安徽高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

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邀请信1．假如你是李华，你校学生会将举办一场中国围棋比赛。请你写一封电子邮件，向你的美国朋友Bill介绍相关情况，内容包括：1.举办时间和地点；2.介绍围棋：源于中国，历史悠久，开发智力等；3.邀请Bill来观看。要求：1.词数100左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.电子邮件格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中国围棋Go(专有名词需大写G)Bear Bill,Hi! How have you been? I'm writing to tell you a piece of good news.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，你班计划组织主题为“培养毅力（ perseverance）快乐学习” 的远足活动，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请外教Bert，一起参加。内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 远足路线；3. 所需物品。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Dear Mr Bert, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua3．假如你是李华。本周末你校要组织学生参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷(porcelain)展览，你想邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教 Daniel一同参观。请给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1.发出邀请；2.展览的内容；3.时间、地点。注意:1词数100左右2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是李华，某报社英语编辑Mr. Smith邀请你参加英语周报（English weekly）报社组织的一个活动， 请你根据下列内容，写一篇小短文：内容要点：1. 未能参加英语角；2. 简述未能参加的原因；3. 对未来再次参加英语角活动的渴望。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数；Dear Smith,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Lihua5．假定你是李华，你校即将举办“中国民歌节”。请你写封信邀请你的好友Jack参加，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 时间和地点；3. 活动内容。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，你校将于下周五举办跳绳(skipping rope)比赛。请用英语给你校英国交换生Steven写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 目的和形式；3. 设置的奖项。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Steven，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li Hua7．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对中国传统文化感兴趣。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来中国体验春节。内容包括：1. 春节的时间； 2. 庆祝方式；3. 发出邀请注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假如你是李华，你获悉你市将举办摄影展。主题是“40 Years on: Photos show our city now and then”。你根据下面要点给你的网友Bruce写一封电子邮件，请他欣赏。内容包括：1. 照片内容：你们市40年的变化；2. 展出时间、地点；3. 欢迎写出欣赏后的感想。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你是李华。本周末你校要组织学生参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷（porcelain）展览，你想邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教Daniel一同参观。请给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1.发出邀请；2.展览的内容；3.时间、地点。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假如你是李华。春节临近， 你所在的城市将举行剪纸展览。你得知你的外教Jenny对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请写一封邮件，邀请他参观展览。内容主要包括：1. 展览的时间和地点;2. 简要介绍中国剪纸;3. 简要介绍展览内容。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；注意：开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。Dear Jenny,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Hua           1．Dear Bill,Hi! How have you been? I'm writing to tell you a piece of good news.The Students' Union has decided to hold a Go competition in the school reception hall from 3 to 5 p.m. on January 10th.In case that you are unfamiliar, let me briefly introduce it. Go, also known as Chinese game of Go, is an amazing board game that has a long history. As a vital part of Chinese culture and symbol of wisdom, it is quite popular with many Chinese, young and old, for the reason that players can not only develop their intelligence, but also meet like-minded friends.The competition offers us a rare opportunity to compete with and learn from each other. If possible, I would like you to come to experience it yourself. Nowhere else will you get such a golden chance!Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你校学生会将举办一场中国围棋比赛。请你写一封电子邮件，向你的美国朋友Bill介绍相关情况，内容包括：1.举办时间和地点；2.介绍围棋：源于中国，历史悠久，开发智力等；3.邀请Bill来观看。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：a piece of good news (一条好消息)；school reception hall (学接待厅)；briefly introduce (简要介绍)；vital (至关重要的)；like-minded(志趣相投的)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和现在完成时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如In case that you are unfamiliar, let me briefly introduce it.运用了条件状语从句；As a vital part of Chinese culture and symbol of wisdom, it is quite popular with many Chinese, young and old, for the reason that players can not only develop their intelligence, but also meet like-minded friends.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Mr. Bert,I am writing to invite you to join us in a meaningful activity. We are going to have a bike next Sunday, he theme of which is “Developing Perseverance, Learning Happily”.We will set off from the playground at 8:00 am. The first destination is the City Exhibition Building, where we can learn about the culture of our city. Next, the Agricultural Sightseeing Garder in the western suburbs is waiting for us to enjoy its natural scenery. We will have lunch there. At 3 pm, we will return to our schoolYours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你班计划组织主题为“培养毅力（ perseverance）快乐学习” 的远足活动，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请外教Bert，一起参加。内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 远足路线；3. 所需物品。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：join us in a meaningful activity（参加我们有意义的活动）；Developing Perseverance, Learning Happily（培养毅力，快乐学习）；learn about the culture of our city（了解我们城市的文化）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to invite you to join us in a meaningful activity.句中使用动词不定式作宾语补足语；The first destination is the City Exhibition Building, where we can learn about the culture of our city.句中使用where引导非限制性定语从句。3．Dear Daniel,Students in our school will go to the Chinese Porcelain Exhibition held in the City Museum this weekend. Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.It is a great chance for you to enjoy the most beautiful works of porcelain art. Some of them were made by gifted craftsmen from hundreds of years ago. You can be very lucky to see the delicate objects used by the former kings. The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people. Of course, you can also listen to the explanation by scanning QR code beside each exhibit.All students are supposed to gather at the front gate of the City Museum at 9 a.m. on Saturday. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华。本周末你校要组织学生参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷( porcelain)展览，你想邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教 Daniel一同参观。请给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1.发出邀请；2.展览的内容；3.时间、地点。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：the Chinese Porcelain Exhibition(中国陶瓷展览)；take a great interest in (非常感兴趣)；delicate (精致的)；be supposed to(应该)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.非谓语动词的运用；The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Smith,I am terribly sorry to tell you that I couldn’t join in the English corner organized by English weekly last week. That day, my sister would be sent to university. When I heard the good news, I was really happy, so I accompanied her to her university. There was no doubt that I lost such a good opportunity to attend it.      Now she's doing well in her university. But I am dying to have another chance to attend an English corner to improve my spoken English. At the same time, I believe if I have a chance next time, I’ll attend your English corner and leave a good impression on you. I hope you can accept my apology.Best wishes,Yours truly,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是李华，某报社英语编辑Mr. Smith邀请你参加英语周报（English weekly）报社组织的一个活动， 请你根据下列内容，写一篇小短文：内容要点：1. 未能参加英语角；2. 简述未能参加的原因；3. 对未来再次参加英语角活动的渴望。时态应为一般过去时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； accompany（陪伴），attend（参加），English corner（英语角），organize（组织）， opportunity（机会）及apology（道歉）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有join in（参加），accompany sb to somewhere（陪伴某人去某地），be dying to do (渴望做某事)以及leave a good impression on sb（给某人留下一个好印象），而且还使用了状语从句“When I heard the good news, I was really happy, so I accompanied her to her university.”，宾语从句“I believe if I have a chance next time, I’ll attend your English corner and leave a good impression on you.”及“I hope you can accept my apology.”，同位语从句“There was no doubt that I lost such a good opportunity to attend it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。5．Dear Jack,I’m writing to inform you that a Chinese Folk Festival will be held in the People’s Theater of our city next Saturday evening and that a large number of famous Chinese folk song singers will show up and sing there. So far as I know, you’re quite interested in Chinese folk songs. Therefore, I’d like to invite you to attend the concert with me and I just have a spare ticket for you. By the way, the concert will begin at 6: 00 pm and it will last three hours or so. If you’d like to go, I’ll meet you right outside our school gate at 5: 30 pm. Then we’ll walk to the People’s Theater together because it’s quite near to our school. Please let me know your decision before next Friday!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你校即将举办“中国民歌节”。请你写封信邀请你的好友Jack参加，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.时间和地点；3.活动内容。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Chinese Folk Festival (中国民歌节)；in the People’s Theater of our city (在市人民剧院)；So far as I know (据我所知)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用了较多的高级句子。I’m writing to inform you that a Chinese  Folk Festival will be held in the People’s Theater of our city next Saturday evening and that a large number of famous Chinese folk song singers will show up and sing there.句中使用了that引导的宾语从句，且句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；If you’d like to go, I’ll meet you right outside our school gate at 5: 30 pm.句中使用了if引导条件状语从句；Then we’ll walk to the People’s Theater together because it’s quite near to our school.句中使用了because引导的原因状语从句。6．Dear Steven,I have a piece of good news to tell you that there will be a skipping rope competition to be held on the playground of our school next Friday. I sincerely invite you to join in it.The competition will be held in the form of single skipping rope and team skipping rope. The student or the team who skips most will first prize, and many prizes will be given to the players who are in top 10.I hope you can join in it with us. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文考查应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件。【详解】假定你是李华，你校将于下周五举办跳绳(skipping rope)比赛。请用英语给你校英国交换生Steven写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加，信中要写明：1. 时间和地点；2. 目的和形式；3. 设置的奖项。第一步：审题体裁：应用文——邀请信。要点：要包括三个要点——1. 时间和地点；2. 目的和形式；3. 设置的奖项。结构：总分总法第二步：列提纲（重点短语和词汇） a skipping rope competition ；join in；in the form of；look forward to等。第三步：连词成句1.    I have a piece of good news to tell you that there will be a skipping rope competition to be held on the playground of our school next Friday.Congratulations on you .2.    I sincerely invite you to join in it.3.    The competition will be held in the form of single skipping rope and team skipping rope. 4.    The student or the team who skips most will win first prize, and many prizes will be given to the players who are in top 10.5.    I hope you can join in it with us. 6.    I’m looking forward to your reply.第四步：连句成篇第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文格式正确，完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点，应用了很多的语法结构和词汇：I have a piece of good news to tell you that there will be a skipping rope competition to be held on the playground of our school next Friday. 使用了宾语从句和there be句型；The competition will be held in the form of single skipping rope and team skipping rope.使用了被动语态；The student or the team who skips most will win first prize, and many prizes will be given to the players who are in top 10.使用了定语从句。7．Dear Tom,I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. I am writing to invite you to come and experience the Spring Festival.The spring Festival is one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. It usually falls in late January or early February and people celebrate it in different ways. All the family members will get together and have a big feast. Meanwhile, people will visit their relatives and express their best wishes for the new year. Children are the happiest because they usually get red envelopes from their parents and grandparents.If you come, I am sure you will have a lot of fun.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对中国传统文化感兴趣。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来中国体验春节。内容包括：1. 春节的时间； 2. 庆祝方式；3. 发出邀请。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，发出邀请。第二段，1. 春节的时间； 2. 庆祝方式。第三段，表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:  fall, celebrate ,invite you to do sth , traditional Chinese festivals, get together ,have a big feast, express their best wishes.第四步：确定较为高级的句子:because引导的原因状语从句Children are the happiest because they usually get red envelopes from their parents and grandparents. if 引导的条件状语从句If you come, I am sure you will have a lot of fun.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: firstly ,besides, meanwhile.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:because引导的原因状语从句Children are the happiest because they usually get red envelopes from their parents and grandparents. if 引导的条件状语从句If you come, I am sure you will have a lot of fun.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。8．Dear Bruce,A photo exhibition showing the great change of our city will be held this Saturday from 8 am to 4 pm in the Palace of Culture. All the photos taken by some well-known photographers have reflected the changes of our city over the past 40 years.The students, including exchange students, are welcome to attend this exhibition, which will contribute to your understanding of the development of our city. I hope you can show up at the exhibition.After appreciation all the photos, you will be amazed at the great changes of our city. That is, our city is becoming more and more prosperous and people’s life is becoming better and better. I believe you must have your own ideas and if so, do you mind if you share your ideas in the form of an article with me?All the best to you!Yours, Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你获悉你市将举办摄影展。主题是“40 Years on: Photos show our city now and then”。你根据下面要点给你的网友Bruce写一封电子邮件，邀请他来欣赏。内容包括：1. 照片内容：你们市40年的变化；2. 展出时间、地点；3.欢迎写出欣赏后的感想。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：photo exhibition(摄影展)；the Palace of Culture(文化宫)；reflect(反映)；attend(参加)；contribute to(有助于)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如The students, including exchange students, are welcome to attend this exhibition, which will contribute to your understanding of the development of our city.运用非限定性定语从句；I believe you must have your own ideas and if so, do you mind if you share your ideas in the form of an article with me?运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。9．Dear Daniel,Students in our school will go to the Chinese Porcelain Exhibition held in the City Museum this weekend. Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.It is a great chance for you to enjoy the most beautiful works of porcelain art. Some of them were made by gifted craftsmen from hundreds of years ago. You can be very lucky to see the delicate object used by the former kings. The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people. Of course, you can also listen to the explanation by scanning QR code beside each exhibit.All students are supposed to gather at the front gate of the City Museum at 9 a.m. on Saturday. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请对中国文化感兴趣的外教Daniel一同参观在博物馆举行的中国陶瓷（porcelain）展览。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.发出邀请；2.展览的内容；3.时间、地点。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be delighted to; grateful; be supposed to do; look forward to第三步：连词成句Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us.You can be very lucky to see the delicate object used by the former kings. The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people. All students are supposed to gather at the front gate of the City Museum at 9 a.m. on Saturday. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句，如The commentators will make vivid explanations about the exhibits, from which you can have a good understanding of the wisdom of Chinese people.这句话from which引导非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。10．Dear Jenny,How is everything? Recently, with the Chinese New Year approaching, an exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting will be held in our city library this weekend. Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to the exhibition.Paper-cutting is a Chinese folk art with a long history, which dates back to the time of the Northern and Southern Dynasty. Paper cuts are not only used for patterns on clothing, decoration but for religious purposes and have been an important part of everyday life in China. As for the display itself, you will have the chance to enjoy all kinds of beautiful paper cuts. What’s more, you can’t miss the DIY part. I’m sure it’s worth a visit.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一封邀请信。假如你是李华，请写一封邮件邀请外教Jenny参观剪纸展览。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 展览的时间和地点；2. 简要介绍中国剪纸；3. 简要介绍展览内容。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：traditional Chinese culture， date back to ，be used for ，as for， worth a visit　，look forward to。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then， Finally， In the end，At last， Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition， as well as， not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to the exhibition. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句；Paper-cutting is a Chinese folk art with a long history, which dates back to the time of the Northern and Southern Dynasty. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了with的复合结构：with the Chinese New Year approaching；使用了一些固定词组，如：date back to ， worth a visit ，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。