陕西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份陕西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共18页。试卷主要包含了假如你是李华，假如你是某中学高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．假如你是李华。你在某英语杂志”SHARING”栏目上看到了一位叫Linlin的读者的来信，请根据下面信件的内容和写作要点给她回信。Dear Friends，I am Linlin, a girl of 15. I have been interested in English for years and I love practicing English. But I am in a poor mountainous area and have little access to English.I would be grateful if you could help me learn English. I am eager for your ideas and help. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours SincerelyLinlin写作要点:1.简单介绍你自己, 希望你们可以成为朋友；2.提出你帮助她的具体措施或者建议(如分享英语杂志和小说；用英语写信；收听英语广播、看英文节目等)。注意:1.词数100左右；   2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Linlin,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生在疫情之后来中国旅游，有两条线路可以选择:”长江之行”或者”泰山之旅”，Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括:1. 你建议的路线；2. 你的理由；3. 你的祝愿。注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据以下要点用英语给他写封信：1.帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑等等；2.给他提出建议：学习普通话，和同学交流意见等等；3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Li Ming，I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是校学生会主席李华， 请写封邮件告知你校留学生观看一场线上健康专题讲座。主要内容包括：1. 讲座目的；2. 讲座时间， 内容；3. 欢迎收看。注意: 1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。Dear foreign friends,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Student Union5．为保护环境,政府颁布了管理条例，强制实行垃圾分类。但你所在小区的落实情况不尽人意,经常有居民垃圾不认真分类，也有居民在非指定的时间乱丢垃圾。诸如此类，不一而足。请你写一封电子邮件向有关部门负责人反映这一现状，并提出自己的合理化建议。参考词汇:生活垃圾: household garbage垃圾分类:garbage sorting/garbage classification干垃圾:dry garbage      湿垃圾:wet garbage(kitchen waste)可回收垃圾:recyclables   有害垃圾:hazardous waste________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Linda正在你市某所中学做交换生。最近她因考试成绩不理想而情绪低落。请你用英语给她写封信表示安慰，要点如下：1. 对她的情况表示理解；2. 建议她找出原因并吸取教训；3. 鼓励她树立信心。注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Linda,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假如你是某中学高三学生李华。随着疫情在世界各地的蔓延，你的英国笔友Chris所在学校也要开始网上授课， 请你根据自己前一段时间上网课的体会用英语给Chris发一份E-mail，给他提 出上好网课的建议。要点：1.表达问候与同情；2.上好网课的建议（不少于两条）。注意:1.词数100个左右；2.可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺；3.开头与结尾已经给出，不计人总数。Dear Chris,How is everything going?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes to you and your country!Yours,Li Hua8．假定你是李华，在英国参加夏令营，所在地有多国中学生夏令营团队。当地计划为你 们举行联谊晚会。请写一封邮件报名参会，内容包括：1.写信目的；2. 你们的节目；3. 合理建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Mike 想跟你讨论中国书法的相关问题，但原定的见面时间 因故需要推迟，请给 Mike 写一封电子邮件，说明情况。内容如下:1. 表示歉意并说明原因；2. 重约见面时间；3. 建议先参观中国书法展。注意: 1. 词数 120 左右；2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。Dear Mike,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李华，澳大利亚好朋友Harry来中国学习，但因文化差异感到生活有些不适应。请给他写一封信，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 给出建议；3. 寄予希望。注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头与结尾均已给出。Dear Harry,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua         1．Dear Linlin,I am Li Hua, a student of Senior 2 in Baoji. I am very glad that you show great interest in English, too. And I hope we can be best friends and learn English together.I am also delighted to help you learn English. Firstly, I would like to share with you some interesting and useful magazines and English novels that I have read. Besides, it would be a good idea if you can write to me in English and tell me something about your school life and your hometown. What’s more, it is also a wise choice to listen to English on radio and watch some English TV programs. By doing so, you can improve your listening and pronunciation.I hope you will find my ideas useful. I am looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给叫Linlin的读者来信写一封回信，以表达愿意和她成为朋友，并且就学习英语给她提一些建议。【详解】本篇作文要求先阅读某英语杂志”SHARING”栏目上的读者来信，然后写回信。所以首先要仔细阅读该封读者来信，可知其主要内容是：Linlin，一个15岁的乡村女孩，对英语非常感兴趣，需要交一个朋友，并且能帮助她学习英语。然后要总结回信的要点，要点如下：1.简单介绍你自己, 希望你们可以成为朋友；2.提出你帮助她的具体措施或者建议（如分享英语杂志和小说；用英语写信；收听英语广播、看英文节目等）。第一，写作时注意准确运用时态。本文主要用一般现在时态。第二，注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，要适当使用过渡词语。第三，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。最后，要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。【点睛】本文条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯，时态把握准确。另外，其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：. Firstly，Besides和What’s more等过度词语使文章要点清晰，行文流畅。还有文章中的宾语从句that you show great interest in English, too.和定语从句that I have read等运用的恰如气氛，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Jim,I’m more than delighted to know that you are paying a visit to China after the epidemic, which is surely a perfect destination for you to enjoy your holiday.Both the Yangtze River and Mount Tai enjoy great reputation worldwide and are well worth a visit. As far as I’m concerned, going to Mount Tai is a better choice. First and foremost, it boasts breathtaking wonderful sights which even attracted many emperors and great poets deeply in history. In addition, climbing die mountain is really character-building, which is not only good for your physical health but also brings you lots of courage and endurance. After reaching the top, you can enjoy the fantastic sunrise till the morning, which is really a feast for eyes and makes your journey worthwhile. It’s such a must-see place that you won’t be disappointed when you go there.Hope my suggestion will be of help. Wish you a good time.Yours sincere,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jim回信建议他选择哪一条旅游线路。【详解】第一步：审题。体裁：信件应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。要点：1 Jim要来中国旅游2建议的旅游路线3建议的理由4 表达祝愿结构布局：第一段，听到Jim要来中国旅游，就询问的旅游线路提建议。      第二段， 建议的旅游路线和理由：泰山之旅。泰山景色优美，如云海，日出等，爬山可以锻炼身体，还能锻炼毅力等。      第三段，表达祝愿，希望有所帮助。  第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）如：pay a visit, be concerned about, classic, as far as I am concerned, spectacular, make an impression on, sea of clouds, sunrise, fantastic, physical exercise, perseverance等 第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）如：Hearing that you are paying a visit to China after the epidemic, I am writing to make suggestions on the tour destination that you are quire concerned about. 等 第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。 第五步：润色修改。【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中将多的使用复合句，如I’m more than delighted to know that you are paying a visit to China after the epidemic, which is surely a perfect destination for you to enjoy your holiday.使用了宾语从句和非限制性定语从句，it boasts breathtaking wonderful sights which even attracted many emperors and great poets deeply in history.使用了限制性定语从句，It’s such a must-see place that you won’t bedisappointed when you go there.使用了结果状语从句和时间状语从句。这使得文章句式灵活，为文章增添色彩。3．Dear Li Ming,I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends. In your spare time, you should play basketball or go to some parties. At last, I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently. As for me, I’ll encourage more students to study and play with you. Also, I’ll help you with your study and daily life. In a word, I’m ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help.I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给转学生李明写一封信，针对他一时无法融入新班级的苦恼给出一些建议。【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给转学生李明写一封信，针对他一时无法融入新班级的苦恼给出一些建议。题目要求写作内容应包括以下三条要点：1. 帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑等等；2. 给他提出建议：学习普通话，和同学交流意见等等；3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算。因此，可将写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信目的，分析问题原因。第二段：提出建议：学习普通话，和同学交流意见等等；陈述帮助他的具体打算。第三段：结束语，表达祝愿。第二步：列关键词。如：have trouble in doing sth.，along well with，too···to，make fun of，manage to，communicate with，encourage sb. to do sth.，turn to sb. for help等。第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：In my opinion，At last，Also等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：动名词短语作主语。In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends. 让步状语从句。In a word, I’m ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help.虚拟语气 At last, I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently.高级句式的使用彰显作者对英语高水平的驾驭能力。4．Dear foreign friends,In order to help us develop a healthy lifestyle, our school is going to hold an online Health Lecture this Friday, beginning at 3 pm and lasting for an hour.As scheduled, Mr. Zhang from Center Hospital will be invited then to give some practical advice on how to keep fit both physically and mentally. If you have any questions related with health, feel free to ask in the Question&Answer Session afterwards. But it’s strongly recommended that all of you should read the “dos and don’ts” before participating in this lecture. Welcome to watch on time.For further information, please contact Li Hua at 654321 .Student Union【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是校学生会主席李华， 请写封邮件告知你校留学生观看一场线上健康专题讲座。主要内容包括：1. 讲座目的；2. 讲座时间，内容；3. 欢迎收看。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：in order to(为了)；an online Health Lecture(线上健康专题讲座)；last for (持续)；practical advice(实际的建议)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如In order to help us develop a healthy lifestyle, our school is going to hold an online Health Lecture this Friday, beginning at 3 pm and lasting for an hour.非谓语动词的运用；If you have any questions related with health, feel free to ask in the Question &Answer Session afterwards.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5．To reduce waste pollution and protect the ecological environment, the government has issued regulations to enforce garbage classification. However, in our community some residents don't seriously classify garbage so that they don't separated dry and wet garbage from domestic garbage, and recyclable garbage is not picked up. Even some residents don't litter in designated places.In response to this situation, we should take appropriate measures. Firstly, the residents should be told what type of garbage belongs to help them classify garbage, and the benefits can they consciously classify garbage. Secondly, attach striking labels to trash cans to remind them to throw garbage. Last but not least, supervision and inspection is necessary.I think only when the residents and the government cooperate with each other, the garbage can be classified and used to the best .【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：为保护环境,政府颁布了管理条例，强制实行垃圾分类。但你所在小区的落实情况不尽人意,经常有居民垃圾不认真分类，也有居民在非指定的时间乱丢垃圾。诸如此类，不一而足。请你写一封电子邮件向有关部门负责人反映这一现状，并提出自己的合理化建议。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：To reduce waste pollution and protect the ecological environment（为了减少废物污染,保护生态环境）；enforce garbage classification（执行垃圾分类）；recyclable garbage（可回收的垃圾）；attach striking labels to trash cans（在垃圾桶上贴醒目标签）。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。To reduce waste pollution and protect the ecological environment,动词不定式作目的状语；in our community some residents don't seriously classify garbage so that they don't separated dry and wet garbage from domestic garbage,句中使用so that引导的目的状语从句。6．Dear Linda,I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam and that you are depressed. I quite understand how you feel because I once went through the same experience. But cheer up! Everything will go well as long as you take action.First, try to analyze what caused the problem and draw a lesson from your failure. If you have difficulty finding the causes, turn to your teachers for help. Next, work on building up your confidence. Failure is the mother of success. When you fail at something, you are actually one step closer to finding a way to succeed. Therefore, be confident about yourself.I hope you will find my suggestions useful.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，安慰考试成绩不理想而情绪低落的交换生Linda。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文人称：第一、二人称；时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主；结构：总-分-总法要点：1. 对她的情况表示理解；2. 建议她找出原因并吸取教训；3. 鼓励她树立信心。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）do well in；go through；cheer up；go well；as long as；take action；draw a lesson；have difficulty (in) doing sth.；turn to sb. for help；work on；build up；be confident等第三步：连词成句1. I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam and that you are depressed.2. I quite understand how you feel because I once went through the same experience.3. Everything will go well as long as you take action.4. Try to analyze what caused the problem and draw a lesson from your failure.5. If you have difficulty finding the causes, turn to your teachers for help.6. Failure is the mother of success.7. When you fail at something, you are actually one step closer to finding a way to succeed.8. I hope you will find my suggestions useful.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First；Next；2.表并列补充关系：and；3.表转折对比关系：But；4.表因果关系：Therefore；If；as long as；because等连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam and that you are depressed.使用了由that引导的宾语从句；I quite understand how you feel because I once went through the same experience.使用了由because引导的状语从句和how引导的宾语从句；If you have difficulty finding the causes, turn to your teachers for help.使用了由if引导的状语从句；When you fail at something, you are actually one step closer to finding a way to succeed.使用了由when引导的状语从句；I hope you will find my suggestions useful.使用了省略that的宾语从句等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：do well in；go through；cheer up； as long as；take action；have difficulty (in) doing sth.；turn to sb. for help；work on；build up等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。7．Dear Chris,How is everything going?What a pity it is that the whole world is suffering so much! From the news I learned the COVID-19 is now sweeping across your country. The spread of the terrible virus not only threatens our health but also makes us attempt a new way of learning—attending classes online.With some previous experience, I’ll share with you my advice on how to learn better. Firstly, build up self-control by making plans, following the normal school schedule and organizing your time reasonably. Secondly, focus on the lessons, listen attentively and take notes while listening. Additionally, without teachers and classmates accompanying you, try to solve problems by yourself. Finally, exercise properly if possible.Best wishes to you and your countryYours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是某中学高三学生李华。随着疫情在世界各地的蔓延，你的英国笔友Chris所在学校也要开始网上授课, 请你根据自己前一段时间上网课的体会用英语给Chris发一份E-mail,给他提 出上好网课的建议。要点：1.表达问候与同情；2.上好网课的建议（不少于两条）。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sweep across (席卷，横扫)；attending classes online (上网课)；share with (分享)；build up self-control (建立自控力)等。    第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Firstly, build up self-control by making plans, following the normal school schedule and organizing your time reasonably.非谓语动词的运用；Finally, exercise properly if possible.运用了省略句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。8．Dear Mr/Ms,We really appreciate your kindness to host such a nice party. Thank you very much! I'm writing to tell you we're glad to accept your invitation.We have two programmes, a group of five boys singing a Chinese song and three girls performing a Chinese dance. The Chinese song is about how teenagers are strict with themselves and make every effort to achieve their dreams, while the dance is about how Chinese minority girls looking for a better life.By the way, we'd appreciate it if the party were on next Thursday, when we have no other activities.Thanks again for your thoughtfulness.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给英国夏令营组织写信，同意参加联谊会。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：总分总 要求：1.写信目的；2. 你们的节目；3. 合理建议。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）tell sb. sth./ give sb. sth./ make an effort to do sth./ be strict with/ look for/ be glad to do sth.第三步：连词成句It is really nice of you to host such a party. I'm writing to tell you we're glad to attend the party.We have two programmes, and one is a group of five boys singing a Chinese song and the other is three girls performing a Chinese dance. The Chinese song is about how teenagers are strict with themselves and make every effort to achieve their dreams.The dance is about how Chinese minority girls looking for a better life.We'd appreciate it if the party were on next Thursday, when we have no other activities.Thanks again for your thoughtfulness.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：The Chinese song is about how teenagers are strict with themselves and make every effort to achieve their dreams, while the dance is about how Chinese minority girls looking for a better life.中how引导表语从句；I'm writing to tell you we're glad to accept your invitation.中tell后是宾语从句，省略了连接词that。这些从句的使用给文章增色添彩。9．Dear Mike,I am terribly sorry that I won’t be able to keep my appointment to discuss Chinese calligraphy with you due to a change in my school arrangement. I sincerely apologize to you for my inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.I suggest that we put our meeting off from 3 pm this Saturday until the same time next Sunday. Will that be suitable to you? Fortunately, I’ve got the good news that an exhibition of Chinese calligraphy is scheduled to be held this weekend. Works of some superb calligraphers of all times will be displayed in the exhibition then. It is strongly recommended that you should pay a visit to the exhibition, which will definitely help you better understand Chinese calligraphy.Looking forward to you early reply.YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Mike 想跟你讨论中国书法的相关问题，但原定的见面时间 因故需要推迟，请给 Mike 写一封电子邮件，说明情况。内容如下:1. 表示歉意并说明原因；2. 重约见面时间；3. 建议先参观中国书法展.第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：keep my appointment to discuss Chinese calligraphy（预约讨论中国书法）；due to a change in my school arrangement（由于学校安排的改变）；my inconvenience caused by the unexpected change（意外的变化给我带来的不便）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。I am terribly sorry that I won’t be able to keep my appointment to discuss Chinese calligraphy with you due to a change in my school arrangement.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；I suggest that we put our meeting off from 3 pm this Saturday until the same time next Sunday.宾语从句的虚拟语气；It is strongly recommended that you should pay a visit to the exhibition, which will definitely help you better understand Chinese calligraphy.主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。10．Dear Harry,I’m sorry to learn that you have some difficulty adapting to your life in China. And I quite understand how you feel now.To get used to the life here, you are advised to learn about Chinese cultures. I think it a good idea to seize all the chances available to talk with the Chinese around you, from whom you will, without fail, be informed of our usual practices. Additionally, when free, you should travel around to experience local customs and cultures.I hope the suggestions will be of help and that you will have a pleasant stay here. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Harry写一封回信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分总法要求：1. 表示安慰；2. 给出建议；3. 寄予希望。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）have some difficulty in doing sth.；adapt to；get used to；learn about；Chinese cultures；seize all the chances；available；talk with；inform of ；travel around；local customs and cultures；be of help；pleasant等第三步：连词成句1. I’m sorry to learn that you have some difficulty adapting to your life in China.2. To get used to the life here, you are advised to learn about Chinese cultures.3. I think it a good idea to seize all the chances available to talk with the Chinese around you, from whom you will, without fail, be informed of our usual practices.4. You should travel around to experience local customs and cultures.5. I hope the suggestions will be of help and that you will have a pleasant stay here.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 表示并列关系：and2. 表并列补充关系：Additionally连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：I’m sorry to learn that you have some difficulty adapting to your life in China.使用了that引导的宾语从句；To get used to the life here, you are advised to learn about Chinese cultures.使用了不定式作目的状语；I think it a good idea to seize all the chances available to talk with the Chinese around you, from whom you will, without fail, be informed of our usual practices.使用了it做形式宾语和介词+whom引导非限制性定语从句；I hope the suggestions will be of help and that you will have a pleasant stay here.使用了and引导的并列句和that引导的宾语从句等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。