人教版 (2019)选择性必修 第二册Unit 1 Science and Scientists背景图ppt课件

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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
The guitar in the crner f the rm is as silent as it has ever been fr years nw.It has been mre than three mnths that n ne has played it,and n ne will ever play it again.A layer f dust has frmed all ver it.I culd dust it ff,but smehw I feel unwrthy f tuching it,let alne picking it up.It had been such a big part f my childhd,hearing its amazing ntes flw withut hesitatin,but nly when held by the right hands did it sund as amazing as it culd.I had always been afraid f it smehw.I am still a bit,since the sund was always strng yet cmfrting.
I can’t stp thinking abut hw I will never hear it again, hw it wuld prbably stay in that crner f my rm fr the rest f eternity.Sitting n the sfa facing the guitar I culd almst see him,my dad,telling me that it was the secnd best thing in his life.I remember that mment s well.I was seven. I asked him,“What’s the first?”and he tld me “Yu”.
It made me feel s special,being picked ver an instrument that culd make such wnderful music with just a bit f help frm the man that was in frnt f me.When he was hme,every waking minute there was music radiating frm it.The music made me feel safe,as if there wasn’t anything else in the wrld but its amazing sunds.I stayed staring at the dust-cvered guitar remembering the last time I saw my dad;he was heading ut nce mre.He was excited and he was always prud f serving his cuntry.
He never cmplained.The nly thing that he wuldn’t like was being away frm Mum and me.
If I had knwn that it was the last time I wuld see him,I wuld have never let him g,and I wuld have begged him nt t leave.I wuld have tld him that I didn’t want the guitar t stay in the crner cllecting dust.
He wuld have left anyway,I thught.He lved prtecting his cuntry,and he used t say that he did it because he wanted me t be safe._____________________________________________________________________________________________It was getting late.I std up frm the cuch and headed t bed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文是一篇记叙文。作者的爸爸曾答应作者教他弹吉他,但是爸爸为了报效祖国而牺牲,爸爸的愿望永远无法实现了。1.作者的父亲是一名军人,为了报效祖国而牺牲。虽然父亲曾经答应作者,回来之后教他弹吉他,但是这一愿望却永远无法实现。
2.结合续写第一段首句可知,作者的父亲无论如何也会去服役的,因为他那样做,是为了家人和国家的安全。3.由续写第二段首句可知,作者回忆完之后,准备回屋睡觉,续写这一部分的时候,应该注意向着积极的方向进行拓展。
He wuld have left anyway,I thught.He lved prtecting his cuntry,and he used t say that he did it because he wanted me t be safe.The last time he played the guitar fr me,he prmised t teach me hw t play it after he came back.Then he left again,the guitar standing there,cllecting dust!And he culdn’t keep his prmise fr every time.Mum went ut, getting everything ready fr the funeral.My dad never came back after serving his cuntry.
It was getting late.I std up frm the cuch and headed t bed.Halfway t my rm,I stared at the guitar again,taking it t my rm.I cleaned it,as if there had never had dust n it.It lked as if Dad had never left.I laid the guitar beside my bed,as if hearing Dad playing again.Thse beautiful ntes were flwing like a flwing river.“I’m prud f yu,Dad.Yu are a her,”I said.“And I will play yur guitar nw.”
名师点评从续写短文的内容和语言来看,续写与所给短文融洽度高,第一段续写围绕着作者对父亲的离开感到遗憾展开;第二段续写围绕父亲已经去世了,但是作者会继续练习弹吉他来纪念父亲,弘扬了亲情这一积极的价值观。语言方面作者大胆发挥想象力,叙述感人至深,体现了父子深情。
1.上次他为我弹吉他时,他答应在他回来后教我怎么弹吉他。(the last time引导状语从句)The last time he played the guitar fr me,he prmised t teach me hw t play it after he came back.2.然后他又离开了,吉他立在那里,满是灰尘。(非谓语动词做状语)Then he left again,the guitar standing there,cllecting dust!
3.我把它擦干净了,好像上面从来没有灰尘似的。(as if引导状语从句)I cleaned it,as if there had never had dust n it.
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
A Lng Walk HmeI grew up in the suth f Spain in a little cmmunity called Estepna.I was 16 when ne mrning,my father tld me I culd drive him int a remte village called Mijas,abut 18 miles away,n cnditin that I tk the car t be serviced t a nearby garage.Having just learnt t drive and hardly ever having the pprtunity t use the car,I readily accepted. I drve Dad int Mijas and prmised t pick him up at 4 p.m. I then drve t a nearby garage and drpped ff the car.
Because I had a few hurs t spare,I decided t catch a cuple f mvies at a theatre near the garage.Hwever,I became s interested in the films that I didn’t pay any attentin t time.When the last mvie had finished,I lked dwn at my watch.It was six ’clck.I was tw hurs late!
I knew Dad wuld be angry if he fund ut I’d been watching mvies.He’d never let me drive again.I decided t tell him that the car needed sme repairs and that they had taken lnger than expected.I drve up t the place where we had planned t meet and saw Dad waiting patiently n the crner.I aplgised fr being late and tld him that I’d cme as quickly as I culd,but the car had needed sme majr repairs.I’ll never frget the lk he gave me.
“I’m disappinted that yu feel yu have t lie t me, Jasn.” “What d yu mean?I’m telling the truth.”
Dad lked at me again.“When yu did nt shw up,I called the garage t ask if there were any prblems,and they tld me that yu had nt yet picked up the car.S yu see,I knw there were n prblems with the car.” A feeling f guilt ran thrugh me as I weakly cnfessed t my trip t the mvie theatre and the real reasn fr my being late.Dad listened attentively as a sadness passed thrugh him.
“I’m angry,nt with yu but with myself.___________________________________________________________________My prtests and aplgies were useless.____________________________________________________________________
参考范文“I’m angry,nt with yu but with myself.Yu see,I realise that I have failed as a father because after all these years yu feel that yu have t lie t me.I have failed because I have brught up a sn wh cannt even tell the truth t his wn father.I am ging t walk hme nw and think seriusly abut where I have gne wrng all these years.” “But Dad, it’s 18 miles.It’s dark.Yu can’t walk hme.”