黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练:建议信
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建议信1.假定你是李华,在英国做交换生,你所在的中学要举办国际文化周活动,现就活动所用展品向全校征集建议。请你给负责人Mr. Jefferson写信。内容包括:1.推荐一种中国传统艺术品;2.推荐原因;3.期待回复。注意:1.词数100词左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.假如你是李华,你校学生会主席,请代表学生会写一封倡议书。近日,共享单车(shared bicycles)出现在大街小巷,方便了人们的出行。请号召同学们在上学期间以及即将到来的暑假多骑车出行。内容要点如下:1. 骑车的益处;2. 骑车需要注意的问题;3. 建议把单车作为常用交通工具。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear schoolmates, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The Students’ UnionJune 30, 20203.假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信,要点如下:1. 介绍活动内容;2. 邀请他表演节目;3. 请他提出活动建议。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear John,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua4.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jerry 正在中国留学。他计划利用暑假游历全国各地,以加深对中国文化的了解,因此发邮件来询问你的意见。鉴于当前疫情形势,请你给他回一封邮件。要点包括:1.你的建议(去旅行或者不去);2.你的理由(至少两条);3.表达期待。注意:1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 词数 100 左右。5.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友John刚转入一所寄宿学校,他发来电子邮件向你询问如何与室友融洽相处。请根据以下内容,给他回一封电子邮件。要点:1.你的建议;2.说明理由;3.表达祝愿。注意:1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear John,I’m very glad to hear you’re studying at a new boarding school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6.假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tim想在寒假时到中国北京旅游,于是发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:1. 推荐北京这个城市;2. 给出推荐理由;3. 要提及喝茶。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇:Tiananmen Squsre ; the Great Wall; the Summer PalaceDear Tim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua7.近年来,随着科技发展,电子产品越来越多,学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假定你是李华,代表校书法协会,为了让同学们重视书写,写一封倡议书,内容包括:1.减少对电子产品的依赖,多动手记笔记:2.养成练书法和写日记的习惯。注意:1. 词数100左右:2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.假设你是光华中学高三学生李华,你班英国交换生Jim要参加面向外国友人举办的“点赞中国”活动,向你寻求帮助,希望通过亲身体验,更好地认识中国。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1. 推荐他做一件事;2. 说明推荐的理由;3. 表达愿望。参考词汇:点赞中国:Thumbs-up for China注意:1. 词数不少于80; 2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9.假定你是李华。你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩很优秀。但由于骄傲和懒惰,最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.进行安慰;2.给出劝告(不要骄傲,不忘初心);3.具体建议(努力复习,制定学习计划)。注意:1.总词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down .Because of your pride and laziness. But …_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.假设你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Terry将参加当地中国文化展志愿者的应聘,发邮件向你询问有关面试的注意事项,请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.中式着装;3.面试礼仪。注意: 1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;Dear Terry,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua 1.Dear Mr. Jefferson,I’m so glad to learn the International Culture Weekly will be held in our school. I’d like to recommend one of traditional Chinese art forms---paper--cutting.As we all know, Chinese paper--cutting is one of the most popular folk art forms. Traditional paper cuttings are also called window decorations, which are first put on the windows to create the pleasant atmosphere. Nowadays, the art has evolved uniquely to adapt to different cultural styles and presented multiple social values.I will be honored if my recommended art form is on show. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,给学校国际文化周活动的负责人推荐一种中国传统艺术品。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1. 表明写信意图(推荐艺术品) 2. 阐述推荐理由 3. 期待对方回复第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)International Culture Weekly;recommend;traditional Chinese art forms;nowadays;look forward to;reply第三步:连词成句1. Glad to know that the International Culture Weekly will be held in our school.2. I’d like to recommend one of traditional Chinese art forms---Chinese calligraphy.3. Chinese calligraphy is an ancient writing art of Chinese characters.4. Our ancestors invented writing with brushes, so they have produced calligraphy.5. Chinese calligraphy has been exuding artistic charm with its writing style, structure and constitution6. Look forward to your reply early.7. I will be so happy if my recommended art form is adopted.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:Traditional paper cuttings are also called window decorations, which are first put on the windows to create the pleasant atmosphere.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。文章对于剪纸艺术的介绍兼顾历史来由和现代价值,整体思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,完全符合题目要求。2.Dear schoolmates,Recently, a large quantity of shared bicycles have appeared in many streets in our city. As far as I am concerned, we should ride to and from school.Firstly, riding a bicycle to and from school is very common among the students, for it doesn’t cost a lot. Secondly, it is convenient, no matter how busy the traffic could be. Actually, bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. What you should do carefully is just keep an appropriate speed while riding. In this way, you will feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle.Don’t hesitate, everybody. Let’s use shared bicycles as common transports.The Students’ UnionJune 30, 2020【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是李华,你校学生会主席,请代表学生会写一封倡议书。近日,共享单车(shared bicycles)出现在大街小巷,方便了人们的出行。请号召同学们在上学期间以及即将到来的暑假多骑车出行。内容要点如下:1. 骑车的益处;2. 骑车需要注意的问题;3. 建议把单车作为常用交通工具。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):a large quantity of (大量);As far as I am concerned(就我个人而言);common (常见的);convenient (方便的);hesitate (犹豫)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Firstly, riding a bicycle to and from school is very common among the students, for it doesn’t cost a lot.运用原因状语从句;What you should do carefully is just keep an appropriate speed while riding.运用主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。3.Dear John,The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.A variety of activities will be included in the festival, such as singing, crosstalk and so on. You are expected to put on a performance with us. Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice.Looking forward to your coming.Sincerely Yours, Li Hua【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信。【详解】假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信,要点如下:1. 介绍活动内容;2. 邀请他表演节目;3. 请他提出活动建议。分析可知,应该以第一人称和第二人称为主,一般将来时和一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.宾语从句的运用;Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice.原因状语从句和宾语从句的运用。4.Dear Jerry,Knowing that you are planning to travel around China during the summer vacation to have a deep insight into Chinese culture, I am writing to applaud this decision.As the saying goes, it is better travelling a thousand miles than reading a thousand books. The know about the rich and diverse Chinese culture is to go and experience it in person. You may worry about the current COVID-19 epidemic. Don’t worry, with the joint efforts of the Chinese government and people, the epidemic has been brought under control now. As long as you protect yourself well, wearing masks and keeping social distance, you will be safe.Hoping you can enjoy your journey and have a good time.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jerry 正在中国留学。他计划利用暑假游历全国各地,以加深对中国文化的了解,因此发邮件来询问你的意见。鉴于当前疫情形势,请你给他回一封邮件。要点包括:1.你的建议(去旅行或者不去);2.你的理由(至少两条);3.表达期待。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):travel around (周游);have a deep insight into Chinese culture (对中国文化有很深的了解);diverse (不同的);in person (亲自)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Knowing that you are planning to travel around China during the summer vacation to have a deep insight into Chinese culture, I am writing to applaud this decision.运用了宾语从句;As long as you protect yourself well, wearing masks and keeping social distance, you will be safe.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。5.Dear John,I’m very glad to hear you’re studying at a new boarding school. I’d like to give you some advice about how to get along well with your roommates. Communication plays a very important part in keeping a healthy relationship. When your roommates and you face some problems, do not choose to keep everything to yourselves. You should discuss the problems and solve them together. Besides, cooperation is also important for a good relationship. Your roommates and you should work out a timetable. Share the chores equally based on your abilities. Hope my advice will be helpful and I wish you a happy life in your new school! Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你的美国笔友John刚转入一所寄宿学校,他发来电子邮件向你询问如何与室友融洽相处。请根据以下内容,给他回一封电子邮件。要点:1.你的建议;2.说明理由;3.表达祝愿。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):get along well with (友好相处);play a very important part in (在……中起重要作用);choose to (选择);discuss (讨论);cooperation (合作)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如:When your roommates and you face some problems, do not choose to keep everything to yourselves.运用时间状语从句,全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。6.Dear Tim,Knowing that you’ll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I’m writing to give you some suggestions on your trip.I recommend the capital city, Beijing, to you, for it is an amazing city with a long history and a variety of places of interest. You may first go to Tiananmen Square, where many tourists admire the national flag being raised every early morning. The next place that you can’t miss is the Great Wall, which is one of the great wonders in the world. The Palace Museum and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting, too. Besides, drinking tea will surely be appealing to you. People in BeJing believe tea benefits people’s health. I will treat you to tea drinking when you are in Bejing.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful and I am sure you will have a wonderful experience in Beijing.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求给朋友回复一封邮件。【详解】第一步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tim想在寒假时到中国北京旅游,于是发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:1. 推荐北京这个城市;2. 给出推荐理由;3. 要提及喝茶。第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:winter holiday, suggestions, recommend, places of interest, Tiananmen Square, the Great Wall, drinking tea, appealing to, treat.第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般将来时。第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Knowing that you’ll visit China in the coming winter holiday, 运用了非谓语动词和宾语从句;You may first go to Tiananmen Square, where many tourists admire the national flag being raised every early morning. 和The next place that you can’t miss is the Great Wall, which is one of the great wonders in the world. 运用了where,which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句;I hope you will find these suggestions helpful and I am sure you will have a wonderful experience in Beijing.中运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。7.With the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than write on the paper. Thus, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problem, we should do as follows:First, we should use less electric products when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy and keeping dairy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails.Beautiful and neat handwriting is of great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will pay off!Calligraphy Association【分析】本文是一片应用文,要求代表书法协会号召大家重视书写。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。写作要求:1.减少对电子产品的依赖,多动手记笔记:2.养成练书法和写日记的习惯。第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)prefer; rather than; improve; form; relative; benefit第三步:连词成句With the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than write on the paper.If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting.Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy and keeping dairy every day.It is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails.Beautiful and neat handwriting is of great benefit to us students.在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1. 文章的结构顺序:提出现象;建议具体内容;号召行动。2.表并列补充关系:thus; first; besides; what’s more连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰第五步:修改润色【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了不少高级句型,比如with的复合结构:With the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than write on the paper.还有状语从句的省略:First, we should use less electric products when learning.文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。8.Dear Jim,Delighted to learn that you are going to participate in the activity “Thumbs-up for China”, I am more than willing to give you some advice.I suggest you take the “Fuxing” bullet train, which travels at a speed of about 350 kilometers per hour. I’m sure you’ll get a clear idea of what high technology brings to China. Besides, you can enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. This experience will help you develop a deeper understanding of China and I do hope you can share your impression with the people around you.Hope my advice can be of some help. If there is anything else I could do, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给因要参加面向外国友人举办的“点赞中国”活动并向你寻求帮助的英国交换生Jim,给予他相关建议。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1. 推荐他做一件事;2. 说明推荐的理由;3. 表达愿望。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)(be) delighted to do sth.;participate in;be willing to do sth.;get a clear idea of sth.;develop a deeper understanding of sth.;share sth.with sb.第三步:连词成句1. Delighted to learn that you are going to participate in the activity “Thumbs-up for China”, I am more than willing to give you some advice. 2. I’m sure you’ll get a clear idea of what high technology brings to China.3. This experience will help you develop a deeper understanding of China and I do hope you can share your impression with the people around you.(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking8.表选择:either…or…,or连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如which travels at a speed of about 350 kilometers per hour这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,如If there is anything else I could do这句话中用了If引导的条件状语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如(be) delighted to do sth.,participate in,develop a deeper understanding of sth.等,为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。9.Dear Tom, I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down because of your pride and laziness. But it's not time for you to feel desperate. I believe you can find yourself back by taking action. In my opinion, you shouldn't be proud and just keep working hard. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished. Now, let me give you some advice. First of all, you must review the content that you have missed studying recently. In addition, it's necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up. I hope you could feel better and get higher grades. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华。你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩很优秀。但由于骄傲和懒惰,最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.进行安慰;2.给出劝告(不要骄傲,不忘初心);3.具体建议(努力复习,制定学习计划)。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):because of (因为);desperate (绝望);take action(采取行动);mission (任务);first of all (首先);in addition(此外)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时和一般现在时。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished.运用了宾语从句;In addition, it's necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。10.Dear Terry,Knowing that you have decided to apply to be a volunteer for the local Chinese Culture Exhibition, I’m more than delighted to offer you some advice.To begin with, according to our tradition, it is recommended to arrive a little earlier than scheduled time so that you will impress the interviewers with your politeness. What’s more, you’d better wear traditional Chinese clothes through which you express your love for China. Additionally, when interviewed, you are supposed to be on your best behaviour, thus showing your good personal qualities and manners.Hopefully, these suggestions will be of some help for you. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,介绍有关中国文化展志愿者的面试的注意事项。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1.表明可以提供一些建议 2. 明确面试的注意事项 1)到达时间; 2)中式着装; 3) 面试礼仪。第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)decide to do; apply to be; the local Chinese Culture Exhibition; more than; To begin with; according to; What’s more; had better do; express; Additionally; interview; be supposed to do; personal qualities and manners; look forward to.第三步:连词成句1. Knowing that you have decided to apply to be a volunteer for the local Chinese Culture Exhibition, I’m more than delighted to offer you some advice.2. according to our tradition, it is recommended to arrive a little earlier than scheduled time so that you will impress the interviewers with your politeness. 3. you’d better wear traditional Chinese clothes through which you express your love for China.4. when interviewed, you are supposed to be on your best behaviour, thus showing your good personal qualities and manners.5.Could you please give me a brief introduction of this dance?6. Hopefully, these suggestions will be of some help for you.7. Looking forward to your good news.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:you’d better wear traditional Chinese clothes through which you express your love for China.这句话运用了 介词+which引导的宾语从句。so that引导的目的状语从句To begin with, according to our tradition, it is recommended to arrive a little earlier than scheduled time so that you will impress the interviewers with your politeness. 使用了一些固定词组,如had better do,be supposed to do,look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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