辽宁省锦州市黑山县2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

辽宁省锦州市黑山县

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年辽宁省锦州市黑山县中考一模英语试题

IX. 书面表达（共15分）

(A)根据要求完成读后续写，并将答案写在答题卡（纸）的相应位置。 （共5分）

     阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。

注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为40～50词；

      2. 必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；

      3. 续写部分最少写一段，第一段的开头语已经为你写好；

      4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。

Have you ever bought near-expired (临近过期的) food? What’s your attitude to near-expired food ? Some people think buying such food is penny-pinching (小气的). As for me, I don’t mind buying it.

First of all, there is no need to worry about near-expired food’s quality or safety. It’s safe if it is stored (保存) well. And I’ll will eat it before it expires.

Secondly, _________________________________________________________________

(B)根据要求完成提示性作文，并将答案写在答题卡（纸）的相应位置。（共10分）

  时光荏苒，三年的初中的生活中，你一定在某些方面做得很好，值得学弟学妹们学习。学校的官方微信公众号正以“Things I do well in junior high school”为题征文。请根据以下要点要求，用英语写一篇文章投稿。

要点：1)你在哪些方面做得好；2)你做得好的原因是什么；3)它们给你带来怎样的影响或改变。

要求: 1. 文中不得出现真实的校名，人名等相关信息。2. 文中要包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥。3. 80-100词开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How time flies ! Looking back to the past three years in junior high school. I think there are some things that I do well.

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2022年辽宁省锦州市黑山县中考一模英语试题

十一、材料作文

71．根据要求完成读后续写。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为40~50词；

2. 必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分最少写一段，第一段的开头语已经为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。

Last week, we made a survey about whether music and art should be included in the entrance exam (入学考试) for the high school. Students have different opinions.

Some students think that it offers us more chance to study music and art. Therefore, we will pay more attention to them, which can improve our art skills.

However, a few students disagree with it. If music and art are in the exam, there will be more subjects to prepare for, and it needs more time and energy.

Paragraph 1:

In my opinion, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

十二、讲稿

72．根据要求完成提示性作文。

在2022年北京冬奥会上，我国奥运健儿充分诠释了“更高，更快，更强，更团结”的奥运精神。他们不屈不挠、不断拼搏，使五星红旗一次次地在奥运赛场升起。请你结合奥运健儿的表现，在班上发表一次励志演讲。

内容包括：

（1）谈谈中国奥运健儿的表现，以及你认为他们取得优异成绩的原因；

（2）中考即将来临，你的梦想是什么？为此，你正在做哪些努力；

（3）呼吁同学们要努力奋斗，实现自己的梦想。

内容提示：运动员 athlete   奖牌 medal  中考 the entrance exam for the high school

要求: 1.文中不得出现真实的校名，人名等相关信息。

2.文中要包含提示的所有信息，适当发挥。

3. 内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。

4.词数80-100词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear teachers and classmates,

I’m glad to be here to give a speech to you. First of all, I’m going to share some of my opinions after watching the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for listening!

2021年辽宁省锦州市黑山县中考一模英语试题

十、书信作文

71．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为40~50词；

2. 必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分最少写一段，第一段的开头语已经为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。

Dear Mr. Lee,

Our junior high school life will come to an end soon. We have to say goodbye, and I must say thank you. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we have spent together. So I feel a little sad because I really don’t want to part with you and all my dear teachers and classmates.

Paragraph 1:

You are the best teacher in my heart.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Jim

十一、讲稿

72．习主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。

要点提示:

1.爱国爱家，诚实，感恩;

2.努力学习，做个有创造力的人;

3.多参加体育锻炼，保持身体健康;

4.善于发现生活中的美，热爱大自然，保护环境;

5.积极参加校内外的各种劳动。

要求:

1.文中不得出现真实的校名，人名等相关信息。

2.文中要包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥。

3. 要求字迹工整，语句通顺，条理清晰，内容完整。

4.词数80-100词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Boys and girls,

My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

答案：

2023年辽宁省锦州市黑山县中考一模英语试题

71．例文

Secondly, the price of most of near-expired food is much lower than usual. So it is not only a good way to eat different kinds of food, but only it can save a lot of money.

In a word, as long as you choose carefully and keep the food correctly, you can buy near-expired food.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇议论文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：本文是续写文章，注意用到前文中划线部分的单词，并标出用到的单词。

[写作步骤]

第一步，继续叙述买临期食品的好处；

第二步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①not only...but also不但……而且

②in a word总的来说

③as long as只要

[高分句型]

as long as you choose carefully and keep the food correctly, you can buy near-expired food.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)

72．例文

Things I do well in junior high school

How time flies! Looking back to the past three years in junior high school, I think there are some things that I do well.

First of all, I develop some good learning habits. For example, I listen to teachers carefully and take notes during class. In this way, I get good grades in almost all the exams. What’s more, I try to keep physically healthy. I keep doing exercise and eat more fruit and vegetables. As a result, I’m much stronger than I used to be. Last but not least, I try my best to help people around me. Now I have many friends who are willing to give me a hand when I’m in trouble.

These things are small but valuable. I hope my experience can benefit you a lot.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据要点介绍自己在三年中做得好的方面，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接开头，引出话题；

第二步，介绍自己哪些方面做得好及做得好的原因，以及它们带来的影响；

第三步，书写结语。表达希望自己的经验能够帮助到大家。

[亮点词汇]

①take notes做笔记

②give sb a hand帮助某人

③last but not least最后但并非最不重要

[高分句型]

①Now I have many friends who are willing to give me a hand when I’m in trouble.（who引导定语从句，when引导时间状语从句）

②I hope my experience can benefit you a lot.（省略that的宾语从句）

2022年辽宁省锦州市黑山县中考一模英语试题

71．[例文]

   In my opinion, music and art should be in the entrance exam for high school. As we all know, art and music play an important role in our life, which can help us develop our interests and make our life more colorful. The most important thing is that we can relax ourselves by art and music in Grade 9. And I think more skills can make our life more interesting.

【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据给定材料进行续写，主题内容是对音乐艺术加入中考提议的个人看法。

2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，对个人观点进行陈述时态应用一般现在时。文章要求词数为40~50词左右，主要写自己对音乐艺术加入中考提议的看法即可。文章应做到观点鲜明，理由充分且符合逻辑，要用上题目所给短文中划线的关键词语。

72．例文

Dear teachers and classmates,

I’m glad to be here to give a speech to you. First of all, I’m going to share some of my opinions after watching the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics.

The athletes tried their best to fight for their dreams and they won many medals. I think they could do so well because they keep working hard and never give up.

As you know, the entrance exam for high school is coming. My dream is to enter the best junior high school in our city. To achieve it, first, I make a study plan and stick to it no matter how many difficulties I face. In addition, I do plenty of exercises so that I can learn from the mistakes. Practice makes perfect and I make great progress.

The harder we work, the luckier we will be! So let’s keep fighting to make our dreams come true!

Thank you for listening!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，根据所给提示内容写一篇关于励志的作文。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需涵盖要点，不要遗漏，针对细节部分可适当发挥使行文连贯，为使语句通畅可使用一些过渡词，如first，in addition等。最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

2021年辽宁省锦州市黑山县中考一模英语试题

71．例文：

You are the best teacher in my heart. Thank you for helping me in my life and study. Thanks to you, I have made great progress. I’ll never forget the time that we spent together. Although I feel sad to part with you, I’ll try to do better in the high school.

Thank you, my favorite teacher. Best wishes to you!

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给的内容和情节进行续写，使短文完整，开头和结尾已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。

2.写作指导：该题目主要使用第一人称，时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，续写部分内容要和所给内容情节联系紧密，保证内容完整，结构清晰条理，并标出所使用关键词语。

72．例文：

Boys and girls，

My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First of all, we must love our country and home. And we should also be honest and thankful to the people who help us. Secondly, we should work hard and be creative in study. Next, exercise can make us strong and confident. We should do more exercise and keep healthy. After that, we are expected to enjoy the beauty in our life. If we pay attention to the nature, we will find the beauty everywhere. So we must protect the environment. Finally, in our free time, we should take an active part in different actives like planting trees.

All in all, if we show our love in our daily life, we’ll have a happy life.  That’s all. Thanks for listening.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。围绕“如何做一个新时代合格的中学生”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。本文分为两段式：第一段根据所给的提示要点，谈一下如何做一个合格的中学生；最后一段总结，并感谢聆听。提出建议时使用first of all，secondly，next等词，让整篇文章看起来很有层次感，逻辑性要强。无语法和标点错误。