安徽高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份安徽高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共21页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华，御寒措施；，出行安全，假设你是红星中学高一学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假定你是李华。我市下周将出现低温冰冻天气。请用英文发一份电子邮件，告知你校国际部学生Jimmy，内容包括：
1．天气状况；
2．御寒措施；
3．出行安全。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．文中不可出现有关个人的真实信息；
3．邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jimmy，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom给你发邮件倾诉学习和生活压力过大。请根据以下内容给他回信：
1.安慰他尽全力就好，别太在意结果；
2.回答他关于你实际学习情况的询问；
3.给他提出解决问题的具体建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加内容,以使行文连贯。
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3．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 写信告诉你他现实生活中因不善交友而苦恼。请根据下面提示给他回信，提出建议。
提示:
1. 真诚友善，乐于助人
2. 避免沉溺于虚拟世界，多面对面沟通
3. 积极参加团体活动
注意:字数 100 左右；可适当拓展。
4．假定你是李华, 你班交换生Ashlee对中国茶道(chadao)很感兴趣，渴望了解更多，请你给他写一封邮件，要点如下:
1.推荐茶道课程；
2.推荐理由；
3.提出学习建议。
注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Ashlee,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华, 你的美国网友Mike的父母希望他加入学校篮球队, 但他不喜欢团队运动。他来信寻求你的建议。请用英语给他写一封回信, 内容包括:
1.你对团队运动的看法；
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you and I’d like to give you my opinion about team sports.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐的运动；
2.推荐的理由。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，刚进入高一的你遇到了很多困难。请你给你的英国朋友Jack写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1.告知你所遇到的困难(比如感到孤单、不敢与别人交流、英语学习跟不上等)；
2.恳请他给出建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，你班的交换生Tom在中国已经学习三个月，但是他依然觉得学习中文很困难、经常失眠且不知道如何交新朋友。请你给他写封邮件，给出一些建议。内容包括：
1.向同学或老师请教学习方法；
2.睡前听点音乐；
3.主动和别人交流并提供帮助。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假定你是李华，现在新冠病毒(Covid-19)在国外肆虐，你的英国朋友Tom，给你发来 Email，对此事忧心忡忡。请给他写一封 email，内容包括：
1. 关心和牵挂；
2. 体验和感受；
3. 建议和祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你在负责本校英语报刊 Heart-to-Heart 栏目，一位同学给该栏目留言，希望得到你的帮助。请你阅读完该同学留言后用英语给她写一封建议信。
After I got into senior high school, I joined many clubs, including the volunteer club, dancing club and sports club. I really enjoy these extra curricular activities, but I find it hard to keep up with other students in my study.
Should I give up the clubs? What else can I do to improve my study? (A confused girl, Grade 1)
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 答题卡上注意书信格式。参考词汇: balance 平衡
Dear confused friend,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua














1．Dear Jimmy，
It is going to be cold and freezing next week, so it is necessary for you to take care of yourself. On the one hand, the most important thing you should do is wear clothes warm enough. Down jackets, cotton gloves and scarves are good choices. You can also prepare some warm pastes for yourself, which can make you comfortable in the cold air. On the other hand, it is the smooth road that bring much danger to passengers, so you should walk or drive slowly on the road. I hope you can go through the bad weather safely and healthily.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给国际部学生Jimmy写封邮件，告知下周将出现低温冰冻天气。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 通知天气状况；
2. 建议御寒措施；
3. 提醒注意出行安全。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
cold and freezing; wear clothes warm enough; down jackets; cotton gloves and scarves; warm pastes; bring much danger to passengers; walk or drive slowly
第三步：连词成句
1.It is going to be cold and freezing next week, so it is necessary for you to take care of yourself.
2. On the one hand, the most important thing you should do is wear clothes warm enough.
3. Down jackets, cotton gloves and scarves are good choices.
4. You can also prepare some warm pastes for yourself, which can make you comfortable in the cold air.
5.On the other hand, it is the smooth road that bring much danger to passengers, so you should walk or drive slowly on the road.
6.I hope you can go through the bad weather safely and healthily.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表转折对比关系：On the one hand…,On the other hand…
2.表因果关系： So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]You can also prepare some warm pastes for yourself, which can make you comfortable in the cold air. （which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]On the other hand, it is the smooth road that bring much danger to passengers, so you should walk or drive slowly on the road.（it强调句）
2．Dear Tom,
I was very worried when I received your letter. I believe that we should struggle for our best and don’t pay too much attention to the result.
In my family, my parents treat me as their friend and won’t put too much stress on me and allow me to develop my own interest in art, music and sports. So I’m pretty lucky in this aspect.
I suggest that you have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents or teachers. Besides, exercise every day is also important. I’m sure you will get relief sooner or later.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Tom写封回信，提出一些减轻学习和生活压力的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.安慰他尽全力就好，别太在意结果；
2.回答他关于你实际学习情况的询问；
3.给他提出解决问题的具体建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
worried; struggle for one’s best; pay too much attention to; treat sb. as; allow sb. to do sth.; lucky; heart-to-heart; important; get relief
第三步：连词成句
1. I was very worried when I received your letter.
2. I believe that we should struggle for our best and don’t pay too much attention to the result.
3. In my family, my parents treat me as their friend and won’t put too much stress on me and allow me to develop my own interest in art, music and sports.
4. So I’m pretty lucky in this aspect.
5. I suggest that you have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents or teachers.
6.Besides, exercise every day is also important.
7. I’m sure you will get relief sooner or later.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：Besides
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句) （供参考）
4.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was very worried when I received your letter. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that we should struggle for our best and don’t pay too much attention to the result. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
3．Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear you`re feeling worried for failing to make friends. Some tips below may be helpful to you.
First, be kind, friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others, through which you’ll get well paid. Second, try to communicate with others more and prevent from being absorbed in the virtual world, for it helps strengthen your ties with your friends and develope a positive feeling about what goes on around you. Third, take an active part in activities, such as sports, games, travels, parties, etc. This way, you’ll get more chances to communicate with others. Besides, it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other.
Anyhow, there are many ways to develop a good friendship. Hope you will get along well with your friends.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封回信，针对你的英国朋友 Jim 告诉你他现实生活中因不善交友而苦恼的问题给出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要求：包含真诚友善，乐于助人；避免沉溺于虚拟世界，多面对面沟通；积极参加团体活动。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be worried for；get well paid；communicate with；tie with；take an active part in；be faithful to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling worried for failing to make friends.
2. Some tips below may be helpful to you.
3. First, be kind, friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others, through which you’ll get well paid.
4. Second, try to communicate with others more, for it helps strengthen your ties with friends and lots of misunderstandings can be avoided.
5. Third, take an active part in activities, such as sports, games, travels, parties, etc.
6. This way, you’ll get more chances to communicate with others.
7. Besides, it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other.
8. Anyhow, there are many ways to develop a good friendship.
9. Hope you will get along well with your friends.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling worried for failing to make friends.（省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] First, be kind, friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others, through which you’ll get well paid.（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] Besides, it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other.（that引导的主语从句）
4．One possible version:
Dear Ashlee,
Knowing that you are interested in the traditional Chinese culture and keen on learning more about it, I’m writing to offer my recommendation.
Personally, the Chinese tea art called chadao in Chinese is your best choice. First of all, by learning it, you can have a good taste of Chinese lifestyle about drinking tea. Moreover, you can dig out the charm of the traditional Chinese culture by drinking a variety of tea.
To follow the course well, you’d better search for related knowledge so that you can have a better understanding of Chinese tea art. Additionally, if you still have any doubt, remember the famous saying, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
What do you think of the course? I’m sure you’ll get a lot of fun from it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生给你班交换生Ashlee写一封邮件，介绍中国茶道。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量使用一般将来时。
结构： 总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 推荐茶道课程；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 提出学习建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be interested in; traditional Chinese culture; be keen on; learn about; write to; have a good taste of; Chinese lifestyle; drink tea; a variety of; dig out; had better do sth.; search for; have a better understanding of; think of; be sure; a lot of.
第三步：连词成句
Knowing that you are interested in the traditional Chinese culture and keen on learning more about it, I’m writing to offer my recommendation.
First of all, by learning it, you can have a good taste of Chinese lifestyle about drinking tea.
Moreover, you can dig out the charm of the traditional Chinese culture by drinking a variety of tea.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First of all,
表并列补充关系：And, Moreover, Additionally
表条件关系：If
表目的关系：So that.
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in the traditional Chinese culture and keen on learning more about it, I’m writing to offer my recommendation. 使用现在分词引导原因状语从句，表达非常高级。
[高分句型2] Additionally, if you still have any doubt, remember the famous saying, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 使用if引导的条件状语从句，表达非常高级。
[高分句型3] I’m sure you’ll get a lot of fun from it. 使用宾语从句，表达非常高级。
5．Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you and I’d like to give you my opinion about team sports.
Team sports are sports that offer many great benefits. Firstly, they can improve your leadership abilities. It is essential for every player in any team sport to be aware of their roles in the leadership. Secondly, they can promote responsibility because every player should be responsible for the whole team. Thirdly, they can hugely enhance a child’s social life since he or she is going to make many new friends. Team sports also boost self-esteem and therefore increase happiness. There is a Chinese saying, “The person who does not listen to an elder’s advice gets his or her leg broken.” So I think you should do as your parents wish.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国网友Mike写一封回信，发表你对团体运动的看法和建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时为主。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.你对团队运动的看法；
2. 你的建议；
3.表达你的期望
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be aware of；promote responsibility；be responsible for； listen to ;make new friends
第三步：连词成句
1.Team sports are sports that offer many great benefits.
2.Firstly, they can improve your leadership abilities.
3.It is essential for every player in any team sport to be aware of their roles in the leadership.
4.Secondly, they can promote responsibility because every player should be responsible for the whole team.
5.Thirdly, they can hugely enhance a child’s social life since he or she is going to make many new friends.
6.Team sports also boost self-esteem and therefore increase happiness.
7.There is a Chinese saying, “The person who does not listen to an elder’s advice gets his or her leg broken.”
8.So I think you should do as your parents wish.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序： Firstly，Secondly
表因果关系：So ，since，because  
表并列补充关系：also
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is essential for every player in any team sport to be aware of their roles in the leadership. （it作形式主语，真正的主语的动词不定式to be aware of...）
[高分句型2] Secondly, they can promote responsibility because every player should be responsible for the whole team.(because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型3] There is a Chinese saying, “The person who does not listen to an elder’s advice gets his or her leg broken.” (who引导定语从句)
6．Dear Jim,
I am glad to learn that you would like to exercise to keep fit. I believe running is the best choice. My reasons are as follows.
First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases. What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule. Last but not least, running can improve one’s mood and particularly provide relief from pain or tension. Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby. All in all, I’d like to recommend running as a sport that you can do regularly.
Why not give it a try? Just put on your trainers and get started. Then keep going. I’m sure you will get a lot out of running.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
1.推荐的运动；
2.推荐的理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
keep fit；as follows；benefits from；what’s more；last but not least；take up；all in all
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1.First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases.
2. What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule.
3. Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby.
4. Why not give it a try?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more
3.表因果关系： Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase the body’s flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the risk of diseases.句中含as引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] What’s more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule.句中含情态动词的被动语态和since引导的原因状语从句。
[高分句型3] Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby.句中含if引导的条件状语从句。
7．Dear Jack,
How's everything going? I've been in this new school for a month, but I still find it difficult to get used to the life here.
To be honest, I've met some difficulties. First, I feel lonely here because I'm far away from my family and old friends. Besides, I'm too shy to communicate with my new classmates or teachers. What's worse, it's hard for me to catch up with the English courses, which really upsets me.
Would you be kind enough to offer me some suggestions? I will be grateful if you do so. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jack写封邮件，因为你刚进入高一就遇到了很多困难，写信向他求助。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.告知你所遇到的困难(比如感到孤单、不敢与别人交流、英语学习跟不上等)；
2.恳请他给出建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
get used to; to be honest; lonely; far away from; too…to…; communicate with; catch up with; upset; suggestion; be grateful; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I've been in this new school for a month, but I still find it difficult to get used to the life here.
2. To be honest, I've met some difficulties.
3. First, I feel lonely here because I'm far away from my family and old friends.
4. Besides, I'm too shy to communicate with my new classmates or teachers.
5. What's worse, it's hard for me to catch up with the English courses, which really upsets me.
6. Would you be kind enough to offer me some suggestions?
7. I will be grateful if you do so.
8.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides
3.表转折对比关系：but
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, I feel lonely here because I'm far away from my family and old friends. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] What's worse, it's hard for me to catch up with the English courses, which really upsets me. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
8．Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems getting used to the life in China. I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
First of all，you can turn to your classmates or teachers for help，who can offer some tips on Chinese learning. As for your sleep problem，you'd better listen to some relaxing music，which can help you to fall asleep quickly. What's more, it's important for you to actively talk to others and help others if necessary. In this way，you are likely to make more friends.
I hope my advice can be helpful and that you can enjoy your life here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，李华的班里有一个名叫Tom的交换生，他在中国已经学习三个月，但是依然觉得学习中文很困难、经常失眠且不知道如何交新朋友。要求考生以李华的身份给Tom写一封信，就学习、生活和交友方面等给出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
写作内容：给出建议
要点：
1.向同学或老师请教学习方法；
2.睡前听点音乐；
3.主动和别人交流并提供帮助。
第二步:列提纲
sorry to hear; have problem doing sth.; get used to the life in China; offer some suggestions; turn to sb. for help; offer some tips on sth.; listen to relaxing music; fall asleep quickly; talk actively to others; make more friends; enjoy your life
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm sorry to hear that you have problems getting used to the life in China.
2. I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
3. You can turn to your classmates or teachers for help.
4. You'd better listen to some relaxing music.
5. It's important for you to actively talk to others and help others if necessary.
6. I hope my advice can be helpful and that you can enjoy your life here.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序（供参考）：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end
2.表并列补充关系：As for …, What’s more,
3.表因果关系：In this way
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all，you can turn to your classmates or teachers for help，who can offer some tips on Chinese learning.（who引导非限制性定语）
[高分句型2] As for your sleep problem，you'd better listen to some relaxing music，which can help you to fall asleep quickly.（which引导非限制性定语）
[高分句型3] I hope my advice can be helpful and that you can enjoy your life here.（并列宾语从句）
9．Dear Tom,
From your email, I know you are worried about the situations in your country. I express my sincere concern about you and your family.
As you know, I’ve just gone through such a distressing and tough time, so I’ve got some experience in prevention. I’d like to share it with you. First, you should wear protective masks whenever you are going out. Second, you should wash your hands frequently and properly. Third, you’d better avoid going to crowded and airless places. In addition, it is vital that you should keep a good state of mind and feel optimistic about your life.
I believe the pandemic will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Tom写封邮件，表达在疫情期间对他的关心和建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时和少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 关心和牵挂；
2. 体验和感受；
3. 建议和祝福。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be worried about; sincere concern; go through; protective masks; wash one’s hands frequently and properly; keep a good state of mind; pandemic
第三步：连词成句
1. From your email, I know you are worried about the situations in your country.
2. I express my sincere concern about you and your family.
3. As you know, I’ve just gone through such a distressing and tough time, so I’ve got some experience in prevention.
4. First, you should wear protective masks whenever you are going out.
5. Second, you should wash your hands frequently and properly.
6. Third, you’d better avoid going to crowded and airless places.
7. In addition, it is vital that you should keep a good state of mind and feel optimistic about your life.
8. I believe the pandemic will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Secondly, Third
2.表并列补充关系：In addition
3.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
As you know, I’ve just gone through such a distressing and tough time, so I’ve got some experience in prevention.(运用as引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
In addition, it is vital that you should keep a good state of mind and feel optimistic about your life.(运用主语从句)
10．Dear confused friend,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on your current situation. I quite understand that you are anxious to improve your study and enjoy the colorful extra activities at the same time.
Here are two suggestions for your problem. First, I recommend that you choose your favorite club and give up the other two. Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study. Second, you should get used to balancing your study and extra activities. I am sure that you will keep up with your classmates after properly scheduling your school life.
I hope my advice would be helpful to you. Wish you success in your future study!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给向本校英语报刊 Heart-to-Heart 栏目留言的同学提出建议，帮助她在课外活动和学习间保持平衡，提高学习水平。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 了解该同学课外活动和学习的情况；
2. 给该同学的两条建议；
3.祝福。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
give up sth.; spend…on sth.; focus on sth.; get used to doing sth.; keep up with sth.; be helpful to sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. First, I recommend that you choose your favorite club and give up the other two.
2. Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study.
3. Second, you should get used to balancing your study and extra activities.
4. I am sure that you will keep up with your classmates after properly scheduling your school life.
5. I hope my advice would be helpful to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First, Second
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I quite understand that you are anxious to improve your study and enjoy the colorful extra activities at the same time. 用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study. 动名词短语作主语。