湖南高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份湖南高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共19页。试卷主要包含了假如你叫李华, 是校学生会主席等内容，欢迎下载使用。
邀请信
1．假设你是李华，你校最近要举行运动会，请你写一封邮件邀请在你校做交换生的美国好友Jack参加，内容包括：1. 发出邀请；2. 时间、地点和内容；3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是李华，你班计划今年暑假去山区体验当地的生活，将住在当地家庭，并给当地孩子教授英语。Mike是你的英国留学生朋友，请就此事给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.告知你们的活动计划；
2.邀请对方参加这次活动。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部。请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入。内容包括:
1.组建俱乐部的目的； 2.俱乐部的主要活动；  3.报名的时间和地点；
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假定是李华,你的朋友 Jenny 来信说对中国的传统文化非常感兴趣,请你回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,并邀请她来中国亲身体验。内容包括:
1.中国悠久的历史和文化传统。
2.众多的名胜古迹。
3. ......
注意:    1.词数 100 左右;    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry在中国学习。他来邮件询问你校举办的“科技展”活动的情况，请回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 科技展的时间和地点；     2. 科技展的内容和意义；     3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：科技展Science and Technology Exhibition
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你叫李华, 是校学生会主席。下周你校举行第十届文化节活动。现在你代表学校邀请湖南大学历史系李教授到你校做关于楼兰遗址的讲座。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.讲座的时间、地点；
2.讲座的内容；
3.联系方式。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Professor Li,
I am Li Hua, chair of the Students' Union of Changjun Middle School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，Michael是你的留学生朋友，你打算邀请他本周星期六去参观当地的一个民俗村(the folk customs village).请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的邀请；
2.在民俗村可进行的一些活动。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，在新冠(COVID-19)疫情期间，你校将录制歌曲One World Together的 网上合唱(online chorus)视频。请给你的英国朋友Peter写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加，内容 包括：
1.录制目的；
2.提交时间和方式；
3.格式和大小(MP4； 20M内)。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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9．假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰朋友Kevin参加你校将要举行的“劳动周”相关活动。请给他写 封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动时间；
2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；
3. 活动意义.
参考词汇：Labour Week劳动周
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假设你是红星中学的李华，你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节（Campus Culture Festival）”系列活动。请给你班留学生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加其中的一个活动。邮件的内容包括：
1. 介绍你推荐的活动；
2. 说明你推荐的理由；
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1．Dear Jack,
I am writing to invite you to participate in the sports meeting to be held in our school next week.
Beginning on Monday morning on the playground, the sports meeting will last three days, with a wonderful opening ceremony in the newly-built gymnasium. Two hundred athletes will take part in a variety of sports events, including not only the traditional events like running races, but also some interesting group events. You can sign up for any sport event you like. I’m sure you’ll find it exciting and educational.
You can contact me at any time for further information.
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你校最近要举行运动会，请你写一封邮件邀请在你校做交换生的美国好友Jack参加，内容包括：1. 发出邀请；2. 时间、地点和内容；3. 表达期待。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：the sports meeting (运动会)；opening ceremony (开幕式)；newly-built gymnasium (新建的体育馆)；a variety of (各种各样的)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am writing to invite you to participate in the sports meeting to be held in our school next week.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Mike,
With the summer vacation drawing near, my class have come with a plan to get the most out of it. Our plan is to go to a mountain area and stay with the local families so that we can experience the local culture and customs. Additionally, while staying there, we intend to teach the children English, who are generally poor at English due to lack of proper training.
Join us, Mike. It's really a good opportunity for you to get a true Chinese experience from inside the local culture, and you can imagine how happy the children will be when you, an Englishman, teach them English.
Looking forward to your reply.
Y ours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你班计划今年暑假去山区体验当地的生活，将住在当地家庭，并给当地孩子教授英语。Mike是你的英国留学生朋友，请就此事给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.告知你们的活动计划；2.邀请对方参加这次活动。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：the summer vacation (暑假)；get the most out of (好好利用)；culture and customs (文化和习俗)；intend to (打算做……)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，Our plan is to go to a mountain area and stay with the local families so that we can experience the local culture and customs.运用目的状语从句；Additionally, while staying there, we intend to teach the children English, who are generally poor at English due to lack of proper training.运用省略句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Peter,
With swimming sweeping nationwide, a swimming club has been formed recently in our school. In light of your great passion about it, I'm writing to invite you to join it.
In order to enrich our campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle. In addition, a diversity of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills. Please sign up in Mr. Smith's office before next Friday.
Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it. I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入学校组件的游泳俱乐部。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.组建俱乐部的目的；
2.俱乐部的主要活动；  
3.报名的时间和地点；
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
invite sb. to do sth./ set up/ provide sb. with sth./ in order to/ in addition/ range from…to…/ be aimed at/ as well as/ sign up/ be convinced that…/ live up to
第三步：连词成句
1. With swimming sweeping nationwide, a swimming club has been set up recently in our school.
2. Knowing your great passion about it, I'm writing to invite you to join it.
3.In order to enrich our campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle.
4. Additionally, a variety of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills.
5. Please sign up in Mr. Smith's office before next Friday.
6. Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it.
7. I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：In addition, a diversity of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills.中which引导非限制性定语从句；Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it.中that引导结果状语从句，且使用了部分倒装。
4．A possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to have received your letter saying that you are interested in China.Now I am writing to invite you to visit China,which undoubtedly won’t let you down.
As you know,China,with a long history,and broad and profound culture,has a sea of famous cities and different types of places of interest for you to explore,among which you can’t miss the Great Wall! Besides,you can also enjoy its various delicious food and convenient transport like high—speed trains and shared bikes,which will give you a brand new experience!
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生向朋友介绍中国传统文化，并且邀请朋友游玩。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
要求：
1. 中国悠久的历史和文化传统。
2. 众多的名胜古迹。
3. 邀请朋友来中国游玩。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; undoubtedly; places of interest; shared bikes;  
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to have received your letter saying that you are interested in China.
2. Now I am writing to invite you to visit China, which undoubtedly won’t let you down.
3. China, with a long history, and broad and profound culture,has a sea of famous cities and different types of places of interest for you to explore,
4. you can also enjoy its various delicious food and convenient transport like high—speed trains and shared bikes,
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Now I am writing to invite you to visit China, which undoubtedly won’t let you down.这句话运用了非限制性定语从句，先行词是China，先行词是物，在从句中做主语，用连接词which。固定搭配运用了如be interested in; undoubtedly; places of interest; shared bikes; 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Terry,
So delighted am I to receive your letter. I am writing to inform you of the details of the “Science and Technology Exhibition” to be held by my school from July 18 to August 15, 2020, in the science building.
The exhibition, including several themes like AI and VR, features a new collection of science books and videos. Not only can visitors enjoy a variety of inventions, such as robot models, 3D printers, etc., but they can experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair. The activity is of great significance. Therefore, I sincerely invite you to participate in it. And I bet you will have an unforgettable experience.
Should you need any further information, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry在中国学习。他来邮件询问你校举办的“科技展”活动的情况，请你给他写封邮件介绍相关情况。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 科技展的时间和地点；2. 科技展的内容和意义；3. 发出邀请。写作时注意准确运用时态，本文主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时。注意上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：I am writing to inform you of the details of the “Science and Technology Exhibition” .It will held by my school from … to … in the science building. themes like AI and VR enjoy a variety of inventions，such as robot models, 3D printers，experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair. The activity is of great significance. I sincerely invite you to participate in it. And I bet you will have an unforgettable experience. further information，contact me。可以使用的衔接词：1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor，or，as well as…，both…and…。2.表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of …，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，in the beginning，in the end，before long，as soon as，at first，for the first(second…)time，the minute，the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also)，what’s more，what’s worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole，in short，briefly，in brief，to sum up，in all等。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。Not only can visitors enjoy a variety of inventions, such as robot models, 3D printers, etc., but they can experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair. 这句话中not only后面运用了倒装语序；And I bet you will have an unforgettable experience.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句，that已经省略。使用了一些固定词组，如：inform sb of sth，a variety of，such as，participate in。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Professor Li,
I am Li Hua, chair of the Students' Union of Changjun Middle School. Our school will have the Tenth Culture Festival next week and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the Ruins of Loulan, which will begin at 4:50 p.m. and end at 6 p. m on June 30th in the Meeting Room of the Office Building.
Armed with a good knowledge of ancient China, you are expert in the study of cultural relics. So we hope you could help us explore the mystery of Loulan and clear some cultural confusion. After the lecture, you are expected to answer the questions raised by the teachers and students.
We'd appreciate it if you accept our invitation. If you could come, please contact us in advance at Englishteacher @ 163. com.
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，邀请湖南大学历史系李教授到你校做关于楼兰遗址的讲座。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式：第一段介绍讲座的时间和地点；第二段介绍讲座的内容；第三段表示希望对方能接受邀请并告知联系方式。
要求：1. 介绍讲座的时间和地点
2. 介绍讲座的内容
3. 告知联系方式
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
invite sb. to do sth. (邀请某人去做某事); a good knowledge of (熟知); be expert in (是……方面的专家); explore (探索); mystery (神秘); confusion (困惑); be expected to do (被期望做某事); appreciate (感激); in advance (提前)
第三步：连词成句
1. Our school will have the Tenth Culture Festival next week.
2. Armed with a good knowledge of ancient China, you are expert in the study of cultural relics.
3. So we hope you could help us explore the mystery of Loulan and clear some cultural confusion.
4. After the lecture, you are expected to answer the questions raised by the teachers and students.
5. We'd appreciate it if you accept our invitation.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…;  some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so(本篇文章使用过); since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the Ruins of Loulan.本句用来介绍写信的目的。可以使用定语从句，进一步介绍讲座的时间和地点。润色修改为：I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the Ruins of Loulan, which will begin at 4:50 p.m. and end at 6 p. m on June 30th in the Meeting Room of the Office Building.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the Ruins of Loulan, which will begin at 4:50 p.m. and end at 6 p. m on June 30th in the Meeting Room of the Office Building.，这句话为which引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型和短语，如：invite sb. to do sth.; a good knowledge of; be expected to do等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如explore; mystery; confusion; appreciate等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Michael,
I'm writing to invite you to visit the folk customs village this Saturday, which is about an hour's bus ride from the city.
In the folk customs village, not only can we experience the folk customs of the local people, but also enjoy their distinctive performances of songs and dances, taste delicious local food, participate in other cultural activities and meanwhile appreciate the beautiful natural scenery. So it's really a good opportunity for you to gain a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Michael写封邀请信邀请他本周六一起去参观当地民俗村。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：邀请信应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点：1 邀请Michael一起参观当地民俗村。
      2 在民俗村可进行的一些活动。
结构布局：
     第一段：邀请Michael一起参观当地民俗村。
     第二段：在民俗村可进行的一些活动：1 观看有民俗特色的歌舞表演；2 品尝当地传统美食；3 观看当地自然美景。
     第三段：期待回复。

第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：be fond of, typical, on the spot, have a better understanding, appetite, appreciate等

第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：Learning that you have been quite fond of traditional cultures, I would like to invite you to visit the folk customs village together with me this Saturday.等

第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。

第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了主从符合句，倒装句，和it句式，“I'm writing to invite you to visit the folk customs village this Saturday, which is about an hour's bus ride from the city.”使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，“not only can we experience the folk customs of the local people, but also enjoy their distinctive performances of songs and dances, taste delicious local food, participate in other cultural activities and meanwhile appreciate the beautiful natural scenery.”中not only放句首的倒装句，“it's really a good opportunity for you to gain a better understanding of Chinese culture.”使用的是“It is+adj+for+sb+to do sth.”的固定句式。这些使得文章的句式灵活多变，为文章增加了色彩。
8．Dear peter,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are good at singing, I am writing to invite you to join us to record an online chorus video.
In order to encourage the people who have been infected by the virus and the doctor, nurses and other people who are offering help at the
very frontier, we have decided to record a song called One World Together. If you are interested, please record your own part of the song
, and then send the file to me. Because time is limited, you are supposed to finish it before February 25th. According to the rule, the recording file is in MP4 format and controlled within 20M, which will make the transmission much easier.
  I am sincerely hope that you can join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Peter写信，邀请他参加学校网上合唱视频的录制。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主，兼用其它时态
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 表明写信目的
2. 录制目的；
3. 提交时间和方式；
4. 格式和大小(MP4； 20M内)。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be good at/ invite sb. to do sth./ in order to/ decide to do sth./ be interested in/ be supposed to do sth./ look forward to
第三步：连词成句
How is everything going?
Knowing that you are good at singing, I am writing to invite you to join us to record an online chorus video.
In order to encourage the people who have infected by the virus and the doctor, nurses and other people who are offering help at the very frontier, we have decided to record a song called One World Together.
If you are interested, please record your own part of the song, then send the file to me.
Because time is limited, you are supposed to finish if before February 25th.
According to the rule, the recording file is in MP4 format and controlled within 20M, which will make the transmission much easier.
I am sincerely hope that you can join us.
Looking forward to your reply.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Knowing that you are good at singing, I am writing to invite you to join us to record an online chorus video.中that引导宾语从句；According to the rule, the recording file is in MP4 format and controlled within 20M, which will make the transmission much easier.中which引导非限制性定语从句。
9．Dear Kevin,
I feel extremely delighted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. I’m writing to invite you to experience the great activities.
The Labour Week will start on June 10th and last for five days, when we will hold various activities. To beautify our school, we will plant trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being. Moreover, it’s a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. There is also a labor knowledge competition which is so rewarding that we can’t afford to miss it.
As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be developed. Besides, we will learn to cherish and respect the fruits of people’s work.
Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇写作属于应用文，主要是邀请新西兰的朋友Kevin参加学校举行的劳动周活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 活动时间；（the time of this activity）
2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；（the content of this activity）
3. 活动意义。（the significance of this activity）
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
inform; relevant; upcoming; various; beautify; definitely; physical and mental; as for the significance; undoubtedly; cherish
第三步：连词成句
I want to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week.
I’m writing to invite you to experience the great activities.
We will plant trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being.
We will hold various activities to support our Labour Week.
It’s a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way.
Sorting garbage can make our campus cleaner and more fascinating.
As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly.
Our awareness of labour can be developed.
We will learn to cherish and respect the fruits of people’s work.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：劳动周具体时间和地点；劳动周的活动内容；劳动周的实际意义。
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰.
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文开头I feel extremely delighted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. 既使用了一个宾语从句，又开门见山的点出了写作的主题和目的。此外范文中形容词和副词用得特别好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能够表达出作者的情感。 还用到了非谓语结构Moreover, it’s a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Jim,
How’s everything going? I’ m writing to invite you to our Campus Culture Festival next Friday. It’ll be full of fun!
I highly recommend the Calligraphy Experience Corner, which is tailor-made for students who have a burning passion for calligraphy. There will be a lecture delivered by an expert from college informing us of the history of calligraphy. You have a keen interest in Chinese calligraphy. That’s why I recommend this activity. Besides, it would be a good opportunity for you to meet and exchange ideas with people who share your passion.
What do you think of it? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假设你是红星中学的李华，你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节”系列活动。请给你班留学生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加其中的一个活动。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 介绍你推荐的活动；2. 说明你推荐的理由；3. 询问对方的意向。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：I’ m writing to invite you to our Campus Culture Festival next Friday. highly recommend，a lecture delivered by an expert from college，inform us of the history of calligraphy，a good opportunity，meet and exchange ideas with people，I’m looking forward to your reply.。可以使用的衔接词：1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor，or，as well as…，both…and…。2.表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of …，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，at the beginning，in the end，before long，as soon as，at first，for the first(second…)time，the minute，the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also)，what’s more，what’s worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole，in short，briefly，in brief，to sum up，in all等。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I highly recommend the Calligraphy Experience Corner, which is tailor-made for students who have a burning passion for calligraphy. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；That’s why I recommend this activity. 这句话运用了why引导的表语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：inform sb of sth，exchange sth with sb， look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。