福建省莆田市仙游县华侨中学2023-2024高三上学期期中考试英语试题
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2. 回答选择题时,选出每小题答案后,用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时,将答案写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
第一部分 听力(共两节,满分30分)
做题时,先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项,并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
1. When will the man prbably have dinner?
A. At 5:30 pm.B. At 6:00 pm.C. At 7:30 pm.
2. What des the wman suggest the man d?
A. Take deep breaths.
B. Write key wrds n cards.
C. Try t memrize everything.
3. Wh is Jane waiting fr?
A. The man.B. His parents.C. A repairman.
4. What des the man plan t replace?
A. The chairs.B. The carpet.C. The bkshelf.
5. What are the speakers mainly talking abut?
A. A hst.B. A prgram.C. A child.
第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)
听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项,并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前,你将有时间阅读各个小题,每小题5秒钟;听完后,各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。
听第6段材料,回答第6、7题。
6. What des the man think f the wman’s handwriting?
A. It is elegant.B. It is messy.C. It is standard.
7. What is the wman writing?
A. A scientific paper.B. A shpping list.C. A news reprt.
听第7段材料,回答第8至10题。
8. Why des the man cme t the wman?
A. T wash sme clthes.B. T buy sme furniture.C. T lk at an apartment.
9. What des the man want t buy?
A. A fridge.B. A washing machine.C. An air cnditiner.
10. What will the man d first?
A. Sign the cntract.B. Meet his wife.C. Make a phne call.
听第8段材料,回答第11至13题。
11. Where des the cnversatin prbably take place?
A. At the cmmunity center.
B. In the gvernment ffice.
C. Outside the wman’s huse.
12. Why is the man raising mney?
A. T d sme repairs.B. T help the injured.C. T rganize an activity.
13. Hw much des the wman dnate?
A. $50.B. $80.C. $100.
听第9段材料,回答第14至16题。
14. What d we knw abut the patient?
A. He is verweight.B. He is awake nw.C. He is still in danger.
15. Hw many COVID-19 patients are in treatment?
A. Three.B. Fur.C. Five.
16. What is the relatinship between the speakers?
A. Dctr and nurse.B. Family members.C. Dctr and patient.
听第10段材料,回答第17至20题。
17. Hw will the listeners g t the Isle f Man frm Heysham?
A. By train.B. By plane.C. By ferry.
18. What will the listeners d n day 1?
A. D a little light shpping.B. Meet the tur manager.C. Have lunch in the htel.
19. Where will the listeners g n day 2?
A. The twn f Peel.B. The muntain Snaefell.C. The village f Laxey.
20. When will the listeners tur arund a small island?
A. On day 3.B. On day 4.C. On day 5.
第二部分 阅读(共两节,满分50分)
第一节(共15小题;每小题2.5分,满分37.5分)
阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
A
The listed bks may be a nice taste fr yur cming hlidays. Take ne and enjy yurselves!
A Warbler’s Jurney
Sctt Weidensaul
If tragedy is the excavatr (挖掘机) f beauty, the era f ur pandemic shutdwn shwed that. Bird sngs rse when nise levels frm traffic, airplanes and even barking dgs nsedived. Bird-watching bmed. The wrld stpped, and birds and peple nticed each ther. A new bk with brilliant illustratins by Nancy Lane, is an epic stry f tugh migratin f a warbler (莺) tld thrugh the eyes f tw little girls. The stry f its adventure is smart, beautiful and a reminder f what’s pssible when we ntice what we have in cmmn with a tiny bird.
A Lady fr a Duke
Alexis Hall
Alexis Hall delivered the rmantic cmedy f this summer. In the bk, friends lng thught lst are fund and slwly becme lvers. Vila Carrll, a veteran (老兵) f the Naplenic wars, was lng assumed dead. Injured n the battlefield, she gave up her family, wealth and title t live as her true self. Then she returns t public life after years f absence and finds lve with her srrw-stricken best friend wh’s still murning her.
The Memry Librarian
Janelle Mnáe
While wrking her day jb as a pp star, Janelle Mnáe has written plenty f music with science-fictin tpics—mst recently n her 2018 album Dirty Cmputer. But seeing as hw Mnáe tells tales in just abut every medium she can get her hands n, including film, it was inescapable that she’d turn t the literary frm ne day as well. The bk is a cllectin f shrt stries that pick up the lse threads f Dirty Cmputer’s. It serves readers tales grunded in the human trials f identity expressin, technlgy, and lve, but als reaching thrugh t the wrlds f memry and time within.
21. Which f the fllwing bks has beautiful pictures?
A. Dirty Cmputer.B. A Warbler’s Jurney.
C. A Lady fr a Duke.D. The Memry Librarian.
22. What kind f bk is A Lady fr a Duke?
A. A sad stry.B. A cmic stry.
C. A mral stry.D. A science-fictin stry
23. What can we knw abut Janelle Mnáe?
A. Multi-giftedB. TalkativeC. OutgingD. Gd-natured
B
An 89-year-ld man, Manfred Steiner, has reached a gal he spent 20 years wrking tward and nearly a lifetime thinking abut: earning his Ph. D. And nw he is a physicist.
Steiner values this degree because it is what he always wanted and because he vercame health prblems that culd have affected his studies. “But I made it, and this was the mst satisfactry pint in my life, t finish it,” he said.
When he was yung, Steiner wanted t becme a physicist after reading abut Albert Einstein. But his mther and uncle persuaded him that studying medicine wuld be a better chice. He earned his medical degree in 1955 and mved t the US sn after.
Steiner studied hematlgy (血液学) at Tufts University and bichemistry at the Massachusetts Institute f Technlgy. He became a full prfessr and led the hematlgy department at Brwns’ medical schl frm 1985 t 1994. Steiner helped establish a research prgram in hematlgy at the University f Nrth Carlina. He directed that prgram until he retired frm medicine in 2000.
Steiner fund medical research pleasing, but it was nt quite the same as his interest in physics. “It was smething like a wish that was never fulfilled, that always stuck in the back f my head,” he said. At age 70, he started taking undergraduate classes.
Physics prfessr Brad Marstn was surprised when Steiner entered his quantum mechanics class. But he became Steiner’s adviser fr his dissertatin (学位论文) after realizing hw serius Steiner was abut the subject and hw hard he wrked. “He has written many papers in medical science, mre papers than I’ve written in physics,” Marstn said. “One thing that’s really true abut Manfred is that he perseveres.”
After the university published a stry abut Steiner n its website, peple acrss the US cntacted him t ask fr advice n hw t g after their dreams later in life. His advice is: D what yu lve t d.
24. Why did Steiner value his degree in physics?
A. Because it slved his health prblems.
B. Because it was his lng-pursued dream
C. Because it met his mther’s expectatin.
D. Because it was inspired by Albert Einstein.
25. What is paragraph 4 mainly abut?
A. Steiner’s cntributins t teaching.
B. Steiner’s researches after retirement.
C. Steiner’s achievements in hematlgy.
D. Steiner’s perfrmances at Tufts University
26. What impressed Prfessr Marstn mst abut Steiner?
A. His taking undergraduate classes at 70.
B. His writing mre papers in physics.
C. His sticking t becming a physicist.
D. His being a rle mdel fr Americans.
27. Which f the fllwing can best describe Steiner?
A. Active and pen-minded. B. Enthusiastic and easy-ging.
C. Intelligent and warm-hearted.D. Perseverant and hard-wrking.
C
Yu’ve heard that plastic is plluting the ceans — between 4.8 and 12.7 millin tnnes enter cean ecsystems every year. But des ne plastic straw r cup really make a difference? Artist Benjamin Vn Wng wants yu t knw that it des. He builds massive sculptures ut f plastic garbage, frcing viewers t re-examine their relatinship t single-use plastic prducts.
At the beginning f the year, the artist built a piece called “Strawpcalypse,” a pair f 10-ft-tall plastic waves, frzen mid-crash. Made f 168,000 plastic straws cllected frm several vlunteer beach cleanups, the sculpture made its first appearance at the Estella Place shpping center in H Chi Minh City, Vietnam.
Just 9% f glbal plastic waste is recycled. Plastic straws are by n means the biggest surce (来源) f plastic pllutin, but they’ve recently cme under fire because mst peple dn’t need them t drink with and, because f their small size and weight, they cannt be recycled. Every straw that’s part f Vn Wng’s artwrk likely came frm a drink that smene used fr nly a few minutes. Once the drink is gne, the straw will take centuries t disappear.
In a piece frm 2018, Vn Wng wanted t illustrate (说明) a specific statistic: Every 60 secnds, a trucklad’s wrth f plastic enters the cean. Fr this wrk, titled “Trucklad f Plastic,” Vn Wng and a grup f vlunteers cllected mre than 10,000 pieces f plastic, which were then tied tgether t lk like they’d been dumped (倾倒) frm a truck all at nce.
Vn Wng hpes that his wrk will als help pressure big cmpanies t reduce their plastic ftprint.
28. What are Vn Wng’s artwrks intended fr?
A. Beautifying the city he lives in.
B. Intrducing ec-friendly prducts.
C. Drawing public attentin t plastic waste.
D. Reducing garbage n the beach.
29. Why des the authr discuss plastic straws in paragraph 3?
A. T shw the difficulty f their recycling.
B. T explain why they are useful.
C. T vice his views n mdern art.
D. T find a substitute fr them.
30. What effect wuld “Trucklad f Plastic” have n viewers?
A. Calming.B. Disturbing.C. Refreshing.D. Challenging.
31. Which f the fllwing can be the best title fr the text?
A. Artists’ Opinins n Plastic Safety
B. Media Interest in Cntemprary Art
C. Respnsibility Demanded f Big Cmpanies
D. Ocean Plastics Transfrmed int Sculptures
D
China’s first grup f e-sprt majr graduates emerged in the summer f 2021, with data shwing that even thugh this majr had been underestimated by the public, the future appeared prmising as there were hundreds f thusands f related jbs available.
After the Ministry f Educatin decided that “electrnic sprt and management” shuld be listed in cllege’s majr departments in September 2016, arund 30 Chinese universities kicked ff their e-sprts majr curses in the same year, t meet the needs f the rise f e-sprt related industries in the Chinese market.
“The majr is designed t meet the demand,” said Zheng Du, c-funder f Tianjin Her Sprts Management and a visiting prfessr frm the Cmmunicatin University f China (CUC).
Chinese passin fr e-sprt is nt in dubt, with mre than 18,000 e-sprt cmpanies registered as f 2021, accrding t crprate database Qichacha. The number f e-sprt users in China reached 500 millin in 2021, and the market had a value f mre than 145 billin yuan as f 2020, accrding t Chinese cnsulting grup iResearch. Meanwhile, the industry chain is becming mre cmplete.
Jbs in areas such as supervisin and cntent prductin require talent and training. The number f available jbs is estimated at 500,000, and culd reach 3.5 millin in the next five years, accrding t China’s Ministry f Human Resurces and Scial Security.
Well-knwn universities such-as CUC and the Shanghai Theatre Academy have respnded t the cuntry’s call and are preparing graduates fr the e-prt market. Yet nt every majr graduate is qualified fr the psitins available, as the jbs nrmally require practical experience, which is smething a lt f graduates lack.
Industry insiders have indicated that e-sprt is an industry with rapid iteratin, and sme cmpanies prefer t hire peple with experience instead f spending time training recruits.
Rughly half f the graduates will enter the gaming industry, said Xia Pi, an-sprt majr graduate frm CUC. “Sme f the rest will pursue further studies fr their master’s degree.”
“Even thugh e-sprt majrs have advantages in finding jbs, students need practical experience t better suit the different psitins,” said Gu Liming, president f Perfect Wrld Games.
32. What d the public think f the e-sprt majr accrding t data?
A. It attracts many cmpanies.B. It deserves a prmising future.
C. It desn’t make much difference.D. It can replace many ther majrs.
33. Why did universities start t ffer e-sprt majr curses in 2016?
A. The Chinese had the ptential fr e-sprt.
B. The Chinese had great passin fr e-sprt.
C. They wanted t respnd t the cuntry’s call.
D. Industries f e-sprt were develping quickly.
34. Why are sme majr graduates disqualified fr the psitins available?
A. They haven’t gt a master’s degree.
B. They are shrt f practical experience.
C. They are unfamiliar with the e-sprt market.
D. They have lst ut in the fierce cmpetitin.
35. What is the passage mainly abut?
A. E-sprt appears t be mre f a blessing.
B. E-sprt presents a new lifestyle fr teenagers.
C. The training fr E-sprt can’t be verestimated.
D. Changes in sprts bring abut jb pprtunities.
第二节(共5小题;每小题2.5分,满分12.5分)
根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项,选项中有两项为多余选项。
Career caches prvide a series f services, frm helping yu figure ut what yu want t d t explring chances fr career grwth. 36 T make it all wrthwhile, sme helpful tips are ffered here t help yu chse a right cach.
Knw what type f prfessinal yu need t hire. 37 In ther wrds, they help yu explre yur future career pssibilities and figure ut what is stpping yu frm advancing in yur develpment.
38 G int yur caching relatinship with an idea f what yu think yu need frm them, but be willing t think abut their guidance n what ther measures may make yu mre successful — fr example, Business Value training t make sure yu’ll be satisfied in a new jb.
Try sample lessns t find the right ne. Mst caches ffer free sample lessns, which help yu get t knw their styles clearly. Yu may need a cach with career experiences, r yu may need ne wh ffers life advice. If yu aren’t sure what yu want, ask questins. 39
Cnsider cst, and make cntact. Caching fees are nt the same. Sme caches charge mre fr plishing resumes (简历), while thers include that in the verall price. 40 Once yu’re clear abut it, yu can make yur decisin and cmmunicate with the chsen cach.
A. Make sure yu have a well-designed resume.
B. Yu need t understand what yu’re receiving fr the expense.
C. Career caches als prvide services fr yur persnal training.
D. Thus, yu can assess whether the cach understands yur needs.
E. Engaging with a career cach requires an investment f time and mney.
F. Knw which services yu need and be pen t services yu dn’t knw yu need.
G. Career caches can help yu decide hw t make full use f yur prfessinal ptential.
第三部分 语言运用(共两节,满分30分)
第一节(共15小题;每小题1分,满分15分)
I was waiting in a checkut line. A wman and tw bys were ahead f me. At the cash desk, a white-haired man had begun t 41 his gds. Then came the 42 . Smetimes it’s a custmer with multiple cupns (优惠券), r smene wh frgt t 43 a piece f fruit. Fair enugh. One waited.
But tday, it was smething else. The man didn’t have 44 mney. S he began the prcess f chsing which 45 t keep and which t hand back. He 46 ver each ne befre keeping r abandning it. We waited. The line became lnger.
Eventually, his 47 came t an end. The man turned back t us as he left, 48 and aplgetic. We
49 ff his chagrin (懊恼). It culd happen t anyne.
But I had n idea just hw 50 the family f three ahead f me were until their turn came. The wman asked the cashier t add all the 51 gds t her bill as quickly as pssible. Then the tw bys 52 thrugh the exit with the small bag f grceries. When they returned, it was clear that their missin had been 53 .
Then I realized all it tk t witness this flash f 54 was waiting a little lnger in a checkut line. I culd have caught the bus. But I felt s 55 n my feet that I walked hme instead.
41. A. bagB. listC. checkD. receive
42. A. attemptB. barrierC. intentinD. missin
43. A. fetchB. sliceC. weighD. taste
44. A. enughB. pcketC. extraD. bnus
45. A. tlsB. itemsC. drinksD. snacks
46. A. dubtedB. glancedC. shiftedD. paused
47. A. delayB. evaluatinC. checkupD. selectin
48. A. thrilledB. anxiusC. embarrassedD. satisfied
49. A. blewB. wavedC. cutD. kicked
50. A. helplessB. sympatheticC. patientD. annyed
51. A. expensiveB. thrwn-awayC. left-behindD. majr
52. A. rushedB. slippedC. walkedD. mved
53. A. AccmplishedB. failedC. pstpnedD. started
54. A. tendernessB. curageC. kindnessD. tlerance
55. A. carefulB. heavyC. clumsyD. light
第三部分 语言运用(共两节,满分30分)
第一节(共15小题;每小题1分,满分15分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
A new study has shwn that cnsuming artificial sweetener (甜味剂) may lead t an increased risk f cancer. The study, 56 appeared in the jurnal PLOS Medicine, indicates that individuals wh take in higher-than-average amunts f artificial sweetener are 13% mre likely 57 (suffer) frm cancer.
The authrs f the study cllected daily dietary 58 (diary) frm 102,865 French adults ver eight years. ‘After 59 (take) int accunt ther risk factrs fr cancer such as age, weight, physical activity, and fat intake, the authrs fund thse cnsuming high amunts f artificial sweetener had a higher cancer ccurrence rate 60 nn-cnsumers. Meanwhile, they fund that cancer rates were just as high in excessive cnsumers f artificial sweetener and excessive sugar intake may be 61 (equal) assciated with cancer risk, accrding t the authrs.
While artificial sweetener 62 (add) t many fd prducts rutinely, ther kinds f natural sweetener such as stevia (甜菊糖) are als highly ppular with health-cnscius eaters. The study desn’t nte 63 these plant-based alternatives carry similar health risks r nt. Hwever, frm the study the authrs draw the 64 (cnclude) that artificial sweetener shuldn’t be used as 65 safe alternative t sugar.
第四部分 写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
国际青少年互动友谊营(The Yuth Camp fr Internatinal Exchange and Friendship)正在招募志愿者,要求能安排并接待一位与你年龄相仿的外国青少年在上海游玩一天。你对此很感兴趣,请写一封E-mail,申请担任志愿者,告诉主办方你一天的安排,并简述这样安排的理由。
注意:1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Shveling (铲) snw had always been the best part abut winter. Nw that I thught it was fun, but my dad’s reactin t a clean driveway kept me ging. He hated shveling snw mre than anything. S, I tk it upn myself at eight years ld t d it fr him. Every time I saw snw fall frm the sky, I knew the universe was ready t put me t wrk.
I wuld run and put n my jacket, snw bts t prepare myself fr the wrk ahead. But every single time, befre I went utside, I wuld stp by my lder sister’s rm t see if she wanted t help me. I knew she wuld say n, but I always asked anyway.
One day there was a lt f snw, and there was n way I wuld be able t clean it all by myself. It was getting dark, and I hated the thught f my dad having t shvel the snw after a lng day’s wrk. S I did the rutine and kncked n my sister’s dr. As I expected, she gave me the same ld “n”. Annyed, I asked again. Withut saying anything further, she gt up, pushed me ut f the rm and slammed (砰地关上) the dr in my face.
I std there silently fr a secnd. Then, I turned arund, went ut f the huse, and set ut in the cld t tackle the enemy that lay in my driveway. But I culdn’t calm dwn. I was really angry that she wuld leave me t battle this alne. All I wanted was sme help. The mre I remembered every “n” she had ever said t me, the angrier I became.
I fught tirelessly, my shrt arms swinging frm side t side while the wind cut against my cheeks. After ne lng hur, I was nt even halfway dne. Lking at the victrius snw, I thught f Dad’s disappintment.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1: Feeling bitter and desperate, I culdn’t stp my tears. _____________________________________
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Paragraph 2: My sister and I went utside. ________________________________________________________
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2023-2024学年仙游县华侨中学高三(上)期中考试英语试卷
听力(30分)1—5 CBCBA 6—10 BACBC 11—15 CABAC 16—20 ACBAC
阅读:21-23 BBA 24-27 BCCD 28-31CABD 32-35CDBA 36-40 EGFDB
完形填空
41. A 42. B 43. C 44. A 45. B 46. D 47. D 48. C 49. B 50. B 51. C 52. A 53. A 54. C 55. D
语法填空56. which 57. t suffer 58. diaries 59. taking 60. than
61. equally 62. is added 63. whether 64. cnclusin 65. a
书面表达
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senir high. I’m writing t apply fr the psitin f The Yuth Camp fr Internatinal Exchange and Friendship vlunteer. I heard yu need smene t receive a freign teenager and arrange a ne-day trip fr him/her in Shanghai. I think I’m the very persn yu are lking fr, because I’m lcal and knw this city a lt.
Abut the trip, here are my suggestins. First, we will visit the Disneyland. It is a fairy wrld with many famus characters, with whm I bet he/she will fall in lve immediately nce setting ft in it. After that, we may visit the Oriental Pearl Twer t enjy an impressive view f Shanghai’s mdern skyline. That’s my arrangements fr the ne-day trip and I’m sure ur guest will like them.
I hpe yu take my applicatin int cnsideratin and give me an early rely.
Yurs,
Li Hua
大作文
Feeling bitter and desperate, I culdn’t stp my tears. My inner anger drve me t the edge f madness. I rushed t my sister’s rm, expressing my lng-buried dissatisfactin twards her absence frm my snw shveling experiences (非谓语动词短语作状语). Then, I stpped my accusatin, still weeping. “Please dn’t cry. Every teardrp f yurs is a reminder f hw selfish I was. I’m srry. Wuld yu give me anther chance t g shveling with yu?” said my sister with gentleness and sincerity in her vice.
My sister and I went utside. I wasn’t alne in this battle any mre. By the time we finished (时间状语从句), my back was aching, muscles sre and bdy exhausted (独立主格结构). Hwever, I was extremely happy. That was the beauty f cmpaninship. And frm the bright smile blming n my sister’s face (非谓语动词短语作定语), I culd tell that she felt the same way (宾语从句). Arm in arm, we walked inside as darkness fell, waiting fr ur father t cme hme (非谓语动词短语作状语).
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M: I’d like a table by the windw fr Tuesday evening smetime after 6:00. What times d yu have available?
W: We nly have tw times available every day, sir. The early seating is at 5:30, and the later seating is at 7:30.
Text 2
M: I’m taking deep breaths, but I’m still s nervus abut this speech. What will I d if I frget smething?
W: I wuld recmmend having wrds n small cards t keep with yu. That way yu dn’t need t remember everything in yur head during the speech.
Text 3
M: Jane, wuld yu like t g t the cncert with me?
W: I’d lve t, but my parents are nt at hme right nw, and I have t wait fr smene t repair the washing machine.
Text 4
M: The carpet in my living rm is wrn ut. I want t get it changed. Can yu recmmend anyne?
W: Yes, we have a friend wh is a decratin wrker. He put dwn the bkshelf in ur study perfectly. He als helped us repair the chairs in ur kitchen.
Text 5
W: Isn’t that the guy my sn is crazy abut? I can never remember his name.
M: Yu mean Larry King, the famus talk shw hst? He’s well-knwn fr always presenting many different pints f view n his shw.
Text 6
M: Yur handwriting is a bit f a mess.
W: I knw. I’m used t typing. I haven’t really written anything since high schl.
M: We used t have t practice handwriting in schl every day. The teacher said mine was elegant.
W: That’s quite impressive. I was happy just t get a standard grade in writing, but thankfully the handwriting isn’t being marked.
M: Er, what are yu writing anyway?
W: It’s a scientific study n the advantages and disadvantages f electric cars. I’ll get my cmputer back frm the repair shp tmrrw. S I’ll type them up then.
Text 7
M: Hi, I’m here t lk at the ne-bedrm apartment yu have fr rent.
W: Okay, cme right this way. As yu can see, it’s large and the furniture is basically cmplete, such as a sfa, a TV, a fridge and an air cnditiner.
M: Yes, but I dn’t see a washing machine.
W: The apartments here aren’t equipped with washing machines. There is a laundry rm with cin-perated washers and dryers arund the crner.
M: Culd I buy a washing machine myself?
W: Of curse.
M: That’s gd. S hw much is the mnthly rent?
W: 600 dllars including water and gas bills. Yu have t pay the electricity bill yurself.
M: I see. It’s pretty cheap fr an apartment in a tp neighbrhd. I think I’ll have t discuss it with my wife.
W: I can give yu a 10% discunt if yu pay tday.
M: Really? Just a mment. I will call my wife nw.
Text 8
M: Hell. My name is Evan, and I’m ging dr-t-dr t raise mney fr ur lcal cmmunity center.
W: What is the mney fr exactly?
M: I dn’t knw if yu saw the news. During the recent strm, ne f the trees nearby was blwn ver.
W: I did see that. Thankfully nbdy was injured.
M: Indeed, but the tree hit the rf f the cmmunity center, s we are lking fr dnatins t fix it.
W: That’s awful. Hw much are yu trying t raise?
M: Well, the repairs will be $100,000, but we nly need $50,000. Because the head f the city gvernment said he wuld match the dnatins received.
W: That’s gd f him. He’s always been kind t this city.
M: Indeed. S wuld yu be able t make a dnatin?
W: Of curse, here is $80. Yu can cunt that frm me and my neighbr. She’s away n hliday s yu dn’t need t knck n her dr.
M: Thank yu very much. That’s very generus f yu!
Text 9
W: I’ve checked the patient and he seems t be ding fine. I believe he will wake up sn.
M: That’s gd. He’s lucky.
W: When he was admitted last week, I thught he wuld nt pull thrugh. I’m s glad that he has made it.
M: Right. Fat peple like him can be badly affected.
W: I suppse being heavy puts extra pressure n the bdy.
M: Yes, it des. A fit persn can fight this disease better — mst diseases, in fact. What abut the ther COVID-19 patients?
W: Apart frm him, we have fur ther patients here. They are all ding well nw.
M: Ah, the result is better than what we’ve expected.
W: It is. Nw, three f them are asking if they can have visitrs.
M: It’s far t early fr that. I knw it seems cruel nt t allw them t see families and relatives, but safety cmes first.
W: Will there be anything else, Dctr?
M: N, that’s it. And yu can tell the ther nursing staff that they are ding a fine jb.
Text 10
W: I’ll start with ur six-day Isle f Man hliday. This is a fascinating island in the Irish Sea. Our hliday starts in Heysham, where yur tur manager will meet yu, then yu’ll travel by ferry t the Isle f Man. Sme peple prefer t fly frm Lutn instead, and anther ppular ptin is t g by train t Liverpl and take a ferry frm there.
On day 1 yu’ll arrive in time fr a shrt intrductin by yur tur manager, fllwed by dinner in the htel. On day 2 yu’ll take the cach t the small twn f Peel, n the way calling in at the Tynwald Exhibitin. On day 3 we have a trip t the muntain Snaefell. Yu will bard an electric train which takes yu t the fishing village f Laxey. Lunch will be in the cafe, giving yu fantastic views f the island.
Day 4 is free fr yu t explre, using the pass which we’ll give yu. S, yu wn’t have t pay fr travel n lcal transprt. Or yu might just want t take it easy in Duglas and perhaps d a little light shpping.
The last full day, day 5 will begin with a ride n the steam railway. After sme time t explre, a cach will take yu t a small island just ff the cast. And n day 6 it’s back t the ferry — r the airprt, if yu flew t the island — and time t g hme.
第二部分 阅读(共两节,满分50分)
A
这是一篇应用文。文章主要介绍了三本书及其内容概要。
21. 细节理解题。根据A Warbler’s Jurney部分中“A new bk with brilliant illustratins by Nancy Lane, is an epic stry f tugh migratin f a warbler (莺) tld thrugh the eyes f tw little girls.(南希·莱恩的新书配有精彩的插图,通过两个小女孩的视角讲述了一只莺艰难迁徙的史诗般的故事)”可知,A Warbler’s Jurney有漂亮的图画。故选B。
22. 细节理解题。根据A Lady fr a Duke部分中“Alexis Hall delivered the rmantic cmedy f this summer.(亚历克西斯·霍尔演绎了今年夏天的浪漫喜剧)”可知,A Lady fr a Duke是一个喜剧故事。故选B。
23. 推理判断题。根据最后一段中“While wrking her day jb as a pp star, Janelle Mnáe has written plenty f music with science-fictin tpics—mst recently n her 2018 album Dirty Cmputer. But seeing as hw Mnáe tells tales in just abut every medium she can get her hands n, including film, it was inescapable that she’d turn t the literary frm ne day as well.(作为一名流行歌手,Janelle Mnáe在她的日常工作中写了很多科幻题材的音乐,最近的一次是在她2018年的专辑《Dirty Cmputer》中。看看Mnáe是如何用她能接触到的几乎每一种媒介(包括电影)讲述故事的,不可避免的是,有一天她也会转向文学形式)”可推知,Janelle Mnáe很有才华。故选A。
B
【分析】这是一篇记叙文,讲述了一位坚持实现自己梦想的老人的故事。
24. 细节理解题。根据第二段“Steiner values this degree because it is what he always wanted and because he vercame health prblems that culd have affected his studies.(Steiner重视这个学位是因为那是他梦寐以求的,而且克服了本可能影响他学习的健康问题)”可知,他重视物理上的这个学位是因为那时他长期追求的梦想。故选B。
25. 主旨大意题。根据第四段“He became a full prfessr and led the hematlgy department at Brwns’ medical schl frm 1985 t 1994. Steiner helped establish a research prgram in hematlgy at the University f Nrth Carlina. (他成为一名全职教授,从1985年到1994年在布朗医学院带领血液学部门。在北卡罗莱纳州大学,他帮助建立了一个血液学方面的研究项目)”可知,第四段主要讲Steiner在血液学上的成就。故选C。
26. 细节理解题。 根据倒数第二段“But he became Steiner’s adviser fr his dissertatin(学位论文)after realizing hw serius Steiner was abut the subject and hw hard he wrked. (但是,当他意识到斯坦纳对这个问题是多么认真、多么努力地工作之后,他就成为了斯坦纳的论文导师)”可知,Steiner给教授Marstn留下深刻印象的是他坚持成为物理学家的努力。故选C。
27. 推理判断题。根据第一段“An 89-year-ld man, Manfred Steiner, has reached a gal he spent 20 years wrking tward and nearly a lifetime thinking abut: earning his Ph. D. And nw he is a physicist(89岁的老人Manfred Steiner在用了20年的时间获得了博士学位,现在是一名物理学家) 根据倒数第二段“But he became Steiner’s adviser fr his dissertatin(学位论文)after realizing hw serius Steiner was abut the subject and hw hard he wrked. One thing that’s really true abut Manfred is that he perseveres.(但是,当他意识到斯坦纳对这个问题是多么认真、多么努力地工作之后,他就成为了斯坦纳的论文导师。曼弗雷德真正的特点是坚持不懈。)”可知他是一位有毅力,勤奋的人。故选D。
C
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了艺术家Benjamin Vn Wng使用海洋中的塑料垃圾制作了一个巨型雕塑,极其震撼,引发人们对塑料污染的反思。
28. 推理判断题。根据第一段“He builds massive sculptures ut f plastic garbage, frcing viewers t re-examine their relatinship t single-use plastic prducts.(他用塑料垃圾建造巨大的雕塑,迫使观众重新审视他们与一次性塑料产品的关系)”可知,Vn Wng用塑料垃圾制作雕塑,是想让人们重新审视与一次性塑料制品的关系,引起公众对塑料垃圾的关注。故选C项。
29. 推理判断题。根据第三段“Just 9% f glbal plastic waste is recycled. Plastic straws are by n means the biggest surce (来源) f plastic pllutin, but they’ve recently cme under fire because mst peple dn’t need them t drink with and, because f their small size and weight, they cannt be recycled. (全球只有9%的塑料垃圾被回收。塑料吸管绝不是最大的塑料污染源,但它们最近却受到了抨击,因为大多数人不需要吸管喝饮料,而且由于它们体积小、重量轻,无法回收利用)”可知,塑料吸管体积小、重量轻,无法回收利用。由此推知,作者在第三段讨论塑料吸管是为了展示它们回收的难度。故选A项。
30. 推理判断题。根据倒数第二段“In a piece frm 2018, Vn Wng wanted t illustrate (说明) a specific statistic: Every 60 secnds, a trucklad’s wrth f plastic enters the cean. Fr this wrk, titled “Trucklad f Plastic,” Vn Wng and a grup f vlunteers cllected mre than 10,000 pieces f plastic, which were then tied tgether t lk like they’d been dumped (倾倒) frm a truck all at nce.(在2018年的一个作品中,Vn Wng想要说明一个具体的统计数字:每60秒,就有一卡车塑料进入海洋。这项名为“一卡车塑料”的作品,Vn Wng和一群志愿者收集了一万多块塑料,然后把它们绑在一起,让它们看起来像是同时从卡车上倾倒下来的)”可知,这个作品以创新的方式让人们了解到塑料垃圾以很快的速度和很大的量倾入海洋,刷新了观众对海洋塑料污染的认知。由此推知,这个作品会让观众对塑料垃圾进入海洋造成污染这件事感到不安。故选B项。
31. 主旨大意题。根据第一段“But des ne plastic straw r cup really make a difference? Artist Benjamin Vn Wng wants yu t knw that it des. He builds massive sculptures ut f plastic garbage, frcing viewers t re-examine their relatinship t single-use plastic prducts.(但一根塑料吸管或一个塑料杯真的有什么区别吗?艺术家Benjamin Vn Wng想让你知道,它确实如此。他用塑料垃圾建造巨大的雕塑,迫使观众重新审视他们与一次性塑料产品的关系)”及下文陈述可知,艺术家Benjamin Vn Wng通过使用海洋塑料垃圾制作巨型雕塑的方法,引发人们对塑料污染的反思。由此可知,“海洋塑料变成雕塑”可以作文章标题。故选D项。
D
【导语】这是一篇说明文。主要介绍了电子竞技专业的现状和前景,以及对该专业的应届毕业生的要求。
32. 推理判断题。根据第一段“China’s first grup f e-sprt majr graduates emerged in the summer f 2021, with data shwing that even thugh this majr had been underestimated by the public, the future appeared prmising as there were hundreds f thusands f related jbs available. (2021年夏天,中国出现了第一批电子竞技专业的毕业生,数据显示,尽管该专业一直被公众低估,但未来似乎充满希望,因为有数十万个相关工作岗位可供选择)”可知,公众低估电子竞技专业,认为该专业没有什么发展,所以C选项“It desn’t make much difference. (它不会产生太大影响)”符合题意。故选C。
33. 细节理解题。根据第二段“After the Ministry f Educatin decided that “electrnic sprt and management” shuld be listed in clleges’ majr departments in September 2016, arund 30 Chinese universities kicked ff their e-sprts majr curses in the same year, t meet the needs f the rise f e-sprt related industries in the Chinese market. (2016年9月,教育部决定将“电子竞技与管理”列入高校专业后,同年,约有30所中国高校开设了电子竞技专业课程,以满足电子竞技相关产业在中国市场崛起的需求)”可知一些高校开始电子竞技专业课程目的是为了满足市场需求,所以D选项“Industries f e-sprt were develping quickly. (电子竞技产业发展迅速)”符合题意。故选D。
34. 细节理解题。根据第五段“Yet nt every majr graduate is qualified fr the psitins available, as the jbs nrmally require practical experience, which is smething a lt f graduates lack. (然而,并不是每个专业毕业生都有资格胜任现有的职位,因为这些工作通常需要实践经验,而这正是许多毕业生所缺乏的)”可知,一些毕业生无法胜任现有职位的原因是缺乏实践经验。故选B。
35. 主旨大意题。根据第一段“China’s first grup f e-sprt majr graduates emerged in the summer f 2021, with data shwing that even thugh this majr had been underestimated by the public, the future appeared prmising as there were hundreds f thusands f related jbs available. (2021年夏天,中国出现了第一批电子竞技专业的毕业生,数据显示,尽管该专业一直被公众低估,但未来似乎充满希望,因为有数十万个相关工作岗位可供选择)”和后文介绍学生在寻找相关工作时,缺乏实践经验可知,电子竞技专业的未来是有前途的,但建议毕业生多去实践,积累经验,所以A选项“E-sprt appears t be mre f a blessing.(电子竞技似乎更像是一种祝福)”符合题意。故选A。
七选五36-40 EGFDB
【文章大意】本篇描述了职业教练提供的服务,以及对职业选择的正面影响,介绍了教练选择中的注意事项和培训事项。文章选项迷惑性不强,难度不大。
详细解析:
第36题 E 从后文“T make it all wrthwhile/为了让这一切都值得”可知,这句话中的it应该代指的就是我们需要选择的选项,暗示了此处应该选择我们要付出的代价,也就是E选项中提出的“需要投入的金钱和时间”。
第37题 G 前文“Knw what type f prfessinal yu need t hire.”提示了我们应该要知道自己需要什么样的专业人士,而后一句“In ther wrds……advancing in yur develpment.”又讲述了职业教练给我们带来的好处,所以应该选择一个承上启下的句子,来连接上下的内容。
第38题 F 从选项后一整段描述的“我们需要想一想从他们那里得到什么”可知,这一整段都讲述的是我们应该确定自己需要的服务,以此应该选择一个可以引出后文解释的选项,也就是F选项中所说的“了解你需要哪些服务,并对你不知道自己需要的服务持开放态度”。
第39题 D 此段第一句说了“尝试示例课程以找到正确的课程”,选项前一句也在说“不知道自己要什么应该提问”,这些都暗示了个人需求和课程选择的关系,所以这里应该选择D,表示在自己不确定时应该提问尝试,以完成个人需求的评估。
第40题 B 这个选项比较简单,通读全段可知,这一整段表达的都是关于职业教练收费的问题,因此应该选择一个和价格有关的选项,也就是B选项所说的“了解收费”。
完形填空
41. A 42. B 43. C 44. A 45. B 46. D 47. D 48. C 49. B 50. B 51. C 52. A 53. A 54. C 55. D
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在商店结账时,遇到了一位钱不够的老人,排在作者前面的女士和两个男孩为老人留下的物品付了钱,展现了人与人之间相互关爱的美好品质。
41. 考查动词词义辨析。句意:在收银台,一位白发老人已经开始打包他的货物。A. bag装进袋子;B. list列清单;C. check检查;D. receive收到。根据上文“At the cash desk, a white-haired man had begun t”并结合常识可知,顾客在收银台打包自己要买的物品。故选A项。
42. 考查名词词义辨析。句意:接着就会遇到障碍。A. attempt努力;B. barrier障碍;C. intentin意图;D. missin使命。根据下文“Smetimes it’s a custmer with multiple cupns (优惠券), r smene wh frgt t 3 a piece f fruit.”可知,顾客在柜台结账时候会遇到各种问题,即障碍。故选B项。
43. 考查动词词义辨析。句意:有时是有很多优惠券的顾客,或者是忘记称水果重量的人。A. fetch取来;B. slice切成薄片;C. weigh称重;D. taste品尝。根据上文“Smetimes it’s a custmer with multiple cupns, r smene wh frgt t”可知,本句主要描述了收银台存在的问题,即有时是有很多优惠券的顾客,或者是忘记称水果重量的人。故选C项。
44. 考查形容词词义辨析。句意:这位老人没有足够的钱。 A. enugh足够的;B. pcket袋装的;C. extra额外的;D. bnus奖励的。根据下文“S he began the prcess f chsing which 5 t keep and which t hand back.”可知,老人挑选物品,有些装袋有些放弃还回柜台,说明没有足够的钱购买。故选A项。
45. 考查名词词义辨析。句意:于是,他开始选择哪些物品要保留,哪些要归还。A. tls工具;B. items物品;C. drinks饮料;D. smacks小吃。根据上文第一段中“his gds”提到的物品,这位老人开始选择哪些要保留,哪些要归还。故选B项。
46. 考查动词词义辨析。句意:他在每一个东西上都停下,然后(考虑)保留或放弃。A. dubted怀疑;B. glanced扫视;C. shifted转移;D. paused暂停。根据后文“We waited. The line became lnger.”可知,其他排队顾客们都等待着。排的队伍越来越长,由此可知这位老人在每一个东西上都停下,然后思考是否保留或放弃。故选D项。
47. 查名词词义辨析。句意:最终,他选完了。A.delay推迟;B. evaluatin评估;C. checkup检查;D. selectin选择。根据上文“He 6 ver each ne befre keeping r abandning it.”以及后文“The man turned back t us as he left”可知,老人终于选完了东西,准备离去。故选D项。
48. 考查形容词词义辨析。句意:那人离开时转身对着我们,尴尬而又抱歉的样子。A. thrilled激动的;B. anxius焦虑的;C. embarrassed尴尬的;D. satisfied满意的。根据后文“aplgetic”可知,这位老人因为耽误了别人的时间感到尴尬而抱歉。故选C项。
49. 考查动词词义辨析。句意:我们挥手示意他不要懊恼。A. blew吹;B. waved挥舞;C. cut切割;D. kicked踢。根据后文“……ff his charin. It ld happen t anyne”可知,队伍后面的人都能理解老人行为,这种情况是每个人都有可能遇见的,所以大家挥手示意他不要懊恼,故选B项。
50. 考查形容词词义辨析。句意:但我不知道前面那一家三口是多么富有同情心,直到轮到他们在柜台结账。A. helpless无助的;B. sympathetic同情的;C. patient耐心的;D. annyed生气的。根据后文“The wman asked the cashier t add all the 11 gds t her bill as quickly as pssible. Then the tw bys 12 thrugh the exit with the small bag f grceries. When they returned, it was clear that their missin had been 13 . ”可知,本段描述了作者前面那一家三口,母亲帮助老人结账,她的孩子把物品送给老人,他们很有同情心。故选B项.
51. 考查形容词词义辨析。句意:这名女士要求收银员尽快把所有剩下的货物加到她的账单上。A. expensive昂贵的;B. thrwn-away丢弃的;C. let-behind遗留的;D. majr主要的。根据上文“befre keeping r abandning it”可知,这位母亲把老人留下的东西归入自己账下,帮他付账。故选C项。
52. 考查动词词义辨析。句意:然后,这两个男孩拿者那小包食品从出口冲了出去。A. rushed冲出;B. slipped滑动;C. walked散步;D. mved移动。根据上文“asked the cashier t add all the 11 gds t her bill as quickly as pssible”可知,老人已经离开,时间紧张,这两个男孩拿着那小包食品从出口冲了出去。故选A项。
53. 考查动词词义辨析。句意:当他们回来时,很明显他们的任务已经完成。A. accmplished完成;B. failed失败;C. pstpned延期;D. started开始。根据上文“When they returned, it was clear that their missin had been”可知,男孩们回来,说明他们已经把东西已经送到了,即任务已经完成了。故选A项。
54. 考查名词词义辨析。句意:然后我意识到,为了见证这一人性善良的闪光时刻,我只需要在收银台排队等得更久一点。A. tenderness柔软,温柔;B. curage勇气;C. kindness善良;D. tlerance忍受。根据上一段,这一家人帮助了老人可知,这件事情表现了人与人之间的善意。故选C项。
55. 考查形容词词义辨析。句意:但我觉得我的脚轻松,我走回家了。A. careful仔细的;B. heavy沉重的;C. clumsy笨拙的;D. light轻的。根据上文“hw ___10sympathetic___ the family f three ahead f me were until their turn came”以及“I realized all it tk t witness this flash f ___14kindness___ was waiting a little lnger in a checkut line”可知,作者因为见证了美好的事情心情愉快,所以即使没有赶上公交车,步行回家也是步履轻快。故选D项。
语法填空:
56. which 57. t suffer 58. diaries 59. taking 60. than
61. equally 62. is added 63. whether 64. cnclusin 65. a
56. 考察定语从句。句意:这项发明表现在《公科学图书馆.医学》杂志上的研究表明,摄入高于平均水平的人工甜味剂的人患癌症的可能性要高13%。分析句子结构可知,空出引导非限制性定语从句,先行词为the study,指物,关系词在从句中作主语,故应用关系代词which引导该从句。
57. 考察动词不定式。句意:这项发表在《公科学图书馆.医学》杂志上的研究表明,摄入高于平均水平的人工甜味剂的人患癌症的可能性要高13%。Be likely t d sth“有可能做某事”。
58. 考察可数名词复数。句意:这项研究的作者收集了102865名法国成年人八年后的日常饮食日记。diary是可数名词,由空后的frm 102865French adults可知,此处不止一个日记,故应用气复数形似diaries表示泛指。
59. 考查名词。在考虑的年龄、体重、体育活动和肪摄入等其他致癌风险后,作者发现,摄入大量的人工甜味剂的人比不摄入人工甜味剂的人患癌症的几率更高。可知,句中的after为介词,其后应用动名词作宾语。
60. 考查介词。句意:在考虑了年龄、体重、体育活动和脂肪摄入等其他致癌风险后,作者发现,摄入大量的人工甜味剂的人比不摄入人工甜味剂的人患癌症的几率更高。很具句意可见,此处应用介词than 表示“比”
61. 考察副词。句意:同时,他们发现,过量食用人工甜味剂的人癌症发病率同样高,根据作者的说法,过量食用糖可能与癌症风险同样相关。分析可知,此处应填副词形式equally“同样地”作状语,修饰形容词assciated。
62. 考察时态、语态及主谓一致。句意:虽然人造甜味剂经常被添加到许多食品中,但其他种类的天然甜味剂,如甜菊糖,也深受注重健康的食客的欢迎。分析可知,所填词为从句谓语动词,根据句意及主句时态可知,句子是陈述事实,应使用一般现在时,动词add与主语artificial sweetener之间是被动关系,应用一般现在时的被动语态,主语为artificial sweetener,be动词应用is.故填is added.
63. 考察连词。句意:这项研究没有指出这些植物性替代品是否会带来类似的健康风险,结合语意以及句末的r nt可知,空出应填whether表示“是否”。
64. 考察可数名词。句意:然而,从这项研究中,作者得出结论,人工甜味剂不应该被用作糖的安全替代品。分析可知,定冠词the 后应用名词cnclusin“结论”作为draw的宾语,结合语境可知,此处作为特指,应为其单数形式,draw the cnclusin“得出结论”。
65. 考查冠词。句意:然而,从这项研究中,作者得出结论,人工甜味剂不应该被用作糖的安全替代品。结合句意可知,此处表示“一个安全的替代品”,应用不定冠词表示泛指,且safe是发音以辅音音素开头的单词,应用不定冠词a.
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senir high. I’m writing t apply fr the psitin f The Yuth Camp fr Internatinal Exchange and Friendship vlunteer. I heard yu need smene t receive a freign teenager and arrange a ne-day trip fr him/her in Shanghai. I think I’m the very persn yu are lking fr, because I’m lcal and knw this city a lt.
Abut the trip, here are my suggestins. First, we will visit the Disneyland. It is a fairy wrld with many famus characters, with whm I bet he/she will fall in lve immediately nce setting ft in it. After that, we may visit the Oriental Pearl Twer t enjy an impressive view f Shanghai’s mdern skyline. That’s my arrangements fr the ne-day trip and I’m sure ur guest will like them.
I hpe yu take my applicatin int cnsideratin and give me an early rely.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于申请信。要求考生向国际青少年互动友谊营提出成为志愿者的申请,并简述带外国青少年游客上海一日游的计划安排。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
职位:psitin → pst
接待,迎接:receive → welcme
寻找:lk fr→seek
建议:suggestin → advice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:That’s my arrangements fr the ne-day trip and I’m sure ur guest will like them.
拓展句:That’s my arrangements fr the ne-day trip which I’m sure ur guest will like.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I heard yu need smene t receive a freign teenager and arrange a ne-day trip fr him/her in Shanghai. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is a fairy wrld with many famus characters, with whm I bet he/she will fall in lve immediately nce setting ft in it. (运用了whm引导的定语从句和状语从句的省略)
【语篇分析】
1. what (前文主旨)
父亲常把铲雪的任务交给“我”,而“我”通常会找姐姐帮忙,但姐姐每次都拒绝帮“我”。有一次,路上的雪太多了,而天也在慢慢变黑,“我”再一次向姐姐求助,但姐姐还是拒绝帮“我”一起铲雪。寒风中,“我”独自一人铲雪,越想越生气。
2. why (故事主题)
互相帮助,亲情温暖
3. hw (写作技巧)
第一人称、记叙、情感变化
4. 语言
(1)人物
角色 1:“我”
性格:热于助人、关心家人、勤劳肯干
行为:向姐姐求助,希望一起合作扫雪,但遭到姐姐粗暴拒绝,十分生气,表达不满后姐姐与“我” 一起完成了扫雪任务
心理:passinate, industrius -- angry -- angrier -- calm -- bitter, desperate – happy
角色 2:姐姐
性格:自私、懒惰、知错能改
行为:妹妹求助时自私地拒绝帮忙,但在妹妹的感化下帮助妹妹共同扫雪
心理:selfish – regretful – happy
(2)场景:雪地
(3)语言风格:形容词较多、心理描述较多、重情节变化
5. 具体内容 (利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析)
点题:文章没有标题,但是在前三个自然段已经基本将故事的起因描述清楚了。
指向:故事发生的背景为冬日,因为主人公希望姐姐能够帮助他共同完成铲雪任务而引发了冲突,续写内容为主要人物如何解决矛盾的。
进展:主人公“我”与姐姐首次沟通无果后,出现了较大的情绪波动,人物的心理变化推动了矛盾爆发。
结果:“我”与姐姐沟通后,最终姐姐认识到了自己的错误,两人共同完成了扫雪任务。
评议:本文以第一人称视角进行叙述,所以无评议。
6. 情节
(1)冲突
“我”希望姐姐帮助我铲雪,姐姐不愿意,甚至将“我”锁在房门外
(2)行动
“我”实在生气,与姐姐沟通。
(3)解决
在“我”的沟通下,姐姐认识到自己的错误,并与我一同完成了铲雪的任务。
【素材积累】
keep sb ding sth 使某人坚持做某事
take sth upn neself 某人自己承担某事
prepare neself fr sth ahead 某人为某事自己提前做好准备
【范文赏读】
Feeling bitter and desperate, I culdn’t stp my tears. My inner anger drve me t the edge f madness. I rushed t my sister’s rm, expressing my lng-buried dissatisfactin twards her absence frm my snw shveling experiences (非谓语动词短语作状语). Then, I stpped my accusatin, still weeping. “Please dn’t cry. Every teardrp f yurs is a reminder f hw selfish I was. I’m srry. Wuld yu give me anther chance t g shveling with yu?” said my sister with gentleness and sincerity in her vice.
My sister and I went utside. I wasn’t alne in this battle any mre. By the time we finished (时间状语从句), my back was aching, muscles sre and bdy exhausted (独立主格结构). Hwever, I was extremely happy. That was the beauty f cmpaninship. And frm the bright smile blming n my sister’s face (非谓语动词短语作定语), I culd tell that she felt the same way (宾语从句). Arm in arm, we walked inside as darkness fell, waiting fr ur father t cme hme (非谓语动词短语作状语).
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