陕西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份陕西高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共17页。试卷主要包含了假如你叫李华，是一名高中生，阅读下面这封中学生来信等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter想来你所在城市大学留学。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐2-3所大学；2. 你推荐的理由；3. 你对Peter的希望。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Chris,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是王明，你的英国笔友David最近总是失眠 (insomnia)，为此他感到非常苦恼，特发来邮件向你寻求建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.养成良好的睡前习惯；2.保持健康的饮食；3.保持乐观的心态。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：不少于70词 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。Dear David,I am sorry to hear that you have a problem with insomnia. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Wang Ming3．最近，你收到美国笔友Amanda发来的电子邮件，说她很想参加当地举行的“汉语朗读比赛(Chinese Reading Contest)”，但对自己缺乏信心。请你根据下面的写作提纲，给她回复一封邮件。内容要点如下：1. 鼓励她积极参加；2. 给她提几点建议。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Amanda,I’m delighted to know that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是李华，你的家乡是一个有着悠久历史和文化的古镇，但是近年来由于游客激增以及过度开发，古镇的人文环境与自然环境遭到了严重的破坏。目前地方政府正在征集各方建议以更好地保护古镇的自然与人文。请你给地方政府写一封信，谈谈你对保护家乡古镇的看法。内容包括：1.简述你对保护古镇所选择的建议；2.说明你的理由。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.信中不能提到真实姓名和学校；3.词数：不少于100词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。Dear local government,I’m a student and I’ve been proud of my hometown, an ancient town with a long history and culture.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假如你叫李华，是一名高中生。上周，你的好友Mary发来电子邮件说，她最近在减肥，所以不吃早饭，但她总感觉又累又饿，不知道该怎么办，因此向你求助。请根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件。提示：1. 表示不赞成她的做法；2. 陈述健康饮食的重要性；3. 给她提出几点建议。注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数：不少于100词(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。Dear Mary,I know from your letter that you are upset recently. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you will find my suggestions useful.Yours,Li Hua6．阅读下面这封中学生来信(摘自 China Daily 21 Century)。Dear Editor,I am a new student at Beihai Senior Middle School. My home is far from Beihai, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I couldn’t help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Could you tell me what to do?Your early reply is expected.Regards,Amy请根据以上内容，写一封回信（信的开头和结尾已为你写好。词数100左右，不含已写好的部分）。回信应包括如下要点：1.鼓励Amy坚定求学信心，志存高远，四海为家；2.就Amy的目前状况，提两到三个建议。Dear Amy,Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wish you happy every day.Faithfully yours,Big friend7．假定你是李华，有感于校园内存在的浪费现象，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容给校长写一封信。写作要点：1、说明写信的目的；2、对这些行为进行批评；3、提出建议。注意事项：1、短文词数100左右；2、信的格式、开头已给出，不计入总词数;3、参考词汇：不道德的 immoralDear headmaster,I am a student from Class 1, Senior 1. I am writing to you to share my views on the shocking waste of water, electricity and paper in our school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________A worried student,Li Hua8．假定你是李华，你得知你的外国笔友David近期沉迷电脑游戏，对此你很担心，请你用英语给他写一封信。内容包括：1.表示担心；2.阐述理由；3.表达期待。提示：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：100词左右。Dear David,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假如你是某杂志健康栏目的主持人LiHua，人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息：1)健康的重要性；2)给出保持健康的方法：如：避免含糖高、脂肪高的食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼等。注意：1)词数100左右；2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear my readers,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  Yours sincerely,Li Hua10．假设你是李华，你的美国网友Ted最近刚转学，发现难以适应新环境，同时对新学校的交友问题感到烦恼。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容主要包括：1. 分享你适应新环境的经历；2.就交朋友的方法给他一些建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Ted,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If you follow all these tips, you will definitely make new friends soon.Yours,Li Hua             1．Dear Chris,Hearing that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further education, I am more than glad to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice.Considering your excellent academic performance, I recommend you apply for Peking University or Tsinghua University, both of which are among the first universities to enroll international students in China. Besides, with their profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses and abundant research opportunities, the two universities attract students and scholars from all over the world. I’m sure the ideal academic atmosphere will feed your need of studying. I sincerely hope your dream will come true. If you have further questions, don’t hesitate to contact me.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter想来所在城市大学留学，要求你给英国朋友Peter回一封电子邮件，推荐2-3所大学，并阐述推荐的理由以及你对他的希望。【详解】1. 词汇积累高兴的：glad→delighted表达：express→extend优秀的：excellent→outstanding满足：feed→satisfy2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：Hearing that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further education, I am more than glad to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice.拓展句：I am more than glad to hear that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further education, and I’m writing to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice.【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you want to come to our city, Beijing, for further education, I am more than glad to express my warmest welcome and offer you some advice. (运用了非谓语动词作状语以及that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Considering your excellent academic performance, I recommend you apply for Peking University or Tsinghua University, both of which are among the first universities to enroll international students in China.  (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句、虚拟语气以及“both of which”引导的非限制性定语从句)2．参考范文：Dear David,I am sorry to hear that you have a problem with insomnia. To help you out, I’d love to offer you some advice.First, it’s vital to form a healthy bedtime habit. You’d better not do things that excites you before sleep. Also, keeping a balanced diet plays a significant role in your good sleep. A cup of milk before bed may help you sleep sound. More importantly, it’s a good idea to hold a positive attitude towards life.I hope my advice is worth taking and will benefit you.Yours,Wang Ming【导语】这是一篇建议信。要求考生以王明的身份给笔友David写一封邮件，给他提供建议，以便他能应对失眠的问题。【详解】1.词汇积累提供：offer→provide重要的：vital→significant保持：hold→keep建议：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：More importantly, it’s a good idea to hold a positive attitude towards life.拓展句：More importantly, it’s a good idea that you hold a positive attitude towards life.【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you have a problem with insomnia. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] You’d better not do things that excites you before sleep. (运用了that引导的限定性定语从句)3．Dear Amanda,I’m delighted to know that you are interested in participating in the Chinese Reading Contest. Don’t worry, I believe in you and I know you can do it!Here are some tips that may help you prepare for the competition. Firstly, start practicing as early as possible. Don’t postpone it until the last minute. You can start by reading Chinese books, newspapers, and blogs to improve your reading skills. Secondly, try to find a Chinese teacher or a native speaker to help you. They can guide you on pronunciation, tone, and intonation, which are critical for reading Chinese texts. Thirdly, Practice reading aloud every day until you feel confident enough to participate in the competition.Remember, the key to success is perseverance and hard work. I believe that with your determination, you can achieve great results in the Chinese Reading Contest. I wish you all the best!  Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求根据美国笔友Amanda发来的电子邮件，说她很想参加当地举行的“汉语朗读比赛(Chinese Reading Contest)”，但对自己缺乏信心。请给她回复一封邮件，鼓励她并给她一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→thrilled推迟：postpone→put off比赛：competition→contest关键的：critical→crucial2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Remember, the key to success is perseverance and hard work.拓展句：Remember that the key to success is perseverance and hard work.【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, try to find a Chinese teacher or a native speaker to help you. They can guide you on pronunciation, tone, and intonation, which are critical for reading Chinese texts.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Thirdly, Practice reading aloud every day until you feel confident enough to participate in the competition.（运用了祈使句和until引导的时间状语从句）4．Dear local government,I’m a student and I’ve been proud of my hometown, an ancient town with a long history and culture. I’ve learned that you are seeking for suggestions to better protect nature and humanity of the ancient town, so I would like to make some suggestions.First of all, in order to reduce the impact of tourists on the environment of the ancient town, the number of the visitors should be limited. Second, we can build up a website where people can look at the pictures of the town without destroying its beauty. Finally, strict regulations on the discharge of pollutants from factories should be made to prevent the environment from being polluted.I hope my advice will be of use. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本文是应用文。假如你是李华，你的家乡是一个有着悠久历史和文化的古镇，但是近年来由于游客激增以及过度开发，古镇的人文环境与自然环境遭到了严重的破坏。目前地方政府正在征集各方建议以更好地保护古镇的自然与人文。请你给地方政府写一封信，谈谈你对保护家乡古镇的看法。内容包括：简述你对保护古镇所选择的建议；说明你的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累寻找：seek for→look for建议：suggestions→advice/tip影响：impact→influence有用的：be of use→be useful2.句式拓展合并句子原句：I’m a student and I’ve been proud of my hometown, an ancient town with a long history and culture.拓展句：I’m a student and I’ve been proud of my hometown, which is an ancient town with a long history and culture.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve learned that you are seeking for suggestions to better protect nature and humanity of the ancient town, so I would like to make some suggestions.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] Second, we can build up a website where people can look at the pictures of the town without destroying its beauty. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)5．Dear Mary,I know from your letter that you are upset recently. You told me that you are on a diet, so you always feel tired and hungry. I can understand how you are feeling now. I am writing to offer you some advice.I don’t think it is wise to skip breakfast in order to lose weight. As we all know, breakfast is the most important meal of the day, which provides enough nutrients for our body to function well. If you don’t have breakfast, you may feel dizzy and tired in class. It is obvious that not eating breakfast is bad for your health. I think health is more important than keeping a good figure. So I advise you to have a good breakfast every day. You should take more exercise and eat less meat to lose weight.I hope you will find my suggestions useful.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给正因节食减肥而不舒服的好友Mary回一封电子邮件， 表示不赞成她的做法，陈述健康饮食的重要性，并给她提出几点建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议某人做某事：advise sb to do sth → suggest one’s doing sth  重要的：important → significant明显的：obvious → evident感到头晕：feel dizzy → feel faint2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：You told me that you are on a diet, so you always feel tired and hungry.拓展句：You told me that you are on a diet, which is the reason why you always feel tired and hungry.【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, breakfast is the most important meal of the day, which provides enough nutrients for our body to function well.（运用了as和which引导的两个非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】It is obvious that not eating breakfast is bad for your health.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及动名词作主语）6．Dear Amy,Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.Wish you happy every day.Faithfully yours,Big friend【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，请根据题目所给内容，写一封回信（信的开头和结尾已为你写好。词数100左右，不含已写好的部分）。回信应包括如下要点：1.鼓励Amy坚定求学信心，志存高远，四海为家；2.就Amy的目前状况，提两到三个建议。【详解】1.词汇积累意识到：realize→be aware参加：take part in→participate in各种不同的：different kinds of→various sorts of建议：suggest→advise2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment.拓展句：Most people do have to leave home, when they pursue higher education or employment.【点睛】[高分句型1] You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now.(运用了现在分词作状语及who引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)7．Dear headmaster,I am a student from Class 1, Senior 1. I am writing to you to share my views on the shocking waste of water, electricity and paper in our school.When you walk around our school, you can easily find lights and computers still on after class, water running all the time and paper used only one side. All these result in too much waste.It is immoral and unnecessary to let waste continue without noticing. For one thing, ending such waste can save lots of money each year, which in return can be used to help many poor students buy some necessary school supplies. For another, students or teachers should realize the value of saving and the shame of wasting.It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. I hope you can consider my views seriously and take some effective measures to stop the phenomenon in our school.A worried student,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，有感于校园内存在的浪费现象，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容给校长写一封信。【详解】1.词汇积累导致：result in→lead to意识到：realize→be aware of避免：avoid→avert不道德的：immoral→unethical2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：It is immoral and unnecessary to let waste continue without noticing.拓展句：If we let waste continue without noticing, it is immoral and unnecessary.【点睛】[高分句型1] When you walk around our school, you can easily find lights and computers still on after class, water running all the time and paper used only one side.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2] For one thing, ending such waste can save lots of money each year, which in return can be used to help many poor students buy some necessary school supplies.(运用了动名词作主语及which引导的非限定性定语从句)8．Dear David,Knowing that you have become addicted to computer games, I feel worried.As far as I am concerned, it is harmful to spend too much time playing computer games. Firstly, sitting in front of the computer and watching the computer screen for a long time are harmful to your eyes. Secondly, playing computer games takes up too much time, which causes you to communicate with your family and friends less and less. Worse still, computer games will make you focus less attention on your schoolwork.In a word, I hope you can make full use of your spare time rather than play computer games.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友David写一封信，对他近期沉迷电脑游戏表示担心，并阐述理由，同时表达自己的期望。【详解】1.词汇积累担心的：worried → anxious有害的：harmful → destructive/bad总之：In a word → In conclusion/All in all充分利用：make full use of→make the best of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Knowing that you have become addicted to computer games, I feel worried.拓展句：I feel worried about the fact that you have become addicted to computer games.【点睛】【高分句型1】As far as I am concerned, it is harmful to spend too much time playing computer games.（运用了it作形式主语）【高分句型2】Firstly, sitting in front of the computer and watching the computer screen for a long time are harmful to your eyes.（运用了动名词作主语）【高分句型3】Secondly, playing computer games takes up too much time, which causes you to communicate with your family and friends less and less.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）9．Dear my readers,Health is far more important than anything else. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.How can we keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you.To begin with, we should develop good habits. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat. What’s more, we have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Last but not least, we’d better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Proper diet and enough exercise do good to our health too.If we follow the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是某杂志健康栏目的主持人Li Hua，人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：important→significant实现：achieve→realize建议：suggestion/advice→tip首先：to begin with→first of all2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：To begin with, we should develop good habits. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat.拓展句：To begin with, we should develop good habits, which means we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat.【点睛】[高分句型1] Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. (运用了what引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] If we follow the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)10．Dear Ted,I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties adapting to the new environment and making friends. Let me share a personal experience with you. When I was eleven, my family moved and I was sent to another school. At that time, I also had a hard time. However, I did my best to make friends with my new classmates, and I gradually became popular with most of them.Making friends is not difficult. First, make an impressive self-introduction in front of the class, so your classmates can get to know you better. Then, find a classmate with the same interest and get close to him. Last, try to join in the conversations when your classmates are chatting.If you follow all these tips, you will definitely make new friends soon.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国网友Ted写一封电子邮件，分享自己适应新环境的经历，并且就交朋友的方法给他一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累适应：adapt to→acclimate然而：however→whereas逐渐地：gradually→progressively方法：tips→hints2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Making friends is not difficult.拓展句：Although making friends may seem difficult at first, it is actually not as hard as it may appear.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties adapting to the new environment and making friends.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】When I was eleven, my family moved and I was sent to another school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)