高中英语高考第3部分 书面表达 层级2+第1讲　使用亮点词汇

这是一份高中英语高考第3部分 书面表达 层级2+第1讲　使用亮点词汇，共4页。
第1讲 使用亮点词汇

请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分。
1．As high schl students, we shuld be neatly dressed when at schl.
are suppsed t
2．The teacher directed the gifted students twards the mre difficult curses.challenging
3．I sincerely hpe that yu will cnsider my suggestins.
take my suggestins int accunt
4．Our class thught f the idea f hw t take advantage f used materials.came up with
5．We shuld try t imprve urselves thrugh learning and prepare fr the future.take pains; get prepared
6．I want t tell yu smething abut my plan fr the summer vacatin and I'd like yu t help me.d me a favr/lend me a hand
7．Cinemas have gradually given way t the rise f the Internet and cell phnes, and the ticket price is increasing.n the increase/rise
8．When yu are bred with the peple arund, yu'd better find a quiet place, listening t sme classical music.fed up with
一篇高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定优劣；大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！
一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法
1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云
写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。
①I am Li Hua，a student studying in Lndn, wh is very glad t be infrmed f the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibitin in yur lcal art gallery.
→I am Li Hua，a student studying in Lndn, wh is mre than thrilled t be infrmed f the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibitin in yur lcal art gallery.
②In rder t prvide the students with a wnderful match, we need t have enugh training.
→In rder t prvide the students with a fantastic match, we need t have enugh training.
③Obviusly，blindly fllwing thers' advice will affect ur wn judgment.
→Apparently，blindly fllwing thers' advice will affect ur wn judgment.
2．多种表达，避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。
①Summer in these cities is ht and rainy, s take summer clthes with an umbrella with yu.
→Summer in these cities is ht and rainy, s take summer clthes plus an umbrella with yu.
②First f all, yu shuld arrive n time because it is gd manners t be n time in China.
→First f all, yu shuld arrive n time because it is gd manners t be punctual in China.
3．单词短语巧妙使用
一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。
①This is a friendly game, s we shuld remember the principle f friendship first.
→This is a friendly game, s we shuld keep in mind the principle f friendship first.
②We can lk at this prblem in many ways.
→We can view this prblem in many ways.(view比lk at更有内涵)
4．用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇
①Firstly, this is exactly what the British visitrs are expecting.
→Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitrs are expecting.
②Secnd, I am trying my best t get the imprtant knwledge and skills cncerning my psitin.
→Secnd, I am sparing n effrt t acquire the essential knwledge and skills cncerning my psitin.
二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇
①We will try ur best t develp the traditinal friendship between us.
→We will try ur best t prmte the traditinal friendship between us.
②Finally yur child will leave hme t lead her wn life as a fully independent adult.
→Eventually yur child will leave hme t lead her wn life as a fully independent adult.
请用亮点词汇替换下面作文中的加黑部分并背诵。
Dear Jasn，
I'm very happy t hear frm yu and knw abut yur beautiful hme city Lndn.Nw I'd like t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn Quanzhu.
Quanzhu is a beautiful place fr peple t live in.Its ecnmy has been develping fast during the past ten years.New bridges and rads have been built, high­rise buildings standing in many parts f the city.Mre and mre schls and hspitals are useful fr the native peple.It is develping int a mdern and beautiful city.But there are still sme prblems, such as heavy traffic in rush hurs and serius air pllutin, which have a bad effect n peple's daily life.I think Quanzhu shuld develp healthily and scientifically s that we culd have a better hmetwn in the future.
Yurs，
Li Ming
[答案]
1．very→mre than 2．fast→rapidly 3．built→set up 4．Mre and mre→An increasing number f 5．useful→available 6．Beautiful →charming 7．But→Hwever 8．serius→severe 9．effect→ influence/impact 10．I think→In my pinin/As far as I am cncerned
普通词汇
高级词汇
普通词汇
高级词汇
名词
chance
pprtunity
chice
alternative
idea
pinin
peple
individuals
result
cnsequence
effect
influence
动词
have
pssess
develp
prmte
replace
substitute
bear
put up with
cnsider
take int
accunt
understand
make
sense f
形容词
enugh
adequate
rich
abundant
difficult
challenging
prper
apprpriate
imprtant
vital/
significant
interesting
absrbing/
appealing
副词
finally
eventually
hardly
barely
immediately
in a flash
nwadays
currently
连词
s
therefre
and
as well as