黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

申请信

1．第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会，简称“北京张家口冬奥会”，将于2022年在北京市和张家口市联合举行。假设你是红星中学高一的学生李华，获悉冬奥组委在全国范围内正在招募志愿者，请用英语写一封自荐信，申请成为北京张家口冬奥会7月至8月的志愿者。信的内容包括：

1. 表达愿望;

2. 自荐理由;

3. 恳请获准。

注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词：2022北京张家口冬奥会：2022 Beijing -Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games

奥组委：Olympic Committee

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am LiHua, a Senior One student from HongXing school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

2．某学校举办英语夏令营将开设以下课程：园艺，烹饪，防身术(self-defence)，护理。假设你是李华，活动负责人要求写一封申请信才能报名参加其中一门课程，书信的内容必须包括：

1. 你感兴趣的课程。

2. 你期望从这门课程中学到什么。

3. 为什么想学这些内容。

注意：词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear sir,

It is said that a summer camp is to be held in your school and a few courses are available to choose from.

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，正在英国留学。为了让你的英国同学更好地了解中国文化，你希望可以成立一个中国文学社团(Chinese literature club)。请你参照以下要点提示，用英语给你校学生会负责人Mr. Green写一封信，申请成立该社团。

1、点明写信目的；

2、介绍该社团(成立目的、活动内容等)；

3、希望能得到批准。

注意：1.、词数不少于100左右；

2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Green，

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student of this school. ___________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

4．假设你是李华,准备参加在你市举办的国际青少年文化节志愿者招聘活动。活动主办方要求能够熟练运用英语。请你用英文写封信,推荐自己。

内容包括：1.你的自荐理由

2.你对活动的理解。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Sir,

Thank you for reading my letter.

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作．下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信．

注意：1．词数：100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数．

Dear Mr．Smith，

I've read your advertisement for a volunteer for children's winter camp．

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Yours，

Li Hua

6．假设你是高一学生李华，想应聘学校英语校报的记者兼编辑(editor)。请根据下面的个人情况用英语写一封应聘信，词数100字左右，开头语结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

姓名：李华       年龄：17         性别：女

文章需要包括：获奖情况，经历和爱好。

联系方式：Lihua2015@163.com

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

7．第二节：书面表达

61. 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：

● 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）

●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）

●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）

注意：

1.词数不少于100；

2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：

晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假定你是高三学生李华，听说暑假有一个中美文化交流夏令营活动（Chinese & American Culture Camp）邀请一些中学生参加，并在活动中展示与中国文化相关的技艺。你很感兴趣，打算申请加入。信的主要内容如下：

1.个人优势；

2.表达希望；

要求：1.为使行文连贯可适当增加细节；

2.词数：100词左右

Dear Sir or Madam,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你准备明年高考后去英国某大学留学学习英国文学，需要填写申请材料。请按照提示完成你的个人自荐信息。

内容要点:

1. 告知你选择的专业并说明理由；

2. 介绍自己的业余爱好及特长。

注意:词数100左右。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir／Madam,

After careful consideration and investigation,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．书面表达

假如你是李华，想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，请用英语写一封100词左右的申请信。申请信的开头和结尾已给出，申请信应包括以下三方面内容：

你参加这次活动的目的；

你的爱好和兴趣；

你希望住在有孩子的美国家庭。

注意：可根据所给信息适当发挥。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to join in US home stay programme.

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Sir or Madam,

I am LiHua, a Senior One student from HongXing school. On hearing the inspiring news that you’re recruiting volunteers for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games, I can hardly wait to recommend myself.

I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. First of all, as requested, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English, thus making it possible for me to communicate with foreigners with fluency and accuracy. Besides, enthusiasm and good manners, which are of significance to build a harmonious and friendly atmosphere, are also what I possess.

If chosen, I will spare no effort to help those in need and guarantee our foreign guests a pleasant stay. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 表达愿望;2. 自荐理由;3. 恳请获准。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼用一般将来时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，简短地介绍自己，表达愿望。第二段，自荐理由。第三段，恳请获准。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: guarantee, recommend , enthusiasm and good manners, recruit volunteers for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games, be  competent to do sth ,have a good command of ,spoken English, communicate with, build a harmonious and friendly atmosphere, spare no effort to do sth ,take my application into consideration。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:省略that的定语从句I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. 现在分词作状语First of all, as requested, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English, thus making it possible for me to communicate with foreigners with fluency and accuracy. What引导的表语从句Besides, enthusiasm and good manners, which are of significance to build a harmonious and friendly atmosphere, are also what I possess. If 引导的条件状语I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First of all，Besides。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:省略that的定语从句I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. 现在分词作状语First of all, as requested, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English, thus making it possible for me to communicate with foreigners with fluency and accuracy. What引导的表语从句Besides, enthusiasm and good manners, which are of significance to build a harmonious and friendly atmosphere, are also what I possess. If 引导的条件状语I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

2．Dear sir,

It is said that a summer camp is to be held in your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening very much.

During the learning period, I expect to gain some basic gardening knowledge. First, I want to know how to tell different species of plants and flowers apart. Secondly, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. In addition, a little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or the reasonable planting positions will also be a good choice.

The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the garden. Besides, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。

【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①举办英语夏令营将开设以下课程：园艺，烹饪，防身术(self-defence)，护理；②报名参加其中一门课程；③期望从这门课程中学到什么；④为什么想学这些内容。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如： gardening（园艺），basic gardening knowledge（基本园艺知识），frequency（频率）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。

【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。

定语从句和表语从句的使用The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the garden.

宾语从句和非谓语动词的使用Besides, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature.

3．Dear Mr Green,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student of this school. ①I am writing this letter to ask for permission to found a Chinese literature club.

I aim to help my British classmates have a better understanding of Chinese literature by holding a series of literature related activities, like reading Chinese poems. It is planned to recruit 25 members, and as the person in charge of the club, I will assign different tasks to them every week. ②Besides this, I will also organize courses about Chinese literary giants and their representative works. I am confident that the Chinese literature club will help every member a great deal, not only in learning more about Chinese culture, but also in broadening their vision.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一封邮件；假定你是李华，正在英国留学。为了让你的英国同学更好地了解中国文化，你希望可以成立一个中国文学社团(Chinese literature club)。请你参照以下要点提示，用英语给你校学生会负责人Mr. Green写一封信，申请成立该社团。1、点明写信目的；2、介绍该社团(成立目的、活动内容等)；3、希望能得到批准。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：ask for permission（寻求许可），Chinese literature club（中国文学社团），have a better understanding of（更好了解），recruit（招募）；assign（分配）；broaden vision（拓宽眼界）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It is planned to recruit 25 members, and as the person in charge of the club, I will assign different tasks to them every week.运用了被动语态与原因状语从句；I am confident that the Chinese literature club will help every member a great deal, not only in learning more about Chinese culture, but also in broadening their vision.运用了not only…but also…并列结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

4．Thank you for reading my letter. I'm writing to apply to be one of the volunteers of the International Youth Culture Festival.

Above all. I’m good at English and Chinese, which will play an important role in communicating with foreigners. Besides, I am fond of Chinese culture and have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, which enables me to make a detailed introduction of our splendid culture. What’s more, this activity provides us an opportunity to make a better understanding among students from around the world. I hope I will expand the horizons and improve my ability by making some contribution to the activity.

To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. If I could be accepted to be one, I won’t let you down. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇应用文书面表达。文中要求给活动主办方写封信。

【详解】本文应分为三个段落，第1段落写写信的目的；第2段落表述自己的优点和对活动的理解；第3段写总结并表示恳请被录用。本文在人称上应采用第一人称和现在时与将来时相结合的时态来表达此文。表达此文时可能使用到的词汇有：apply to sb向某人申请 volunteer志愿者, the International Youth Culture Festival国际青少年文化节, be good at /be skillful at善长， communicate with 与……交流，be fond of 喜欢，Chinese culture 中国文化，have a rich knowledge of.有丰富的……知识，provide somebody an opportunity to do something,给某人提供机会去做某事， expand the horizon拓宽视野， improve one's ability. 提高能力，make contributions to对…做出贡献。要点一：①. I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers of the International Youth Culture Festival②. I'm writing to make a written application for one of the volunteers of the International Youth Culture Festival要点二：①. I am good at English and Chinese， which will play an important role in communicating with foreigners②. I'm skillful at English and Chinese, which is important very important for communicating with foreigners from many other countries③. I'm fond of Chinese culture and have a rich knowledge of Chinese history , which enable me to make a detailed introduction of our splendid culture④. I'm so familiar with Chinese culture and Chinese history that I can make a detailed introduction of our splendid culture要点三：①. This activity provides us an opportunity to make a better understanding of our students from around the world. I hope I will expand the horizons and improve my ability by making some contributions to the activity②. I hope I can expand the horizons and improve my ability by making some contributions to the activity, through which the opportunity that this activity provided us I can make a better understanding among students from around the world要点四：①. To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. If I could be accepted to be one, I won't let you down. I'm looking forward to your early reply②. In conclusion , I believe I am definitely one of your wanted most volunteers. If you consider my application, I would appreciate it. Looking forward to your early reply as soon as possible

【点睛】考生在组织了所有的要点之后，要尽量使用一些逻辑上的连接词，如to begin with，moreover，besides, above all, as for me，at last, all in all等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。

5．Dear Mr. Smith,

I’ve read your advertisement for a volunteer for a children’s winter camp. I’m quite interested in this position. I am outgoing, energetic, well-organized and responsible; and most importantly, I love working with children! In the past two years, as a monitor in my class, I have proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers. I speak English fluently, which enables me to help native English speakers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English only environment.

I will soon have a long winter vacation, so I have no problem working evenings and weekends. I can start my work next week. I would be pleased to assist both the teacher and students in this challenging and rewarding environment.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，要求写一封申请信。

【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于看图写作，要求写一封说明文，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①对志愿者工作感兴趣；②自我介绍；③有足够的时间。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：well-organized and responsible（有组织，负责任），speak English fluently（流利说英语），assist（辅助）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。

【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。

非限制性定语从句使用，I speak English fluently，which enables me to help native English speakers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English only environment．

so引导结果状语从句，I will soon have a long winter vacation，so I have no problem working evenings and weekends．

6．Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old girl from Senior 2. I am writing to recommend myself as the reporter and editor for your newspaper.

My interest and skills in English contribute to my qualifications for the job. As an outgoing girl full of energy, I like all kinds of meaningful activities and won first prize in NEPCS and came out first in the school English speech competition, which has built up my confidence in learning English well. Besides, I have hosted several English singing competitions in our school. In my spare time, I enjoy reading English novels and writing English diaries.

I would like to be a member of your newspaper since it would be a great opportunity for me to practise using English and make friends with many other students.

I can be reached anytime via email at Lihua2015@163.com.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，说明自己的基本信息，自荐申请英语校报的记者兼编辑；获奖情况，经历和爱好；表达希望；留下联系的方式；期待回复。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时兼用现在完成时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为五段。第一段，自己的基本信息，自荐申请英语校报的记者兼编辑。第二段，获奖情况，经历和爱好。第三段，表达希望。第四段，留下联系的方式。第五段，期待回复。其中第二段为重点段落。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: recommend, qualifications，outgoing，energy， host，opportunity，reporter，editor ，contribute to，meaningful activities, first prize, came out, English speech competition, built up my confidence, English singing competitions, English novels ,English diaries, practice using English, make friends with.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句As an outgoing girl full of energy, I like all kinds of meaningful activities and won first prize in NEPCS and came out first in the school English speech competition, which has built up my confidence in learning English well. since引导的原因状语从句I would like to be a member of your newspaper since it would be a great opportunity for me to practice using English and make friends with many other students.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Besides, In my spare time.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如which引导的非限制性定语从句As an outgoing girl full of energy, I like all kinds of meaningful activities and won first prize in NEPCS and came out first in the school English speech competition, which has built up my confidence in learning English well. since引导的原因状语从句I would like to be a member of your newspaper since it would be a great opportunity for me to practice using English and make friends with many other students.

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

7．Dear Sir or Madam，

       I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．

       I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．

       My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【分析】本文是书信类作文。

【详解】本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）等

【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： As far as I am concerned据我所知，be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， That’s why I apply for the position.这句话用了表语从句， My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。

8．Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Learning that you will organize a Chinese & American culture Camp this summer, I’m writing to apply to be a member of it for the following reasons.

To begin with, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate with American friends fluently. As a Chinese, I have mastered various skills related to our traditional culture, Taichi being my favorite because it does much good to my health and I have been practicing it for 5 years. Sure enough, American friends will be crazy about it after touching it. And as you know, Chinese cooking is popular all over the world. It happens that I’m expert at it and I’m delighted to present some traditional Chinese dishes to everybody.

I would appreciate it if you could consider my application seriously, for I’ m eager to share the wonderful time with you. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。申请加入夏令营。

【详解】假如你是李华，听说暑假有一个中美文化交流夏令营活动（Chinese & American Culture Camp）邀请一些中学生参加，并在活动中展示与中国文化相关的技艺。你很感兴趣，打算申请加入。信的主要内容如下：1.个人优势；2.表达希望。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，可以适当的加一些变化，使用连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【点睛】1. 范文采取了定语从句，如To begin with, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate with American friends fluently. 又如And as you know, Chinese cooking is popular all over the world.；原因状语从句，如As a Chinese, …, Taichi being my favorite because it does much good to my health and ... ；宾语从句，I would appreciate it if you could consider my application seriously, for I’ m eager to share the wonderful time with you.等句式。

2. 文章采用了To begin with；have a good command of；enable；communicate with；do good to，be crazy about , be eager to，look forward to等高级单词或短语。

9．Dear Sir／Madam,

After careful consideration and investigation, I think your college is an ideal place for my college education.

I’d like to major in English literature. On the one hand, I’m obsessed with English literature due to its long history and a long list of world-famous writers. On the other hand, I’m sure I can learn it well because English is my favorite subject in high school, which will be helpful for my further study in college.

As to my hobbies, I’m a keen basketball fan and I play a lot of it at school. Last year, I won the title of the most valuable player. What’s more, I’m crazy about rock music and my dream is to found a rock group. I hope my dream will come true in college.

I’m looking forward to receiving your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你准备明年高考后去英国某大学留学学习英国文学，需要填写申请材料。请按照提示完成你的个人自荐信息。内容要点:告知你选择的专业并说明理由；介绍自己的业余爱好及特长。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：an ideal place for my college education（大学教育的理想地方）；major in English literature（主修英语文学）；due to its long history（由于它的悠久历史）；As to my hobbies（至于我的业余爱好）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I think your college is an ideal place for my college education.句中使用宾语从句；I’m sure I can learn it well because English is my favorite subject in high school, which will be helpful for my further study in college.原因状语从句和非限制性定语从句完美结合；I’m crazy about rock music and my dream is to found a rock group.动词不定式做表语；另外，On the one hand, On the other hand, As to my hobbies, What’s more,等的运用为文章增色添彩。

10．Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to join in US home stay programme. I think it’s a good way to improve my English and broaden my horizons, I also hope to have a chance to visit some famous places such as the statue of Liberty and really want to experience authentic American culture.

I enjoy surfing on the Internet, am fond of travelling and love sports and pop music. I do quite well in English and can talk easily with English speakers.

I hope to stay with an American family with three or four children. Staying with a local family will give me a unique opportunity to experience America’s language, everyday life and customs. I’m sure we'll have a great time together.

Thank you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】试题分析：本文属于提纲作文，考生首先要看清楚要求，然后再根据要求详细讨论。本文的话题是写一封申请信，申请参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，属于书信类作文，所以使用一般现在时。在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法；broaden my horizons开拓视野；have a chance to do sth.做某事的机会；such as 诸如；be fond of doing sth,喜欢做某事；have a great time玩得高兴。还有非谓语Staying with a local family …做主语为文章增色不少。

考点： 提纲类作文