译林版高中英语选择性必修第一册UNIT2表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开介绍一首歌曲
本单元的写作任务是介绍一首歌曲，属于说明文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出你喜欢歌曲；
主体(the body)——详细介绍你喜欢的歌曲；
结尾(the ending)——简要总结。
[常用词块]
1．give life to...赋予……生命
2．dance to the music 随着音乐跳舞
3．share feelings and ideas with sb.与某人分享感受和想法
4．take advantage of our spare time充分利用我们空闲的时间
5．attract a huge audience吸引大量的观众
6．have an important effect on our body and mind对我们身心产生重要的影响
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．In high school I took one course called music appreciation which I greatly enjoyed.
高中时，我参加了一个叫音乐赏析的课程，我很喜欢它。
2．My favorite English song is The Sound of Silence，which is very popular all over the world.
我最喜欢的英文歌是《寂静之声》，它在全世界都很流行。
★正文佳句
1．As well as attracting many audiences in its home，Cantopop has spread abroad.
粤语流行音乐不仅在国内吸引了许多观众，而且还传播到了国外。
2．The song was originally released on a limited edition EP called Extra Credit as a demo in 2005 to promote his second studio album.
这首歌最初是在2005年发行的一张名为Extra Credit的限量版EP上，作为他的第二张专辑的试唱。
★余味结尾
1．It is this Childhood that awakens my sleeping childhood and lights up my future.
正是这首《童年》唤醒了我沉睡的童年，照亮了我的前程。
2．The song lets me feel the warm love of my mother，and makes me unforgettable in this life!
这首歌使我感受到了妈妈温暖的爱，让我今生难忘！
请你根据下面提示，写一篇介绍英文歌曲I Believe I Can Fly的短文。
1．是迈克尔·乔丹主演的电影《空中大灌篮》的插曲；
2．现在成为经典。它充满了激情和动力。不论前方路多么坎坷，我们都要勇往直前；
3．希望你也能喜欢这首歌。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：Space Jam《空中大灌蓝》
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[学生习作]
My favorite song is I Believe I Can Fly.It has come from the film Space Jam.The film was starred by a famous basketball star named Michael Jordan.
The song is popular all over the world.It is full of enthusiasm and motivation for all of us.No matter how rough the road in front of us，we should go ahead.I like listening to the song when I am happy or sad.I think you will like the song as well.
点评：
1．文章基本能够符合写作要求，要点齐全，结构合理；
2．能够使用过去分词作定语，以及no matter how引导让步状语从句，但是总体句式单一，简单句过多。
[升格作文]
I Believe I Can Fly is my favorite English pop music，which comes from the film Space Jam starred by Michael Jordan，a famous NBA star.
By now this song has become classic.It is full of enthusiasm and motivation for the music listeners! It tells us that no matter how rough the road in front of us is, we have to march forward courageously! I hope you will love this song.
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友想知道你最喜欢的歌曲是什么，请你根据下面要点提示写一封信介绍你最喜欢的英文歌曲。
1．Sunshine After the Storm已成为中国女排的队歌；
2．前半部分轻柔，后半部分充满激情；
3．生活有苦有甜，我们陷入困境不能放弃。心中有阳光，就能除却乌云，见得彩虹。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
The song Sunshine After the Storm really attracts me，which has become the song of the Chinese women's volleyball team.
The first half of the song is gentle，then the last half is passionate.Whenever I hear the song, I am deeply shocked by the soul and touched by each word.Life is always bittersweet.When we are in a dilemma，we must learn to be strong and not to give up.As long as the sunshine is in mind，it will remove the dark clouds and show us a road of colorful rainbow.
