2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-概要写作-第10篇

这是一份2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-概要写作-第10篇，共26页。PPT课件主要包含了CONTENTS，问题解决型 说明文，benefits等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Principles and Methds
找出记叙文的6要素：何人(wh)在何时(when)何地(where)因何原因(why)做了何事(what)，结果如何(hw)。其中，最重要的要点是某人做了某事。
1.事物描述类：对象+结构/性质+功用2.问题解决类：问题+(解决的)方法或措施3.社会现象类：现象+原因+后果(+措施或建议)
论点+论据：其关键在于找出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点，不可漏掉其中任何一方。
Writing Practice
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
What is ec-fashin? Ec-fashin is abut making clthes that cnsider the envirnment, the health f cnsumers and the wrking cnditins f peple in the fashin industry. A clser lk at the fashin industry pints ut many prblems that are cmmn practices in the creatin f ur fashins frm the field t the factry.
Firstly, the prductin f textiles(纺织业) pllutes the envirnment heavily. Cttn-planting uses pesticides(杀虫剂); sheep-farming and wl-cleaning bring abut glbal warming. Secndly, every stage f clthing prductin cnsumes a great deal f energy and sme als invlve chemicals which bviusly d harm t the surrundings. In additin, there is a lt f waste prduced in the prcess, especially in the frm f plluted water. Thirdly, grwing purchasing pwer and ur shpping habits further wrsen the bad effects. We are nw buying clthes in increasing quantities and we are als quick t thrw away clthes that have been wrn nly a cuple f times.
Then, hw t slve the prblem? T a large degree, it is the fashin prducers that really have the pwer and the respnsibility t shape ur future. There are a great many ways these prducers can reduce their eclgical ftprint, frm switching t green energy and reducing energy use, thrugh selecting sustainable(可持续的) materials and chsing lcal suppliers, t recycling and minimizing waste. On the ther hand, as cnsumers we can all play ur part by selecting envirnmentally friendly clthing and reducing clthing buying.
There is sme cncern that ec-friendly fashins are just a trend that we will eventually grw tired f but we can make sure that desn't happen. Nw many peple are beginning t shp fr rganic fd prducts because the benefits f eating fd free f chemicals are immediate. They relate directly t ur persnal health. In fact, chsing ec-fashin can als d gd t ur persnal health, thugh it is mstly dne by way f keeping the health f the planet.
Writing Prcess
快速浏览全文，了解文章体裁，弄清语篇结构，理解段意和文意。
What is ec-fashin?
... many prblems... Firstly...
hw t slve the prblem?
Paragragh 1：定义环保时尚
Paragragh 2：指出时尚产业产生的各种问题
Paragragh 3：从消费者和生产商两种角度给出解决办法
Paragragh 4：环保时尚有益于人们与地球的健康
本文简要介绍了什么是环保时尚，由于时尚产业所存在的各种问题，所以作者向生产者和消费者提出了解决方法，最后强调，选择环保时尚对于个人和整个地球来说都是有益的
根据文本结构，在文中找到并划出主题句，以及所有能体现内容要点的关键词：说明文跟议论文一样，主题句一般出现在段首或段尾，或转折处(如hwever, but, in fact等)。
要点2. , the envirnment heavily... Secndly, a great deal f energy... Thirdly, grwing purchasing pwer and ur shpping habits further wrsen the bad effects...
要点4. ... In fact, chsing ec-fashin can als d gd t ur persnal health, thugh it is mstly dne by way f keeping the health f the planet.
用自己的语言将所有要点一个不漏地表达出来。
转换：Ec-fashin cncerns the envirnment, cnsumers' health and peple's wrking cnditins when making clthes.
要点1. Ec-fashin is abut making clthes that cnsider the envirnment, the health f cnsumers and the wrking cnditins f peple in the fashin industry.
转换：Varius prblems arise in traditinal fashin prductin, including envirnmental pllutin and energy waste, wrsened by grwing purchasing pwer and shpping habits.
要点2. fashin prblems... Firstly, the envirnment heavily... Secndly, a great deal f energy... Thirdly, grwing purchasing pwer and ur shpping habits further wrsen the bad effects...
转换：T slve the prblem, prducers shuld reduce, reuse and recycle, while cnsumers are suppsed t chse envirnmentally friendly clthes and purchase less.
要点3. Then, hw t slve the prblem? ... prducers can reduce their eclgical ftprint, frm switching t green energy and reducing energy recycling and minimizing waste. On the ther hand, as cnsumers we can... selecting envirnmentally friendly clthing and reducing clthing buying.
转换：Benefiting the health f bth the earth and peple, ec-fashin will surely be a lasting trend.
要点4. There is sme cncern that ec-friendly fashins are just a trend that we will eventually grw tired f but we can make sure that desn't happen. ... In fact, chsing ec-fashin can als d gd t ur persnal health, thugh it is mstly dne by way f keeping the health f the planet.
写好初稿后，请检查是否包括了所有内容要点，是否准确使用了相应的语法结构和词汇，是否使用了语句间的连接成分，结构是否紧凑，是否是使用自己的语言，在语言表达中是否有语法错误和单词拼写错误，等等。 要检查无误后，就要认真规范地誊写，做到字迹工整，卷面整洁。也要注意计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。
Ec-fashin cncerns the envirnment, cnsumers' health and peple's wrking cnditins when making clthes. (要点1) Varius prblems arise in traditinal fashin prductin, including envirnmental pllutin and energy waste, wrsened by grwing purchasing pwer and shpping habits. (要点2) T slve the prblem, prducers shuld reduce, reuse and recycle, while cnsumers are suppsed t chse envirnmentally friendly clthes and purchase less. (要点3) Benefiting the health f bth the earth and peple, ec-fashin will surely be a lasting trend. (要点4)
Sample Cmmentary
能用自己的语言来有表达所有这些要点；
Sample Cmmentary
运用了较高级的表达，如，分词短语Benefiting the health f bth the earth and peple，连词+分词when making clthes，不定式短语T slve the prblem，等等。