2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-书面表达（鲁科版五四学制三起）

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名师精编：2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-书面表达（鲁科版五四学制三起） 一、命题作文1．请以 “Fire safety rules”为题写一写，列出安全用火规则。至少写四句话。Fire safety rulesWe must be careful with fire. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．请用英语写一篇小短文，以“My favourite season”为题，写一写你最喜欢的季节是什么，这个季节的天气怎样，你会做些什么？要求：1、语句通顺。2、不少于5句话。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．小作文。根据图片提示，以“The Four Seasons”为题写一篇小短文，介绍各个季节的天气特征及人们经常进行的活动。要求：条理清晰，语法正确，书写规范，不少于5句话。The Four Seasons___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．请参考思维导图的提示，结合自身情况，以“My birthday party”为题，写一篇作文。注意：1. 不少于50词，书写规范，注意大小写和标点符号；2. 思维导图中的单词或短语仅供参考；3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．亲爱的同学们，Robin是个可爱的机器人，他会做的事情可多了，假如你是Mike，你想和他交朋友，请你给Robin写信，并告诉他你是谁，你会做和不会做的事情吧!请你以“I want to be your friend”为题，写一封信吧！不少于5句话。_________________Dear Robin,I want to be your friend. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mike6．请以“My Day”为题写一篇作文，说一说你在这一天里都做什么。要求：1. 调理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。2. 不少于5句话。My Day___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、提纲作文7．I’m Robin. Would you like to make friends with me? 假设你是Tom，你想成为Robin的朋友，请根据表格提供的信息，给Robin发送电子邮件，不少于5句话。 (开头结尾句除外) word bank (词库) sentence bank (句库) character (性格) ability (能力) friendlykindhelpfulpolitefunny…sing English songsdancedo kung fuplay the pipaplay ping-pong… I am… I can… I can’t... Hi! I’m Tom. I want to be your friend. Try me! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s be friends! Please send me an email tom@pep. com. cn.                                                       Tom8．亲爱的同学，你未来的理想的家是什么样子？请根据以下提示问题描述一下吧，字数不少于40词。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．请你写一封信给你的好朋友Mark，说说你的一天，以及介绍一下你最喜欢的季节和原因。要求 ：1. 语段要有逻辑性。 2. 注意书写规范和标点符号。 3. 不少于七句话。Dear Mark,I’m ______________. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,___________10．假如你是李华，给你的美国朋友Amy写一封信介绍一下你自己吧！内容包含：你的生日是在什么时候？你的周末是怎样度过的？你最喜欢的季节、节日以及原因等。要求：1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写清晰、规范；2. 不少于6句话。3. 开头和结尾已给出。Dear Amy,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua11．请你介绍一下你住在哪里？你是怎么来学校上学的呢？你的父母是怎么去工作的呢？不少于5句哦。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．为持续推动全国文明城市创建工作，沛县电视台阳光小记者志愿服务队正在招募一批小记者。假如你的好朋友李华很想加入阳光小记者志愿服务队，请你从外貌特征、兴趣爱好以及个人特长等方面推荐一下李华。不少于50个单词(不包括已给句子)。要求：1. 书写工整；2. 要包含所有要点；3. 注意大小写。Li Hua is a good student. He _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope he can join the team. 三、图画作文13．下面的思维导图是Mike新朋友的相关信息，请根据思维导图补全短文。I’m Mike. I have four new friends. John is from the UK. He likes summer best, because he can go ______ in summer. Oliver lives in Beijing. His favourite season is winter. He can make a ______ in winter. But Amy doesn’t like winter. She likes ______ best. She often goes on a picnic. ______ is Sarah’s favourite season. She has a ______ contest in autumn. What’s your favourite season?14．你最喜欢哪个季节？不喜欢哪个季节？为什么？(可以围绕天气、活动等方面进行说明，图片仅供参考)1. 2. 3. 4. I like ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I don’t like ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．看图写话。根据图片至少写出四句话。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．请根据以下所给提示，帮助Tom写几句话，介绍一下他的朋友们上周末所做的事。要求：书写工整规范，语句通顺，不少于5句话。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．分别用“挨着；在……前；在……后；在……和……之间；在……附近”描述图中不同地点，完成小作文。My TownLook, this is my town. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．Read and write. 看图写话，假如你是Li Lei，请你用 there be 句型介绍一下自己的房间，要表达出物品的具体位置，至少写5句话，开头结尾已给出。Hi, I’m Li Lei. This is my room. There is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________There are __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I like my room very much!
参考答案：1．范文：Fire safety rulesWe must be careful with fire. When we’re in the countryside, we can’t smoke. When we’re at home, we mustn’t smoke. Don’t play near the fire. Don’t cook without an adult! At school when you hear the fire bell, you mustn’t run out of the classroom!【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一写安全用火的规则。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：careful小心的，countryside乡村，smoke吸烟，without没有，adult成人，fire bell火警警铃参考句型：When we’re..., we can’t...；When we’re..., we mustn’t...；Don’t play...；Don’t cook...2．范文：My favourite seasonMy favourite season in a year is summer. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. I love summer.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My favourite season”为题，用第一人称写出自己喜欢的季节。然后再阐述天气和能做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：favourite最喜欢，season季节，winter冬天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，spring春天参考句型：My favourite season is …；I can …； I often …；3．范文：                            The Four SeasonsThere are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is sunny and warm. We can go on a picnic. Summer is hot. We can go swimming. Autumn is cool. We can pick apples. Winter is cold and snowy. We can make a snowman.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“The Four Seasons”为题写一篇小短文。然后再阐述各个季节的天气特征及人们经常进行的活动。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：season季节，winter冬天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，spring春天，go on a picnic去野餐，go swimming去游泳，pick apples摘苹果，make a snowman堆雪人参考句型：There are …； They are…；Spring/Summer/Autumn/Winter is …；We can …；4．范文：My birthday partyMy birthday is on 25th September. I will have a birthday party at home. The time is 1:00 pm-4:00pm. My friends will come to my party. My mother will buy a birthday cake for me. We will drink juice. We will sing and dance. It will be great. I can’t wait.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据思维导图介绍自己的生日聚会。然后再阐述聚会的时间，地点，做的事情，感受等。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：September九月，drink juice喝果汁，sing and dance唱歌和跳舞，great伟大的参考句型： I will...；My friends will...；We will...；It will...5．参考例文：I want to be your friendDear Robin,I want to be your friend. My name is Mike. I am a student from China. I am tall and thin. I have long black hair. I am outgoing and friendly. I’m hard-working at school. I can do many things，such as playing the piano and drawing cartoons. But I can’t swim or cook. I want to make friends with you. Would you like to be my friend？Write to me soon. Mike【详解】1.题干分析：以I want to be your friend为题，给Robin写信，并告诉他你是谁，你会做和不会做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：outgoing外向的；friendly友好的；play the piano 弹钢琴；draw cartoons画漫画；make friends做朋友；参考句型：I am…；I have…；I can…；I want to…；6．范文：                               My DayMy name is Amy. I often get up at 6:30 in the morning. I eat breakfast at 7 o’clock. Then I go to school at 7:30. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I have lunch at school. I go home at 4:30. I do my homework before dinner. I go to bed at 9:30. This is my day. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My Day”为题写一篇作文。然后再阐述一天做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：get up起床，have breakfast吃早饭，go to school去上学，have lunch吃午饭，go home回家，do my homework做作业，go to bed去睡觉参考句型：I … at ...； I have …；7．范文：Hi! I’m Tom. I want to be your friend. Try me! I am friendly and kind. I am funny too. I am helpful at home. I can sing English songs and play the pipa. But I can’t dance. Let’s be friends! Please send me an email tom@pep. com. cn.                       Tom【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求假设自己是Tom，根据表格提供的信息介绍自己。然后再阐述性格、能力。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：friendly友好的，kind友善的，funny有趣的，helpful有帮助的，sing English songs唱英文歌，play the pipa弹琵琶，dance跳舞参考句型：I am …； I can …；I can’t …； 8．范文：    My dream house is nice. There are six rooms in my dream house. They are bedrooms, a bathroom, a study, a kithen and a living room. My rooms are nice and tidy. I like my study best. Because I like to read books there. I will watch TV in the living room. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求描述自己未来的理想的家。然后再阐述都有那些房间，最喜欢哪个房间及原因等。注意文章为一般现在和一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：bedroom卧室，bathroom浴室，kitchen厨房，living room客厅，tidy整洁的，because因为，watch TV看电视参考句型： There are...；They are...；I like...；I will...9．范文：Dear Mark, I’m John. I often get up at half past six. I do morning exercises at seven. I eat breakfast at 7:30. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. I have lunch at school. I go home at 4:30. I go to bed at 9:30. I like spring best. Because the weather is good.                                                                                           Yours,Mark【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求给好朋友Mark写一封信。然后再阐述自己的一天以及自己最喜欢的季节和原因。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：get up起床，half past six六点半，do morning exercises做早操，in the morning在上午，in the afternoon在下午，have lunch吃午饭，go to bed去睡觉参考句型：I often …； I … at ...；I have …； I like …；Because ...；10．范文：Dear Amy,My name is Li Hua. My birthday is on May 4th. I often read books and play table tennis with my friends on the weekend. I like spring best, because I can fly kites with my friends. I also like winter, because I can make a snowman. My favourite festival is Mid-Autumn Day. I can eat moon cakes with my parents. What about you? Please write to me soon.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称给我的美国朋友Amy写一封信，介绍一下自己的生日是在什么时候，周末是怎样度过的，我最喜欢的季节、节日以及原因等。注意文章为一般现在时，单词数量要符合要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词： birthday生日，read books读书，play table tennis打乒乓球，on the weekend在周末，spring春天，fly kites放风筝，winter冬天，make a snowman堆雪人，Mid-Autumn Day中秋节，moon cakes月饼参考句型：My name is...；I often...；I like...；I also...；My...；I can...；What about you?11．范文：My home is far from my school. I often go to school by bus. But my father goes to work by car. My mother takes the metro to work. Sometimes, my father drives me to school.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍自己和父母怎么去上学或上班。然注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：far from远离，by bus坐公共汽车，by car开车，take the metro坐地铁，参考句型：My home is …； I often go to school …；But My father goes to work …； My mother … to work.；Sometimes, my father ...；12．范文：     Li Hua is a good student. He is thirteen years old. He is tall and thin. He likes reading. He often reads books on weekends. He is good at writing and English. He often helps others. He is kind and helpful.     I hope he can join the team.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍李华。然后再阐述他的外貌特征、兴趣爱好以及特长。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：thirteen十三，tall and thin又高又瘦，weekend周末，be good at擅长，kind亲切的，helpful有帮助的参考句型： He is...；He likes...；He is good at...；He often...13．例文：I’m Mike. I have four new friends. John is from the UK. He likes summer best, because he can go swimming in summer. Oliver lives in Beijing. His favourite season is winter. He can make a snowman in winter. But Amy doesn’t like winter. She likes spring best. She often goes on a picnic. Autumn is Sarah’s favourite season. She has a singing contest in autumn. What’s your favourite season?【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据思维导图将短文补充完整。短文主要介绍了Mike的四个朋友喜欢的季节以及在这个季节里做的事情。2.参考词汇和句型：参考单词：go swimming去游泳，make a snowman堆雪人，singing contest歌唱比赛，spring春天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，winter冬天参考句型：He can ... in winter. ；She likes ... best.；... is Sarah’s favourite season.14．范文：I like spring. It’s very beautiful. There are green trees and colourful flowers everywhere. The weather is warm. I can have a picnic with my friends or family. I can fly kites in the park. I don’t like winter. It is cold in winter. I need to wear thick clothes. I can’t go out to play every day.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写喜欢和不喜欢的季节。首先点明喜欢和不喜欢的季节，其次从天气、活动等方面来解释原因。注意文章为一般现在时态。2. 参考词汇和句型：参考单词：spring春天，weather天气，warm温暖的，have a picnic去野餐，fly kites放风筝，winter冬天，cold寒冷的，thick clothes参考句型：The weather is...；I can...；I need to...；I can’t...15．范文：I’m Tim. I’m a student. I’m very hard-working. I often do my homework before dinner.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求看图写话。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：hard-working勤奋的，do one’s homework做作业，dinner晚饭参考句型：I’m …； I often …；16．参考范文：Last weekend, Lily went swimming with her brother. Sam watched TV at home. Joe went fishing. John rode a horse. They all had a happy weekend.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据图片提示写写莉莉，萨姆等几人上周末做的事情。然后再阐述要做的具体事情。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：weekend周末，go swimming去游泳，go fishing去钓鱼，ride a horse骑马参考句型： Last weekend, Lily/Sam/John/Joe...17．范文：Look, this is my town. The train station is in front of the supermarket. The toilet is next to the cinema. The zoo is behind the cinema. The library is between the post office and the park. The bus stop is near the school.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据图片用地点借此描述图中不同的地点。注意文章为一般现在时态。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：train station火车站，in front of在……前面，supermarket超市，toilet厕所，cinema电影院，behind在……后面，post office邮局，near在……附近，between在……中间参考句型：This is...；...is in front of/behind/between/near...18．范文：Hi, I’m Li Lei. This is my room. There is a plant and a computer on the desk. There is a football under the desk. There is a bike in front of the desk. There is a bed beside the desk. There are two kites on the wall. There are some toys in the box.I like my room very much!【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求看图写话，介绍自己的房间。然后再阐述房间里的物品与方位。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：plant植物，computer电脑，football足球，in front of在……前面，beside在……旁边，on the wall在墙上参考句型：There is …；There are …；