2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-读后续写-第2篇

这是一份2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-读后续写-第2篇，共22页。PPT课件主要包含了原文一致原则，曲折性原则，正能量原则，写作指导，事件梳理，构思框架，两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量，构思2等内容，欢迎下载使用。

内容要前后衔接，上下连贯语言表达风格一致。
凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。
故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。
读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A farmer grew sme vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had n mney. He had t sell sme cabbages and carrts in the market. The next mrning he tk tw baskets f vegetables t twn. But it was raining hard that afternn and there were few peple in the street. When his vegetables were sld ut, it was dark. He bught sme medicine and hurried t his village.
On his way hme he saw a persn lying n the snw. He placed his baskets n the grund and was ging t help the persn t get up. At that time he fund it was a dead man and there was much bld n his bdy. He was s afraid that he ran away quickly, withut taking the baskets with him.
The next afternn the farmer was sent t the plice statin. Having shwn the baskets, an fficer asked, “Are these yurs?”“Yes, sir,” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have yu killed the man?” “N, n, sir,” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did yu see the dead man?” “Abut seven last evening.” “Did yu see wh killed the man?” “N, sir.”
The fficer brught ut a knife and asked, “Have yu seen it yet?” “N, sir.”The fficer became angry and tld the pliceman t beat him up and send him int prisn. The fficer wanted t trap the farmer int the cnfessin(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.Paragraph 1：The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again.Paragraph 2：The farmer was lucky. A few days later,…
主要是根据记叙文的六要素弄清文章大意，特别要弄清故事的人物，时态(通常是一般过去时)，事件(故事的起因和经过)，语言特色(以便在续写时语言特色前后一致，保持不变)，等等。
人物时态和事件 语言特色不要变
a farmer, his wife, a dead man, an fficer, a pliceman
simple past tense
●A farmer's wife was ill and he had t sell sme cabbages.
●When his vegetables were sld ut, he bught sme medicine and hurried t his village.
●On his way hme he fund a dead man . He was s afraid that he ran away quickly, withut taking the baskets.
● The next afternn the farmer was sent t the plice statin.
● The fficer wanted t trap the farmer int the cnfessin, but he refused t admit he was the murderer.
语言特色1.When his vegetables were sld ut, it was bught sme medicine and hurried t his his way hme he saw a persn lying n the was s afraid that he ran away quickly, withut taking the baskets with that time he fund it was a dead man. 6.Having shwn the baskets, an fficer asked.
两段首句定一框 由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。
二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。
The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again.（长官很生气，他要警察再打农夫）The farmer was lucky. A few days later, （农夫很幸运，几天之后，……）
Paragraph 1：
本段依然是写农夫在狱中的遭遇、所想、所做。注意结尾要与下段语义衔接。
Paragraph 2：
在已定框架范围内，依据情节发展和生活常识，推断故事中人物所见、所闻、所思、所说、所做等给每段增加5至8个具体细节，我们称之为叫“58细节添加法”。
Paragraph 1从所给材料结尾和本段首句可知，农夫继续挨打;从下段首句the farmer was luck才会出现转机，所以本段应是写农夫在牢中的所遇和所想。因此，本段可以这样构思：
Paragraph 1:The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again.
Paragraph 2:The farmer was lucky. A few days later, …
所遇农夫被打，遍体鳞伤所想想到死刑，非常害怕不是己为，死不承认陈述真相，无人相信寄托希望，有人相救
Paragraph 2从本段首句可知，会出现转机，上段末农夫希望有人相助，那么， “几天后”应是有人出现了。从正能量原则可知，凶手被抓，真相大白，农夫妻子病愈。因此，可以这样构思：
目击者出现，提供证据经过调查，真相大白凶手被抓，农夫回家妻子病愈，夫妻相拥
审读初稿，注意语义是否衔接，前后是否连贯，事件是否符合逻辑，语言特色是否与前文一致。在修改润色之后，整齐工整地誊写在答卷上。
Paragraph 1 The fficer was s angry that he asked the pliceman t beat him up again. The farmer was beaten black and blue all ver. Thinking that he wuld be sentenced t death, he felt extremely frightened. But he didn’t kill anyne, and he was inncent. On n accunt did he admit what he didn't d. He must tell peple the truth, but n ne culd hear his vice. Hpefully, smene culd cme and save him.
Paragraph 2 The farmer was lucky. A few days later, a yung man came t the plice statin with a lt f jurnalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the plice fficer wh killed the man! He saw the plice fficer kill the man with a knife and then run away late in the evening. After investigatin, what the yung man said was right. The plice fficer was sent int prisn and the farmer was set free. Hurrying hme, the farmer fund his wife recvered frm her illness. They hugged each ther, with tears in their eyes.