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2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

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2023年上海市青浦区中考二模英语试题

VII. Writing (作文)(共 20 分)

84. Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的 短文, 标点符号不占格)

假设你是李华, 收到一封来自笔友 Paul 的邮件, 请阅读邮件内容并进行回复。

注意：

 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息, 否则不予评分。

 照抄试卷中内容不得分。

2022年上海市青浦区中考二模英语试题

X. Writing. （作文）（共20分）

80. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A decision I made”（请以“决定”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

在学习和生活中，我们会做出许多决定，有时会庆幸自己的决定是正确的，有时也会为错误的决定而懊恼后悔。这些决定都会让我们有所感悟。请结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。

注意：

1) 抄袭试卷中内容不得分；

2) 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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2021年上海市青浦区中考二模英语试题

X. Writing:(作文)(共20分)

84. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "A valuable lesson”(请以“宝贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)

提示:在学习与生活中,我们会因为经历了一些事情,获得体验,增加阅历,吸取教训。请以“宝贵的一课”为题,结合你的经历,谈谈你的感受。

注意：

抄袭试卷中内容不得分。

文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。

答案：

2023年上海市青浦区中考二模英语试题

80．例文

Hi, Paul

      I’m glad to hear from you. I warmly congratulate you on winning the first prize in the school competition.

      You won a $500 prize. You’re wondering how to spend it. I think it’s important to put money to good use. If you like travelling, you can go on a trip as a reward. Travel can help you relax yourself and have the energy to take on the new tasks waiting for you. When you want to buy something, don’t buy it right now. Ask yourself if you really need it. You can also write down how much or how important it is in your life. Don’t buy anything only because everybody in your class has it.

      I hope those ideas are helpful to you. Whatever you do, use the money wisely.

                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作时按照电子邮件格式，内容需包含所给情境内容。文章确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语法错误。

［写作步骤］

第一步，表达祝贺；

第二步，围绕如何花500美元给出自己的观点。

第三步，总述观点。

［亮点词汇］

① hear from 收到信、电话等

② put sth. to good use 有效使用

③take on 承担，接受

［高分句型］

① I warmly congratulate you on winning the first prize in the school competition. （ congratulate sb. on doing sth. 句型）

② I think it’s important to put money to good use. （省略that的宾语从句）

③Whatever you do, use the money wisely.（让步状语从句）

2022年上海市青浦区中考二模英语试题

【答案】范文：

A decision I made

Our lives are the sum of all our decision. The decisions we make today may play an important role in our future. When I was thirteen, my mother wanted me to be a girl who was good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. I think the decision I’ve made must be wise one.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“A decision I made”为题，叙述自己所做过的决定，以及自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且把故事发生的背景、起因和过程叙述完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。

2021年上海市青浦区中考二模英语试题

80．例文：

A valuable lesson

During our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons, because they can taught something important about ourselves. As for me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.        

During the summer vacation of my seventh grade, our class went to to an orphan home in our city to help the children there. At first, we gave away some meaningful story books and stationery to them. Then we talked about our school life to them. I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. And I even showed some children some skills which I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.

That volunteer work really taught me a lesson, which I will never forget. I felt the truth of those words, which I never understood before that: “It is more blessed to give than to receive.” That day, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident and outgoing to communicate with others. More importantly, it made me realize that giving is receiving.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“宝贵的一课”为题结合自己的经历，并谈谈对这次经历的感受。要求不少于60词。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，讲述自己的经历用一般过去时。可分三段进行写作：第一段引出这次经历；第二段具体描述这次经历；最后一段收尾，表达自己的感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。