【题型专项】人教版英语九年级全册 题型专项复习——短文写作 （1） 学案（含答案）

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题型专项复习——短文写作

Topic: 话题7 Feelings and moods & 话题8 Interpersonal communication之感恩

【Get ready before class】

一、同学们，我们今天把中考作文话题第7情感与话题8人际关系这2个话题糅合在一起，写写你心中最想要感激的一个人以及他（她）对你的影响。

二、初中阶段相关话题的参考单元

八年级下 unit 4   Why don’t you talk to your parents?

九年级   unit 11  Sad movies make me cry.

九年级   unit 14  I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.

相关参考书目：寒假作业《24个话题阅读》的话题7 & 8。

三、老师提供的相关话题素材

要求：

1．查字典，在你不理解单词词组的旁边标注中文意思。如果有理解不了或不会套用的句子，请在素材中标注出来，以便上课小组交流讨论。

2．画出你喜欢的句子并试着背诵。

3．摘抄你喜欢的同话题的课外素材或者把老师给你的素材提取出来各写一段开头；正文；以及结尾以便上课的时候与同学分享。

开头一：People often say “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. So I think everyone needs help.

开头二：Since life doesn’t always go the way we plan, everybody may face difficulties. Nobody is powerful enough to manage to do anything alone, so all of us need help.

开头三：Nobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything without a mistake or a trouble, so help is necessary and important. I’ve received a great deal of help from other people, from my parents, my friends, my teachers, etc., which is so helpful that enables me to overcome the difficulties and troubles standing on my way.

开头四：Everyone in the world can’t live without help, no matter how old, young and so on. Because we are living in a big family. We may not succeed in doing everything. So we need help. It’s a part of life. Only to find how to help others and how to receive help from others can we enjoy a happy life. There is a sentence “Union is powerful.” We know that helping others means helping ourselves.

你的摘抄或你借鉴素材所写的开头：_____________________________________________

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想想，开头跟正文之间要用什么样的文字来做衔接呢？把它写下来。

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正文一：感谢老师篇

I would like to thank my English teacher for all the help he gave me during the past 3 years. He was always so patient when I asked him questions. He listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. He showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English. He made the exercise so interesting that I was always very eager to participate and practice. My English has improved so much. How could I thank him enough?

正文二：感谢父母篇

1. My mother is a village woman and she loves me very much. She is in her fifties now. She has very little school education but she knows that knowledge is very important. She often asks me how I get along with my studies and encourages me to study hard. She cares for me well and does all she can so that I can have more time to study. Such is my mother, a simple, kind and hard-working woman.

2. People always say that living is like acting and everyone has their own stories. But who actually gave me the chance to start my first page of life? It’s my mother, a wonderful woman who gave me life and showed me kindness. She did blame me when I wasn’t on the right track. She tried to urge me to do my homework properly and study harder when I was in front of the TV. Even though it’s a bit harsh but I followed, because she’s lifting me up to touch the sky. I can feel her love and she’s teaching me to love with heart.

正文三：感谢朋友篇

I have a good friend. She is very friendly to me. I am very grateful to her. Every time I am sad, she is always around me and comforts me. I like to tell her my sadness and she would listen to me carefully. When I was ill, she would stay with me and took good care of me. She always spoils me. If there is any delicious food, she would give me half of it. Every time I want to play, she always stays beside me silently and plays with me. We catch fire jade-like stone worm together. We grow flowers and so on. She said I accounted for half of the thought in her mind. She has really done that. I am very grateful to her.

以上的3篇正文是泛写某人对你的帮助的。那么请想想，如果作文题目要求你写他（她）帮助你的一次经历你该怎么写呢？

正文四：基础篇

I have a friend called Joan. We often help each other. One day after school, it was raining hard and I left my umbrella at home. Suddenly Joan ran to me. She lent her umbrella to me, but she went home without her umbrella. The next day, she was ill. So I went to her home and helped her with her homework.

From this story, I know everyone should help others because everyone needs help.

你的摘抄或你借鉴素材所写的正文：____________________________________________

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结尾一：

From this story, I know everyone should help others because everyone needs help.

结尾二：  

In a word, I know that we should be kind to others. If they are in trouble, we will try to help them out of trouble. Then we will feel very happy and we will think everything is beautiful. Then we will have a nice life. Dear friends, try to be a kind person, the world will be nicer and nicer.

不同的作文需要不同的结尾，但是毫无疑问的是，结尾是我们一篇文章的升华，如果没有升华，那么作文就好像欠缺了什么似的。请利用老师所给的素材仿写你的结尾，素材无需全部用上。

美句是锦上添花的句子，请选择性地使用哦！

美句一：

I am grateful to my parents. They give me life. They give me love, they feed me, train me, and teach me the principle of doing things, so I’m grateful to my families. They give me a warm home and make me feel valuable.

美句二：

I would like to thank my teachers; they teach me knowledge and experience. They give me inspiration again and again. I want to thank my friends because they always help me when I am in trouble, they greet me when I’m sick, they show me the way when I’m lost.

美句三：

There are many people around me that I should say thank you to. They work hard in their own position, dedicating themselves. Thanks, let me get rich and happy; thanks, let me understand love.

So friends, let’s learn to be grateful!

美句四：

With a grateful heart, we know how to honor our parents; With a grateful heart, we know how to respect teachers;

With a grateful heart, we know how to help others; With a grateful heart, we will study hard. With a grateful heart, we can learn tolerance and win true love. Live with a grateful heart, be grateful to our parents, to our teachers, to our friends, to the motherland, to the nature. Learn to be grateful, we will experience more joy and happiness!

温馨提示：由于我们的作文常常是首尾呼应的，所以有时候可用于结尾的文字也可用于文章的开头哦。另外，无论你想运用什么素材进你的作文里，都不可以一成不变哦，适当的修改会与你的作文更贴切。

【Enjoy the class】

Activity 1：仿写句子（考考你掌握素材的程度哦）

仿写一

Everyone in the world can’t live without         no matter how old, young and so on. Because                                  . So we need    . It’s a part of life. Only to find how to                    and how to                   can we enjoy a happy life. There is a sentence “                .” We know that                                       

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仿写二

I am very grateful to       . Every time I       , she           ; when I                , she              ; when I           , she                                .

Activity 2：Show time

Activity 3：应用挑战

作文题：同学们长这么大了，心中最想要感激的一个人是谁呢？请写一篇作文，谈谈你心目中要感激的这个人，你为什么要感激他（她）？他（她）对你有什么样的影响？

小组讨论：

1. 如何审题？

2. 找出有用的素材；

3. Retell PK；

同学们，请大家独立写写这篇文章吧。

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书写：_________      要点是否符合：_________     分段：_________    

语法：_________      好词好句：_________         总分：_________    

Activity 4：作业

变式作文：想想你在初中阶段永远无法忘怀的一个人或一件事，以及他（它）对你的人生的改变。

要求：

1. 描述这个人或这件事 2. 你对这个人或这件事的看法 3. 他（它）对你人生的改变

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【答案】

【Enjoy the class】

Activity 1：

一、

love；love brings us bravery and courage；love；be thankful to love；give others love；love is power；if everyone has love, the world will become better and better

二、

mom；was ill；cared me；failed my exams；encouraged me；fell down；gave me a hand and lifted me up

Activity 3：

Since life doesn’t always go the way we plan, everybody may face difficulties. Nobody is powerful enough to manage to do anything alone, so all of us need help.

I have a good friend. She is very friendly to me, I am very grateful to her. Every time I am sad, she is always around me and comforts me. I like to tell her my sadness and she would listen to me carefully. When I was ill, she would stay with me and took good care of me. She always spoils me. If she had got any delicious food, she would give me half of it. Every time I want to play, she always stays beside me silently and plays with me. We catch fire jade-like stone worm together, we grow flowers and so on. She said I accounted for half of the thought in her mind. She has really done that. I am very grateful to her.

In a word, I know that we should be kind to others. If they are in trouble, we will try to help them out of trouble. Then we will feel very happy and we will think everything is beautiful. Then we will have a nice life. Dear friends, try to be a kind person, the world will be nicer and nicer.

Activity 4：

Since life doesn’t always go the way we plan, everybody may face difficulties. Nobody is powerful enough to manage to do anything alone, so all of us need help.

I would like to thank my English teacher for all the help he gave me during the past 3 years. He was always so patient when I asked him questions. He listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. He showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English. He made the exercise so interesting that I was always very eager to participate and practice. My English has improved so much. How could I thank him?

In a word, I know that we should be kind to others. If they are in trouble, we will try to help them out of trouble. Then we will feel very happy and we will think everything is beautiful. Then we will have a nice life. Dear friends, try to be a kind person, the world will be nicer and nicer.