上海市浦东新区2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达+

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上海市浦东新区2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编书面表达2023年上海市浦东新区中考二模英语试题VII. Writing （作文）（本大题共1题, 共20分）84. Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个 词的短文, 标点符号不占格）初三毕业典礼即将到来, 为此学校开展了主题海报设计活动。目前初步确定了三幅主题 为“友谊长存”、“感谢师恩”、“美好未来”的候选海报, 并在学校网站展示, 征询学生 们的意见。假设你是该校学生李华, 请在学校网站留言, 选择其中的：帽海群, 并结合海报 内容阐述你的理由。（注意：1、短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。. 2、照抄阅读语篇不得分。）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2022年上海市浦东新区中考二模英语试题VII. Writing （作文）（20 分）44.Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（假定你是Tony，根据以下情境续写这一封信，不少于60词，标点符号不占格）注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。Note：entire adj.全部的，整个的Dear Editor,I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall? 2021年上海市浦东新区中考二模英语试题VII. Writing （作文）（20 分）56．Write at least 60 words about the topic “A(n) _______ with love” (请以 “爱的_______.“为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格)在上文中，祖母收到的生日礼物包含了祖父对她真挚的爱。我们的生活也充满了爱，我们一定收到过带有满满爱意的物品。请你分享一下关于这个物品的故事，并谈谈你的感受或它对你的影响。注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：2023年上海市浦东新区中考二模英语试题64．例文I would like to say “thank you” to my English teacher.He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help. I think he is the best in my mind. I will remember him forever.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：选择其中一幅海报进行阐述，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，语句通顺。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，表达想感谢哪位老师；第二步，描述老师的基本特征及老师对我的影响；第三步，书写结语，表达感受。[亮点词汇]①be strict with sb对某人严格②play football踢足球③it’s no use doing sth做某事是没用的[高分句型]①He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.（that引导宾语从句）②He’s kind but strict with us.（but表转折） 2022年上海市浦东新区中考二模英语试题【答案】例文：Dear Editor,I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall?Now people are under more and more pressure from work and study. We need a place to relax. I think this park is the best place to relax. We can see many people in the park every day. Some old people exercise in the park, and children fly kites in the park. There are also many people talking happily with their friends. If the park becomes a shopping center, there will be no suitable place for us to relax.So I insist on my view that the park cannot be given up. Now the transportation is very convenient. People can take the subway or car to go to a far place when shopping. I think this is a better solution.That's all. Thank you!Tony. 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据信件中的提示要点，介绍不同意公园变购物公园的理由以及建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰 2021年上海市浦东新区中考二模英语试题范文：A gift with love My favorite gift is a watch, which was a gift full of love from my parents. It can be used to tell the time. It reminds me of the importance of making right use of my time. With the watch, I may be economical of my time. I will never forget how excited I was when I got it. Though I have changed several watches since then, I still believe that it is the watch I like best. 【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了祖父过世后，我们陪祖母过的一个特殊的生日。50．根据文中“Grandfather had always said that she expected her birthday party every day since it was also a time for family reunion(团聚).”可知，祖母盼望着她的生日聚会。故填Yes, she did.51．根据文中“We ordered a large three-tier birthday cake and decorated the house with colorful belts and balloons.”可知，她的家人们订购了一个三层大生日蛋糕，用彩带和气球装饰了房子。故填They ordered a large three-tier birthday cake and decorated the house with colorful belts and balloons.52．根据文中“That scarf, faded(褪色的) and even older than my mom, was a necessary pan of the yearly celebration. Grandfather gave it to grandmother forty years ago on their first date.”可知，祖母拥有这条旧围巾四十年了。故填For forty/40 years. /Forty/40 years./Since grandfather and grandmother’s/their first date.53．根据文中“Then we started to search every corner for the missing scarf. As we emptied box after box and found no scarf, my grandmother’s eyes were filled with tears. However, seeing our worried looks, she soon hid her disappointment.”可推知，祖母找不到那条旧围巾时，她感到很悲伤。故填She felt sad/unhappy/upset/worried/disappointed.54．根据文中“Dear, I noticed some tiny holes in your scarf when I washed it. So I thought it was time for a new one.”可知，祖父给祖母买了一条新围巾，是因为他注意到她的围巾上有几个洞。故填Because he noticed some holes in her scarf（when washing it）.55．根据文中“This was my grandmother’s first birthday without grandfather,and before he passed away, we had promised him that we would make it her best birthday ever;That scarf, faded(褪色的) and even older than my mom, was a necessary pan of the yearly celebration. Grandfather gave it to grandmother forty years ago on their first date; Grandfather had always said that she expected her birthday party every day since it was also a time for family reunion(团聚); Dear, I noticed some tiny holes in your scarf when I washed it; my sister shouted as she found a well-wrapped(包装完美的) box.”可知，除了给祖母买一条新围巾外，还有一些细节也能表达祖父的深情：祖父临终前，记得让孩子们为祖母过一个有史以来最好的生日；他们第一次约会时，他送给祖母一条围巾；他总是告诉孩子们，祖母希望全家团聚；祖父给祖母洗围巾；祖父把新围巾放在一个包得很好的盒子。故填（空一）Before passing away, grandfather remembered to ask his children to make grandmother’s birthday the best ever. /He gave grandmother a scarf on their first date.故填（空二）He always told the children that grandmother expected a family reunion. /Grandfather washed the scarf for grandmother. /Grandfather kept the new scarf in a well-wrapped box./He wrapped the new scarf well.56．1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时，根据汉语提示的内容，叙述收到过的带有满满爱意的礼品，并谈谈自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。