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    这是一份黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练:邀请信,共21页。
    邀请信
    1.假定你是李华,你校将举办中加文化节。请写封邮件邀请你的加拿大朋友Helen参加,内容包括:
    1. 文化节的意义;
    2. 活动安排;
    3. 邀请Helen表演节目。
    注意:1. 词数100左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考词汇:auditorium 礼堂
    Dear Helen,
    _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    2.你是我校学生会主席李华,现向外国友人 John Smith 发出邀请,希望他来参加我校六月份举办的科技艺术节开幕式。邀请函封面已给出,请写出里面邀请内容。
    内容包括:
    1. 开幕式的时间,地点;
    2. 艺术节的具体内容
    注意:
    1. 词数:100 字左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    参考词汇:科技艺术节 Tech Art Festival

    5 June 2021
    Mr. John Smith
    14 New Road
    Surrey
    TWI4 2EH
    Dear Mr. Smith,
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua
    Chairman of the Student Union
    Heilong Jiang Provincial Experimental High School
    3.假定你是李华,你的英国留学生朋友Jason参加了“留学生汉字书法竞赛( Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students)"并取得了第一名的好成绩,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
    1.表示祝贺;
    2.肯定比赛结果和其付出的努力;
    3.提出交流学习书法心得的邀请。
    注意:
    1. 写作词数应为100词左右;
    2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
    Dear Jason,
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    4.假设你是校篮球队队长李华,你的美国朋友Peter擅长篮球,你打算邀请他加入篮球队,参加6月底的中学生篮球联赛(Middle School Basketball match),请给他写一封电子邮件,内容如下:
    1. 比赛信息;
    2. 邀请他的原因;
    3. 训练计划。
    注意: 1.词数100左右。
    2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
    5.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda很喜欢中国丝绸。正巧你市于4月20日至26日举行“中国丝绸文化节”,你想邀请她同去,请你给她写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
    (1)写信目的;
    (2)介绍文化节(主题、展览品、意义等);
    (3)约定见面时间、地点。
    注意:(1)词数80左右;
    (2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Linda,
    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    6.红旗社区针对本社区居民垃圾分类情况,计划于下周举行一次关于垃圾分类的讲座,请你代表社区写一封公开信,内容包括:
    1 .垃圾分类的好处; 2.讲座具体时间和地点; 3.邀请居民参加。
    注意:1. 词数80词左右;开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考词汇:垃圾分类garbage classification
    Dear sir or madam,
    I' m writing this letter to call on attention to the community lecture concerning garbage classification.
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours
    Hongqi Community
    7.假如你是李华,周末打算和同学去骑行锻炼,请给你校留学生Eric 写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
    1.具体安排
    2.注意事项
    注意: 1. 词数100词左右:
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Eric,
    _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Looking forward to your early reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua.
    8.假如你叫李明,在伦敦学习期间,你待在Jonathan的家里。请你给Jonathan写一封电子邮
    件表示感谢,并邀请他明年暑假来你家。
    内容要点:
    1.感谢Jonathan让你住在他家;
    2.他们给你创造了一个很好的家庭氛围;
    3.明年你将中学毕业,届时你将有两个月的假期,你和家人诚邀Jonathan暑期来哈尔滨度假。
    注意:
    1.词数:100词左右。
    2.内容应包括以上要点,并适当增加细节,以使内容连贯.
    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    9.假定你是李华,你校上周刚举办了“汉服节”(the Hanfu Festival)活动,你的外国朋友Peter对此非常感兴趣,请你给他写封信。信的内容包括:
    1. 活动的目的:了解汉服,传承传统文化;
    2. 活动内容安排:主题讲座,汉服舞蹈表演等;
    3. 活动在同学中引起的反响。
    注意:1. 词数120左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
    Dear Peter.
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    10.假如你是李华,你市戏剧院响应国家在校园促进传统曲文化的号召,将在12月20日表演传统京剧《霸王别姬》,学生可免费观看,届时会有著名的北京京刷演员出席表演。你的朋友Tom对京剧很感兴趣,因此你想邀请他来观看演出。请你给他写封信内容包括:
    1. 演出时间、地点;2. 演出活动安排与期望;
    注意:1. 词数100左右;
    2. 开头已为你写好,不计入总字数。《霸王别姬》 Farewell My Concubine (妃子)
    Dear Tom,
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yours,
    Li Hua










    1.One possible version:
    Dear Helen,
    Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday, I can’t wait to invite you to the festival and here is a brief introduction.
    This cultural festival aims to enrich our school life and raise cultural awareness through various forms of appealing activities, such a talent show and paper-cutting.  A party is arranged in the afternoon, so could you bring us a performance, which is sure to brighten the festival?
    I’d be very glad if you could make it.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给加拿大朋友Helen写信,邀请她参加学校即将举办的中加文化节,并告知其相关信息。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    旨在做某事:intend to do sth.→aim to do sth.
    各种各样的:a variety of→various
    高兴的:delighted→glad
    有吸引力的:attractive→appealing
    2.句型拓展
    同义句
    原句:This cultural festival aims to enrich our school life and raise cultural awareness through various forms of appealing activities, such a talent show and paper-cutting.
    拓展句:Aiming to to enrich our school life and raise cultural awareness, this cultural festival will include various forms of appealing activities, such as a talent show and paper-cutting.
    【点睛】[高分句型1]Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday, I can’t wait to invite you to the festival and here is a brief introduction.(运用了现在分词作原因状语和that引导的宾语从句)
    [高分句型2]A party is arranged in the afternoon, so could you bring us a performance, which is sure to brighten the festival?(运用which引导非限制性定语从句)
    2.Dear Mr. Smith,
    Heilong Jiang Provincial Experimental High School requests the honour of your presence at the opening of Tech Art Festival on the twelfth of June. The event will begin at School Hall at 6 pm with a welcome address and then it’s expected to last two hours.
    Tech Art will run from the twelfth to the sixteenth of June and will feature the works of over one hundred of our students. Visitors will be able to see and experience a wide variety of artworks from 3D sculptures to artworks made out of phone and computer Parts.
    We do hope you are able to join us at this event.
    Please reply to confirm your attendance.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua
    Chairman of the Student Union
    Heilong Jiang Provincial Experimental High School
    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生向外国友人 John Smith 发出邀请,希望他来参加学校六月份举办的科技艺术节开幕式。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    要求:request→require
    开始:begin→start
    各种各样的:a variety of=various
    预计:expect→predict
    2.句式拓展
    简单句变复合句
    原句:The event will begin at School Hall at 6 pm with a welcome address and then it’s expected to last two hours.
    拓展句:The event, which is expected to last two hours, will begin at School Hall at 6 pm with a welcome address.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] Visitors will be able to see and experience a wide variety of artworks from 3D sculptures to artworks made out of phone and computer Parts. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
    [高分句型2] Tech Art will run from the twelfth to the sixteenth of June, featuring the works of over one hundred of our students. (运用了现在分词作状语)
    3.Dear Jason,
    I'm delighted to hear that you have won first place in the Chinese calligraphy Competition for International Students. And I'm writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
    I think you deserve the prize. For a long time, you have shown great interest in Chinese culture, especially Chinese calligraphy. I know you always refer to calligraphy books, learn from masters and keep practicing writing Chinese characters. It's your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning the championship!
    I hope we can make great progress in calligraphy together. Please tell me when you are free, so that we can exchange our experience of learning it.
    Looking forward to your early reply!
    【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给留学生朋友Jason写祝贺信,并且交流学习书法心得。
    【详解】1. 词汇积累
    对…有兴趣:be interested in→show interest in
    激情:excitement→passion
    促成:lead→contribute to
    看:read→refer to
    2.句式拓展
    合并简单句
    原句:I think you deserve the prize. For a long time, you have shown great interest in Chinese culture, especially Chinese calligraphy
    拓展句:For a long time, you have shown great interest in Chinese culture, especially Chinese calligraphy, so you deserve the prize.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] It's your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning the championship! (运用了that引导的强调句)
    [高分句型2] I'm delighted to hear that you have won first place in the Chinese calligraphy Competition for International Students. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
    4.Dear Chris,
    Our city will witness a great event at the end of June, Middle School Basketball match. As head of our school basketball team, I’m writing to invite you to join our team and show your talent.
    There are ten basketball teams participating in this competition and the winning team will have the opportunity to go to the national basketball match. Knowing that you are good at playing basketball and have rich experience in basketball games, I’m sure we will definitely have good performance in the game. We have two months to prepare for the game. Therefore, I plan to have basketball training in the gym every Wednesday and Friday after school.
    I sincerely hope you can be one of us. Looking forward to your reply.
    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给擅长篮球的美国朋友Peter,写一封电子邮件邀请他加入校篮球队,参加6月底的中学生篮球联赛(Middle School Basketball match)。
    【详解】第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量可用一般将来时。
    结构:总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:
    1. 比赛信息;
    2. 邀请他的原因;
    3. 训练计划。
    第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
    witness a great event, at the end of, invite sb.to do, show your talent, participate in, have rich experience in , have good performance in the game, prepare for the game, plan to have basketball training,look forward to
    第三步:连词成句
    1.Our city will witness a great event at the end of June, Middle School Basketball match.
    2.I’m writing to invite you to join our team and show your talent.
    3.There are ten basketball teams participating in this competition.
    4. Knowing that you are good at playing basketball and have rich experience in basketball games, I’m sure we will definitely have good performance in the game.
    5. We have two months to prepare for the game.
    6. I plan to have basketball training in the gym every Wednesday and Friday after school.
    7. Looking forward to your reply.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    表因果关系:Therefore
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
    【点睛】[高分句型1]There are ten basketball teams participating in this competition and the winning team will have the opportunity to go to the national basketball match.(“participating in this competition”为现在分词短语作后置定语,修饰名词teams)
    [高分句型2]Knowing that you are good at playing basketball and have rich experience in basketball games, I’m sure we will definitely have good performance in the game.(“Knowing... in basketball games,”为现在分词短语作状语, “that...为宾语从句”)
    5.Dear Linda,
    Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
    Its theme is "China surprises the world with splendid silk". At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.
    Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall? I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Linda写封邮件,因她喜欢中国丝绸,邀请她同去参观市里于4月20日至26日举办的 “中国丝绸文化节”。
    【详解】第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在进行时。
    结构:总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:
    1. 写信目的;
    2. 介绍文化节;
    1)主题
    2)展览品
    3)意义
    3. 约定见面时间、地点。
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    be interested in Chinese silk; a Chinese Silk Culture Festival; from April 20th to 26th; its theme; "China surprises the world with splendid silk"; the knowledge of silk history; various delicate silk products; some elegant silk dresses; broaden our horizons; make a quantity of friends; meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall
    第三步:连词成句
    1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
    2. Its theme is "China surprises the world with splendid silk".
    3. At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.
    4. Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.
    5. Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall?
    6. I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
    4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
    【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.(现在分词作状语)
    [高分句型2] At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.(介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
    [高分句型3] Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.(半倒装句)
    6.Dear sir or madam,
    I' m writing this letter to call on attention to the community lecture concerning garbage classification. Given that most neighbors fail to classify garbage properly though they really try to, our community will organize this lecture in an attempt to guide this deed.
    Garbage classification is of great significance. Firstly, not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but more space originally occupied by wasteland will be spared. Secondly, we can undeniably make a difference by taking advantage of recyclable garbage
    To fulfill your obligation to live an eco-life, come and join in the lecture to be given at 3 p. m. next Sunday on the playground of Hongqi Primary School. Only with combined efforts can we make our neighborhood better.
    Yours
    Hongqi Community
    【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。要求考生代表社区写一封公开信,就下周举行的关于垃圾分类的讲座进行说明。
    【详解】第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
    结构:三段式
    第一段写讲座的目的;第二段写垃圾分类的好处;第三段邀请居民积极参加。
    要求:
    1 .垃圾分类的好处;
    2.讲座具体时间和地点;
    3.邀请居民参加。
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    garbage classification (垃圾分类);fail to(不能);in an attempt to(试图);be of great significance(意义重大的);cope with(处理)。
    第三步:连词成句
    I' m writing this letter to call on attention to the community lecture concerning garbage classification.
    Most neighbors fail to classify garbage properly.
    Our community will organize this lecture in an attempt to guide us.
    Garbage classification is of great significance.
    It can cope with pollution issue effectively.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    1.表文章结构顺序:Firstly, Secondly
    2.表并列补充关系: not only…but
    3.表转折对比关系: though引导让步状语从句
    4.表因果、条件关系:Given that,Only with
    5.表目的关系:in an attempt to, To fulfill(不定式表目的)
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,注意文意连贯和句式的多样性。
    【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but more space originally occupied by wasteland will be spared.该句使用了倒装句。
    [高分句型2] To fulfill your obligation to live an eco-life, come and join in the lecture to be given at 3 p. m. next Sunday on the playground of Hongqi Primary School.第一个动词不定式(To fulfill)作目的状语,第二个(to live an eco-life)和第三个(to be given)动词不定式作后置定语,分别修饰obligation和lecture,巧妙使用非谓语动词形式,使得文章句式丰富。
    7.Dear Eric,
    To relieve the stress from study, I am going to cycle this weekend with my classmates. I'm writing to invite you to join us.
    This activity will last about four hours. Therefore, it is advised that you take some food, fruits as well as some water. For the sake of safety, wearing sports clothes and shoes suitable for cycling is a must. We are to meet at the school gate at 7 am this Saturday. If you are interested in it, don't hesitate to contact me.
    Looking forward to your early reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua.
    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据要求,给你校留学生Eric 写一封邮件,告诉他周末打算和同学去骑行锻炼的活动,邀请他参加。
    【详解】第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
    结构:总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:
    1.具体安排
    2.注意事项
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    relieve; stress; cycle; invite; join ; activity; last; therefore; advise; as well as; for the sake of; safety; sports clothes and shoes; suitable for; a must; be interested in it; don't hesitate to; contact.
    第三步:连词成句
    1.To relieve the stress from study, I am going to cycle this weekend with my classmates.
    2.I'm writing to invite you to join us.
    3.This activity will last about four hours.
    4.Therefore, it is advised that you take some food, fruits as well as some water.
    5.For the sake of safety, wearing sports clothes and shoes suitable for cycling is a must.
    6.We are to meet at the school gate at 7 am this Saturday.
    7.If you are interested in it, don't hesitate to contact me.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    1.表因果关系Therefore, For the sake of.
    2.表并列补充关系:as well as
    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but. (供参考)
    4.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Secondly, Thirdly. (供参考)
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
    【点睛】[高分句型1] Therefore, it is advised that you take some food, fruits as well as some water. (使用it作形式主语,真正的主语为that引导的主语从句。)
    [高分句型2] For the sake of safety, wearing sports clothes and shoes suitable for cycling is a must. (使用动名词作主语。)
    [高分句型3] If you are interested in it, don't hesitate to contact me. (使用if引导条件状语从句。)
    8.Dear Jonathan,
    I can't tell you how much I appreciated your kindness in letting me stay at your home while I was in London. It was a delight to see a loving family. You kept me company and created a great home atmosphere for me. I shall always treasure the time when we were together.
    Next summer, I will graduate from senior high school and it will be about two months before I go to university, so  my parents and I would really like you to come here on vacation. There are a lot of beautiful and historic places in Xian. I'm sure you will like it. Meanwhile, we will have a nice time and enjoy ourselves again.
    Finally, looking forward to your reply. Please send my best regards to your parents!
    Yours,
    Li Ming
    【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件向Jonathan表示感谢,并邀请他明年暑假来你家。
    【详解】第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时态和一般将来时态,少量一般现在时态。
    要求:1.感谢Jonathan让你住在他家;
    2.他们给你创造了一个很好的家庭氛围;
    3.明年你将中学毕业,届时你将有两个月的假期,你和家人诚邀Jonathan暑期来哈尔滨度假。
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    appreciate; delight; treasure the time; keep me company; home atmosphere; graduate from; on vacation; historic places; have a nice time; look forward to
    第三步:连词成句
    1. I can't tell you how much I appreciated your kindness in letting me stay at your home while I was in London.
    2. It was a delight to see a loving family.
    3. You kept me company and created a great home atmosphere for me.
    4. I shall always treasure the time when we were together.
    5. Next summer, I will graduate from senior high school and it will be about two months before I go to university, so my parents and I would really like you to come here on vacation.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇
    1.表文章结构顺序: Finally
    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition,As well as, not only…but (also)(供参考)
    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although, In spite of+n/doing, Some…, while others…(供参考)
    4.表因果关系: So
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
    【点睛】[高分句型1]I can't tell you how much I appreciated your kindness in letting me stay at your home while I was in London. 此句中使用how much引导宾语从句;while引导时间状语从句。
    [高分句型2] I shall always treasure the time when we were together. 此句使用when引导的定语从句。
    [高分句型3]Next summer, I will graduate from senior high school and it will be about two months before I go to university, so my parents and I would really like you to come here on vacation. 此句由四个简单句构成,分别由and,before和so进行连接构成了复杂而又高级的复合句。
    9.Dear Peter:
    How are you these days? Last week, the Hanfu Festival was held in our school successfully. Aware that you are interested in it, I’d like to share with you a brief introduction.
    To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted. We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu. In addition, and exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us as a feast for the eyes.
    The festival has won good comments. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture. I am certain you will be struck by it.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Jim写封邮件,邀请他下周为大家做一次关于如何加强英语听说的专题讲座。
    【详解】第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时和少量现在完成时和一般现在时。
    结构:总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:
    1. 活动的目的:了解汉服,传承传统文化;
    2. 活动内容安排:主题讲座,汉服舞蹈表演等;
    3. 活动在同学中引起的反响。
    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
    the Hanfu Festival,be interested in,share with,enrich sb’s knowledge,promote,conduct,attend lecture,in addition,a feast for the eye,good comment,take pride in,intelligence,be struck by等等。
    第三步:连词成句
    1.    Last week, the Hanfu Festival was held in our school successfully.
    2.    Aware that you are interested in it, I’d like to share with you a brief introduction.
    3.    To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted.
    4.    We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu.
    5.    In addition, and exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us as a feast for the eyes.
    6.    Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
    7.    I am certain you will be struck by it.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    表并列补充关系:In addition
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
    【点睛】[高分句型1]
    To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted.使用了不定式作目的状语;
    [高分句型2]
    We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu.使用了which引导非限制定语从句;
    [高分句型3]
    Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture.使用了形容词短语作伴随状语。
    10.Dear Tom,
    I’m more than delighted to tell you that to promote traditional opera in schools, the city theatre will provide an opera for us students to watch for free. Knowing that you are interested in Peking Opera, I’m writing to invite you to watch it with me.
    The traditional opera called Farewell My Concubine will be performed at the hall of the city theatre at 7 p.m. on December 20th. Meanwhile, some famous Peking Opera performers coming from Beijing will join in the performance, which will surely make the audience excited. I’m certain that not only will it be a real feast but can help you have a better understanding of Peking Opera. It is such a good opportunity that you shall never miss it.
    I would be more than pleased if you could accept my invitation and come.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    【分析】这是一篇应用文。文章主要使写一封邀请信,邀请朋友Tom来观看演出。
    【详解】第一步:审题
    体裁:应用文
    时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时。
    结构:总分法
    总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
    要求:
    1.表示问候;
    2.演出时间、地点;
    3.演出活动安排与期望。
    第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
    more than delighted to do;promote traditional opera;for free;be interested in;invite sb. to do sth.;come from;join in the performance;not only…but…;have a better understanding of;more than pleased
    第三步:连词成句
    1. I’m more than delighted to tell you that to promote traditional opera in schools, the city theatre will provide an opera for us students to watch for free
    2. Knowing that you are interested in Peking Opera, I’m writing to invite you to watch it with me.
    3. The traditional opera called Farewell My Concubine will be performed at the hall of the city theatre at 7 p.m. on December 20th.
    4. Meanwhile, some famous Peking Opera performers coming from Beijing will join in the performance, which will surely make the audience excited.
    5. China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades, and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves.
    6. I’m certain that not only will it be a real feast but can help you have a better understanding of Peking Opera.
    7. It is such a good opportunity that you shall never miss it.
    8. I would be more than pleased if you could accept my invitation and come.
    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
    4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
    第五步:润色修改
    【点睛】
    范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:Knowing that you are interested in Peking Opera, I’m writing to invite you to watch it with me.中that引导宾语从句;Meanwhile, some famous Peking Opera performers coming from Beijing will join in the performance, which will surely make the audience excited.中which引导非限制性定语从句;也使用了特殊句式,如:I’m certain that not only will it be a real feast but can help you have a better understanding of Peking Opera.中not only后面使用了部分倒装。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

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