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山西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

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这是一份山西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共14页。

邀请信

1．假定你是李华,你校将举办主题为“中国国粹——京剧”的宣传活动。请给你的外教Henry写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：

1. 时间和地点；

2. 活动内容：讲座、现场表演等。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________

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2．假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为“中国国粹——京剧”的宣传活动。请给你的外教Henry写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：

1. 时间和地点；

2. 活动内容：讲座、现场表演等。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

3．假如你是李华，暑假期间美国圣保罗中学( St. Paul’s School) 进行了为期三周的学习和交流。在此期间. 你的美国朋友约翰逊先生:(Mr Johnson)在语言、生活等方面给你很大帮助, 请根据下列提示和你的想象写一份书信。

1. 表达对约翰逊先生的感激之情;

2. 感谢约翰逊先生所给予的帮助;

3. 邀请约翰逊先生来中国观光旅游。

注意:

1. 词数100 左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

4．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom邀请你周末晚上去他家吃晚餐,你因故不能出席。请你用英文给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意；

2. 解释原因；

3. 另约时间。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 展览时间、地点；

2. 展览内容。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Henry,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

6．学校网站新开设了一个”英语写作”栏目(column),以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括:

开设目的

栏目优势:教师在线(online)指导等

作文要求:内容贴近学生生活

优秀作文的鼓励办法

邀请大家参与

注意:

1.词数120左右。

2.开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

Welcome to the column “English Writing” !

7．假定你是李华，想邀请英国笔友David明年寒假来你家体验中国春节的风俗。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.简述写信意图；

2.简要介绍春节；

3.描写你在今年春节期间印象深刻的一项传统活动；

4.表达欢迎他来做客的愿望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不记入总词数。

参考词汇：lunar calendar农历

Dear David,

I’m really pleased to________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛”(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。主要内容包括：

1．大赛的目的和意义；

2．主办方：校学生会。时间：2017年12月30日。地点：校报告厅(assembly hall)；

3．范围：唐诗三百首(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

Notice

Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture?_______________________

159．假如你是李华,你和你的美国笔友David约好这个寒假你将去美国看望他,并给他带一些具有中国特色的物产,比如剪纸、京剧脸谱等。但是,你的表哥将在这个春节结婚,并且你还将代表学校去北京参加一个很重要的英语演讲比赛。因此,你将无法去美国。请写一封信给David说明情况,致歉,并提出弥补措施。

注意: 1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

2. 词数100左右。

参考词汇：剪纸：paper-cutting 京剧脸谱：Beijing Opera Facial Mask

10．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob得知你以优异的成绩考入晋城一中，特来信向你表示祝贺，并询问你在新学校的学习和生活情况，请你根据以下内容给Bob写一封回信，并邀请他方便的时候来你校参观。内容包括：

1.你的快乐；2.你的苦恼；3.你的打算。

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.书信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：挑战challenge [n.]具有挑战性的challenging [adj.]

压力pressure [n.]

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you. Thank you for your kind letter. Let me tell you something about my new school life.

_______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Henry,

How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed Beijing Opera to be held at 9 a.m. next Tuesday in the school lecture hall.

At the beginning of the activity, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera which is delivered by a famous artist. After that, there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera. The artists dressed in costumes will perform various stories that happened in the history of China by singing, dancing and playing martial arts. Besides, methods of drawing facial makeup will be taught on the spot, so you can try your hand. Would you like to go with me?

I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【详解】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。文章主要内容已经给出，考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以将来时为主。2. 注意文章要以邮件的形式进行叙述，一定要通过简单但必要的句子作为支撑，否则会显得比较生硬，且内容不够丰满。3. 写信目的要明确，内容要表达清楚。不能机械的翻译题干，可以使用适当的连接词，使衔接自然流畅，最好补充一些相关内容，使文章更加生动。

【亮点说明】本文是一封电子邮件，文章布局合理，文中使用了高级词汇和句子。Beijing Opera to be held at 9 a.m. next Tuesday in the school lecture hall.动词不定式一般式的被动式做后置定语；which is delivered by a famous artist.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.if条件句的固定句式运用巧妙；另外，participate in，At the beginning of，dressed in，Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。

2．Dear Henry,

How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed Beijing Opera to be held at 9 a.m. next Tuesday in the school lecture hall.

I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【详解】试题分析：本文是一封邀请函。关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。邀请函态度要诚恳礼貌。

【范围亮点点评】范围使用了高级词汇和句型：I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed Beijing Opera to be held at 9 a.m. next Tuesday in the school lecture hall.简单明了地点明主题；…which is delivered by a famous artist使用了定语从句；The artists dressed in costumes will perform various stories that happened in the history of China by singing, dancing and playing martial arts.使用了过去分词作定语以及定语从句；I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.使用了形式宾语it和状语从句。

3．Dear Mr. Johnson,

How time flies! It has been some days since I left St. Paul’s School. However, whenever I think of the wonderful three weeks I spent in America, I just can’t help thinking of your help. And I’m writing to express my thanks to you from the bottom of my heart.

In St. Paul’s School, it was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience. My English was very poor but you tried your best to give me a hand, and soon my English improved a lot. What’s more, you always encouraged me to keep positive whenever I was in trouble in life.

I’ll never forget this trip as well as your kindness. And I hope you’ll have a chance to pay a visit to great China in future.

Best regards to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】此文为提纲式作文，文章主题为感谢信。文章可分为三段，第一段点名写作背景，交代写作目的。第二段列举感谢原因，第三段再次表达感谢，并邀请其来中国旅游。

文章以第二人称为主，时态以过去时为主，同时注意感谢的语言要诚恳。

亮点分析：文章语言简练，结构条理清晰，注意使用短语或句型来表达自己的感情：如how time flies! I just can’t help thinking of your help; it was so kind of you to have provided; such a happy and lucky experience; you tried your best to give me a hand; you always encouraged me to keep positive 等等语言，使感激之情表达的淋漓尽致。

4．Dear Tom,

How are you? Thanks so much for inviting me to your home for the weekend dinner. I’d like to, but I’m so sorry that I can’t be present.

The reason why I can’t go is that I had a fall yesterday and injured my foot badly. The doctor suggested that I stay in bed for three days. It’s a great pity that I can’t enjoy your mother’s delicious cake.

What about next Saturday evening? At that time, I believe I’ll fully recover from the injury. I’m really expecting to have dinner with you.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】根据提示，假定你是李华写给留学生朋友Tom的一封邮件，在写作时要注意以下几点：1.弄清提示所提供的所有信息，要点包括：表示歉意；解释原因；另约时间。2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序来写。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态，本文可以用第一人称和一般现在时态（表示歉意和说明原因），一般将来时态（表示另约时间）。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

亮点句子：

1. The reason why I can’t go is that I had a fall yesterday and injured my foot badly. why引导定语从句修饰先行词reason，that引导表语从句。

2. The doctor suggested that I stay in bed for three days. that引导宾语从句。

5．Dear Henry,

How are things with you? I've got great news for you. There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month. Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to attend the exhibition with me.

The exhibition, to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an, lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th, which attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad. Featuring Chinese paper-cutting, the exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cuts in different regions, but also presents to us the history and development of paper-cutting in China. I am sure that it will broaden your horizons and that you will enjoy it. I wonder if it is convenient for you to join me in visiting the exhibition.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸papercutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事，many kinds of许多种。还使用了宾语从句I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—papercutting.和定语从句It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。

6．Welcome to the column “English Writing” !

Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing” which provides students with the chances to post their composition and communicate with each other. Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but they can strengthen their self-confidence.

The column has lots of advantages. It is the teacher’s guide online that has an advantage over the other columns. If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with professional teachers. It is required that the composition should be related to the students’ life. What’s more, if it is organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it.

Hoping to the students’ participation.

Yours,

Li Ming

【详解】本文是介绍了”英语写作”这一专栏，文章的要点都已经给出，可数考生只需要适当的发挥，让文章更加丰满即可。写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁明快的阐述自己的观点，使用适当的连接词，高级词汇和高级的句型，同时注意文章的格式。

7．Dear David,

I’m very pleased to invite you to my home to experience the customs and traditions during the Spring Festival next year. Now let me share the festival and some of the holiday activities with you.

The Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of the first lunar month, is the most important festival for all of us.

I had an unforgettable Spring Festival this yea r. On New Year’s Eve, all my family members got together to have a family reunion dinner, after which we enjoyed the CCTV Spring Festival Gala until the clock struck twelve. Then, singing and laughing, I set off fireworks with my cousins to welcome the New Year’s coming. Are you eager to share such great happiness with us during your stay in China?

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】试题分析：本文是一篇电子邮件。英国笔友David明年寒假来你家体验中国春节的风俗。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：简述写信意图；简要介绍春节；描写你在今年春节期间印象深刻的一项传统活动；表达欢迎他来做客的愿望。认真阅读所给的提示，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，要点齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。The Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of the first lunar month, is the most important festival for all of us.句中使用非限制性定语从句；all my family members got together to have a family reunion dinner, after which we enjoyed the CCTV Spring Festival Gala until the clock struck twelve.介词加which引导非限制性定语从句；singing and laughing, I set off fireworks with my cousins to welcome the New Year’s coming.现在分词做伴随状态；Are you eager to share such great happiness with us during your stay in China?一般疑问句的运用恰到好处。

8．Notice

Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest.I’d like to share with you some details.

As scheduled,the contest is to be held on Dec.30th.2017.Yyou are supposed to get prepared before the contest. Above all, it’s recommended that you should read There Hundred Tang Poems,and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture,please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.If you want to attend,please come to the school assembly hall.Don’t miss the chance of being a winner, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.

Don’t hesitate to take part! I’m sure you will benefit a lot and you will gain much progress in Chinese learning.

【详解】试题分析：本文是一个通知。为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛”(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。主要内容包括：大赛的目的和意义；主办方：校学生会。时间：2017年12月30日。地点：校报告厅(assembly hall)；范围：唐诗三百首(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】本文是一个通知，采用三段式，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。As scheduled,the contest is to be held on Dec.30th.2017.过去分词作状语，be+动词不定式一般式的被动式表示将来；it’s recommended that you should read There Hundred Tang Poems,it做形式主语，that主语从句用在后面；If you want to attend,please come to the school assembly hall.句中if引导条件状语从句；另外，are supposed to get prepared，Above all, sign up for，as soon as possible，等的运用为文章增色添彩。

9．Dear David,

I’m writing the letter to apologize that I can’t go to America to see you this winter holiday. I promised to visit you and bring you some traditional Chinese things such as paper-cuttings and Beijing Opera Facial Masks. But I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. One reason is that my cousin’s wedding is planned to be at this Spring Festival. Of course, I can’t miss it. The other reason is that there will be an important English speech contest. I will participate in it on behalf of my school. I have to prepare for it.

To express my sincere apology, I will send the paper-cuttings and Beijing Opera Facial Masks to you by airmail. And if you are free, nothing will be better if you can come to China to attend a traditional wedding. I’ m sure you won’t be disappointed.

I do hope you can forgive me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【详解】试题分析：

本文要求给美国笔友David写封信，告诉他这个暑假不能如约去看他了，在信中说明不能去的原因，致歉并提出弥补措施。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，完整叙述主要内容。(2)人称：以第一人称为主。(3)时态：一般将来时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一段：说明不能去的原因（表哥将在这个春节结婚，代表学校去北京参加一个很重要的英语演讲比赛）；第二段：弥补措施（剪纸、京剧脸谱通过邮件寄给他，邀请David有时间来中国参加传统的中式婚礼）；第三段：致歉。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：多次宾语从句的使用But I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. I’ m sure you won’t be disappointed.；多次使用表语从句One reason is that my cousin’s wedding is planned to be at this Spring Festival. The other reason is that there will be an important English speech contest.；助动词do强调I do hope you can forgive me.。2.使用了重要短语：keep my word 信守诺言；of course 当然；on behalf of代表。

10．Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you. Thank you for your kind letter. Let me tell you something about my new school life.

I am happy that my new school is very beautiful and each classroom has modern teaching facilities. I have made many new friends who are kind and helpful. We can take part in different outdoor activities after class, such as playing basketball and singing.

However, sometimes I feel upset. For one thing, my home is far away from the school, so I often miss my parents. For another, we have to study many subjects, of which I find maths, physics and chemistry are a little bit challenging. (Besides, my parents and teachers expect a lot from me, and I am under great pressure.)

I will get used to the new school life as soon as possible. (In addition, I have decided to work hard to live up to my parents, expectations.)

Would you like to come and visit my new school when it is convenient to/for you? I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【详解】本文属于提纲类作文，要求根据题目所给内容给Bob写一封回信，并邀请他方便的时候来你校参观。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。1.你的快乐；2.你的苦恼，考虑用用一般现在时来写；你的打算，考虑用一般将来时来写。要点：1.你的快乐；2.你的苦恼；3.你的打算。

这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: take part in参加，far away from远离。还使用了宾语从句I am happy that my new school is very beautiful and each classroom has modern teaching facilities.和定语从句I have made many new friends who are kind and helpful.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。

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