吉林高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

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感谢信/祝贺信1．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter坚持学习汉语10年，最近顺利通过汉语水平考试(HSK)四级。请写信向他表示祝贺。内容要点包括：1．表示祝贺；2．肯定Peter平时为之做出的努力；3．鼓励和期望。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假如你是英国运动员 Adam，参加了 2022 年北京冬奥会。期间，志愿者们热情好客、乐于奉献，营造出了和谐、团结、温馨的氛围，你深受感动，特向志愿者服务站写信表示感谢。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 文章的开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear Sir/ Madam, A special “thanks” goes to all the volunteers for the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, Adam3．假定你是李华，听说英国朋友John所在的篮球队获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.祝贺获奖；2.肯定付出；3.期待见面交流。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，不久前你去加拿大参加了一个野营活动，现已回国。在加拿大的两周里，加拿大少年杰克（Jack）在语言，交友等方面对你帮助很大。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 已安全到家，对他的帮助表示感谢；2. 谈谈在活动期间的感受；3. 希望今后保持联系。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter上周邀请你参加了感恩节派对，请根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信，要点包括：1. 表达感激之情；2. 回忆各种收获及学到的文化礼仪知识；3. 发出邀请。注意：1.词数100左右；  2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假如你是李华，高二生活即将结束，请你给自己的父母写一封感谢信。 注意：1. 信中内容包括下面的所有内容；2. 词数：100左右；3. 信的开都已经给出，但不计入总词数。内容： 1. 感谢父母多年来无微不至的关怀；2. 自己近期学习一直十分刻苦，进步不小，这次考试也很顺利，希望父母放心；3. 以后一定多帮父母做些家务，还要让父母品尝一下自己亲手做的菜。Dear parents,I ’m writing to show my thanks to you._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是高中生李华，想在高考后报考英语专业，但目前你的口语偏差。偶然的一个机会，你从网上发现外籍教师Hanna在线辅导英语口语。请根据以下要点写一封求助信，内容包括：1. 介绍自己的情况；2. 向外教求助；3. 表示感谢并期盼回复。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Hanna,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Lihua8．假如你是班长李华，你们班的外教Mark最近生病住院了，请代表你们班的同学给他写封慰问信，内容包括：1. 表示难过；2. 感谢他的付出；3. 希望给他一些帮助。注意：1. 词数：120词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mark,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假如你是高中生李华, 上周在英国参加了你校组织的“文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：1. 活动中的收获；2. 难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；3. 感谢她送你的英文小说。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。参考词汇:文化交流周 Cultural Exchange Week___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李华，刚获得全校英语演讲比赛一等奖，请给你的外教Jack写一封英语感谢信，要点如下：1.表示感谢；2.回顾Jack 对你的帮助和指导；3.宝贵经验。英语演讲比赛：English Speech Contest注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，已使行文连贯注意：词数100左右______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________         1．Dear Peter,I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 4 test. I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. You are active in class and you spend most of your spare time in the library. The past 10 years have seen your devotion, persistence, strenuous efforts, and eventually your rapid progress in Chinese learning. Therefore, I firmly believe this fulfillment is a reward that you richly deserve.I am sure that the certificate you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come. I genuinely wish you could make still further achievements in the future and I am looking forward to good news from you soon again.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter坚持学习汉语10年，最近顺利通过汉语水平考试(HSK)四级。请写信向他表示祝贺。【详解】1.词汇积累感到无比自豪：feel incredibly proud of→take incredible pride in勤奋的：diligent→hardworking积极的：active→positive最终：eventually =finally2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 4 test. I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.拓展句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 4 test and I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.【点睛】[高分句型1] From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Therefore, I firmly believe this fulfillment is a reward that you richly deserve. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)2．Dear Sir/ Madam,A special “thanks” goes to all the volunteers for the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games. I’m writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care when I took part in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, without which I couldn’t have performed so well.The very first moment I arrived, I was greeted with your smiling eyes. The comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your considerate company all made me feel at home, leaving me everlasting memories. I was also impressed by your hospitality, your devotion and the harmonious atmosphere you created during my stay there.Thanks again for your kind help and I’m sincerely looking forward to going back to China in the near future. All the best wishes for you!                                                               Yours faithfully, Adam【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生以英国运动员 Adam的身份，向2022年北京冬奥会志愿者服务站写信表示感谢，感谢志愿者们热情好客、乐于奉献，营造出了和谐、团结、温馨的氛围。【详解】1.词汇积累感激：gratitude→ appreciation/thankfulness一……就：the moment → as soon as真诚地：sincerely → genuinely体贴的：considerate→ thoughtful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your considerate company all made me feel at home, leaving me everlasting memories.拓展句：The comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your considerate company all made me feel at home, which left me everlasting memories.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care when I took part in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, without which I couldn’t have performed so well.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]The very first moment I arrived, I was greeted with your smiling eyes.（运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句）3．Dear John,I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the basketball competition. As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.As you told me before, there were serveal outstanding basketball teams competing in this basketball game, and it’s really hard to win this game. However, you made it at last. You and your team members must have made great efforts to practise playing basketball. Your passion for basketball sometimes exceeds my imagination. You deserve to win this prize!At last, I hope to have a talk with you so that we can exchange our understanding towards basketball. Look forward to your early reply.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按要求给英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，祝贺他所在的篮球队获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军。【详解】1.词汇积累开心的：delighted→ glad/cheerful出色的：outstanding→ excellent/remarkable热情：passion→ enthusiasm值得：deserve→ be worthy of2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However, you made it at last. You and your team members must have made great efforts to practice playing basketball.拓展句：You and your team members must have made great efforts to practice playing basketball, so you made it at last.【点睛】【高分句型1】As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.(运用how引导宾语从句)【高分句型2】At last, I hope to have a talk with you so that we can exchange our understanding towards basketball.(运用so that引导目的状语从句)4．Dear Jack,I’m writing to you from China. I arrived home safe and sound the day before yesterday. Thinking of the two-week wonderful time I spent in Canada, I just can’t help thinking of the help you gave me. It was very kind of you to offer me lots of useful advice on how to improve my English and make friends with other campers. Also, I learned a lot about Canadian culture by working with you. I’ll always remember this memorable trip as well as your kindness. I hope we’ll keep in touch forever.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack写封感谢信，表达对他的帮助的感谢，讲述活动期间的感受以及希望今后保持联系。【详解】1.词汇积累愉快的/极好的：good/happy→wonderful给与：give→offer了解/学习：know→learn about难忘的：unforgettable→memorable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’ll always remember this memorable trip as well as your kindness.拓展句：Not only will I always remember this memorable trip but also I will remember your kindness.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thinking of the two-week wonderful time I spent in Canada, I just can’t help thinking of the help you gave me.（句中用了现在分词作状语，和省略引导词that/which的定语从句）【高分句型2】I hope we’ll keep in touch forever.（“we’ll keep in touch forever”为省略“that”的宾语从句）5．Dear Peter,I am writing to express my appreciation for having invited me to your Thanksgiving party, which remains a memorable time to me. It was at the party that I had enjoyed roast turkey for the first time. It was so delicious that my mouth would be watering just by thinking about it. Besides, what highlighted the party was that your family acted the Thanksgiving story out, which was really a fascinating demonstration of the first immigrants' history. Thanks again for your hospitality. Not only did I fell in love with this festival, but I also learn more about American history. Now I sincerely invite you to the New Year's party at my home. Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友写一封信，感谢他上周邀请参加感恩节派对。【详解】1.词汇积累难忘的：memorable→unforgettable迷人的：fascinating→charming/attractive款待：hospitality→entertainment真诚地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I am writing to express my appreciation for having invited me to your Thanksgiving party.拓展句：Last week you invited me to your Thanksgiving party, for which I am writing to express my appreciation.【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, what highlighted the party was that your family acted the Thanksgiving story out, which was really a fascinating demonstration of the first immigrants' history.（运用了what引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2] Not only did I fell in love with this festival, but I also learn more about American history.（运用了not only…but also引导的部分倒装句）6．Dear parents，        I ’m writing to show my thanks to you. The Grade two is over. Now I know clearly that you are expecting me eagerly.I want to express my deep gratitude to you both  for what you have done for me，especially since I went to the senior school . These days，I have been studying hard and have made greater progress. I did a good job in the final exam. I hope you can set your mind at rest. During the summer holiday, I plan to help you do some housework that I have hardly done before. Apart from it, I will learn to cook so as to prepare a delicious dinner for you both in person.My dear parents，everything is Ok with me . Best wishes.                                                                                                                                                                         Yours                   Lihua【详解】【分析】本篇书面是提纲式作文，假如你是李华，高二生活即将结束，请你给自己的父母写一封感谢信。【详解】1.词汇积累感谢：thank sb.→express my deep gratitude to sb.放心：do not worry →set your mind at rest此外: besides→ apart from亲自：personally→ in person.2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：The Grade two is over. Now I know clearly that you are expecting me eagerly.拓展句：When the Grade two is over, I know clearly that you are expecting me eagerly.【点睛】 [高分句型1] I want to express my deep gratitude to you both for what you have done for me (运用了what引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] During the summer holiday, I plan to help you do some housework that I have hardly done before.(运用了that引导的定语从句)7．Dear Hanna,I’m Li Hua, a high school student from China. Learning by chance that you are tutoring oral English online, I’m writing to ask you for help.During the past ten years, I have acquired basic knowledge of English and developed a great interest in it. Thus, I plan to major in English after graduating from high school. What bothers me most is that although I have done well in English exams, I find my oral English so poor that I fail to communicate with others in fluent English. That’s why I long for a tutor to help me improve my oral English. Would you please give me a hand?I would deeply appreciate it if you could do me a favor. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封求助信，向外籍教师Hanna介绍自己的情况并就口语学习进行求助。【详解】1.词汇积累困扰：trouble→bother教授：teach→tutor差的：bad→poor偶然：by accident= by chance2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：During the past ten years, I have acquired basic knowledge of English and developed a great interest in it. Thus, I plan to major in English after graduating from high school.拓展句：I plan to major in English after graduating from high school because during the past ten years, I have acquired basic knowledge of English and developed a great interest in it.【点睛】[高分句型1] What bothers me most is that although I have done well in English exams, I find my oral English so poor that I fail to communicate with others in fluent English. (运用了although引导让步状语从句)[高分句型2] That’s why I long for a tutor to help me improve my oral English. (运用了why引导表语从句)8．Dear Mark,We’re sorry to hear that you’re ill and have been in hospital for several days. We miss you a lot. You’re a great teacher — humorous and warmhearted. In your class, you always motivate us to interact with you. And you’re willing to spare your time to communicate with us in English, which has greatly improved our oral English. We appreciate what you’ve done for us and have regarded you as our friend.Now we’d like to do something for you, like bringing you food and borrowing books for you. We really hope you can recover soon. If there’s anything that we can do for you, please let us know.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表班级的同学给生病的外教Mark写封慰问信。【详解】词汇积累生病：ill → sick好的：great → good鼓舞、激励：motivate → inspire希望：hope → wish2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：You’re a great teacher — humorous and warmhearted.拓展句：You’re a great teacher who is humorous and warmhearted.【点睛】[高分句型1] We’re sorry to hear that you’re ill and have been in hospital for several days. (运用了宾语从句)[高分句型2] And you’re willing to spare your time to communicate with us in English, which has greatly improved our oral English. (运用了which引导的定语从句)9．Dear Kelly,I’ve been back home safely from England. I’d like to express my sincere gratitude for your warm help during my stay in England.Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We paid a visit to the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends. What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. I’ll never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the English novel you offered me as a gift, which is a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在英国期间参加的你校组织的“文化交流周”活动认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时,少量将来时和现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 活动中的收获；2. 难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；3. 感谢她送你的英文小说。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）express one’s sincere gratitude for；participate in；enjoy oneself；pay a visit to；place of interest；have a better understanding of；be lucky enough to；make full use of第三步：连词成句1. I’d like to express my sincere gratitude for your warm help during my stay in England.2. Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week.3. I enjoyed myself in your country.4. We paid a visit to the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.5. What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home.6. I will treasure and make full use of it.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系：What is more连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]：We paid a visit to the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2]：I’ll never forget the days we spent together.这句话运用了省略关系词的定语从句。[高分句型3]：Here I especially thank you for the English novel you offered me as a gift, which is a great help for me to learn English well. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。10．Dear Jack,I’m writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school’s English Speech Contest. I really appreciate your guidance and great help.Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest, I’ll never forget the great progress I made with your help. Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation, but you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate. What’s more, it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident, which played a vital role in winning the contest.Through the contest, I’ve realize that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end.Many thanks again for your great help.Yours sincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Jack写一封英语感谢信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表示感谢；2.回顾Jack 对你的帮助和指导；3.宝贵经验。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）look back on；not only…but also…；make progress； play a vital role in；set a goal；gain success；in the end第三步：连词成句1.I’m writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school’s English Speech Contest. 2.I really appreciate your guidance and great help.3.Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest, I’ll never forget the great progress I made with your help.4.Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation, but you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate. 5.What’s more, it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident, which played a vital role in winning the contest.6.Through the contest, I’ve realize that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end.7.Many thanks again for your great help.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）文章使用了表并列补充关系的衔接词：What is more， not only…but (also)。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school’s English Speech Contest. (that引导同位语从句)[高分句型2] Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest, I’ll never forget the great progress I made with your help.(现在分词looking作状语)[高分句型3] What’s more, it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident, which played a vital role in winning the contest.(which引导非限制性定语从句)