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人教版八年级上册期末复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分
(重点知识+难点易错点)
专题05 单元话题满分范文15道

1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1. Mike 是一名中学生，他沉迷于玩电脑游戏，并因此影响了他的学习。作为Mike的好朋友，你打算怎么帮助他呢？请用下面所给的提示写一篇80词左右的短文(开头不计入总词数)。
提示：give up; waste time; be interested in; have a great time
Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter.I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. Don't worry. Let me help you. Now, I'll give you some advice about how to do better in your study. If you play too much computer games, you'll waste lots of time. As a result, you'll have little time to do your homework. If you give up playing computer games, you may be interested in other things, like study or sports. So you should give up the computer games and work hard. I think if you keep working hard, you'll have a great time at school with your good friends.
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。Mike是一名中学生, 他沉迷于电脑游戏, 并因此影响了学习。假如你是Mike的好朋友，要求你写一篇短文，给他一些意见和建议帮助他。写作前要仔细审题，确定写作的重点，要把握好时态和人称。为使文章更有条理性可以先分条列出写作计划，列出所用到的一些基本词汇、词组；注意语意要通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连词。为避免文章的单调和枯燥，应该考虑运用比较高级的语法形式让文章增色。注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
提示词语：give up; waste… time; be interested in; have a great time
2．假如你是Sally，你的好友Helen邀请你下个周末去动物园, 但你因为有太多的事情要做, 只好婉言拒绝。请你根据下面表格中的提示给她写一封电子邮件, 向她讲述你谢绝的原因。

Morning
Afternoon
Evening
Saturday
Go to see a dentist
Wash clothes and clean the room
Help her classmate with his English
Sunday
Study for a science test
Go to the sports club
Practice the violin
要求：1.语言规范, 行文流畅；
2.70词左右(开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Helen，
Thanks a lot for your invitation. I'm sorry I can't__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you very much for asking.
Yours，
Sally
【答案】Dear Helen，
Thanks a lot for your invitation.I'm sorry I can't go to the zoo with you，because I am pretty busy this weekend.On Saturday morning，I have to go to see a dentist because of my teeth.In the afternoon，I have to wash clothes and clean the room.I will help my classmate with his English on Saturday evening.On Sunday，I plan to study for a science test and go to the sports club to practice playing tennis.And I have to practice the violin in the evening.
Thank you very much for asking.
Yours，
Sally
【详解】
试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，表中内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和一般将来时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据表中内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
3．西红柿炒鸡蛋(scrambled eggs with tomatoes)是一道家常菜， 它既美味可口又简单易做。根据所给提示， 以＂How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes＂为题写一篇80词左右的短文。原料：一个西红柿、三个鸡蛋、一个青椒(green pepper)、盐、油(oil)
步骤：
1. 将西红柿和青椒切碎；
2. 把鸡蛋打破(break)放入碗里并搅拌；
3. 往鸡蛋里放些盐并搅拌；
4. 将平底锅(pan)加热， 锅里放些油， 然后放入鸡蛋、西红柿和青椒；
5. 翻炒两分钟即可。
How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
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【答案】How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
Do you like scrambled eggs with tomatoes? The dish is delicious and easy to cook. Here’s a recipe for it. First cut up one tomato and one green pepper. Next break three eggs and put them into a bowl and mix them. Add some salt and mix again. Then heat the pan and pour some oil into the pan. Put the eggs, the tomato and the green pepper into the pan. Finally cook for two minutes. Now you can enjoy it.
【详解】
首先认真审题，确定文章的主要内容，文章文体和时态。这篇作文所给材料非常详细，我们只要用合适的句式，正确的语言进行介绍就可以。根据该文章是一篇介绍如何做西红柿炒鸡蛋的说明文可知会出现大量的描述应该如何做的祈使句。为了说明做菜步骤，选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性和逻辑性。
【点睛】
这篇短文首先利用一句话“The dish is delicious and easy to cook”引入正文，开始介绍西红柿炒鸡蛋的做法。在介绍时，first，next，then，finally表示顺序的词的应用使得做菜步骤清晰有序，令读者一目了然。首尾句“Now you can enjoy it.”使得这篇说明文首尾呼应。总之这篇短文达到了预期的写作目的，是一篇比较成功的文章。
4．请根据上面短文的内容以及下列提示，以"How to Make Tomato and Egg Soup"为题用英文写一篇短文。
提示:
1.下周末，同学们准备办一次聚会;
2.在聚会上，你打算烹制一款中式的、清淡的西红柿蛋花汤。
要求:写出烹制西红柿蛋花汤的简易过程;注意烹制的顺序步骤;不少于60词。
提示词: three tomatoes; some green Chinese onion (大葱) ， cut into small pieces; a spoon of oil; some salt; two eggs，take out egg white(蛋白) and egg yolk (蛋黄) ; three bowls of water
【答案】How to Make Tomato and Egg Soup
The students are going to have a party next weekend. At the party, I’m going to cook a Chinese tomato egg soup for the students. First, cut three tomatoes and some green Chinese onion into small pieces. Then put a spoon of oil into a pot. When the oil is hot, put them into the pot. Next add three bowls of water and some salt. Then cook for five minutes. Next take out two eggs and take out egg white and egg yolk. After that, mix them together. Finally put them into the pot. Now the delicious tomato and egg Soup is ready.
【详解】
这是篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
5．未来总是让人充满幻想, 请根据下列提示, 以“The Life in the Future”为题写一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
提示:
1. 想象一下未来的生活会是什么样子;
2. 具体介绍一下未来的生活: 很多事情都由电脑和机器人完成。例如: 料理家务、购物、看病, 孩子们通过网络把课堂搬到家里, 人们可以活到200岁等;
3. 为了未来的生活, 我们现在应该努力学习, 实现理想。
要求:
1. 语句通顺, 内容完整, 语法正确;
2. 不要逐字翻译提示的内容, 想象内容要合情合理。
The Life in the Future
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【答案】The Life in the Future
What do you think the life in the future will be like?
Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot all over the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. They can help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on computers. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care.
Our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard. I believe we’ll be able to do this.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求用第一人称的方式描述我们未来的生活是什么样，内容包括电脑和机器人出现在我们日常生活，人们学习、看病、购物等方面的变化，为了实现这样的生活，我们该努力学习等。讲述的未来发生的事情，用一般将来时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇用宾语从句引入主题；正文部分描绘有电脑和机器人，我们未来的生活会是什么样的；结尾畅想未来，表达为实现未来生活要努力学习。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、文句简洁。用will句型和情态动词can；短语know a lot ；about help sb do sth；help us do most of the housework；help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing；do some shopping ；see a doctor；study at home on computers；伴随结构without going out描述未来生活的样子；用形容词比较级 better and better展望未来；文句精彩，行文通畅。
【点睛】
本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般将来时）；书写时要紧扣主题，围绕生活、学习、看病、购物等方面的变化来描述我们未来的生活；成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使用是否得当。
6．根据汉语提示及要求，以"My Dream Job"为题用英语写一篇短文。
提示： 1. 想成为一名记者；
2. 打算给报纸、杂志写文章；
3.高中毕业后想去北京上大学；
4. 想在一家电台工作并环游世界。
要求： 1. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 不少于60词。
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【答案】My Dream Job
When I grow up, I'm going to be a journalist. Next year, I'm going to write articles for magazines and newspapers. I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior school. Maybe I'm going to find a part-time job and save some money. Next, I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist. Then I'm going to travel all over the world.
【解析】
本文属于材料，要表达我梦想的工作。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be going to, after, maybe, part-time job, save, next以及then等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．假如你是学校英文周刊的特约小记者，刚刚采访了丹尼（Danny）一家对电视节目的喜好。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇调查报告。
提示：
1. What programs does your father love?
2. What programs can’t your mother stand?
3. What programs don’t you mind? ...
要求：
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What do Danny’s family think of different TV shows? Let’s have a look. ______________________
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【答案】What do Danny’s family think of different TV shows? Let’s have a look. Danny’s father loves the news and talk shows. He thinks talk shows are educational. He doesn’t mind sports shows or soap operas. Danny’s mother can’t stand the news or sports shows. She thinks they are boring. She doesn’t mind talk shows. Her favorite shows are soap operas. What about Danny? Sports shows and talk shows are his favorite shows. He doesn’t mind the news. As for soup operas, he can’t stand them.
【详解】
题干解读：这篇短文主要介绍丹尼一家对电视节目的喜好，所以用一般现在时，注意第三人称单数形式的使用。根据提示必须介绍丹尼父亲喜好什么节目，她的妈妈不喜欢什么节目，丹尼不能忍受的节目，其他可以适当扩展。
例文点评：这篇短文采用一般现在时对丹尼一家对电视节目的喜欢进行了介绍，注意到了第三人称单数形式的变化，不仅介绍了提示内容而且进行了适当的扩展。通过What about Danny?及As for soup operas,的使用，使得短文结构清晰，行文连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：talk shows；soap operas；one’s favorite；As for soup operas
对事物看法的句式：主语+ love/like…; can’t stand…; don’t/doesn’t mind; 宾语从句：He thinks talk shows are educational.
8．请根据表格内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文，简单说明你对下列各电视节目的态度以及原因。
Programs
Attitudes
Reasons
Talent shows
Like
Interesting and exciting
News
Like
Knowing what is happening in the world
Soap operas
Can't stand
Boring and not real
Sports shows
Don't mind
not very interesting
Talk shows
Love
Learning something from the performers

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【答案】There are many programs on TV.I like talent shows，because they are interesting and exciting.I like news，too.It can tell me what is happening around the world.But I can't stand soap operas.They are boring and the things in it aren't real at all.As for the sports shows，I don't mind them.My favorite programs are talk shows.I can learn something useful from them.They are educational.
【详解】
短文根据表格提示，先提到电视节目。接下来分别介绍了对不同电视节目的看法：喜欢达人秀是因为有趣和令人激动；也喜欢新闻，因为它可以告诉我世界上发生着什么事情；不喜欢电视剧因为它们没趣味，不真实；最喜欢的节目是脱口秀，我可以学到很多东西，有教育意义。整段短文有条理，逻辑性强。
9．根据提示，以“My Best Friend and I ”为题写一篇英语短文，比较你俩的特征，至少10句话。除提示外，可适当发挥。
提示：1.我的好友名叫琳达；
2.在某些方面，我们看上去一样；在某些方面，我们看起来不同；
3．我们都有黑眼睛，黑头发；
4.她比我高，比我文静，很认真；
5.我外向一点，而且比她风趣；
6.都喜欢读书。
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【答案】My best friend and I
My name is Linda. I have a good friend. Her name is Tina. We are in the same grade but in different classes. My friend and I look the same. We have black eyes and long black hair. But we are different anyway. Tina is taller than I. She is quieter and more careful than I. But I am more outgoing than her. And I am much funnier than her. Both of us like reading books.
【详解】
亮点说明：本文从外貌和性格多方面介绍了我和我的朋友的异同。运用比较级叙述使文章的语言鲜明生动，有可读性强。在不同语言逻辑关系中用but和and连接，让我们更容易理解作者的心情。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
10．史密斯先生是一位医生，他非常注重自己的身心健康，所以他把自己的业余生活安排得丰富多彩。请根据下面表格的内容，描述他的业余活动。
要求：1. 将表格所给信息全部体现在文章中；
2. 行文条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺；
3. 不少于60词。
活动
频率
锻炼
一周三次
购物
一周一次
去看电影
一月一次
上网
一周两次
读书
每天

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【答案】例文
Mr. Smith is a doctor. Usually he is very busy, but he does different activities when he has time. He exercises three times a week. His favorite sports are swimming, ping-pong and basketball. On weekends, he often goes shopping. He shops once a week. He doesn’t like watching TV, but he goes to the movies once a month and uses the Internet twice a week. He enjoys reading very much. He reads books every day. His good lifestyle helps him keep healthy.
【详解】
题干解读：这是一篇通过表格给出材料的作文。根据要求可知首先介绍史密斯先生的基本情况，然后根据表格介绍五项活动及其每项活动的频率。主要用一般现在时，注意第三人称单数形式的使用。
例文点评：这篇短文语言丰富，句式变化多样。首先介绍了史密斯的职业及生活状况。然后用丰富的语言介绍了他的各项活动及频率，最后对他的生活方式作出简单评价。短文条理清晰，结构完整，是一篇很好的范文。
高分亮点：短语：three times a week ；keep healthy；once a week；enjoys reading。
复合句：Usually he is very busy, but he does different activities when he has time；He doesn’t like watching TV, but he goes to the movies once a month and uses the Internet twice a week.
11．假设你是David，你的好朋友Toby非常喜欢体育运动，但是他的父母不允许他花费太多时间在运动上，为此他很苦恼。请你根据下面的提示给他写一封信，针对他的问题，提出你的建议，并给他一些安慰和鼓励。
提示：1. What should David do in his study？2. What should David talk to his parents？
3. What should David do to his parents？
要求：1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；2. 70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Toby，
I’m sorry to hear that ___________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
David
【答案】Dear Toby,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents.
As for your problems, I have two pieces of advice. First, finish your homework on time every day，and listen to the teachers carefully in class. Make sure that you won't fall behind. Second, have a talk with your parents. You should let them know that doing sports doesn't take up your study time. Instead, it is good for both your study and health.
Just be patient with your parents. I think they will understand you.
Yours,
David
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一封建议信，短文要求我们以David的身份给好朋友Toby写信，对他遇到的问题提出自己的建议。题目中利用问题的形式，列出了文章的主要内容，这也是学生们写作的依据。审题可知，短文应用一般现在时，第一人称和第二人称来叙述。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容充实、完整，提出的建议很合理；层次清晰，用First, Second列出了自己的建议。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范、准确，语言得体；句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯；最后使用了较丰富的短语和句型，如宾语从句、状语从句、祈使句等的使用，增加了文章的表现力。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：as for；have problems with；on time；listen to；in class；fall behind；have a talk with；take up；be good for；be patient with。
句型：First, finish your homework on time every day，and listen to the teachers carefully in class.；You should let them know that doing sports doesn't take up your study time. Instead, it is good for both your study and health。
12．Tom邀请Li Ming参加他这个周日的生日宴会, 但Li Ming的父母出差了, 要到下个月才回来, 奶奶又卧病在床, 需要人照顾。另外, 英语考试即将来临。因此, Li Ming无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ming感到很抱歉, 只好写信辞谢。
　　根据提示写一封60~80个词的信。
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to go but I can’t. My parents are 
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Li Ming
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to go but I can’t. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English test. I’m very sorry but I can’t go to your party. Thank you for inviting me. I hope you can have a good time.
Li Ming
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下Li Ming不能参加Tom这个周日的生日宴会的原因。所提供的材料中列举了不能去的原因：父母出差了, 要到下个月才回来, 奶奶又卧病在床, 需要人照顾。另外, 英语考试即将来临。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。在写的时候要注意以下几点：首先，要对Tom表示感谢，并且介绍不能去的原因。其次，介绍自己现在必须在家要做的事情，如，照顾生病的奶奶，自己要为考试看书。第三，要祝愿Tom玩得愉快。第四，可以借鉴的词汇如，birthday party, on business, look after, study for, have a good time等。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型】
And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed.
现在我得照顾我奶奶，因为她卧病在床。because she is ill in bed.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
13．请以“My life in ten years为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文。提示 (短文须包含下列要点)：
1. What do you want to be in ten years ? And why?
2. where will you live in ten years?And why?
3. Say something about your family or your free time activities in ten years.
4. What should you do to achieve your dreams?
注意：短文中,不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。
My life in ten years
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【答案】My life in ten years
What do think your life will be like in 10 years? Well, I will be a popular and famous singer and I will sing around the world. I will buy a big house for my parents in Hainan. Because I`ve ever been to Hainan a few times and I`ve already fallen in love with it. I will keep a pet dog and I might even keep a cute koala. I will work hard and try my best to make it come true! How about yours?
【详解】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般将来时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: fall in love with爱上；work hard努力学习；try one’s best尽力；come true实现等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
14．假设今天的英语课上大家都在讨论“Dream Job”。你对此有什么想法呢？请根据下面的提示，写一篇短文谈论一下你理想的职业，与大家分享。
提示：1. What's your dream job？
2. Why do you want to do it？
3. How are you going to make your dream come true？
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要求：1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于65词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dream Job
Do you know what I want to be when I grow up？
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【答案】Dream Job
Do you know what I want to be when I grow up？I want to be a tour guide. I'm outgoing and I like traveling. Another reason is that I want to learn more about different countries and different people. So I think working as a tour guide will be a perfect job for me.
To make my dream come true，I'm going to study more foreign languages. And I will go to university to learn how to be a tour guide. I believe that I can be an excellent tour guide in the future！
【详解】
题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。根据英语提示，可知首先要说明你的理想职业是什么，然后解释为什么这是你的理想职业，为了实现梦想你打算怎么做。在说明为了梦想打算怎么做时，采用一般将来时。写作时注意避免汉式英语。
例文点评：这篇作文内容完整，语言丰富，时态准确。这篇短文首先表明自己的理想职业，然后例举了两条理由说明为什么这是自己的理想职业，之后写出自己打算怎么做，最后用I believe that I can be an excellent tour guide in the future结尾，与开头呼应。
高分亮点：
短语：want to be，working as a tour guide，To make my dream come true，how to be a tour guide，in the future
复合句：Another reason is that I want to learn more about different countries and different people，I believe that I can be an excellent tour guide in the future！
15．请以“My trip to——”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。
要求：
1.请在题目空格处填入你旅行的地点，如：Beijing，Jinan或Qingdao等；
2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。否则不予评分；
3.不少于60词。
提示：
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel about the trip?
My trip to ________
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【答案】My trip to Beijing
Have you ever been to Beijing?I’ve been there once.I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation.
I visited many famous places of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest.I took a lot of photos with my camera.On the Great Wall I met some foreigners and I talked with them in English.I told them there’s an old saying.He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.They liked the saying very much and they told me that they were true men at that time.We all laughed happily.I ate Beijing roast duck.It was very delicious.
I felt a little tired but I was happy.I look forward to visiting Beijing again.
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文。题目是“My trip to ”，记叙你的一次旅行。给出了提示要点。提示要点是本文的写作提纲要点。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，并做适当发挥。字数应在80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我的青岛之行
去年暑假，我和家人去了青岛。我们乘火车去了那里，住在海边的一家大旅馆里。我们在那里呆了三天。
第一天，我们沿着海边散步。之后，我们去游泳，在那里拍了很多照片。第二天，我们在一个著名的市场买了许多纪念品。最后一天，我们在海边野餐。当地人表演了很多节目，这让我们很高兴。我们都很开心。这是难忘的。
青岛是游览的好地方。如果我有机会，我会再去那里。
【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有：On the first day, /The next day / The last day, /We all enjoyed ourselves./ Qingdao is a good place to visit. If I have a chance, I will go there again.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。