山西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

邀请信

1．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jay一直对中国美食感兴趣。请你写一封信邀请他参加山西举办的美食文化节，内容包括：

1．写信目的； 2．时间地点； 3．活动内容。

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假定你是李华，计划和同学去孤儿院（orphanage）陪孩子们过中秋节（the Mid-Autumn Festival）。请给外籍学生 Julie 写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：

1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎她表演节目。

注意：1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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3．假定你是李华,你的英国好友Felix来信说他对中国古代名人很感兴趣,请你就此给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.简要介绍你最喜欢的古代名人；

2.你喜欢他/她的理由;

3.邀请Felix来华感受中华文化。

注意1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:名人 celebrity

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4．假定你是李华，是某高中的一名学生。为了让更多的人了解中国优秀的传统文化，你校近日将举办中国传统文化展(the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition)。请给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。邮件的内容包括:

1、展会的宗旨，时间，地点及参加人员；

2、展出内容:相关书籍、图片、实物等；

注意:1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动，针对“低头族”这一问题， 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机，尽量抬起头来，注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件，邀请他一起参加。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

注意：1.行文连贯流畅；2.参考词汇：低头族：phubber 3.词数100词左右 Dear Henry,

How's everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，正在美国交流学习。你的美国老师Amy邀请你下周五下午3点到她的班里为美国小学生上一节课，介绍中国传统艺术——国画。请给她回复一封电子邮件，要点如下：

1. 接受邀请，表示感谢；

2. 国画简介（题材：山水、人物、花鸟；工具材料：毛笔、墨等等）；

3. 课前学生需做的准备。

参考词汇：国画： Chinese ink painting

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Amy,

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Yours

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：

1. 时间；

2. 活动安排；

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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8．假定你是李华，你市图书馆将播放关于中国茶文化的纪录片。你的外教Mr Smith是中国茶文化爱好者，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他一起观看。内容包括:

1.纪录片主要内容；

2.播放时间、地点；

3.中文发音，英文字幕。

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:纪录片documentary 字幕subtitles

Dear Mr Smith.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，想邀请你的外国朋友Eric观看你校的中国民族舞（Chinese folk dance）的表演。请给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表演的时间、地点；

2. 表演的内容。

注意：1. 词数100左右：

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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10．假定你是李华，你想邀请在中国留学的英国好友Peter观看京剧表演，但Peter不在家，你给他写张留言条，内容要点包括：

1.你到Peter家的目的；

2.介绍京剧

3.询问什么时候方便，再约时间观看。

注意：1.词数100字左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.开头和结尾语已为你写出。

参考词汇：quintessence精华、精粹；ornate华丽的

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Jay,

In order to spread Chinese food culture, our city is going to host the First Shanxi International Chinese Culture Food Festival in two weeks. I’ m writing to invite you to attend it with me.

It is to take place in Liuxiang of downtown Taiyuan from 21st to 28th in November. Known as the home of the Chinese noodles, Shanxi has a two-thousand-year history of making delectable dishes from flour and dough. Some chefs will demonstrate their wonderful cooking skills of making different kinds of delicious noodles and visitors are welcome to taste them for free. I think it is a good chance for you to experience Chinese culture. We can get there by bus or walk there.

Looking forward to your coming here soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jay一直对中国美食感兴趣。请你写一封信邀请他参加山西举办的美食文化节，内容包括：1．写信目的；2．时间地点；3．活动内容。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Chinese food culture（中国美食文化），Chinese Food Culture Festival（中国美食文化节），invite（邀请），attend（参加）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如非谓语动词Known as the home of the Chinese noodles, Shanxi has a two-thousand-year history of making delectable dishes from flour and dough.；宾语从句I think it is a good chance for you to experience Chinese culture.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

2．Dear Julie,

I’m writing to invite you to join us in a visit to the nearby orphanage next Saturday for the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is a day for family reunion in our culture. We’ll take some moon cakes and fruits to eat while enjoying the full moon with the children there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. You are welcome to give performances as well. We will be back at 9 p.m. If you’d like to go with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 4 p.m.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，计划和同学去孤儿院（orphanage）陪孩子们过中秋节（the Mid-Autumn Festival）。请给外籍学生 Julie 写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容包括：1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎她表演节目。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：to join us in a visit to the nearby orphanage（加入我们去附近的孤儿院访问）；a day for family reunion（家庭团圆的日子）；together singing, dancing and playing games（一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。We’ll take some moon cakes and fruits to eat while enjoying the full moon with the children there.时间状语；We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；If you’d like to go with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 4 p.m.句中if引导条件状语从句。

3．Dear Felix

I’m very glad to know that you're quite interested in ancient Chinese celebrities.Let me share with you the ancient Chinese celebrity I like best.

Of all the ancient Chinese celebrities, Du Fu, a famous poet of the Tang Dynasty, is my favorite.The reason is that his greatest ambition was to serve his country as a successful civil servant.What's more, he's considered as the greatest of the Chinese poets along with Li Bai.Nearly 1,500 poems of his have been preserved over the ages.I sincerely hope that you can come to China to experience Chinese culture in person when it is convenient for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华,你的英国好友Felix来信说他对中国古代名人很感兴趣,请你就此给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.简要介绍你最喜欢的古代名人；2.你喜欢他/她的理由;

3.邀请Felix来华感受中华文化。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：be interested in（感兴趣）；ancient Chinese celebrities（中国古代名人）；poet（诗人）；ambition（野心）；civil servant（人民公仆）；be considered as（被看作）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The reason is that his greatest ambition was to serve his country as a successful civil servant.运用了表语从句；sincerely hope that you can come to China to experience Chinese culture in person when it is convenient for you.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

4．Dear Mr. Smith,

 I am writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held in our school at the Art Centre this Friday afternoon, from 2:00p.m. to 5:00 p.m.

Since this event aims to help more people learn about Traditional Chinese Culture, the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome. At the exhibition, books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Traditional Chinese Culture much better but definitely feel the unique beauty of it.

If you are interested, please come and enjoy it. And I`d be glad to offer any help. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，是某高中的一名学生。为了让更多的人了解中国优秀的传统文化，你校近日将举办中国传统文化展(the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition)。请给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。邮件的内容包括:1、展会的宗旨，时间，地点及参加人；2、展出内容:相关书籍、图片、实物等；

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition（中国传统文化展）, aim to（计划；打算）, be interested in（感兴趣）；unique beauty（独特的美丽）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Since this event aims to help more people learn about Traditional Chinese Culture, the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome.运用了原因状语从句；At the exhibition, books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Traditional Chinese Culture much better but definitely feel the unique beauty of it.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

5．Dear Henry,

How’s everything going? Next weekend my classmates will hold an activity against phubbers in the street. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.

The mobile phone has brought us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around. Obviously, it can be harmful to their physical health and safety. Therefore, let’s work together to call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold their heads up in the street.

An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o'clock next Sunday morning.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封邀请信：假定你是李华，你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动，针对“低头族”这一问题， 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机，尽量抬起头来，注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件，邀请他一起参加，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； phubber（低头族），convenience（保便利），invite（邀请），harmful（有害的），physical health（身体健康）及safety（安全）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有take part in（参加），care about（关心），happen around (在身边发生)，be harmful to（对……有害），call on（号召）以及pay attention to（注意），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.”，状语从句“If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o'clock next Sunday morning.”，非谓语动词“I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

6．Dear Amy,

    As an exchange student in America, I’m very thankful to be invited to give a lesson to your class about traditional Chinese painting at 3 p.m. next Friday afternoon.

    As you know, traditional Chinese painting is one of Chinese unique art forms, enjoying wonderful fame in the world, mainly including landscape painting, figure painting, bird-and-flower painting. Painted mainly on cloth or paper with ink and brush, traditional Chinese painting is an art form expressing different topics through a variety of special skills. Besides, it’s better for students to prepare some paper, brushes, and ink for the class in advance.

    Thanks again for your invitation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假如你是李华，正在美国交流学习。你的美国老师Amy邀请你下周五下午3点到她的班里为美国小学生上一节课，介绍中国传统艺术——国画。请给她回复一封电子邮件，要点如下：1. 接受邀请，表示感谢；2. 国画简介（题材：山水、人物、花鸟；工具材料：毛笔、墨等等）；3. 课前学生需做的准备。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：As an exchange student in America（作为美国的一名交换生）；about traditional Chinese painting（关于传统的中国绘画）；expressing different topics through a variety of special skills（通过各种特殊技能来表达不同的主题）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级词汇和句子。As you know, traditional Chinese painting is one of Chinese unique art forms, enjoying wonderful fame in the world, mainly including landscape painting, figure painting, bird-and-flower painting.句中as引导非限制性定语从句，且现在分词作伴随状语；it’s better for students to prepare some paper, brushes, and ink for the class in advance.句中it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正的主语；另外，As you know, Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。

7．Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【分析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。

【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。

第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。

第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。

【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。

8．Dear Mr Smith,

I’m writing to invite you to watch a documentary about Chinese tea culture, which will be shown in the City Library from 9 am to 11 am this Sunday.

It’s said the documentary is in Chinese, with English subtitles. Moreover, the history of tea as a drink in China will be talked about in the documentary, as well as the important role tea plays in foreign trade as a commercial product.

I’m sure this documentary will contribute a lot to your understanding of Chinese tea culture. Therefore，if you’re available this Sunday and interested in this documentary, please e-mail me, so we can decide our meeting time and place.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本文为提纲类作文。

【详解】假定你是李华，你市图书馆将播放关于中国茶文化的纪录片。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时态为主。要点为：你的外教Mr Smith是中国茶文化爱好者，请给他写一封邮件，介绍纪录片主要内容；播放时间、地点等，并邀请他一起观看。在写作时，注意书信的格式及串联过渡用语，同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中式英语，并在力所能及的范围内使用复合句、高级句式等，以增加亮点。

【点睛】这篇作文的层次清晰，要点齐全，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语和连结性词语，例如invite sb. to do sth.，Chinese tea culture，contribute to，Moreover, Therefore等，文章还运用了多种句型和复合句结构，如：It’s said the documentary is in Chinese, with English subtitles（it作形式主语），.… as well as the important role tea plays in foreign trade as a commercial product.（定语从句） if you’re available this Sunday…（条件状语从句）等，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化。

9．Dear Eric,

How is everything going? I’m delighted to tell you that there will be a Chinese folk dance show held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the dance feast.

The dance show will take place in the school hall from 6pm to 8pm of January 21. Not only will you enjoy students’ traditional Chinese folk dance, but you will also have the chance to admire some famous dancers’ performance. Besides, there will be a lot of interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese folk dance.

I’d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 表演的时间、地点；2. 表演的内容。第二，人称为第一人称、第二人称和第三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，发出邀请。第二段，表演的时间、地点；表演的内容。第三段，期望回复。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: enjoy ,delighted ,admire, Chinese folk dance, set aside, take place, in the school hall from 6pm to 8pm of January 21,have the chance to do sth, famous dancers’ performance, interesting activities, have a clearer picture of ,accept my invitation.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: that引导的宾语从句I’m delighted to tell you that there will be a Chinese folk dance show held by our school. not only...but also引导的并列句Not only will you enjoy students’ traditional Chinese folk dance, but you will also have the chance to admire some famous dancers’ performance.介词+关系代词引导的定语从句Besides, there will be a lot of interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese folk dance.

第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如that引导的宾语从句I’m delighted to tell you that there will be a Chinese folk dance show held by our school. not only...but also引导的并列句Not only will you enjoy students’ traditional Chinese folk dance, but you will also have the chance to admire some famous dancers’ performance.介词+关系代词引导的定语从句Besides, there will be a lot of interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese folk dance.

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

10．Dear Peter，

I came to see you but you were out．I'd like to invite you to see Beijing Opera with me next week，since you have always wanted to know more about Chinese culture since the first day to China．（高分句型一）

With a history of nearly 200 years，Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre，which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture．（高分句型二）The performers in ornate costume perform various stories that happened in history to audience by singing，dance and motions．（高分句型三）I can tell you more about it when we meet．

Please let me know when you will be free and I will buy the tickets in advance．I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation and I'm sure you'll enjoy it．

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】考查应用文中的留言条写作。

【详解】题目要求假定你是李华，你想邀请在中国留学的英国好友Peter观看京剧表演，但Peter不在家，你给他写张留言条，内容要点包括：1.你到Peter家的目的；2.介绍京剧；3.询问什么时候方便，再约时间观看。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。With a history of nearly 200 years，Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre，which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture．定语从句的运用；The performers in ornate costume perform various stories that happened in history to audience by singing，dance and motions．定语从句的运用。