湖南高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份湖南高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共20页。
建议信
1．根据以下要点，以“WATER”为题，写一篇120字左右的短文。
1. 水的重要性，人们的生活离不开水。
2. 水资源越来越缺乏（请列举原因，如人口增长、水资源遭到污染等）。
3. 我们必须……
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2．假定你是高三学生李华，你的笔友Bob是一名高一新生。他发来邮件询问“What to learn in senior high school”，请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件。
1.学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚、友善等；
3.学会……
注意：1.词数：80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
I am glad to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，得知你的笔友Jack和他的好友Mike最近关系很紧张，他很沮丧，请你给Jack回封信，内容包括：1.表示安慰2. 建议朋友相处之道。
注意：1.词数80个左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．请你以你校学生会的名义写一则关于成立英语阅读俱乐部（English book club）的英语通知，内容包括：
1.阅读在生活中的重要性；
2.成立英语阅读俱乐部的目的；
3.欢迎报名参加及提供建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.通知的标题和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
The Student Union
NOTICE
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June 10, 2020
5．假定你是李华，你在英国参加夏令营时，那里有来自多国的中学生夏令营团队。 当地计划为你们举行联谊晚会，请你写一封邮件告知对方你所在的团队将应邀参加本次活动，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2. 你所在团队准备的节目；
3. 合理建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，
6．假定你是李华，你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友，你决定给他写封邮件，告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括：
1.讲座的时间和地点；
2.讲座内容：中国的名胜；
3.建议他去听这个讲座。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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7．假设你是校刊编辑李华，近期收到一封署名为Miss Anxiety的求助信。在信中该同学表示由于考试临近，压力剧增。请用英文给该同学回信，内容要点如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Anxiety,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Leslie给你发邮件告知她参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复她。内容包括：
1. 对考试失利给予安慰；
2. 对汉语学习提出建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Leslie,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the HSK.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是高一学生李华，你校学生将在暑假进行“读一本好书”的活动，以鼓励每个学生都参与到阅读当中。你的英国朋友Leslie给你发邮件询问相关情况，请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复她：
1. 目前存在的一些不良现象；
2. 阅读的好处；
3. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已写好，不计入词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Leslie,
We are assigned to get involved in the activity to read a good book in our summer holiday, which I think is greatly meaningful.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是健康专家李帆，下面是胡波给你写的一封征求建议的信。请你参照这篇短文及提示，给胡波写一封信给他适当的建议并鼓励他。
Dear Li Fan
Please help me! I am a fat teenager. My classmates laugh at me a lot. I don't do sport, and my favourite meal is a hamburger, chips and soft drinks. Is this really such a problem? I don't enjoy exercise; it makes me tired. Also, I' m hungry all the time and love to eat fast food. What should I do? Do you think I should take some weight- -loss pills? What about exercise and food? Please don't tell me to stop eating!
Best wishes
Hu Bo
注意:1.请勿提及与考生有关的真实信息；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Hu Bo
I was so sad when I heard that people laughed at you for being a little overweight. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please write back and tell me what you think about my plan.
Best wishes
Li Fan









1．                                                                                   WATER
Water is the basic source of life. Water is very important for us. We must drink water every day. We can't live without water.
But with the world's growing population and fast developing economies, the world's water reserves are drying up fast. What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste water from factories. Fish can't live in them any longer. At the same time, the waste water does great harm to people's health.
We should save water. Firstly, take shorter showers and don't leave the tap running when we don't need to use water. Secondly, try to reuse water. It's the most important way for us to save water. At last, we should not pollute water so that we will have fresh water for years and years.
In a word, water is very important and we should do as much as we can to save water in our everyday life.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一篇短文，介绍水的重要性、水资源越来越缺乏的问题及我们必须采取哪些措施来改善这个问题。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，个别表达需要用到一般将来时和现在进行时。
结构：三部分：第一部分介绍水的重要性，引出主题；第二部分阐述水资源越来越缺乏的问题及我们必须采取哪些措施来改善这个问题；第三部分再次呼吁节约用水。
要求：1. 介绍水的重要性，人们的生活离不开水。
2. 介绍水资源越来越缺乏的现状（请列举原因，如人口增长、水资源遭到污染等）。
3. 阐述我们必须采取哪些措施来改善这个问题。
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
population (人口); economy (经济); reserve (储备); dry up (枯竭，干涸); pollute (污染); not…any longer (不再……); reuse (重复使用); do harm to… (损害……，伤害……);
第三步：连词成句
1. Water is the basic source of life.
2. But with the world's growing population and fast developing economies, the world's water reserves are drying up fast.
3. A lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste water from factories.
4. It's the most important way for us to save water.
5. We should not pollute water so that we will have fresh water for years and years.
6. Water is very important and we should do as much as we can to save water in our everyday life.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly(本篇文章使用过)/first; secondly(本篇文章使用过)/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last(本篇文章使用过)
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more(本篇文章使用过); besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…;  some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word(本篇文章使用过); in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
Firstly, take shorter showers and don’t leave the tap running. 本句用来提出第一个节约用水的建议。可以使用时间状语从句，进一步描述什么时候不要让水龙头里的水一直流。润色修改为：Firstly, take shorter showers and don’t leave the tap running when we don’t need to use water.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：Firstly, take shorter showers and don’t leave the tap running when we don’t need to use water.，这句话为when引导的时间状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：dry up; not…any longer; do harm to…等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如population; economy; reserve; pollute等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Bob,
I am glad to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
First, you should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, you should learn how to get along well with others. Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, which were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life in senior high school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给此前向你询问“What to learn in senior high school”的笔友Bob，给予他高中学什么的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2. 学会做人：真诚、友善等；
3. 学会……。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
used to do sth.；benefit sb.；get involved in sth.；get along well with sb.；take part in sth.；build up one’s body
第三步：连词成句
1. I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals.
2. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class,
3. you should learn how to get along well with others.
4. you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, which were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class这句话中用了what引导的宾语从句，如Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, which were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如used to do sth.，get involved in sth.，take part in sth.，build up one’s body等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 First，In addition，Finally。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear of your trouble that you have some conflicts with your friend Mike. Now I am writing to you to express what I think we should do to get along well with our friends.
It is easy to make friends but not easy to make good ones. Of course, the concept of a good friend varies from person to person. In my opinion, a good friend should have the following basic qualities. First, a good friend must be an honest person. Good friends should be honest with each other. Second，a good friend must be a kind and helpful person. Good friends should help each other if they are in trouble. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Third，whoever is through thick and thin must be your good friend.
In a word, friends are mutual. I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you will be feeling much better.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生写信安慰朋友，并给出朋友相处的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
要求：1.表示安慰
2. 建议朋友相处之道
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have conflicts with; get along well; vary from; in trouble; mutual
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear of your trouble that you have some conflicts with your friend Mike.
2. Now I am writing to you to express what I think we should do to get along well with our friends.
3. Of course, the concept of a good friend varies from person to person.
4. Good friends should help each other if they are in trouble.
5. In a word, friends are mutual.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I am sorry to hear of your trouble that you have some conflicts with your friend Mike. 这句话运用了同位语从句。Now I am writing to you to express what I think we should do to get along well with our friends.运用了宾语从句。固定搭配运用了如have conflicts with; get along well; vary from; in trouble; mutual等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．The Student Union
NOTICE
Reading is very important in today’s world, as we gain vast knowledge of how the world works mainly through varieties of reading materials, so developing reading ability is something that must be done to meet various challenges in life. To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club that aims to create an environment where they can spend time reading together, have book discussions, share good books and attend lectures on reading.
Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by June 20, and any creative suggestions and ideas are welcome.
June 10, 2020
【分析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生写出成立英语俱乐部的通知，强调阅读的重要性，欢迎同学参加。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
要求：
1.阅读在生活中的重要性；
2.成立英语阅读俱乐部的目的；
3.欢迎报名参加及提供建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
vast knowledge; varieties of; various challenges; set up; be interested in
第三步：连词成句
1. as we gain vast knowledge of how the world works mainly through varieties of reading materials,
2. so developing reading ability is something that must be done to meet various challenges in life. 3. the Student Union will set up an English book club that aims to create an environment where they can spend time reading together, have book discussions, share good books and attend lectures on reading.
4. Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by June 20,

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：so developing reading ability is something that must be done to meet various challenges in life.这句话运用了定语从句，先行词是something，不定代词做主语，连接词用that。To encourage the students to become great English readers, the Student Union will set up an English book club that aims to create an environment where they can spend time reading together, have book discussions, share good books and attend lectures on reading.运用了非谓语动词to do做目的，后半句用了定语从句，先行词是environment，先行词在从句中做地点状语，连接词用where。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Sir，
I am Li Hua and I am taking part in the summer camp in the UK, where there are many middle school students summer camp team from different countries. I am glad to hear that you are planning for us to hold a friendship party. I am writing to sign up for the party.
Should I attend the party, I would sing a Chinese fork song for all the participants. Besides, my team has prepared a traditional dance, which will reflect Chinese customs.
I suggest that you invite more participants to take part in the party so we can get along with each other better.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你在英国参加夏令营时，那里有来自多国的中学生夏令营团队。 当地计划为你们举行联谊晚会，请你写一封邮件告知对方你所在的团队将应邀参加本次活动，内容包括：1.写信目的；2. 你所在团队准备的节目；3. 合理建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：take part in(参加)；the summer camp (夏令营)；friendship (友谊)；sign up for (报名参加)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Should I attend the party, I would sing a Chinese fork song for all the participants.运用了虚拟语气的省略；Besides, my team has prepared a traditional dance, which will reflect Chinese customs.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Mike,
Good news for you. There will be a lecture for foreign students at 9 on Saturday morning in the city training center. The lecture is about places of interest in China. So why don’t you attend it? It’s really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China. Not only will you learn more about famous places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese culture and history.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友，你决定给他写封邮件，告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括：1.讲座的时间和地点；2.讲座内容：中国的名胜；3.建议他去听这个讲座。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：places of interest (名胜古迹)；attend (出席，参加)；opportunity (机会)；get a better understanding of (更好地理解)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It’s really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China.运用原因状语从句；Not only will you learn more about famous places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese culture and history.运用倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Miss Anxiety,
I’m sorry to know that you are experiencing a tough time now. Actually, everyone will encounter such a period when they are under great pressure, so there is no need to worry too much.
In my opinion, sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions. Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise, which can lift your spirit. Also, keep an optimistic attitude towards life about your future.
I hope my advice will be of benefit to you. May you get rid of your trouble soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假设你是校刊编辑李华，近期收到一封署名为Miss Anxiety的求助信。在信中该同学表示由于考试临近，压力剧增。请用英文给该同学回信。
【详解】假设你是校刊编辑李华，近期收到一封署名为Miss Anxiety的求助信。在信中该同学表示由于考试临近，压力剧增。请用英文给该同学回信，内容要点如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时为主进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise, which can lift your spirit. 表语从句和非限制性定语从句的运用；I hope my advice will be of benefit to you. 宾语从句的运用。
8．Dear Leslie,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.
As we all know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs great efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. Meanwhile, you may as well read as many Chinese materials as you can. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyway, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.
Good luck next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达对朋友考试失利的安慰和给与汉语学习的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段表达安慰；第二段给与汉语学习的建议；第三段寒暄结束。
要求：1.表达安慰（hope; not let you down）
      2.给与汉语学习建议
      1）需要努力和耐心（great efforts and patience）
      2）关注词汇和表达的正式用法（pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions）
      3）阅读汉语材料（read as many Chinese materials as you can）
      4）从错误中吸取教训（learn from the mistakes）
      3.寒暄结束（Good luck next time.）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
let sb. down; as we all know; had better; pay attention to; may as well do; as…as you can; learn from; make great progress; good luck
第三步：连词成句
1. I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.
2. As we all know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs great efforts and patience.
3. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts.
4. Meanwhile, you may as well read as many Chinese materials as you can.
5. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made.
6. Anyway, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.
7. Good luck next time.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.( 我希望这次意外的失败不会让你失望，因为我们第一次见面时，你说的一口流利的中文仍然让我惊叹不已。)这句话运用了that引导宾语从句，同时，“for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met”为原因状语从句。
Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts.( 就我个人而言，我认为你最好密切注意汉语单词和短语的正式用法，这才是真正重要的。)这句话中which引导非限制性定语从句。
More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made.( 更重要的是，你应该从你所犯的错误中吸取教训。)这句话中that引导限制性定语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如let sb. down; as we all know; had better; pay attention to; may as well do; as…as you can; learn from; make great progress; good luck等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Leslie,
We are assigned to get involved in the activity to read a good book in our summer holiday, which I think is greatly meaningful.
As we know, nowadays a lot of students prefer to spend much time in watching TV and they are crazy about the Internet. So most of them don’t have enough time to read books. And what’s worse, they don’t like reading. However, reading is necessary. I firmly think that by reading not only can we enrich our life and broaden our horizons but also we can learn to perfect our personality.
Now that reading is good for us, let’s develop a good habit of reading. I strongly suggest that every one of us should read at least one or two good books every term.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向朋友介绍学校举办的“读一本好书”活动的相关情况以及个人建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段为写信背景（已给出）；第二段讲述关于活动的相关情况；第三段提出个人建议。
要求：1.写信背景
      2.关于活动的相关情况
      1）原因：不良现象的存在（prefer to spend much time in watching TV ; be crazy about the Internet）
      2）阅读的好处（necessary; enrich our life and broaden our horizons; perfect our personality）
      3.个人建议（suggest; read at least one or two good books every term）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
prefer to; spend much time doing; be crazy about; what’s worse; not only…but also; enrich our life and broaden our horizons; perfect our personality; develop a good habit of doing; at least
第三步：连词成句
1. As we know, nowadays a lot of students prefer to spend much time in watching TV and they are crazy about the Internet.
2. And what’s worse, they don’t like reading.
3. I firmly think that by reading not only can we enrich our life and broaden our horizons but also we can learn to perfect our personality.
4. Now that reading is good for us, let’s develop a good habit of reading.
5. I strongly suggest that every one of us should read at least one or two good books every term.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了高级句式结构和一些主从复合句，如：
I firmly think that by reading not only can we enrich our life and broaden our horizons but also we can learn to perfect our personality.(我坚定地认为，通过阅读不仅可以丰富我们的生活，开阔我们的视野，而且我们可以学习完善我们的人格。)这句话运用了not only…but also并列句结构，且在that宾语从句中将not only置于从句句首部分而使用了部分倒装句式。
Now that reading is good for us, let’s develop a good habit of reading.(既然阅读对我们有好处，就让我们养成阅读的好习惯吧。)这句话中now that引导原因状语从句。
I strongly suggest that every one of us should read at least one or two good books every term.(我强烈建议我们每个人每学期至少要读一到两本好书。)这句话中that引导宾语从句，且由于谓语suggest意为“建议”，that引导的宾语从句为虚拟语气句式结构。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如prefer to; spend much time doing; be crazy about; what’s worse; not only…but also; enrich our life and broaden our horizons; perfect our personality; develop a good habit of doing; at least等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Hu Bo
I was so sad when I heard that people laughed at you for being a little overweight. Please know that I am a true friend, and that I don't laugh at you or have bad feelings towards you. I think you look good, but you'll become healthier and feel better about yourself if you lose a little weight. If it is any comfort to you, I have also put on some weight recently, and so perhaps I can go on a diet along with you. Here's a great idea—why don't you play basketball with me next Saturday? It would help you get some exercise, and it would also be great fun! We can do this together.
Please write back and tell me what you think about my plan.
Best wishes
Li Fan
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给胡波写一封回信，给他适当的建议并鼓励他。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
laugh at; overweight; true friend; have bad feelings towards sb.; feel better about oneself; lose weight; comfort; put on weight; along with sb.; get some exercise; think about
第三步：连词成句
1.I was so sad when I heard that people laughed at you for being a little overweight.
2.Please know that I am a true friend, and that I don't laugh at you or have bad feelings towards you.
3.I think you look good, but you'll become healthier and feel better about yourself if you lose a little weight.
4.If it is any comfort to you, I have also put on some weight recently, and so perhaps I can go on a diet along with you.
5.Here's a great idea—why don't you play basketball with me next Saturday?
6.It would help you get some exercise, and it would also be great fun!
7.We can do this together.
8.Please write back and tell me what you think about my plan.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I was so sad when I heard that people laughed at you for being a little overweight. 这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如laugh at; lose weight; put on weight等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。