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专题06 书面表达(解析版)
目录
2020年
一、 杭州
二、 湖州
三、 嘉兴、舟山
四、 金华
五、 丽水
六、 宁波
七、 衢州
八、 绍兴
九、 台州
十、 温州
2021年
一、杭州
二、湖州
三、嘉兴、舟山
四、金华
五、丽水
六、宁波
七、衢州
八、绍兴
九、台州
十、温州
2022年
一、杭州
二、湖州
三、嘉兴、舟山
四、金华
五、丽水
六、宁波
七、衢州
八、绍兴
九、台州
十、温州
2020年
一、 杭州
假定你是李平, 请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受邀请并询问至少三个相关细节 (如具体地点
……)
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ping,
We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10h at 7:00. If you're able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2m. Hope you can make it!
Larry Smith
President of Foreign Students' Club
Dear Larry,
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Ping
【思路点拨】
1. 表明回信目的感谢并接受邀请
Thank you so much for your invitation. As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it's my great honor to
share something interesting with all of you. Im available on the Friday evening, July 10th and I'll be there on time.
2. 询问3个细节
A. 询问地点 The first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held.
B. 询问时长 Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk.
C. 询问参与人员 The last one is who will come to the talk.
3. 再次表示感谢
Thanks again for your invitation.
One possible version:
Dear Larry,
Thank you so much for your invitation. As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it's my great honor to share something interesting with all of you. I'm available on the Friday evening, July 10th and I'll be there on time. But I am still wondering more details about the talk. The first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held. Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk. The last one is who will come to the talk. Thanks again for your invitation.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Ping
二、 湖州
53. 假定你是李雷,请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥;邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;词数:80-100;短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
To
LiLei@mail.com
Subject
Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Lei!
I'm really excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this year—hope you are too!
But the thing is, I really don't want to do the wrong thing while I'm there and especially at the school, so I'm wondering if you could tell me a bit about the rules, about phones, clothes, food...
Could you send me a quick email? I'd love to hear from you.
Love,
Bruce
To
Bruce@mail.com
Subject
Re:Exchange Visit!
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
Love,
Li Lei
One possible version:
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.
Love,
Li Lei
【解析】
【详解】题干解读:这是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评:例文采用五段式;时态以一般现在时为主;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点:
短语:look forward to;worry about;need to do sth;kind of;be allowed to do sth等。
句型:And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
三、 嘉兴、舟山
71.假设你是 David,打算今年夏天去 Batsford Arboretum游玩。请给植物园写一封简短的邮件,询问你想了解的信息,如用餐、门票价格等。
注意:
(1)邮件中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数:30-50。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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David
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope everything goes well.
I am writing to you tell that I will visit Batsford Arboretum this summer. And I’d like to know whether I can have lunch there or not. If not, I will bring my own food there. How about the price of the ticket? Can I get a student discount on this ticket price?
I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you.
David
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:本题为书信作文,要求给植物园写一份邮件进行咨询。时态应用现在时,人称可用第一、二人称。
2.例文点评:例文为标准书信格式,第一段和最后一段均为标准邮件开头、结尾用语。中间第二段则是按照题目所给提示,就植物园就餐和门票问题进行了提问。例文思路清晰,条理清楚,符合题目所列要求,是一篇合格的范文。
3.高分亮点:
短语:whether … or not,if not,be looking forward to,
句型:
(1)I am writing to you tell that I will visit Batsford Arboretum this summer.(宾语从句)
(2)How about the price of the ticket?(how about句型)
(2020 · 嘉兴)
72.在你校"劳动教育月"期间,校英语报发起了"A Helper at Home"主题征文活动。请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下:
What you often do at home
What you have learned
◆ water flowers ◆ cook meals
◆ wash the dishes ◆ look after pets
◆take out the rubbish ◆……
◆life skills
◆ responsibility(责任)
◆……
注意:
(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home.
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One possible version:
A Helper at Home
I have always been a good helper at home. As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them to do housework. Last Sunday,after breakfast,I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills.
I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,在你校“劳动教育月”期间,校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动。要求结合自身情况,根据提示内容,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈自己经常做的两项家务以及收获。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
2.例文点评:本文按照题目的要求,介绍了自己所做的两项家务,结构清晰,要点全面;文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范,而且还使用了一些较好的句式,增强了文章的连贯性。
3.高分亮点:
短语:help sb to do sth,try to do,put away,not only…but also…。
句型:I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. 我认为能让我的父母工作后感到开心。I think后加省略了that的宾语从句。
In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be. 总之,我的家务活做的越多,我的父母就会越快乐。the+比较级,the+比较级:越……就越……。
四、 金华
61. 假如你是李明,某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容,写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文,用于投稿。
注意:1. 文中必须包含三个方面的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 文章的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点
参考词汇
Parents’ care
cook food, take…to and from school, look after…
Parents’ love
trust, advise, encourage…
My thanks
…
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad.
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Love from
Li Ming
One possible version:
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
All these years, you have done so much. Almost every day, Mum cooks delicious food for me and Dad takes me to and from school. When I'm sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.
Both of you always trust me and care a lot about my school life and personal feelings. The many talks we have had and the advice you have given me help me grow. The encouragement from you helps me fear no difficulties and troubles.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love from
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】题干解读:这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“A Letter to My Parents”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评:例文采用四段式;时态以一般现在时为主;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点:
短语:express one’s thanks for…;take…to…;look after;Both of等。
句型:When I'm sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.
The many talks we have had and the advice you have given me help me grow
五、 丽水(同金华)
六、 宁波
71.假如你是李华, 学业考试后要参加"21世纪杯"中学生英语演讲大赛, 题目为A/An _____________Winter Holiday, 请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿, 讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历, 并谈谈它对你今后的影响。
注意:
(1) 将演讲稿标题补充完整;
(2) 演讲稿必须包含所有要点, 并适当拓展;
(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(4) 词数100左右;首尾句已给出, 不计入总词数。
A/An _____________Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is an unforgettable winter holiday.
Personally, this winter holiday was quite different. Because of the COVID-19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped parents with housework like coking. And I learnt how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learnt to get on better with them.
What I learnt during this holiday will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for your time
七、 衢州
六、电子邮件
56.假设你是Daming,以下是你的英国朋友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件,请根据该邮件内容给他回一封邮件。
To:Daming
From:Tony
Subject:Life with family
Hi Daming,
Long time no see. I’ve never spent so much time staying at home like this holiday. So I have more chances to stay with my family, I have a deep feeling of their love. And I want to do something for them, but I have no idea about it.
What do you often do to show your love to your family? And what’s the best way to spend your time together? Hope to get your reply soon!
Yours,
Tony
要求:
1.考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件:
2.邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息;
3.词数:90~110。
To:
From:
Subject:
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【答案】[例文]
To:Tony
From:Daming
Subject:Life with family
Hi Tony,
I’m glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love, too. As you know, I was a lazy boy. But now things change a lot. I often help Mum with housework, such as sweeping, washing and so on. Can you believe I can cook now? My parents are proud to see I’m growing.
As for the common time with the family together, I think the best way is to do something alike. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then shared our feelings. What a brilliant time!
Hope this helps!
Yours,
Daming
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题属于书信作文,写作时要注意书信标准格式。文章主要内容在于解答托尼在来信中提出的两个问题,即“大明通过做什么事来表现对家人的爱”和“与家人在一起时最好做些什么事”。
2.写作指导:本文是大明阐述自己的经历叙述和建议,应用第一人称进行写作,叙述的经历已经发生则应用一般过去时,其他事实陈述则用一般现在时。文章思路要清晰,解答题目中所列问题,并注意单词拼写及时态。
八、 绍兴
76. 学生喜欢在家还是在电影院看电影?就该话题你在班中做了调查(结果见下图)。请你据此写一篇短文在校英语社团主题活动中进行交流,并谈谈你的选择和理由。
Watch movies at home or in the cinema?
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One possible version:
76.
Recently, I’ve done a survey about whether students like to watch movies at home or in the cinema. 64% of the students like to watch movies at home. For one thing, they can spend less money. For another, they will have more choices of what to watch.
However, others prefer going to the cinema. From their point of view, they will have the chance to enjoy huge screens and fell excellent sound in the cinema, which can always give them a wonderful watching experience.
As for me, watching movies in the cinema is a better choice. I can hang out with my friends and it’s really exciting. At the same time, it’s a good way to develop friendship.
【知识点】应用文写作
【考察能力】语言运用——书面表达能力
【解析】本文属于典型的观点类作文,是关于在家还是在电影院看电影话题的调查,并谈谈你的选择以及理由。审题清楚后,发现其实作文难度不大,但在表达个人观点的时候理由还是要充分些,所以要花些时间思考。同时,注意文章的语句衔接,表达清晰,像for one thing...for another,at the same time 等都能让文章衔接顺畅。建议学生们平时应多积累观点类文章书写的固定框架句型及相应的连接词汇并注意生活素材的积累。
【难度】中
【题分】20分
九、 台州
61.假如你是李华, 最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件, 请你根据该邮件内符给Andrew 回复。
Hi, Li Hua,
I’m going on holiday to your country next month with my family.
What’s the weather like at that time? I'm just planning what I need to take. What clothes do you think I need to pack? Could you tell me something about one kind of traditional Chinese art, such as paper cutting, Chinese clay art. . . ?
Thanks for your help.
Andrew
注意: (1)请回复邮件中所提及的问题, 可适当发挥;(2)邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; (3)词数:80~100.
To: Andrew
From: Li Hua
Hi, Andrew,
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Li Hua
One possible version:
Hi, Andrew,
Welcome to China. So glad you’ll come and see me.
In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good.
Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts with a history of around 1,500 years. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. It sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cuttings are usually put on windows and walls as symbols of good luck.
See you soon.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是书信类书面表达,根据安德鲁的邮件内容进行回复,格式按照邮件格式。
2.例文点评:例文采用四段式结构,第一段表示问候,第二段介绍天气情况,第三段介绍中国传统剪纸艺术,第四段表示期待与对方见面;整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;时态主要是一般现在时。
3.高分亮点:
短语:turn into;put on;good luck;welcome to…;most of the day;with a history of…。
句型:In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. there be句型;You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. had better do sth.表示提建议。
十、 温州
56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味,像年糕(New Year cake)、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题,写一篇约100词的短文,向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭,让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。
注意:文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
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One possible version:
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.
It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.
2021年
一、杭州
假定你是李平,请阅读以下邮件,接受邀请并回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping,
How is everything going with you? Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me. We’re having a party next Saturday. Please come! We’ll have lots of drinks. But if you remember, can you bring some Chinese food? The party will be starting at 6 p.m. What time do you think you’ll be coming? I’ll probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you’ll be able to stay and help?
Anyway, hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not.
All the best.
Matt
Dear Matt,
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Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Matt,
It’s good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I will definitely come! It will be good to meet Mike. I’ll arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods, like dumplings and zongzi for you. I hope you would like them. Don’t worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up.
Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it!
All the best.
Li Ping
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时根据收到的邮件内容,接受邀请并回复,内容包括几点到达,以及所带的食物等。
2.本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容;时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时;在写作时,力求语言准确,格式准确,保证条理清晰。
二、湖州
材料作文
53. 假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动,请根据广告中的信息写一篇短文,用于投稿。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;词数:80—100。
ARTICLES WANTED!
Being Healthy
Which do you think is more important, doing exercise or eating healthy food?
What do you do to stay healthy? Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
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【答案】例文1:
People are paying more and more attention to staying healthy. Ways such as doing exercise, eating healthy food etc. help a lot. But I think doing exercise is more important.
For me, I used to sit at the desk for too long and seldom go outside doing some sports. As a result, I put on 5 kilos just in a year and I felt tired easily. But when I tried to take up running after school, I began to feel energetic and healthier.
Since then, I have kept the habit of taking exercise. And I find it does good to both the mind and the body.
例如2:
People may have different ways to keep healthy, such as doing exercise, eating healthy food, etc. I think eating healthily is more important.
At school, we have sports time every day, so I think we’ve got enough exercise. However, we usually have lunch hurriedly at school. So eating healthily at home is important for us. Luckily, we can enjoy delicious and healthy food cooked by our parents which also makes us feel good. As for me, I often make some vegetable salad for breakfast or even cook something I like at weekends.
I think I will eat healthily to stay strong and happy.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据征文广告信息写短文,介绍做运动或吃健康的食物哪个更重要,告诉大家你的想法,及你如何保持健康。
2.写作指导:写作时要引出话题后先对做运动或吃健康食物中做出选择,给出自己的观点,可结合自身经历来写一些如何保持健康。人称以第一人称为主,时态根据具体的语境做出选择。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
三、嘉兴、舟山
材料作文
60. 校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项目。假设你是学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益处。要点提示如下:
Projects
A School Trip Day
A Sports Day
Activities
● fly kites
● have a picnic
● …
● have ball games
● play tug-of-war(拔河)
● …
Benefits(益处)
● develop friendship
● feel relaxed
●…
● develop friendship
● keep fit
●…
注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
During the Health Week, we will have ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
During the Health Week, we will have a School Trip Day on Friday. Here is the plan for the day. We will start our trip by walking to Lakeside Park. In the morning, there is going to be a kite-flying competition. At noon, we will have a picnic near a small lake there. After lunch, we will go boating on the lake. We can feel a sense of peace in mind while we are rowing on the blue water.
By being part of these activities, we will not only develop friendship with our classmates, but also relax ourselves and be free from pressure of study. ( 98 words )
Possible versions:
During the Health Week, we will have a Sports Day to make our school life more colorful.
On that day, there will be different sports. In the morning, we will play ball games. Everyone can go in for their favorite ones. In the afternoon, there will be a game that you can never miss—playing tug-of-war. It is really a good chance to make us better understand the meaning of teamwork. After that, there will be a kung fu lesson, which can help us learn to keep fit.
All these sports will do us good. Not only can they make us feel relaxed but also develop friendship. (100 words )
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头,详细介绍“健康周”的具体内容,包括各个时间段的活动内容和这次活动的目的。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称为主来介绍内容;时态采用一般将来时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容全面,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
四、金华
61. 假如你叫Daming,本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动(study tour)。请根据下列表格中的内容,给外籍教师Mike发一份邮件,告知你们的计划,并邀请他一同前往。
注意:
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点:
内容要点
参考词汇
When and where to go
Zhejiang University, this Saturday
How to go
by train
What to do
visit …, talk with …, learn about ..., …
What to take
passport, …
Others
meet at the school gate, 7: 30 a.m., …
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Daming
【答案】[例文]
Dear Mike,
My classmates and I are going to Zhejiang University for a study tour this Saturday. It is one of the best universities in China and also my dream university. When we are there, we’ll go around the campus, visit the labs and libraries, and learn about its history. We will also talk with the teachers and students there.
Would you like to join us? If yes, please remember to take your passport because we’ll take the train. And we will meet at the school gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为电子邮件写作,要注意标准的电子邮件格式,要求根据题目要点提示写出关于浙江大学研学活动的计划,所给要点必须全部包括,并可适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导:写作时应用第一人称,时态应用现在时或将来时。写作时要点要齐全,不要遗漏,思路最好按照所给的要点顺序进行叙述,注意邮件的开头结束标准用语。
五、丽水
外教Steve爱好武术,喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据下面的要点,写一封邮件,邀请他到你家过周末。
内容要点
参考词汇
weekend plan/activities
sports (or music/drawing)
paint, play basketball, ….
experience of Chinese cultures
make jiaozi, write with a Chinese brush, …
注意:
(1)文中必须包含上表中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80~100;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To
Steve@mail.com
Subject
Weekend Plan
Hi, Steve!
I’m Li Hua. I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】A possible version:
Hi, Steve!
I’m Li Hua. I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. So why not come to my home for the weekend? I have a good plan!
As both of us like sports, let’s play basketball in the gym around my home in the morning. After that, we can practice writing with a Chinese brush together. It’s not easy, but it makes us peaceful. You can also sense the beauty of the Chinese characters. To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi, one of the most traditional foods in China. It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. I am sure you will have great fun.
Wait for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,写一封邮件,邀请Steve来家里过周末。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段发出邀请;第二段介绍二人可以在周末做什么;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
六、宁波
材料作文
61. 假如你是李华, 上个月你校举行了 “祖国在我心中”的主题活动(theme event), 请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历, 写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括导图的所有要点, 并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数 80-100;标题已给出, 不计入总词数。
Motherland in My Heart
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【答案】Possible version:
Motherland in My Heart
Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” to express our love for our motherland.
During the event, we had many activities, including singing red songs and telling stories about the Red Army. I took part in the singing competition. Besides, I attended the speech contest in which I told a story about a hero. Many students were moved by my story.
I think this event is very meaningful. I’m proud of my country. I hope our motherland will become much greater and everybody can live a better life.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目要求根据所给提示,以“Motherland in My Heart”为题,结合自己参加“祖国在我心中”主题活动的经历写篇文章,向学校英语报投稿。
2.写作指导:人称应采用第一人称,介绍主题活动内容时用一般过去时,表达自己的感受时用一般现在时。注意要包含所给要点,保证条理清晰。
七、衢州
话题作文
56. 为助力打造 “书香校园”,你校英语社团将举办以 “热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动,请以 “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。
要求:
1. 短文应包括两个要点(阅读情况和阅读好处),可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用;
2. 短文不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数:90~110。
参考词汇:experience, habit, knowledge, pleasure
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【答案】Possible versions:
Version 1
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man.
I have a great passion for reading and it has become part of my life. I have a good reading habit. Every morning, I read newspapers for the latest news. I’m also fond of novels and magazines. Besides, book reviews provide me with different ideas on great books.
When reading, I feel relaxed and pleased. It’s the best moment to get knowledge and pleasure in life. What’s more, reading opens my eyes and broadens my mind. Through reading, I can experience what I haven’t seen or done before.
With a deep love for reading, I can’t wait to read more.
Version 2
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our life. Bacon said: “Reading makes a full man”. And reading makes our life colorful too.
I’ve developed a good reading habit since I was a child. Comics are my favorite, like “Journey to the West”. These funny books gave me great pleasure and accompanied me through a happy childhood. After entering middle school, I had a wide reading in varied fields. And all these books brought me both valuable knowledge and wonderful experiences.
Books are human’s friends. Love them, and they will reward you better!
【详解】
Version 1
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示词语,写出自己的阅读情况以及阅读的好处是什么,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作,时态以一般现在时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
八、绍兴
材料作文
61. 上个月,你们班为Children’s Home的孩子们组织了一次爱心义卖活动。请根据下表信息用英语写一篇短文,向某英语网站投稿,谈谈本次活动和你的体会。
Things you did
Things you’ve learned
hand out notices
make things like …
sell the things
give away the money
develop life skills
…
注意:
(1)短文必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2)你的体会至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:义卖活动 charity sale
短文首句:Last month, our class had a charity sale.
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【答案】例文:
Last month, our class had a charity sale. Two days before the sale, we handed out notices to make our sale known by others. Then we made different things like food and toys. It was so much fun! When everything was ready, we started to sell the things. To our surprise, all the things were sold out in a short time! At last, we gave away the money we made to Children’s Home.
I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develop our life skills. Meanwhile, we can learn how to communicate with others well. Last but not least, helping people makes us happy.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据表格信息写短文,谈谈班上组织的爱心义卖活动及自己的感受。要包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,以一般过去时介绍班上的爱心义卖活动,以一般现在时为主表达自己的感受。要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
九、台州
假如你是李华,请给你的外国好友Andrew写一封电子邮件,介绍你校美食文化节(food festival)的相关内容及举办目的, 并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括:
Time
2: 00 p.m. Friday, June 25th
Place
the school playground
Activities
cook, have something delicious ...
Aims
experience Chinese food culture, raise money for charity.
注意:
(1)邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Andrew
From Li Hua
Hi, Andrew
How is it going?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【答案】[例文]
Hi Andrew,
How is it going? Knowing that you are fond of food. I’m writing to invite you to attend our school food festival.
The festival will begin at 2:00 on Friday afternoon, June 25th on the school playground. We are glad to have something delicious like dumplings and zongzi. We can also cook food and sell it to our schoolmates to raise money for charity. The festival will surely offer us a good chance to show and experience Chinese traditional food culture. Besides, it is a good time for us to share happiness, love and team spirit. It’s a great pleasure to have you here with us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为电子邮件写作,写作时应注意电子邮件标准格式。根据题目所给提示,学生要在电子邮件中介绍学校美食节、其举办目的以及邀请Andrew参加该活动。
2.写作指导:写作时人称应用第一、三人称,时态应用现在时或将来时。表格所给要点要写全,切勿遗漏,还可适当进行拓展。拓展的内容应与全文内容紧密衔接,并能很好地串联起来。此外还应注意英语的表达问题,语句表达要符合英语表达习惯和语法,不要出现单词拼写及语法时态使用错误。
十、温州
在中国传统文化中, “家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。请你结合下图,以 “Home”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的 “家”。
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【答案】参考范文:
Home
Home means a lot to every Chinese.
When our family members come back home for reunion, we sit around the table, sharing our achievements and happiness. Home becomes the warmest place.
It’s a place full of love. Love can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phone call. However, none is better than going back home and spending time with our families.
It’s also a place full of strength. Whenever we have difficulties, we can return home. Thanks to the encouragement and help from our families, we can rebuild our belief and confidence to keep moving forward.
So how long have you been away from home? Come back. Home is always waiting for you.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。以“家”为题来介绍中国文化中的“家”。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题;第二段到第四段介绍了家究竟是一个什么样的地方;最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
2022年
一、杭州
假定你是李平,请阅读以下邮件,接受邀请并回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To: LiPing@mail.com
Subject: Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Ping!My name’s Jack and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I’m really excited about it!
Well, why am I writing right now? for one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school, so could you introduce one of them? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school?
Take care and hope to hear from you soon.
Jack
Dear Jack,
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Li Ping
【范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m pleased to know that you’re coming for the exchange visit.
We have many interesting school activities. Among them, the singing competition is the most popular. It offers a great chance to show our talents and helps us to learn something new. As for Chinese culture, I suggest you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum. You can learn about the history of Chinese tea there.
Hope this helps. And tell me if there is anything else you need to know.
Li Ping
【解析】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据邮件内容进行回复,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的一些有趣的活动,以及介绍关于中国文化的活动。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
二、湖州
假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
➢clothes
➢chairs
➢model planes
➢ …
➢waste paper
➢plastic bottles
➢used wood and glass
➢ …
➢creative
➢save …
➢ …
注意:
(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic” . ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【解析】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍“变废为宝”的环保作品展的情况,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
三、嘉兴、舟山
七、讲稿
60.假如你是李华,为营造更好的校园英语氛围,你班决定以学校花园为载体,开展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”项目式学习(COOC Project),经过分组讨论,你们形成了Plan A与Plan B 两个实施方案(见下表)。请你选择其中一个方案,用英语写一篇短文,代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选方案的内容和优势进行回报。
注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文:
Plan A
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is naming the plants in English.
There are mainly two steps. We’ll first do a survey to find information about the plants. We can surf the Internet, or ask our teachers for help if we meet with difficulties. The second step is to design name cards. We’ll describe each kind of plants in English. To make the cards look prettier, a photo of the plant will be included in each card.
We believe this plan will make our school garden a better place to learn about nature and improve our English. I can’t wait to see it come into practice.
That’s all. Thank you!
Plan B
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is creating an English corner.
The first thing we’ll do is to choose an area for it. As you see in the map, the grassland makes a good choice. We’ll decorate it with several tables and chairs, so that we can have comfortable talks. A shelf of English books and magazines will also be put there. Then we’re going to make some rules. For example, we need to take care of things, and of course, speak English only.
I’m sure this corner will become a popular place for us to improve our spoken English, and make more friends as well.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”为主题,结合提示内容,选择一个方案进行介绍。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:以Plan A为例,写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍具体要怎么做;第三段介绍该计划预期的成果;第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
四、金华
假如你是Li Hua,你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容,结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历,回一封邮件,供他参考。
注意:1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出,不计入总词数;正文首句仅供选择使用。
正文首句: I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.
内容要点
参考词汇
Things needed
notebook, dictionary,…
Attitude(态度)to take
hard-working, active, happy,…
Relationship to develop
respect, get along with,…
Others
…
Dear Frank,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.
To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.
And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.
I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文要求根据题干表格中的内容给Frank写封邮件,告知他在中国学习的一些注意事项,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主。第一段引入话题;第二段和第三段根据表格中的提示详细告知他在中国学习时需要注意的事项;第四段表达自己的希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
五、丽水
假如你是李明,你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划,请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
Social Practice Plan
What to do
Why to do so
●volunteer to do...
●make a survey about...
●have a graduation trip to...
●…
●be helpful...
●learn more about...
●open one’s eyes...
●…
注意:
1)文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3)词数:80~ 100;邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【范文】
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring some unforgettable memories. After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. I’m sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划;最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
六、宁波
为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德,这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动 (a series of labour activities),假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数80-100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Time
Things I learned
My feelings
March
grow vegetables and plant trees
…
April
repair things like electric fans…
May
…
Let’s Enjoy Working
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Let’s enjoy working!
This term, I took part in a series of labor activities in our school. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In March, I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things like electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned to do much housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful. I’m sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.
【解析】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍自己参加的学校组织的一系列劳动实践活动的情况,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
七、衢州(暂无)
八、绍兴
假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。
Uncivilized behaviors
Suggestions
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flowers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish into bins
● …
注意:
(1)邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2)你的建议至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilized behavior;编辑editor
Dear editor,I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Liu Jun
【范文】
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.
I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.
Yours sincerely
Liu Jun
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为;第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
九、台州
七、材料作文
61.毕业之际,学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想,选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文,向校英文报投稿。
内容要点
参考词汇
What do you want to be when you grow up
a teacher
a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)…?
●be good at communicating
●work with children
●be interested in science
●invent new products
How are you going to do that?
●get a good education
●learn how to teach children
●study science hard
●do scientific research
Where are you going to work?
●…
●…
When are you going to start?
●…
●…
注意:(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数80~100。
My dream job
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be a scientist. I have always been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take actions right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“我梦想的工作”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍自己梦想的工作是什么;第二段介绍自己如何让自己的梦想实现。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
十一、 温州
假如你是陈华,你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社,她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动,写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动(见下表)回复邮件,提出你对这些活动的看法和理由,并为她补充至少一项活动。
Activities for the Chinese music club•Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music.
•Share stories of Chinese singers.
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tracy,Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【范文】
Dear Tracy,
Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club members to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so it’s surely a meaningful activity.
Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to the club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments.
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据Tracy为中国音乐社所设计的活动来回复邮件,要提出你对这些活动的看法及理由,并补充一项适合该社团的活动。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称为主,时态采用一般现在时。邮件正文可采用四段式:第一段用已给出开头引出话题;第二段给出自己对Tracy设计的活动的看法及理由;第三段补充合适的社团活动;第四段用已给出的结尾收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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