译林版高中英语选择性必修第三册UNIT3表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开写一篇关于历史书的短文
本单元要求写一篇关于历史书的短文，属于书评类写作。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出书目
主体(the body)——详细介绍
结尾(the ending)——我的评价
[常用词块]
1．get along well with our friends
和我们的朋友相处得很好
2．open a history gate to me给我打开了历史的大门
3．make efforts to do sth.努力做某事
4．in the form of a diary 以日记的形式
5．freeze to death 冻死
6．resist difficulties from the outside world
抵制来自外界的困难
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．I would like to introduce a good book called...
我想要介绍一本叫做……的好书。
2．My favourite book is The Lion Goes Wandering written by Shen Shixi.
我最喜欢的书是沈石溪写的《狮子去流浪》。
★正文佳句
1．The Old Man and The Sea is on the background of the story of Cuba in the 20th century.
《老人与海》是20世纪古巴的故事背景。
2．Harry was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful enemies.
哈利是一个非常勇敢聪明的男孩，他敢于同强大的敌人战斗。
★余味结尾
1．The fiction is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it.
这本小说很有意义，我可以从中学到很多东西。
2．I want to tell you through the book，maternal love is great.We should cherish maternal love and care about mothers.
我想通过这本书告诉大家，母爱是伟大的，我们应该珍惜母爱，关心母亲。
请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，介绍《哈利·波特》这本书：
1．作者JK罗琳，出生于1965年，写这本书之前是一个家庭主妇。
2．这本书被翻译成70多种语言，成为最畅销的书之一。
3．世界各地的人都成为哈利·波特迷。
注意：词数80左右。
[学生习作]
Harry Potter，written by JK Rowling is my favourite book.She was born 1965，England.She was only a housewife before she wrote the book.The book made her life changed.The book has been translated into 65 languages.It became one of the best books in the world.The books were made into 7 films.People all over the world became a fan of Harry Potter，especially students.Many children also believed in Harry Potter's magic. | 1.该篇习作涵盖了写作要点但不准确。 2.文章用了较多的简单句，缺少高级句式，有语法错误。 3.文章没有分段，层次不清晰。 |
[升格作文]
My favourite book is Harry Potter，written by JK Rowling.
JK Rowling was born in 1965，England.Before she wrote these books，she was only an ordinary housewife in Britain，but Harry Potter changed her life forever.
It is said that Harry Potter has become a global success，with over 400 million books sold and translated into more than 70 different languages，which makes JK Rowling an international bestselling writer.People all over the world，especially students，have become fans of Harry Potter.
请你根据下列提示描述一本你最喜欢的书籍：
1．最喜欢儒勒·凡尔纳(科幻小说之父)的小说《八十天环游地球》。
2．关于一个英国绅士Phileas Fogg和人打赌80天环游世界的故事。描写了他旅行中遇到的困难和经历的事件。
3．通过这本书我们能了解到作者对大海的热爱。
注意：词数80左右。
【参考范文】
My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days，written by Jules Verne，who is acknowledged as “Father of Science Fiction”．
This science fiction tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman，Mr.Phileas Fogg，who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days.It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.
From this story，we can see the authors' deep love for the sea，travel and adventure，which played a vital role in his life.
