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高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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这是一份高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共17页。

建议信

1．假如你是李华，获悉中国日报(China Daily)将举办“最美中国”(Amazing China)手机摄影大赛。请写封邮件建议你的美国留学生朋友George参加，邮件内容包括:

1.作品要求:展示风土人情，附上作品名称；

2.投稿方式与截止时间：12月30号前发邮件至acchinadaily.com.cn

3.表示愿意提供帮助。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear George,

How is everything going?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．你是张伟的好朋友John ，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。

1.比赛之前:认真准备，如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻。

2.比赛时: 保持微笑；忘词时不紧张，继续演讲。

写作内容:

1.说明回信的意图；

2.向张伟提出建议；

3.预祝张伟比赛成功。

参考词汇: 简洁的:concise ; 惊慌的:panic .

3．假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom要来你校做交换生一年，写信向你咨询让他能够尽快地适应你校的生活和学习的方法，请按以下要点给他回信，给予建议，内容：

1．上课不能迟到和早退，要穿校服，保持校园整洁，不带手机回校；

2．与英国不同，走路骑车要靠右；

3．学习上，科目（subject）比较多，要合理安排时间完成作业并尽可能做好预习工作。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I’m so glad to know that you will come and study in our school as an exchange student for one year.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

4．高二即将过去，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心里压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一封信件，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:

1、劳逸结合；

2、健康饮食；

3、适当锻炼；

4、保持乐观心态。

注意：1、短文必须包括所列内容；

2、词数100左右；

Dear Editors,

With the approach of Senior 3 studies, students who have almost finished Senior 2 are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students’life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

5．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Amy发来邮件与你分享好消息，她在当地“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”比赛中中文演讲与二胡独奏表现突出。今年十月她将代表美国赴华参加世界中学生汉语桥总决赛。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 祝贺；

2. 对总决赛的建议；

3. 期待见面。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实信息；

3. 参考词汇：二胡独奏erhu solo

____________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

6．假如你是李华, 你校成立了一个英语俱乐部, 由外教Mr. Smith担任负责人，现在他就俱乐部的活动内容征求成员的意见和建议。请给他写一封信，提出三点建议并说明理由。

注意: 词数100左右。

Dear Mr. Smith,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游，想先学习一些中文，却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他，写一份邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下：

1) 你给他的学习建议

2) 介绍你的帮助计划

3) 对结果的展望

注意：1) 词数100词左右；

2) 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3) 邮件开头结尾已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想来中国旅行，他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐高铁。

建议理由：

1.便捷、准点；

2.舒适、安全；

3.购票方便、价格适宜。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：中国高铁 CRH (China Railway High-speed)；自助售票机 self-service ticket machine

Dear Peter,

I’m expecting you to come to China. _________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，打算在高考结束后去美国参加夏令营, 正好你从网上看到了Stanford University的一则相关消息。请你给负责人Mr. Smith发一封电子邮件询问有关事宜。要点如下:

1. 简单介绍自己的情况;

2. 询向活动详情;

3. 提出相关建议。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________

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10．临近期末，高一同学即将面临着文理分科的选择。假定你是李华，你同学Lucy给你来信说到了她对文理科选择的困扰和焦虑。请你给她回信，安抚她的情绪并提出你的看法和建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右; 书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 内容要点：

① 安抚她的情绪，劝她不必过于纠结；

② 提出参考意见：认清自己兴趣和优势，不盲从他人；向高年级的同学请教 ……

③ 提出看法：无论作何选择都要努力才能实现自己的期望。

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：焦虑anxiety；理性地 rationally；不辜负 live up to

Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear George,

How is everything going? I have some exciting news for you that China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”. I know you have a great love for photography, so why not give it a try?

The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, attractive figures or local customs of China. It would be better if every photo is accompanied with a title. You’d better send your photos to ac@chinadaily.com.cn and the deadline for entries will be Dec.30th.

I believe it is a great opportunity to share your precious experiences with us. If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your helper and offer my advice. I am looking forward to seeing your great works.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假如你是李华，获悉中国日报(China Daily)将举办“最美中国”(Amazing China)手机摄影大赛。请写封邮件建议你的美国留学生朋友George参加，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：中国日报(China Daily)，最美中国(Amazing China)，natural scenery（自然风光），be accompanied with（带有），precious experiences（宝贵经验）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【详解】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如同位语从句的运用：I have some exciting news for you that China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China.”；条件句的运用It would be better if every photo is accompanied with a title.文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

2．Dear Zhangwei,

You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you.

In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practising before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. In addition, When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it.

Wish you success in the speech!

Yours,

John

【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。根据题目要求可知本文要求写一封建议信。内容安排：1．说明回信的意图；2．向张伟提出建议（①比赛之前：认真准备：如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻。②比赛时：保持微笑；忘词时不紧张，继续演讲。）；3．预祝张伟比赛成功。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【详解】第1步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：get well prepared准备充分；leave a deep impression on留下好的印象；don’t be panic不要慌张等。

第2步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，这个时候可以尝试着使用一些复合句。注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第3步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

所给范文内容清楚，条理明确，要点齐全。语言流畅。长短句结合使用。适当使用了一些较好的词汇或句式：限制性定语从句：I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you；目的状语从句：Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges.；.时间状语从句，让步状语从句，原因状语从句和祈使句完美结合：When you are giving the speech , remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words , don’t be panic and just continue your speech , because no one will notice it。

3．Dear Tom,

I’m so glad to know that you will come and study in our school as an exchange student for one year. I’m ready to give you some suggestions that can help you get used to the life and study here as quickly as possible.

When it comes to the life in our school, first of all, it must be made clear that we should never be late for school or leave school before it’s over. What’s more, we’re requested to wear school uniforms and to keep our schoolyard clean and tidy. In addition, mobile phones are not allowed to bring back to the school. Finally, when you’re walking or riding on the road, please remember to keep to the right, which is quite different from England. As for study, there are many subjects in the senior high school, so I suggest that you should arrange your time properly so that you can finish the homework on time. If you could spare some time to preview the lessons, it would be much better.

I hope my advice can help you. Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生把自己当成李华，英国笔友Tom要来校做交换生一年，写信向你咨询让他能够尽快地适应新学校的生活和学习的方法，请给他回信，给予建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

习惯于：get used to→get accustomed to

涉及：when it comes to→refer to

此外：what's more→besides

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：What’s more, we’re requested to wear school uniforms and to keep our schoolyard clean and tidy.

拓展句：What’s more, we’re requested we should wear school uniforms and keep our schoolyard clean and tidy.

【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to the life in our school, first of all, it must be made clear that we should never be late for school or leave school before it’s over.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Finally, when you’re walking or riding on the road, please remember to keep to the right, which is quite different from England. （运用了when引导状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）

4．Dear Editors,

With the approach of Senior 3 studies, students who have almost finished Senior 2 are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students’ life. This prevents them sleeping well and causes problems with their health. In order to improve the condition, I’d like to offer some advice.

First and foremost, combine work with rest. Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Furthermore, it is important to keep a healthy and balanced diet. Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish will benefit you. In addition, go outdoors and take regular exercise, for physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and mentally healthy. Keeping an optimistic state of mind will contribute to a good physical state.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】试题分析：这是一篇应用文中的书信写作。请你用给学校英语刊物写信，给高三阶段压力很大的同学提出建议，并简述理由或者举例说明。

【详解】书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。要点都已经给出，写作中要包含以下四点：1、劳逸结合；2、健康饮食；3、适当锻炼；4、保持乐观心态。但是要点只是提纲，考生要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，选择合适的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。

【点睛】亮点说明：范文使用了一些常用的短语： prevents them （from）doing sth.； offer some advice；combine...with...；First and foremost；keep in mind；Stay away from；take exercise和contribute to。宾语从句that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy；形式主语it it is important to keep a healthy and balanced diet；动名词短语作主语Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish 。用First and foremost、Furthermore、 In addition和Last but not least使文章条理清晰，更加连贯。

5．Dear Amy,

Thank you for your email! I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your victory in the competition of Chinese Bridge!

You must have worked really hard to achieve such a high level of Chinese proficiency. In the past two years, you have kept on practicing erhu every day, which helps you to stand out in the talent show. As for the finals, my suggestion is that you keep practicing erhu and have faith in yourself at the same time. Don’t worry too much about the results, which will definitely be fine.

Looking forward to meeting you in China. I just can’t wait to see you and take you to try all the delicious specialties in my place!

Congratulations again!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，写作时注意以下几点：首先仔细阅读弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：祝贺他获奖；对总决赛的建议；祝愿他能来中国参加决赛；期待见面。其次，提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，要依据提示情景或词语，最后根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态和人称，本文要以第一人称来写，现在时和过去时为主要时态。注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

亮点说明：本文篇章结构严谨，选词得当，文中运用了许多高级词汇，如：offer sincere congratulations to sb on sth, keep on doing sth., stand out, have faith in, can’t wait to等。以简单句为主，配合使用复合句，句式灵活多变。如使用了定语从句：you have kept on practicing erhu every day, which helps you to stand out in the talent show和…, which will definitely be fine；表语从句：my suggestion is that you keep practicing erhu and have faith in yourself at the same time.；表推测的常用句式：You must have worked really hard to achieve such a high level of Chinese proficiency和祈使句Don’t worry too much about the results.

6．Dear Mr. Smith,

I’ m very happy to know you are in charge of the new English Club. I’m writing to offer my suggestions about the activities that it’ll hold.

First, in my opinion, you can hold some English song contests ,which can not only show our singing talents ,but also attract more students to join us. Second, you can offer us some famous English movies to watch and have us talk about them afterwards, which can improve our English speaking and listening ability. Finally, we can go hiking together, which will help us get close to nature and develop our friendship.

I hope you will find these suggestions useful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求我们写一封信，为学校英语俱乐部的活动内容征求成员的意见和建议。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。但是你的观点要自己组织，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in charge of，in one’s opinion，not only … but also …，get close to；还运用句型：I’m writing to offer my suggestions about the activities that it’ll hold.和First, in my opinion, you can hold some English song contests ,which can not only show our singing talents ,but also attract more students to join us. 和Second, you can offer us some famous English movies to watch and have us talk about them afterwards, which can improve our English speaking and listening ability.和 Finally, we can go hiking together, which will help us get close to nature and develop our friendship.这四句都运用了定语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如First，Second，Finally，and等等。

7．Dear Peter,

Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this August.Welcome!As I know,you are always interested in Chinese culture and want to learn some Chinese.Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.

Learning a foreign language needs great efforts.Apparently,I’d like to be your Teacher and send you an e-book wit my teaching schedule later.Besides,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】先要认真审题。你的英国好友Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游，想先学习一些中文，却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他，写一份邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下：你给他的学习建议；介绍你的帮助计划；对结果的展望。其次要确定时态，表示经常或反复发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，文章开头简要说明很高兴好友来中国旅游，接着就如何学好中文给出自己的一些建议，文章最后对方承诺自己会尽最大的努力帮好友学好中文。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百左右。

【点睛】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。例如：be interested in对……感兴趣，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。另外这篇短文还使用了一些高级句型。例如：Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.这里含有一个宾语从句和一个非限制性定语从句。Besides ,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。

8．Dear Peter，

I’m expecting you to come to China. When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which have been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.

It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to go. The CRH trains are spacious, comfortable and run at high speed. They arrive on schedule and guarantee the safety of travelers. It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable. It offers first-class services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Peter回信，因为他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐高铁。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

到达：reach→arrive

确保：assurance→guarantee

此外：in addition→besides

旅途：trip→journey

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable.

拓展句：

It’s easy to get tickets through many channels,because you can buy them by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable.

【高分句型1】When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which have been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.句中when引导时间状语从句，并且which引导非限制性定语从句.

【高分句型2】It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to go.并列句中含有wherever引导的让步状语从句。

9．Dear Mr. smith,

I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student from China. I’m planning to take part in a summer camp in the USA after the College Entrance Examination in June so that I can have a further understanding of the American society, especially college education. I’m delighted that your university happens to offer such a good chance.

I’m writing to know about the details about the arrangements involved in the accommodation, transportation as well as the specific schedules of some major activities in order to make some preparations in advance. In addition, I’d appreciate it if you could arrange some visits to some famous universities during the summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply.

【分析】本文属于应用文。你是李华，打算在高考结束后去美国参加夏令营, 正好你从网上看到了Stanford University的一则相关消息。要求你给负责人Mr. Smith发一封电子邮件询问有关事宜。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

计划，打算：be planning to do→be going to do

为了：so that→in order that

机会：chance→opportunity

此外：in addition→besides

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I’m planning to take part in a summer camp in the USA after the College Entrance Examination in June so that I can have a further understanding of the American society, especially college education.

拓展句：I’m planning to take part in a summer camp in the USA after the College Entrance Examination in June in order that I can have a further understanding of the American society, especially college education.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】I’m delighted that your university happens to offer such a good chance.（使用了句型：主语+系动词+形容词+that从句。）

【高分句型2】In addition, I’d appreciate it if you could arrange some visits to some famous universities during the summer camp. （短语in addition另外，使用了if引导的宾语从句。）

10．Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science. Actually, many senior 1 students have the same aniexty and problem as you. But if we can deal with them rationally, there is nothing to worry.

When it comes to choosing between arts and science, the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths. Never follow others blindly! Besides, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students, who have previous experience and lesson. Finally, whichever we choose, please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expection and choice.

I hope my ideas can help you. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，你同学Lucy给你来信说到了她对文理科选择的困扰和焦虑。请你给她回信，安抚她的情绪并提出你的看法和建议。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：1.安抚她的情绪，劝她不必过于纠结；2.提出参考意见：认清自己兴趣和优势，不盲从他人；向高年级的同学请教 …… 3.提出看法：无论作何选择都要努力才能实现自己的期望。抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般现在时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意：1、提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充；2、为使文章层次清楚，可分三个自然段写：第一自然段说明自己了解了Lucy存在的问题，并安抚她的情绪；第二自然段提出参考意见及看法；第三自然段希望自己的这些建议有帮助。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: deal with处理，live up to做到。还使用了时间状语从句When it comes to choosing between arts and science, the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths.和定语从句Besides, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students, who have previous experience and lesson.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。

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