高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友 Tom得知你进入高三学习，特意写信来关心你。请你根据以下提示，写一封回信。

1. 感谢关心；

2. 告知计划；

3. 奋斗目标。

注意：

1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假如你是李华，今年刚刚升入高中，教师节来临前，你想给你初中的英语老师Mr Wang用英语写一封信，内容包括以下三个方面：

1. 感谢老师培养；

2. 介绍新学校和你目前的状况；

3. 你未来的打算。

注意：

1. 可根据上述要点适当增加细节；

2. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 词数不少于100。

Dear Mr Wang,

How time flies! Teachers' Day is around the corner again!

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华。最近,  你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间,  你和房东Mr.Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲,  给Mr.Wilson发一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1.表示感谢；

2.回顾他对你的照顾和帮助；

3.邀请他来中国游览。

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4．假定你是李华，你不慎遗失的身份证和钱包被来校参观的外国学生Mike捡到并归还。请写一封邮件表示感谢。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，在美国做交换生期间受到寄宿家庭主人Mr. Johnson的照顾。现在你已经安全回国，但发现相机落在他家里。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.感谢对方的照顾；

2.请对方把相机寄过来；

3.希望对方来中国旅游并当他的导游。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，你收到了美国朋友Peter寄来的期待已久的英文小说。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.收到小说，表示感谢；

2.回赠礼物，并说明其意义；

3.期待对方亲自来中国体验中国文化

注意:1、词数80词左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tom在学校羽毛球比赛中获得第一名，请你给他写封祝贺信，要点如下：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 肯定他的付出；

3. 希望学习他的技术。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

4. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Tom,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours,

LiHua

8．假设你是李华，昨天你参加了学校组织的英语演讲比赛，并获得了一等奖。由于刚回美国度假的外籍教师Broke为你的参赛提供了许多帮助，现在你想用英语给他写一封电子邮件。

要点包括：

1.介绍参赛情况；

2.告知获奖；

3.表达获奖感受。

注意：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Brooke,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Simon在你校举办的中文演讲比赛国外友人专场中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 表示称赞；

3. 期待交流。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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10．假定你是李华，你的美籍好友Tom刚刚获悉自己被哈佛大学（ Harvard University）录取的消息。请你就此事给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：

1．向他表示祝贺；

2．你认为他被录取的原因并请教入学申请成功的经验；

3. 再次表示祝贺。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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1．Dear Tom,

I'm pleased to receive your letter. Thank you for your concern and support for my study in the senior year. Now I'm writing to tell you about my plan.

The period of this year is so critical that I intend to be equipped with everything needed in the near future. After reviewing the basic knowledge of each subject, I will do adequate exercises to apply the knowledge, for practice makes perfect. Besides，it's of equal importance to build up our body. So I'm determined to do sports daily and eat healthily. I hope I'll be admitted to a key university in Beijing with every effort.

Thank you again for your concern and wish you happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的外国笔友 Tom得知你进入高三学习，特意写信来关心你。请你根据所给提示，写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：pleased→delighted

重要的：critical →important

另外，此外：besides→in addition→furthermore

下决心做某事：be determined to do →decide to do sth.

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I will do adequate exercises to apply the knowledge, for practice makes perfect.

拓展句： As is known to all,practice makes perfect, so I will do adequate exercises to apply the knowledge,

【点睛】[高分句型1] The period of this year is so critical that I intend to be equipped with everything needed in the near future. (运用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句)

[高分句型2] I hope I'll be admitted to a key university in Beijing with every effort.  (句中运用了省略that的宾语从句)

2．Dear Mr Wang,

How time flies! Teachers’ Day is around the corner again! I am grateful for the the help and guidance you gave me in my English study. It was you who made English so interesting.

I fell in love with my new school the first day I came here. It has a six-storied teaching building and a large playground. There are fifty students from different junior high schools in my class. They are all friendly and helpful. I think I can get on well with them and make great progress with their help.

My dream is to become a translator. Up to now, I can still remember your words in the first English lesson. “Practice makes perfect. Don’t lose your courage when you meet with difficulties.” I will do my best to realize my dream.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在教师节来临之际给初中的英语老师Mr Wang用英语写一封信表达对老师培养的感谢，介绍自己的新学校，以及未来的打算。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感激的：grateful→thankful

大的：large→big

和某人相处得好：get on well with→be on good terms with

到现在为止：up to now→up till now

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I fell in love with my new school the first day I came here. It has a six-storied teaching building and a large playground.

拓展句：I fell in love with my new school the first day I came here, which has a six-storied teaching building and a large playground.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am grateful for the help and guidance you gave me in my English study.(运用了定语从句)

[高分句型2] It was you who made English so interesting. (运用了强调句)

3．Dear Mr.Wilson,

How are you doing? How time flies! I’ve been back home for some time. I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for what you have done for me in Britain. I would  like you to know how much you mean to me.

It was your selfless help that made me feel at home. Besides, but for your care,  I couldn’t have adapted to the new life there soon.What's more, if it hadn’t been for your help, I wouldn’t have made such great progress in my English. Never will I forget your kind hospitality and help.

In return for your help,  I sincerely extend an invitation to you that you can come to China for a visit,  and I will show you around to feel the special charm of Chinese culture and history. Please accept my heartfelt thanks again. I am looking forward to your coming.

                                                                                                                                         Yours,                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在英国作交换生期间认识并结下深厚友谊的房东Mr.Wilson写信，感谢他的照顾和帮助，并邀请他到中国来游览。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对……感激：express my sincere gratitude to→be grateful to

另外，此外：besides→in addition/what’s more

有益的：helpful→beneficial

由衷的：sincere→wholeheartedly

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：Besides, but for your care,  I couldn’t have adapted to the new life there soon.

拓展句：Besides, if there hadn’t been your care,  I couldn’t have adapted to the new life there soon.

【点睛】[高分句型1] What's more, if it hadn’t been for your help, I wouldn’t have made such great progress in my English. (运用了if引导的非真实条件句)

[高分句型2] Never will I forget your kind hospitality and help.  (运用了部分倒装)

[高分句型3]It was your selfless help that made me feel at home.（运用了强调句型）

4．Dear Mike,

With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to convey my sincere thanks to you for returning my wallet and ID card to me.

It's so considerate of you to return my wallet. To be honest, I felt so helpless the moment I found my wallet missing. Apart from my money and ID card, there is a precious photo of me and my late grandma in the wallet, which means so much to me. I almost cried when I found it gone. Luckily, it's you who found it and kindly returned it to me. I can never thank you enough for your generous help.

Thanks again for your heartwarming deed. The world is a better place because of people like you.

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国学生Mike写一封邮件表示感谢。感谢他捡到并归还自己不慎遗失的身份证和钱包。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表示：express→convey

体贴,考虑周到：thoughtful→considerate

除......之外：besides→apart from

由于：because of→thanks to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to convey my sincere thanks to you for returning my wallet and ID card to me.

拓展句：With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to convey my sincere thanks to you for the kind practice that you returned my wallet and ID card to me.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To be honest, I felt so helpless the moment I found my wallet missing. (运用了the moment 引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】Apart from my money and ID card, there is a precious photo of me and my late grandma in the wallet, which means so much to me.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】Luckily, it's you who found it and kindly returned it to me.（恰当地使用了强调句型）

5．Dear Mr Johnson,

Now I have returned home safely. I want to thank you for everything you did for me. I really enjoyed my days in the US.

However, I regret to tell you that after coming back, I suddenly found that I had left my camera in your home. I’m really sorry to trouble you again because of my carelessness. I would appreciate it if you could send me the camera at your convenience.

I miss you and your family very much. I do hope you can come to China someday, and I will be a tour guide for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给寄宿家庭主人Mr. Johnson写封邮件，感谢对方的照顾，顺便请对方把他遗留的相机寄过来，同时希望对方来中国旅游。

【详解】词汇积累

回家：returned home→went back home

感谢：thank you for→show my gratitude to you for

感激：appreciate→show my appreciation

你方便的时候：at your convenience=when it is convenient for you

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I want to thank you for everything you did for me. I really enjoyed my days in the US.

拓展句：I want to thank you for everything you did for me, and I really enjoyed my days in the US.

【点睛】[高分句型1] However, I regret to tell you that after coming back, I suddenly found that I had left my camera in your home. (运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could send me the camera at your convenience.

 (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

6．Dear Peter,

I am glad to receive the novel. Thank you so much for the lovely gift, which I have been expecting for a long time. It will surely help me have a better understanding of American society and daily life.

I know you are interested in Chinese festivals and therefore I choose some paper-cuts for you. Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese culture, which are often used as decorations for a joyful atmosphere. I hope they will bring happiness and luck to your family as they always do in China.

Best wishes. Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter回信，表示感谢，回赠礼物并说明其意义，最后期待对方亲自来中国体验中国文化。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

帮助：help→assist

独特的：unique→distinct

亲自：in person→personally

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am glad to receive the novel.

拓展句：I am glad to receive the novel, which gives me a big surprise.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Thank you so much for the lovely gift, which I have been expecting for a long time.（which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]

I hope they will bring happiness and luck to your family as they always do in China.（hope后面为省略了that的宾语从句）

7．One possible version：

Dear Tom,

I'm very excited to know the news that you are the first in the badminton match held in school last Sunday.

I show my congratulations sincerely. This is a good evidence to show what hard work you've devoted to practising and improving your skills. When you first learned to play badminton, you were at a loss about the basic skills and felt embarrassed. But it wasn't long before you caught up and became an excellent player. That you won the first prize shows your great determination and painstaking effort in practising badminton. I hope that one day we can have a game of badminton，so that I can learn from you.

Best wishes.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Tom写封祝贺信，祝贺他在学校羽毛球比赛中获得第一名。

【详解】词汇积累

比赛：match→competition

努力：hard work→effort

好的：good→excellent

提高：improve→perfect

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I show my congratulations sincerely.

拓展句：I’m writing to congratulate you on your good performance you have achieved in the match.

【点睛】[高分句型1] This is a good evidence to show what hard work you've devoted to practising and improving your skills. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] That you won the first prize shows your great determination and painstaking effort in practising badminton. (运用了that引导的主语从句)

8．One possible version:

Dear Brooke,

I am writing to tell you that I took the English Speech Contest held in my school yesterday. As the only one from my class, I had to challenge the other 15 excellent participants selected from the whole school. When it was time for me to give the speech, I got a little bit nervous at first, but soon I calmed down at the thought of your words and suggestions.

As you predicted, everything went smoothly and I performed perfectly. Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging, I managed to get through it properly with the techniques you taught me. When the judge announced the result, I wasn’t at all surprised but quite excited! I got the first prize in the contest. Thank you very much for your unselfish and careful help.

I’m looking forward to your return to China. I’d like to show you the contest video.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍教师Broke写一封电子邮件，感谢他对自己英语演讲比赛获得一等奖的帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

发表演讲：give a speech → deliver a speech

建议：suggestion →advice

顺利进行：go smoothly→ go with a swing

选拔：select → choose

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： I got a little bit nervous at first, but soon I calmed down at the thought of your words and suggestions.

拓展句： I got a little bit nervous at first, but soon I calmed down when I thought of your words and suggestions.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to tell you that I took the English Speech Contest held in my school yesterday. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] When the judge announced the result, I wasn’t at all surprised but quite excited! (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

9．Dear Simon,

I’m writing to congratulate you with all my heart on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest.

I’m amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it’s difficult for a foreigner to have such a good command of Chinese speech. You have been working hard in the past few years. It’s your devotion and diligence that contribute to your success. And I’d like to have an online discussion with you sometime, where we can share each other’s experience of learning Chinese speech. I hope it could help both of us make more progress in the future.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生朋友Simon在你校举办的中文演讲比赛国外友人专场中获得一等奖，要求考生写一封邮件表示称赞并且期待交流。

【详解】1.词汇积累

非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary

精通，掌握：have a good knowledge of→have a good command of

勤奋：handwork→diligence

导致：lead to/result in→contribute to

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：I’m writing to congratulate you with all my heart on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest.

拓展句：Knowing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest, i am writing to congratulate you with all my heart.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

It’s your devotion and diligence that contribute to your success.（运用了强调句式）

[高分句型2]

And I’d like to have an online discussion with you sometime, where we can share each other’s experience of learning Chinese speech.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3]

I hope it could help both of us make more progress in the future.（运用了宾语从句，省略了引导词that）

10．Dear Tom,

So delighted to learn that you have just been admitted into Harvard University, I am writing to convey my sincerest congratulations on a new chapter in your life!

To be honest, this wonderful news, thrilling as it may be to others, came as no surprise to me. How talented you are and what terrible pains you have been through on your way to Harvard! You deserve it, my pal, for every minute you spend doing every matter to perfection. By the way, as I am supposed to be a freshman in university soon, would you be kind enough to share with me some experience on application? Your pains and gains will surely light my way.

Congratulations again and I wish you greater success in the future.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美籍好友Tom写一封英文邮件，向他表示祝贺；认为他被录取的原因并请教入学申请成功的经验以及再次表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

说实话：to be frank→to be honest

可怕的：horrible→terrible

照亮：brighten→terrible

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Your pains and gains will surely light my way.

拓展句：I’ sure that your pains and gains will surely light my way.

【点睛】[高分句型1] So delighted to learn that you have just been admitted into Harvard University, I am writing to convey my sincerest congratulations on a new chapter in your life! (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] How talented you are and what terrible pains you have been through on your way to Harvard! (运用了感叹句)