从句）
8．（2024·上海虹口·二模）你所在学校的英语校报正在举行公开竞选。假如你是学生李华，请阅读竞选职位和要求，参与其中一个职位的竞选，并完成竞选演讲稿。
演讲稿须包含以下内容：
（1）你想要参与校报工作的原因；
（2）你想竞选哪个职位，并说明理由。
注意：
1.演讲稿中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Hell, teachers and classmates! My name is Li Hua. I’m excited t share with yu why I want t be a part f ur schl newspaper and why I want t be a reprter.
First, I lve writing news articles. I think it’s fun t put my thughts and ideas int wrds. Wrking n the schl newspaper will give me a chance t write news stries and share them with everyne.
Als, I want t be a reprter because I enjy interviewing peple and learning abut their stries. As a reprter, I can talk t different students and teachers, find ut interesting things, and then write abut them in the newspaper.
I believe I have the skills t be a gd reprter. I’m gd at bserving and listening, and I can ask gd questins. I hpe yu’ll supprt me and give me a chance t shw what I can d. Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，打招呼并表明演讲目的；
第二步，讲述想要参与校报工作和竞选记者职位的原因；
第三步，介绍自己的优势，并表达想要成为记者的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②find ut找出
[高分句型]
①I’m excited t share with yu why I want t be a part f ur schl newspaper and why I want t be a reprter.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I think it’s fun t put my thughts and ideas int wrds.（省略that的宾语从句；it作形式主语）
③I want t be a reprter because I enjy interviewing peple and learning abut their stries.（because引导的原因状语从句）
9．（2024·上海奉贤·二模）Write a passage in at least 60 wrds accrding t the fllwing situatin. (根据以下情境，请补全标题“ will make my summer hliday meaningful”后，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
中考结束后的暑假，你有机会去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献一份爱心；如来一场 citywalk，感受城市的脉搏，又如去找一份part-time jb，积累工作的经验，又如…… 你最想参加哪一类社会实践活动？请陈述你的理由。
注意：
1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Vlunteering will make my summer hliday meaningful
Summer hliday is cming and I plan t d sme vlunteer wrk.
I want t be a vlunteer, because helping ther peple makes me feel gd. It’s als a gd chance fr me t imprve myself. I can d many things. Fr example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am gd at singing, s I can sing lts f sngs and tell sme stries fr the ld peple at the Old Peple’s Hme. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clthes. I can als hand ut leaflets and put up ntices.
I sincerely hpe I can wrk as a vlunteer and d smething helpful.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍自己暑期打算做什么社会实践活动，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍想成为志愿者的原因，具体能做的工作；
第三步，表达希望。
［亮点词汇］
①at the same time同时
②the elderly老人
③hand ut分发
［高分句型］
①I am gd at singing, s I can sing lts f sngs and tell sme stries fr the ld peple at the Old Peple’s Hme. （含有s的并列句）
②I sincerely hpe I can wrk as a vlunteer and d smething helpful.（宾语从句）
10．（2024·上海青浦·二模）Write at least 60 wrds n the given tpic “Actins speak luder than wrds”. (根据所给题目“行动胜于空谈”写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
常言道“行动胜于空谈”，一个行动往往胜过千言万语，我们在生活与学习中需要牢记这一点。请结合你的经历或是所见所闻，谈谈你的心得感悟。
写作要点：
(1) 围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
(2) 谈谈你对这件事的心得感悟。
注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Actins Speak Luder than Wrds
As an ld saying ges, actins speak luder than wrds. The saying shws that taking actin is f great imprtant. Here is a thing happened in my life.
When I was a middle schl student, I always aspired t achieve better grades and made many plans, but never tk actin, s I missed the pprtunity t enter a gd high schl. Then I gradually realized that taking actin t develp a plan and putting it int practice is very imprtant fr me. It nt nly helps me achieve better grades, but als benefits me in my daily life.
In shrt, I firmly believe that setting detailed gals fr the future and taking actin t achieve them ne by ne is very imprtant.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明行动胜于空谈的重要性，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①As an ld saying ges正如老话所说
②is f great imprtant……是非常重要的
③take actin t d sth.采取行动做某事
④Nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
⑤In shrt总之
[高分句型]
①The saying shws that taking actin is f great imprtant. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When I was a middle schl student, I always aspired t achieve better grades and made many plans, but never tk actin, s I missed the pprtunity t enter a gd high schl. (when引导的时间状语从句)
11．（2024·上海闵行·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
今年“青少年心理健康周” (Teenagers’ Mental Health Week) 活动期间，校园英文电台就同学们眼中“最合适的倾诉对象”进行了问卷调查，下图为调查结果的饼状图 (the pie chart)。请阅读下图，谈谈你对此结果的看法，并结合自身实际，说说你眼中最合适的倾诉对象及理由。

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【答案】例文：
During the “Teenagers’ Mental Health Week”, ur English Radi did a questinnaire survey n the “the mst suitable persn t talk t” amng students. The result shws that abut half f the students wuld rather talk t friends than parents and teachers when they have prblems. I think fr mst students, friends knw them better.
Hwever, as fr me, parents are the mst suitable persns t talk t. Fr example, when I feel stressed abut my lessns and exams, I ften cmmunicate with my parents. They can give me sme advice thrugh their experiences. They can make me relaxed and have cnfidence in myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点包括对问卷调查结果的看法，以及结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍调查结果和对此的看法；
第二步，结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld rather ... than ... 比起……更愿意……
②as fr me 至于我
③cmmunicate with sb 和某人交谈
④thrugh their experiences 通过他们的经历
⑤have cnfidence in myself 相信自己
[高分句型]
①I think fr mst students, friends knw them better.（宾语从句）
②Fr example, when I feel stressed abut my lessns and exams, I ften cmmunicate with my parents.（when引导时间状语从句）
12．（2024·上海金山·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given infrmatin.（以“My suggestin fr scial practice”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。）
社会实践活动是课堂教学的延伸，它能够丰富我们的生活经历，帮助我们认识社会、开拓视野、锻炼能力。你的学校正在开展“我为社会实践献一计”（My suggestin fr scial practice）的活动，即将初中毕业的你针对这个活动有何建议？请介绍你所希望进行的社会实践活动并阐述理由。
以下活动仅供参考。
参观类（Visit）：科技馆（Science Museum）、博物馆……
实践类（Practice）：田间劳作（Wrking in the fields）、志愿者、厨艺……
娱乐类（Entertainment）：演出（Perfrmance）……
比赛类（Match）：摄影（Taking phts）……
……
（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
My Suggestin fr Scial Practice Scial practice activities are imprtant fr students’ persnal grwth and develpment. I wuld like t share my suggestin fr scial practice. Visiting the science museum can imprve students’ understanding f science and technlgy. Wrking in the fields is als a gd way t make students knw where fd cmes frm and hw it is grwn. Participating in perfrmances can help students build cnfidence. Different matches can enrich students’ lives and allw them find their interests. S, it is necessary fr students t have sme scial practice activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，说明社会实践活动的重要性；
第二步，具体阐社会实践活动的工作内容及选择原因；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
① persnal grwth and develpment个人成长和发展
② participate in参加
③ build cnfidence建立自信
[高分句型]
① Wrking in the fields is als a gd way t make students knw where fd cmes frm and hw it is grwn. (where和when引导的宾语从句)
② S, it is necessary fr students t have sme scial practice activities. (it is+形容词+fr sb.+t d sth.句型)
13．（2024·上海静安·二模）Write a passage f at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “A prblem I slved”. （以“我解决的一个问题”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
在日常生活中，我们时常面临各种挑战和问题。请分享一次你的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的。
（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
A prblem I slved
A famus saying ges “Whatever difficulties yu meet with, never give up half way”.
I remember I had difficulty imprving my English when I entered junir high schl. Thugh I tried my best t recite the passages, it was still difficult fr me t cmmunicate with the native speakers. I culdn’t understand sme lng sentences in newspaper articles, either. With the tips frm my English teacher, I was determined t listen t the English prgrams ver the radi every day and fllw it t practice my spken English. Meanwhile, I picked up sme key wrds t guess the meanings accrding t the cntext. “Practice makes perfect”. I made great prgress at last. I felt very excited abut that.
Nw I think if a gd way is mastered, it will nt difficult fr anyne t imprve English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：本文主要是分享一次你的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细分享一次你的亲身经历，并谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty ding sth.做某事有困难
②cmmunicate with和某人交流
③be determined t d sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①I remember I had difficulty imprving my English when I entered junir high schl. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Thugh I tried my best t recite the passages, it was still difficult fr me t cmmunicate with the native speakers. (thugh引导的让步状语从句)
③Nw I think if a gd way is mastered, it will nt difficult fr anyne t imprve English. (if引导的条件状语从句)
14．（2024·上海长宁·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
你学校的英语专栏将在下月进行主题为“My scial activity（我的社会实践活动）”的分享。请你写一篇短文，介绍你参与校外的某一次社会实践活动，并谈谈你的感受。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
My scial activity At my schl, we have held a lt f scial practice activities. Last mnth, I went t the Science and Technlgy Museum with my classmates. The Science and Technlgy Museum is a wnderful place fr yung peple t learn. I visited the natural wrld and fund smething new. It was amazing. Besides, I did a lt f physics experiments by myself. They help me t put what I have learned int practice. I saw a lt f interesting things in the museum, t. I learned a lt. I was pretty excited and happy at that time. In my pinin, it is a gd way fr us t learn smething useful ut f the bks in museums.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：主要内容包含两个方面：活动做了什么和自己收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明你最喜欢的实践活动是什么；
第二步，介绍具体做了什么；
第三步，谈一谈自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①a wnderful place 一个很棒的地方
②put what I have learned int practice把所学的东西付诸实践
[高分句型]
①In my pinin, it is a gd way fr us t learn smething useful ut f the bks in museums.（固定句型：It is a gd/great way fr sb t d sth）
15．（2024·上海崇明·二模）Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “Making ur schl better” accrding t the given situatin （根据以下情境，以“让我们的学校变得更好”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
你的学校获得一笔100万元的资金用于改善教学设施、生活设施和体育设施等，你认为学校的哪个方面最急需改善呢？请你从表格内三类不同的设施中选出一个方面，谈谈自己的想法并给出理由。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文：
Making ur schl better
Our schl has a lng histry and is well equipped in all aspects. Students have a gd learning envirnment, but I think ur living facilities need t be imprved.
T begin with, the tilets at the schl were rudimentary, especially the female tilets. The space is small s female students have t queue up fr a lng time every time they g t the tilets. Then, the beds in ur drmitries are nt very stable. They need t be replaced r reinfrced. The walls need repainting as well. Finally, ur canteen is great. It will be better if there is a wider variety f fd.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求根据所给题目，对学校设施提出看法。写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述学校优势，再提出需要改进的地方；
第二步，详述改进生活设施的具体内容。
[亮点词汇]
①be well equipped 装备齐全的
②t begin with 首先
③queue up 排队等待
④a wider variety f 更多种类的
[高分句型]
① Students have a gd learning envirnment, but I think ur living facilities need t be imprved.（that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
② The space is small s female students have t queue up fr a lng time every time they g t the tilets.（s引导结果状语从句）
③ It will be better if there is a wider variety f fd.（if引导条件状语从句）
16．（2024·上海宝山·二模）Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the situatin given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
你的学校近期拟开展一次校园艺术节活动 (Schl Art Festival)，本次活动旨在发挥同学们的艺术特长，营造良好的校园艺术氛围。目前学校德育处正就活动方案征求意见。
假如你是初三学生毕华，请阅读以下活动方案，给德育处王老师写一封信。
信件必须包括以下内容：
1. 你是否会报名参加校园艺术节活动，并简述理由；
2. 针对活动方案中的1-2项内容，提出修改建议。
(注意：1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very happy t learn that ur schl will have an art festival. The theme f the festival is “Art makes schl life better”. I want t take part in it because I can enjy the beauty f art.
This activity will be held in the Art Rm frm May 6th t 8th. It will start at 3:30 pm and last fr an hur. I think we shuld begin earlier s that we can have enugh time t enjy urselves. Students frm Grade 6 t 8 can take part in this activity. They can g t the art lectures and enjy art wrks frm students. I think we can als watch traditinal plays and play interesting games.
I’m lking frward t it.
Yurs sincerely,
Bi Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。很高兴得知学校要开展校园艺术节；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。一是简述自己是否会参加并给出理由，二是针对活动方案提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。期待艺术节的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②last fr持续
③enjy neself尽情享受
[高分句型]
①I want t take part in it because I can enjy the beauty f art.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think we shuld begin earlier s that we can have enugh time t enjy urselves.（s that引导的目的状语从句）
近日，由于电动自行车引发的火灾屡屡发生。今年2月23日，南京市雨花区一处住宅小区因电动自行车引发整栋楼大火，造成15人遇难。2月26日至3月4日，上海接连发生因造规停放电动自行车和在非指定地点充电引发的火灾，3名车主被拘留。
你是玫瑰花园小区 (Rse Garden Estate) 的居民张磊 (Zhang Lei)。你的小区有不少外国友人租住，他们中也有不少人是电动自行车的使用者。小区物业请你协助参与对这些外国友人的安宣传工作。任务1：撰写一份演讲稿，对他们进行安全宣传和教育。
任务2：设计一份告居民书，张贴在电梯中，起到警示告诫的作用。
请选其中的一项任务完成。
Recycling wastepaper 废纸回收
Vlunteering in the canteen 食堂志愿工作
Daily jgging 每日慢跑
Weekly talent shw 每周才艺秀
Time
Events
8:00-8:30
Check in
9:00-10:00
Drawing cmpetitin
10:00-11:00
Tree planting activity
12:00-13:00
Lunch break
13:30-14:30
Science experiment
15:00-15:30
Pht shw
活动方案
活动对象（participant）
本校六至八年级学生
活动形式
徒步+观光（Hiking & sightseeing）
活动时间
5月2日7点30分
集合地点
学校操场
目的地
外滩陈毅广场
Jb
What t d
reprter
write news articles/cnduct interviews
phtgrapher
take phts
editr
take charge f a sectin
secretary
arrange meetings/take ntes
?
教学设施 （teaching facilities）
教学楼，图书馆，实验室，计算机室，音乐室，美术室
生活设施（living facilities）
食堂，宿舍，洗手间
体育设施（sprts facilities）
操场，体育馆，游泳馆，篮球场，足球场
校园艺术节活动方案
活动主题
“艺术让校园生活更美好”
(Art makes schl life better)
活动时间
5月6日至5月8日 下午3:30-4:30
活动地点
学校艺术教室 (Art Rm)
活动对象
6至8年级学生
活动形式
艺术讲座、学生作品展示
(Art lectures &Students’ wrks display)