湖南高考英语写作分类训练:建议信
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建议信
1.假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩很优秀。但由于骄傲和懒惰,最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.进行安慰;
2.给出劝告(不要骄傲,不忘初心);
3.具体建议(努力复习,制定学习计划等)。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
2.假定你是李华,是衡阳市八中的高一学生,请你通过自己在食堂就餐的感受,给校长发一封e-mail,反映一下食堂服务的情况,然后给出自己的建议。
要点:1. 食堂干净,实物可口,服务态度好;
2. 价格高,种类少,等候时间长;
3. 建议……
注意:1. 词数 100 左右,开头结尾已给出,不计算字数。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:食堂 canteen
Dear Headmaster,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
3.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter来信说他对中国汉字感兴趣,但是在学习时遇到了困难,比如很多汉字不知如何书写,不理解意思等,希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1 .表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.假设你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Peter在学习中国功夫(kung fu)过程中发现困难重重,得知你中国功夫练得不错,发来邮件向你求助。请根据所给提示,给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.提供建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假如你是李华,是学生英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Worried Friend的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大,晚上睡不好,影响了正常的学习和生活。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Worried Friend,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假如你是李华,收到你英国朋友Tom的电子邮件,邮件中提到他想锻炼,但是没有足够的时间,也没有钱去健身俱乐部,而且还难以坚持下去;请你针对他的情况给予回信。内容要点如下:
1. 表示理解; 2. 提出建议; 3. 表示祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
7.全国正在掀起一场停止浪费粮食的运动.假定你是学生会主席李华,请你写一封将在学校广播站英语之声播出的倡议书,内容包括:
1.主题:节约粮食, 停止浪费;2.原因:……;3.建议:……
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头已为你写出,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相对位置作答.
Dear schoolmates,
A campaign targeting stopping wasting food is being carried out across the country.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.假设你是李华, 你的朋友张豪在英语学习上遇到了困难,为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点,用英语给他回一封信。
1. 要有自信心;
2. 多记一些惯用词组 (set phrases) 和句型结构 (sentence structures),并练习造句;
3. 要大量阅读,多背诵(recite)一些好的短文;
4. 写日记是提高写作的好方法.
注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Zhanghao,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9.假定你是李华,你的好朋友Daisy最近很苦恼,她身体偏胖,总感觉同学们嘲笑她。请你给她回封邮件,给她提些建议,如何正确减肥并保持健康。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,但是不计入总词数。
Dear Daisy,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10.假定你是李华,你的朋友Lynn最近很苦恼,因为不善于表达,与同学交流出现诸多问题。请你给她回一封信,内容包括:
1.表达安慰;
2.分析现状
3.提出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lynn,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1.Dear Tom,
I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down because of your pride and laziness. But it's not time for you to feel desperate. I believe you can find yourself back by taking action.
In my opinion, you shouldn't be proud and just keep working hard. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished. Now, let me give you some advice. First of all, you must review the content that you have missed studying recently. In addition, it's necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up.
I hope you could feel better and get higher grades.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你的留学生朋友Tom写封邮件,劝他在学习上不要骄傲,制定计划,努力学习,成绩一定会提高的。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成进行时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.进行安慰;
2.给出劝告(不要骄傲,不忘初心);
3.具体建议(努力复习,制定学习计划等)。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Slip down(下滑); because of(由于); take action(采取行动); work hard(努力学习); give sb. some advice(给……一些建议); a study plan(学习计划); keep up(坚持)
第三步:连词成句
1. I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down because of your pride and laziness.
2. But it's not time for you to feel desperate.
3. I believe you can find yourself back by taking action.
4. In my opinion, you shouldn't be proud and just keep working hard.
5. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished.
6. First of all, you must review the content that you have missed studying recently.
7. In addition, it's necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(仅供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished. 不忘初心,方得始终。(why连接的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First of all, you must review the content that you have missed studying recently. 首先,你必须复习你最近错过的学习内容。(that连接的定语从句)
[高分句型3] In addition, it's necessary for you to make a proper study plan which you can keep up. 此外,你有必要制定一个合适的学习计划,并坚持下去。(which连接的定语从句)
2.Dear Headmaster,
I’m a Grade one student of our school. I’m writing to you to tell you something about the canteen service in our school.
As a matter of fact, it can’t be denied that there are some advantages of canteen service in our school. Firstly, the canteen is very clean. In addition, the dishes taste delicious. What impresses most to us is that the attitude of service is great.
But every coin has two sides, and our canteen is not an exception, such as the high price of some food, few varieties to choose from, too long waiting time for buying food and so on.
So, to avoid such problems mentioned above, to my mind, we can invite students to take part in the canteen for offering help. For instance, we students may have a say in the food we’d like to let the canteen make. I hope more and more students will like our canteen service.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文,给校长发一封e-mail,反映一下食堂服务的情况,然后给出自己的建议。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 食堂干净,实物可口,服务态度好;
2. 价格高,种类少,等候时间长;
3. 建议……
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
service; deny; advantage; impress; exception; offering; invite
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to you to tell you something about the canteen service in our school.
2. As a matter of fact, it can’t be denied that there are some advantages of canteen service in our school.
3. What impresses most to us is that the attitude of service is great.
4. But every coin has two sides, and our canteen is not an exception, such as the high price of some food, few varieties to choose from, too long waiting time for buying food and so on.
5. So, to avoid such problems mentioned above, to my mind, we can invite students to take part in the canteen for offering help.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 表文章结构顺序:Firstly
2. 表并列补充关系:In addition
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a matter of fact, it can’t be denied that there are some advantages of canteen service in our school. (运用了it做形式主语以及that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] What impresses most to us is that the attitude of service is great. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
3.Dear Peter,
I'm more than glad to know that you are interested in Chinese characters. It's never easy to learn the pronunciation and meanings of Chinese characters. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don't have to feel upset.
Here are some useful tips for you. First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important thing is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Peter写封回信,给他关于学习中国汉字困难的建议。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1 .表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
more than; be glad to; be interested in; be easy to; have to; turn to sb. for help; keep on doing; be sure to; make progress
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm more than glad to know that you are interested in Chinese characters.
2. It's never easy to learn the pronunciation and meanings of Chinese characters.
3. First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters.
4. But the most important thing is to keep on lemming and reading.
5. You are sure to make progress.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序: First, Second
2. 表转折对比关系:but
3. 表因果关系:So
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm more than glad to know that you are interested in Chinese characters.这句话运用了宾语从句。
[高分句型2] First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. 这句话运用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3] But the most important thing is to keep on learning and reading. 这句话运用了不定式作表语。
4.Dear Peter',
I'm sorry to learn that you are struggling with Chinese kung fu. Actually, there is no need to feel upset. Here I'd like to offer you some suggestions.
To begin with, it would be wise to learn from a nice coach, whose professional guidance will definitely be beneficial to improving your kung fu. Additionally, you are advised to join a club so that you can practice regularly with others. Some classic teaching videos may be of great use as well Rome is not built in a day. It is time and patience that contribute to improvement.
I hope you'll find these suggestions helpful and I'm sure you will have fun practicing Chinese kung fu.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假设你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Peter在学习中国功夫(kung fu)过程中发现困难重重,得知你中国功夫练得不错,发来邮件向你求助。请根据所给提示,给他回一封电子邮件。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括:1.表示安慰;2.提供建议;3.表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
struggling with;feel upset;offer you some suggestions;To begin with;learn from;be beneficial to;so that等。
第三步:连词成句(包含关键句,至少3句)
1. Actually, there is no need to feel upset.
2. To begin with, it would be wise to learn from a nice coach, whose professional guidance will definitely be beneficial to improving your kung fu.
3. Some classic teaching videos may be of great use as well Rome is not built in a day.
4. It is time and patience that contribute to improvement.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, it would be wise to learn from a nice coach, whose professional guidance will definitely be beneficial to improving your kung fu.句中使用whose引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] Additionally, you are advised to join a club so that you can practice regularly with others.句中运用so that引导的目的状语从句。
[高分句型3] It is time and patience that contribute to improvement.句中使用强调句型。
5.【参考范文一】
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you couldn't sleep well because of great pressure. I understand your feelings in the freshman year. Therefore, I'd like to offer you some suggestions.
Firstly, I recommend that you talk to someone you trust, which is obviously a good way of sharing your feelings and getting support. Secondly extra-curricular activities and team games with classmates will also be helpful to get rid of your pressure. So, why not work out regularly? This way, you will feel energetic and improve your sleep quality.
I hope you'll find my advice useful. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生回复一封署名为Worried Friend的来信,给这位同学表示理解并给予安慰,提出适当的建议并说明理由。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
can’t sleep well; because of; great pressure; understand; freshman year;Therefore; offer; suggestion; Firstly; recommend; trust; obviously; a good way of doing; support; Secondly; extra-curricular; activity; helpful; get rid of; pressure; why not; work out; regularly; energetic; improve; sleep quality.
第三步:连词成句
1.You wrote that you couldn't sleep well because of great pressure.
2.Therefore, I'd like to offer you some suggestions.
3.Firstly, I recommend that you talk to someone you trust, which is obviously a good way of sharing your feelings and getting support.
4. Secondly extra-curricular activities and team games with classmates will also be helpful to get rid of your pressure.
5.This way, you will feel energetic and improve your sleep quality.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Firstly, Secondly, This way.
2.表因果关系:So, Therefore.
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]You wrote that you couldn't sleep well because of great pressure. (由that引导宾语从句。)
[高分句型2] Firstly, I recommend that you talk to someone you trust, which is obviously a good way of sharing your feelings and getting support.(由which引导非限定性定语从句。)
6.Dear Tom,
I quite understand your situation and there are some suggestions that you might find helpful.
First, remember that you don’t have to exercise for 30 minutes or a whole hour non-stop. Instead, try to do small amounts of exercise, for example, taking the stairs up instead of the lift. Second, you don’t have to pay to exercise. Many can be done outside the gym, such as running and walking. Finally, you can invite your family and friends to work out with you. In this way, you are more likely to stick with.
I’m sure you’ll soon be happy to exercise.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件,针对他对于锻炼方面的问题给予回信。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 表示理解;
2. 提出建议;
3. 表示祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
try to do ;amounts of ;for example ;instead of ;pay to ;work out ;be likely to do sth.
第三步:连词成句
Instead, try to do small amounts of exercise, for example, taking the stairs up instead of the lift.
Second, you don’t have to pay to exercise.
Finally, you can invite your family and friends to work out with you.
In this way, you are more likely to stick with.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First, Second, Finally
2.表转折对比关系:Instead
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Many can be done outside the gym, such as running and walking.(运用了被动语态)
[高分句型2] Finally, you can invite your family and friends to work out with you.(运用了不定式作宾语补足语)
7.参考范文
Dear schoolmates,
A campaign targeting stopping wasting food is being carried out across the country.With a lot of food wasted in our school every day, I am here to appeal to you to save on food.After all, it takes so much to grow and process food.Besides, many other people around the world are starving!
I earnestly suggest that we should never ask more food than we can eat, whether at home, school canteen or restaurants.And all the leftover should be properly dealt with and reused.Let's eat up and make a difference!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封将在学校广播站英语之声播出的以“停止浪费粮食”为主题的倡议书。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.主题:节约粮食, 停止浪费;
2.节约粮食的原因;
3.节约粮食的建议
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
appeal to ;after all; around the world;deal with;eat up;make a difference
第三步:连词成句
1.With a lot of food wasted in our school every day, I am here to appeal to you to save on food.
2.After all, it takes so much to grow and process food.
3.Besides, many other people around the world are starving!
4.I earnestly suggest that we should never ask more food than we can eat, whether at home, school canteen or restaurants.
5.And all the leftover should be properly dealt with and reused.
6.Let's eat up and make a difference!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
本文使用了表并列补充关系的衔接词:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] With a lot of food wasted in our school every day, I am here to appeal to you to save on food.(动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] I earnestly suggest that we should never ask more food than we can eat, whether at home, school canteen or restaurants.(that引导宾语从句)
8.One possible version:
Dear Zhanghao,
Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English. I can understand your feeling now, but don’t worry too much and I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
First of all, don’t be disappointed and just believe in yourself. Secondly, you’d better memorize some set phrases and sentence structures and practice making sentences with them. Thirdly, spend more time in reading and reciting good passages, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills. Last but not least, keeping a diary in English is a good way to improve your English writing. You can have a try without delay.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful and I believe with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help. Best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给张豪写一封回信,解决他在英语学习上遇到的困难。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 说明写信目的
2. 提出建议
①要有自信心
②多记一些惯用词组 (set phrases) 和句型结构 (sentence structures),并练习造句
③要大量阅读,多背诵(recite)一些好的短文
④写日记是提高写作的好方法
3.表达祝福
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
have difficulty in; believe in; had better do sth; spend time in doing; contribute to doing; help to do; keep a diary; a way to do; have a try; manage to do
第三步:连词成句
1. Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.
2. I can understand your feeling now, but don’t worry too much and I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
3. Don’t be disappointed and just believe in yourself
4. You’d better memorize some set phrases and sentence structures and practice making sentences with them.
5.Spend more time in reading and reciting good passages, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills.
6. Keeping a diary in English is a good way to improve your English writing
7. I hope you will find these suggestions useful and I believe with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
8. Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Secondly,Thirdly, Last but not least
2.表转折对比关系:but
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] spend more time in reading and reciting good passages, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.(if引导条件状语从句)
9.Dear Daisy,
I’m so sorry to learn that you are worried about your weight. This is a common problem that every girl may have. Try these pieces of advice and see if they help.
First of all, I suggest that you should have a healthy balanced diet instead of eating too much junk foods. What’s more, it might be a good idea for you to exercise to prevent you from putting on weight. Last but not least, you are supposed to keep positive. You can communicate with your close friend heart-to-heart about your concern.
I hope that the advice is of great value to you. I wish you all the best.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给好朋友Daisy回封邮件,给她提些建议,如何正确减肥并保持健康。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表达问候;
2.说明建议;
3.表示祝愿。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be worried about;pieces of advice;first of all;instead of;what’s more;prevent sb. from doing sth.;put on weight;last but not least;be supposed to do sth.;communicate with sb.;be of great value
第三步:连词成句
1.I’m so sorry to learn that you are worried about your weight.
2.This is a common problem that every girl may have.
3.Try these pieces of advice and see if they help.
4.I suggest that you should have a healthy balanced diet instead of eating too much junk foods.
5.It might be a good idea for you to exercise to prevent you from putting on weight.
6.You are supposed to keep positive.
7.You can communicate with your close friend heart-to-heart about your concern.
8.I hope that the advice is of great value to you.
9.I wish you all the best.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What’s more
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]First of all, I suggest that you should have a healthy balanced diet instead of eating too much junk foods.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]What’s more, it might be a good idea for you to exercise to prevent you from putting on weight.(it为形式主语,动词不定式为真正的主语)
10.Dear Lynn,
Sorry to learn that you are having trouble in communicating with your classmates, I’m writing to give you a helping hand.
I quite understand your depression, since it is quite common for a shy student like you to have difficulty associating with others. Probably, your classmates just feel unsure whether you’re interested in their topics. To help you out, I highly suggest you step out of comfortable zone and take an active part in after-class activities where you can naturally establish a closer relationship and find common talking materials.
Hopefully, you can find your problem solved soon!
Yours,
LiHua.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Lynn写信,安慰她,并就她的问题提出建议。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分总法
总分总法指把开头提出论点,中间若干分论点,结尾总括论点的写作方法,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表达安慰;
2.分析现状
3.提出建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be sorry to do sth./ have trouble in doing sth./ give sb. a hand/ be interested in/ communicate with sb./ take an active part in/ advise sb. to do sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. Sorry to learn that you are having trouble in communicating with classmates, I’m writing to give you a helping hand.
2. I quite understand your depression, because it is quite common for a shy student like you to have difficulty associating with others.
3. Probably, your classmates just feel unsure whether you’re interested in their topics.
4. To help you out, I highly suggest you step out of comfortable zone and take an active part in after-class activities where you can naturally establish a closer relationship and find common talking materials.
5. Hopefully, you can find your problem solved soon!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文猜测:Probably
2.表达建议:To help you out
3.表达希望:Hopefully
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Sorry to learn that you are having trouble in communicating with your classmates, I’m writing to give you a helping hand.(使用了that引导宾语从句。)
[高分句型2] I quite understand your depression, because it is quite common for a shy student like you to have difficulty associating with others.(使用了because引导原因状语从句。)
[高分句型3] Probably, your classmates just feel unsure whether you’re interested in their topics.(使用了whether引导宾语从句。.)
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