安徽高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假如你是李华，你的朋友Xiao Dong给你写了一封邮件，说他进入高中以来，感觉学习压力很大，不适应新的生活学习环境。现请你给他回封邮件，给他提一些建议。

要求:1. 词数:100词左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Xiao Dong,

I feel sorry to hear that you are suffering from the great stress.

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Yours,

Li Hua

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假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Ann最近因为父母工作的关系转到了新的班级，她在与朋友相处方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交到好朋友且维持友谊的方法。你的建议内容如下：

1.学会倾听

2.有分歧时让步

3.多陪伴

注意：1.词数100左右

2.开头及结尾为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：compromise 让步

Dear Ann,

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Sincerely yours,

Lihua

3．假设你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；

2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；

3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；   2. 可适当增加细节。

提示词：  adapt to   适应

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4．假设你学校机器人兴趣小组组长李华，你的美国朋友Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将与9月底在上海举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

内容包含：（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you

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I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Kate即将毕业，不久前给你发邮件就是否到中国工作询问你的意见，请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：

1.建议她可以来中国；

2.阐述你的理由；

3.承诺可提供帮助。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Kate,

I’m glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。他在信中说：由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给他回信，内容如下：

1.向Jenny表示问候和安慰（你的同学和你面临同样的问题，所以不必过于担心）；

2.针对他的问题提出以下建议：

⑴放学后邀请同学一起参加活动，这有助于你们互相更好地了解；

⑵你的同学遇到麻烦时，你去帮助他们。你遇到困难时向同学求助；

⑶你对友谊的理解。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jenny,

I am really sorry to hear_____________________________________________________________________

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7．假定你是李华，你的美国网友Richard一家计划今年夏天来安徽度假，向你了解相关情况。请你用英语给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 建议他们游黄山、听黄梅、品徽茶；

2. 推荐理由（不少于两点）；

3. 温馨提示（天气、交通等）。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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8．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友David来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试 (Chinese Proficiency Test)，对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 备考建议；3. 你的祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假定是李华，刚刚收到母校的《英语校报》编辑的一封征稿书信，就关于“健康常识”英文栏目内主题为“How to have a healthy lifestyle in senior high school”的专栏写点建议，请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一封回信。

1. 感谢受邀为此专栏撰文；

2. 给出健康生活方式的一些建议；

3. 表达个人期望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear editor:

Thanks for giving me the chance to ___________________________________________________________

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Sincerely yours

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想来中国旅行，他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐高铁。

建议理由：

1.便捷、准点；

2.舒适、安全；

3.购票方便、价格适宜。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：中国高铁 CRH (China Railway High-speed)；自助售票机 self-service ticket machine

Dear Peter,

I’m expecting you to come to China. _________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．I feel sorry to hear that you are suffering from the great stress. However, this situation is not so difficult to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

First, why not turn to your teachers and classmates? If you do this, I’m sure you will soon get used to the new school life. Second, taking more exercise can not only rest your brain but also build up your bodies. As far as I’m concerned, it’s really helpful to your health and study as well. Last but not least, it’s a good way to believe in yourself, always thinking that you’re making progress little by little. That way you will gain more confidence, which is the key to getting your study improved.

I do hope you find these ideas of great use. And I do believe, with your trying, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要假如你是李华，你的朋友Xiao Dong给你写了一封邮件，说他进入高中以来，感觉学习压力很大，不适应新的生活学习环境。现请你给他回封邮件，给他提一些建。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：tips→suggestions

第二、此外：Second →besides / what’s more

一点一点地：little by little→bit by bit

成功：manage to do→ succeed in doing

2.句式拓展

简单句变倒装句

原句：Second, taking more exercise can not only rest your brain but also build up your bodies.

拓展句：Second,  not only can taking more exercise rest your brain but also it can build up your bodies.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 That way you will gain more confidence, which is the key to getting your study improved.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 Last but not least, it’s a good way to believe in yourself, always thinking that you’re making progress little by little. （运用了it作形式主语，to do引导真正宾语以及that引导宾语从句）

2．Dear Ann,

I am delighted to have  received your letter. In your last letter you mentioned that you had some problems in making and maintaining new friends  in  a new class.

From where I am standing, I suggest that one important thing to remember when trying to get along with other is to listen. When someone is talking to you, look at them.  Above all, dont interrupt them. Another thing I want to remind you is that you should compromise, when you don’t agree with each other, one or both  of you should agree to give up something to find a solution .Last but not least you should keep in mind that it takes time and energy to build new and good re lationship. You cannot &pect to become friends with someone if you dont spend time with them.

I sincerely hope that what I have suggested can be helpful for Iyou. am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封建议信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Ann最近因为父母工作的关系转到了新的班级，她在与朋友相处方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交到好朋友且维持友谊的方法。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如delighted高兴的，maintain维持，get along with与…相处，look at看，Above all首先，interrupt打断，compromise妥协，agree with同意，give up放弃，Last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的，keep in mind记住。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：In your last letter you mentioned that you had some problems in making and maintaining new friends in a new class.宾语从句的运用；From where I am standing, I suggest that one important thing to remember when trying to get along with other is to listen.宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

3．Dear Susan，

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice. First, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。给她回复邮件提出建议。全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主。

【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件，给Susan回邮件提出适应新生活的具体建议。全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词。adapt to，take one’s advice，communicate with other，、make some friends，take an active part in all kinds of activities。写作时注意邮件的格式和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如having trouble (in) doing sth、communicate with other、forget your loneliness等等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句……which will help to make life more interesting.同时文章的一些串联成分，如first of all、secondly、thirdly等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。

4．Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Shanghai at the end of September. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.

With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.

I' m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津的身份，代表兴趣小组给美国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件。写作背景：Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能亮赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能高赛。

【详解】写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包含：（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。写作时考生要注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如take part in，on behalf of，intend to，join in，not only …but also ….，participate in；还运用一些佳句，如：Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition.这句话运用了非谓语动词；With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us.这句话用了定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如and等等。

5．Dear Kate,

I’m glad to have received the letter you sent last week. I have been thinking about the question you asked me. From my point of view, you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies.

For one reason, China’s development over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young. What’s more, what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays. In fact, many big companies in my city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, China is a country with such different cultures and traditions from the past that many foreigners enjoy living and working here. Why not come, and join them I’m sure you’ll adapt to the environment quickly. If you come, I will do what I can to help you. So what are you waiting for?

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Kate即将毕业，不久前给你发邮件就是否到中国工作询问你的意见，请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：建议她可以来中国；阐述你的理由；承诺可提供帮助。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：From my point of view（从我的角度）；China’s development over the past 30 years（中国最近30年的发展）；adapt to the environment quickly（很快适应环境）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays.句中使用主语从句做主语；China is a country with such different cultures and traditions from the past that many foreigners enjoy living and working here.句中使用such---that引导的结果状语从句；If you come, I will do what I can to help you.条件句和宾语从句完美结合；另外，From my point of view, For one reason, What’s more, In fact, For another reason,等的运用为文章增色添彩。

6．Dear Jenny,

   I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it.

There is also something that you can do to change this situation. First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others. Then, help others when they are in trouble, and ask them to help you when you have difficulty.

As far as I am concerned, life in senior high school is stressful. Many students haven’t used to it, but I am determined to overcome all the difficulties and learn every subject well. I believe, you will also make many new friends in the new school!

【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信。假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。他在信中说：由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给他回信，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：too much 太多，invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事，after school放学后，each other彼此，communicate with交流，be in trouble处于困境中。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school.宾语从句的运用；There is also something that you can do to change his situation.定语从句的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

7．Dear Richard，

How are you doing? I'm glad to hear that your family and you are planning to go to Anhui Province on holiday．There are some suggestions about this travel I'd like to offer to you before you arrive．

Huangshan is a must for every visitor to Anhui, which is famous at home and abroad with its amazing scenery．At the same time, you can enjoy Huangmei Opera, a special of Anhui, equal to Peking Opera in China, while drinking Anhui Tea with its unique wonderful taste．

Additionally, you can visit some websites to learn the local weather conditions and transportation concerned in advance to be well prepared for this trip．

Looking forward to your coming．

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】这是一封书信作文题。要求以李华的名义用英语给美国朋友Richard介绍一下安徽的旅游景点、特点及注意事项。

【详解】根据写作要求，首先要先欢迎Richard来安徽旅游，第二段介绍向朋友推荐的旅游项目，游黄山，听黄梅，品徽茶，在推荐的同时要写明理由，注意至少要有两点；第三段提示朋友天气、交通方面的注意事项。

写作时注意准确运用时态，本文时态以现在时为主，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，词数适当，同时使用了较多的高级表达方式。如：which is famous at home and abroad with its amazing scenery．使用了非限制性定语从句；while drinking Anhui Tea with its unique wonderful taste．状语从句的省略。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下文转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

8．Dear David,

I have known from your letter that you will take Chinese Proficiency Test, which makes you very nervous. That’s quite normal and you are not alone, so don’t worry too much about it.

What you should do is to make full preparations for the test. Firstly, get familiar with the issues related to CPT, including the test targets, test procedures, test content and rules of testing centers etc. What’s more, practice makes perfect. If you practice continuously every day, your language ability will improve steadily.

Good luck. Work hard and I really hope you will get a good score in the text.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】题目要求假定你是李华。你的英国朋友David来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试 (Chinese Proficiency Test)，对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 备考建议；3. 你的祝愿。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，并且这个话题是学生生活中很熟悉的话题。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段说明自己知道了朋友David目前遇到的问题；第二段表示安慰，并且提出实用的备考建议；第三段表达自己的祝愿。2. 时态：一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人、二和三人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。

【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句I have known from your letter that you will take Chinese Proficiency Test, which makes you very nervous.和宾语从句Work hard and I really hope you will get a good score in the text.

9．Dear editor,

Thanks for giving me the chance to write the article for the column. I’m glad to share my opinions on how to have a healthy lifestyle in senior high school.

It is well-known that a healthy lifestyle is extremely important for everyone, especially those who are studying in senior high school. Personally, senior high students can do the followings to have a healthy lifestyle: Firstly, form a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. Secondly, eat a balanced diet and do some exercise regularly. Last but not least, you should have a positive attitude towards life, which can help you keep happy and forget your trouble.

Finally, I hope these suggestions above can be helpful to you and that I can receive your good news soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定是李华，刚刚收到母校的《英语校报》编辑的一封征稿书信，就关于“健康常识”英文栏目内主题为“How to have a healthy lifestyle in senior high school”的专栏写点建议，请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一封回信。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：1. 感谢受邀为此专栏撰文；2. 给出健康生活方式的一些建议；

3. 表达个人期望。抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般现在时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意:  提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: form a good habit 养成好习惯，Last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的。还使用了定语从句Last but not least, you should have a positive attitude towards life, which can help you keep happy and forget your trouble.和宾语从句Finally, I hope these suggestions above can be helpful to you and that I can receive your good news soon.

等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。

10．Dear Peter，

    I’m expecting you to come to China. When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which have been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.

    It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to go. The CRH trains are spacious, comfortable and run at high speed. They arrive on schedule and guarantee the safety of travelers. It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable. It offers first-class services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Peter回信，因为他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐高铁。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

到达：reach→arrive

确保：assurance→guarantee

此外：in addition→besides

旅途：trip→journey

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable.

拓展句：

It’s easy to get tickets through many channels,because you can buy them by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable.

【高分句型1】When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which have been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.句中when引导时间状语从句，并且which引导非限制性定语从句.

【高分句型2】It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to go.并列句中含有wherever引导的让步状语从句。