【同步讲义】人教版英语九年级全一册-Unit 2 课时4 Writing 讲义

Unit 2  I think that mooncakes are delicious！

知识点01  思路点拨

本单元的话题围绕“Festival（节日）”为主题，在写相关的作文时，要叙述清楚节日的时间、起源、相关风俗等，要描写人们的庆祝活动，表达要清楚、简洁。命题者一般是围绕大家熟知的节日、假期或者庆祝活动等来设置试题，要求考生根据已给出的提示或建议进行描写。话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、庆祝方式等。此类题目通常采用要点提示的方式来考查。

体裁：应用文(电子邮件)；电子邮件的主体部分为说明文

时态：介绍节日用一般现在时

人称：第三人称。

知识点02  必背单词组和句型

词组：

中国传统节日    Chinese Traditional Festival

春节      the Spring Festival

除夕      the New Year’s Eve

中秋节    the Mid-Autumn Festival

元宵节    the Lantern Festival

端午节    the Dragon Boat Festival

重阳节    the Double Ninth Festival

元旦      New Year’s Day

新年习俗  New Year Customs

过年     celebrate the Spring Festival

拜年pay a New Year visit; give New Year’s greetings

贴春联   put up/paste Spring Festival couplets

看花灯   watch lanterns

放鞭炮   set off firecrackers; let off firecrackers

放烟花   set off fireworks

春联       the Spring Festival couplets

剪纸       paper-cut

压岁钱   lucky money/gift money: money given

         to children as a lunar new year gift

舞龙       dragon dance(to expect goodweather

         and good harvests) (play dragon dance)

舞狮       lion dance

剪纸       paper cutting

中国结   Chinese knot

句型：

1. …is my favorite festival.

2. get together

3. have fun doing sth.

4. say goodbye/ hello to

5. I’m glad to tell you something about…

6. … is one of the most important traditional festivals to Chinese people.

7. I’d like to introduce you something about…

8. … has a long history of more than…

9. We usually clean and decorate our house carefully before it comes.

10. Every one goes back home to get together with their family.

11. In a word, … is a very important for Chinese people.

知识点03  提纲

知识点04  范文

Dear Eliza,

I was so glad to get your e-mail. My favorite traditional Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It’s a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet.

On this day people usually eat zongzi and hold dragon boat races. They also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the doors and wear a spice bag with them.

What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit — everybody tries their best to win the race.

Yours truly,

WangLi

话题好句积累

【开头句】

1．The Mid－Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month．

2．Every festival has its special meaning and represents our great traditional Chinese culture．

3．Chinese people regard the Spring Festival as the most important one of all．

4．Mid－Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival with a long history．

5．The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China，and it is also my favorite festival．

【中间句】

1．On the eve of the Spring Festival，family members get together and have big meals．

2．We usually visit our relatives and friends during the Spring Festival，and send best wishes to one another．

3．Everyone goes home to get together with their family，though some of them are far away from home．

4．Dragon Boat Festival，also called Duanwu Festival，is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar．

5．Zongzi is the most important food of the Dragon Boat Festival．After eating zongzi，people will watch the dragon boat races．

6．Every time the Mid－Autumn Festival comes，people will send relatives and friends the mooncakes as gifts．

7．Thanksgiving Day is in honor of Indian people's great kindness．

8．With the coming of National Day，I really expect it because I want to have a short trip during these days．

9．People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes which are the special food for this festival．

【结尾句】

1．What a beautiful and happy holiday!

2．I am sure it will be a wonderful journey．

3．In short，it's a time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it．

写作注意

1. 开门见山 

2. 短语的使用应给予重视

3. 句式的多样性

4. 注意句子的衔接

并列关系：and, or, either...or,both...and, not only...but also, as well as 

转折关系：but, however, yet, although 

条件关系：if, whether, unless 

时间关系：when, as, before, after, while, until, since, as soon as 

原因关系：because, as, since, for

题组A  基础过关练

材料作文：

1．向你的笔友Mike介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来过春节。内容如下：

1. 春节是中国最重要的节日， 它有时在一月份到来,有时在二月份到来。

2. 今年的春节将在１０天以后到来，我们全家将会团聚。

3. 我们现在正忙着为它做准备。我每天打扫房子，和妈妈一起购物 ，帮妈妈做一些传统食　　物，例如：元宵（riceballs）,年糕(ricecakes)，豆腐（toufu)。

4. 在除夕夜，我祖父母，我叔叔一家将来我们家吃饭。我们将熬夜迎接新年。我和堂兄弟们将燃放鞭炮(play firecrackers)，看电视。

5 .我希望你能来和我们一起过春节，体会中国的传统文化。

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【答案】Dear Mike,

I would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China. It is our most important festival. Sometimes it comes in January, and sometimes in February. The Spring Festival this year will come in ten days. Our family will get together. Now we are busy preparing for it. I clean the house and go shopping with my mum every day. Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on. On New Year’s Eve, my grandparents and my uncle’s family will have dinner with us. We will stay up late to welcome the New Year. My cousins and I will set off fireworks and watch TV.

I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们给Mike写一封信，向他介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来中国一起过春节。题目中有非常清楚的提示，我们可以依据这些提示的内容，用正确的英语表达，可以根据需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实。写作前，应仔细阅读题目中的提示，理清文章的主要结构和主体，确定文章应使用的时态、人称等。通过分析可知，这篇作文应使用一般现在时态和一般将来时，第一人称来叙述，注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子，选择恰当的词汇、短语和句型。句式结构以简单句为主，使叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求向好友Mike介绍了中国的春节。春节是学生们非常熟悉的节日，因此文章中可能用到的词汇和句型都是学生们比较熟悉的，在写作时，学生们会感觉比较得心应手。这篇短文对这个节日的介绍总体非常的完整，内容也很充实，包含了题目中要求的所有要点。短文中使用了一般现在时和一般将来时，谓语动词形式准确，句式结构简单，叙述清楚，符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范，语言得体，正确使用了名词单复数、形容词和副词以及介词。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.、Now we are busy preparing for it.、Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on.、We will stay up late to welcome the New Year、I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.等等。

书面表达

假设你是王楠,你的美国笔友托马斯( Thomas)对中国文化很感兴趣,他写信向你询问中国的传统节日元宵节( The Lantern Festival)的习俗。请你根据下面的提示,写一封回信。

提示: (1) When is it celebrated?     (2) What do people usually do during the festival?

(3) What do you think of the festival?

要求:(1)必须包括全部要点,可以适当发挥 (2)80词左右,回信的开头与结尾已给出,不计

入总词数。

参考词汇: 农历 Chinese lunar calendar 猜灯迷 guess lantern riddles放鞭炮 let off firecrackers

The Lantern Festival

Dear Thomas,                                                                                       

Yours,

Wang Nan

【答案】The Lantern Festival

Dear Thomas

How are you? You asked me about the Lantern Festival.It is one of traditional Chinese festivals. We have it on the fifteenth day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar. Usually, we eat sweet dumplings called yuanxiao. We go out to watch colorful lanterns and guess lantern riddles with our family. We also let off firecrackers for fun. It's really interesting! We like the Lantern Festival very much.

By the way, can you tell me what your favorite festival is?I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Wang Nan

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇书信格式的作文。假设你是王楠，写一封回信内容是关于元宵节的，有三个要点，一是元宵节是在什么时间；二是人们通常在元宵节做什么；三是你认为元宵节怎样。注意使用自己熟悉的单词及句式，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，注意上下文的衔接。

写作亮点：本文要点齐全，短文用了一些短语和句式，如：ask sb about sth问某人关于某事；Usually, we eat sweet dumplings called yuanxiao这里用了called yuanxiao过去分词作定语。高级句式：By the way, can you tell me what your favorite festival is?用了what引导的宾语从句。

题组B  能力提升练

5月12日母亲节那天，你们班同学用不同的方式为妈妈庆祝了节日。请根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你认为哪一种方式最好，并简单说明理由。

注意：1.不少于80词；

2.文中不要提及自己的姓名、学校等相关信息；

3.无需写标题，内容可适当发挥。

参考词汇：pocket money零花钱

【答案】例文

May 12th was Mother’s Day. My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways. Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers, or made cards and gifts by themselves. Some students did as much housework as possible to help their mothers.

All the ways above are OK. Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. Our mothers have given us so much love and care, so we should give them more in return. What’s more, working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy. Let’s take action to express our love to our mothers faithfully.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇表格作文，内容谈谈为妈妈庆祝节日的不同方式以及自己的看法．时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。

2.写作思路：这是一篇所给材料比较详细的表格类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可有适当发挥．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in different ways 以不同的方式；spend 金钱+doing 花费金钱做某事；as …as possible 尽可能的；in return 作为回报；What's more 更有甚者；take action to do sth 采取行动做某事。句型：Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers, or made cards and gifts by themselves.；Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. ；working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy.

在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。

The Spring Feitival

☆Time：in January or February

☆Activities: welcome the new year, visit relatives, got together…

☆Meaning: the biggest day of year, a new start…

The Mid-Autumn Festival

☆Time：in September or October

☆Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon…

☆Meaning: symbol of being together, missing family members far away…

注意：1. 发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息；

3. 词数80左右；

4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. _______________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival.

The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year.

During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting?

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

【详解】发言稿首先对到来的游客表示欢迎。第二句从总的方面介绍中国传统节日—the Mid-Autumn Festival.中秋节。接下来介绍中秋节在一年中的时间，大自然现象。第二段介绍中国人在中秋节期间的活动：围坐在一起赏月，代表团圆。最后对于听众表达感谢。通篇语言通顺，长短句搭配得体，句子优美，主要运用一般现在时态，符合语境。口语化符合演讲稿要求。

题组C  培优拔尖练

（2018·湖北孝感·中考真题）书面表达

本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。

写作要点：

1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们团队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。

2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如……

3.感想：Tony……，我……

写作要求：

1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰；

2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；

3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

June 18th

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.                                                    

【答案】Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.

After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.

At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.

【解析】试题分析：本书面表达以“端午节”为话题的日记。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态，用第一人称来表达。注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

（2019·辽宁·中考真题）B．大作文：根据要求完成下面内容，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。

最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。

1.       内容提示：（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；

（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；

（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。

2.       写作要求：

（1）内容包含以上要点；

（2）语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，词数：60~80词；

（3）书写工整、规范, 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

My Favorite Chinese Festival

【答案】My Favorite Chinese Festival

As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.

It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.

The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.

【解析】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下“我”最喜欢的中国节日。所提供的材料中列举了本次征文活动的主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。主要从（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. 在春节前夕，所有家庭成员都喜欢吃各种各样的食物，如：饺子和鱼。

On the eve of the Spring Festival,是介词短语做时间状语。

different kinds of：不同种类的；such as：例如。这些短语的运用，增加了语感，丰富了文章的内容。

【高分句型二】

The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. 春节不仅能让我们感受到爱和幸福，更能让我们感受到家和家庭的重要性。这句话运用了not only…but also…,“不但……而且……”。体现了作者的写作功底扎实。