陕西省西安市莲湖区2022-2024年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达+

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书面表达
2024年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
IX. 书面表达(共1题, 计15分)
假如你是李华, 去年国庆节期间, 你和你的朋友们去了不同的地方旅游, 度过了一个令人愉快的假期。请根据下表提示, 写一篇英语短文, 介绍你们的假期活动及其感受。
提示
1. 参考提示内容, 可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数)。
My friends and I went n a trip t different places during the Natinal Day Hliday. After returning hme, we shared what we did and hw _______________________________________
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We all had a gd time during the Natinal Day Hliday.
2023年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
IX. 书面表达（共1题, 计15分）
61. 初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习生活中，哪个人最让你难以忘记？请你以“The Persn I Will Never Frget”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿至学校英语校报栏目“I experience, I enjy, I share”。
1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数不少于70。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
The Persn I Will Never Frget
Junir high schl life is cming t an end. Lking back at these past three years,
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2022年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
IX.书面表达（共1题，计15分）
61. 你们学校正在开展“感恩父母”的系列教育活动。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇演讲稿。
要求：
1.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Gd mrning, everyne! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu!
答案：
2024年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
One pssible versin :
My friends and I went n a trip t different places during the Natinal Day Hliday . After returning hme , we shared what we did and hw we felt with each ther.
Jack went t Shaanxi t climb Munt Hua. He said Munt Hua is s high that it made him feel surprised. He was tired when he climbed t the tp , but he tk pride in himself very much . Sarah traveled t Sichuan and visited Chengdu . She tasted different kinds f delicius fd there . She said she felt wnderful abut the ht pt there. As fr me , I climbed the Great Wall in Beijing. When I saw the Great Wall , I felt amazed . After I finished climbing it , I was excited and prud f myself. I was a real man after climbing the Great Wall .
We all had a gd time during the Natinal Day Hliday .
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍三位同学和自己的假期活动以及感受。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take pride in对……感到自豪
②different kinds f不同种类的
③as fr至于
[高分句型]
①After returning hme, we shared what we did and hw we felt with each ther. (宾语从句)
②When I saw the Great Wall, I felt amazed. (when引导的时间状语从句)
2023年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
61．例文
The Persn I Will Never Frget
Junir high schl life is cming t an end. Lking back at these past three years, the mst memrable persn is Mr. Li, my English teacher.
He is a yung man with glasses. He is always patient with us. We all like him.
When I started my junir high schl, I culd hardly understand him in class because I was t shy t ask anything. As a result, I failed the exam fr the first time. Luckily, Mr. Li encuraged me a lt. Thanks t his supprt, my English has imprved quickly.
I am really thankful t Mr. Li. He is the best teacher that I have ever met. I want t tell him I’ll never frget him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应结合提示要求并以“The Persn I Will Never Frget”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿至学校英语校报栏目“I experience, I enjy, I share”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明我难以忘记的人是谁；
第二步，介绍这个人的外貌以及他是如何帮助你或者影响你的；
第三步，总结，表明自己对这个人的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cme t an end结束
②be patient with对……有耐心
③As a result结果
④fr the first time第一次
[高分句型]
①When I started my junir high schl, I culd hardly understand him in class because I was t shy t ask anything.（when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
②He is the best teacher that I have ever met.（that引导定语从句）
2022年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
61．例文
Gd mrning, everyne! Tday my tpic is “Learning t get alng with ur parents”. These days, many students feel it’s hard t get alng with parents. They ften argue with parents, and they dn’t like t talk with them.
Hw can we slve the prblems? Well, first, we shuld respect ur parents. They care fr us all the time. Secnd, we are suppsed t d sme husewrk at hme. We shuld help clean the rm, ck meals and s n. Third, we shuld care fr them, spend time with them, and have a talk with them.
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“学着与父母相处”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，描述孩子和父母之间的问题；第二段介绍如何解决这些问题；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
人
假期活动
感受
Jack
陕西(Shaanxi),
爬华山(climb Munt Hua)
很高, 很陡峭(steep);虽然很累, 但是很为自己骄傲 (take pride f)
Sarah
四川(Sichuan),
访成都(visit Chengdu)
参观城市和街道, 品美食(delicius fd), 吃火锅(ht pt)的感觉太好了
Li Hua
北京(Beijing):
爬长城(the Great Wall)
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The Persn I Will Never Frget
1 Wh is the persn?
2. What is he/she like?
3. Hw did the persn help r influence yu?
4. What d yu think f the persn?
Tpic
Learning t get alng with ur parents
Prblems between children and parents
dn’t like t talk with parents, argue with parents...
Ways t slve the prblems
respect parents, d sme husewrk at hme...