贵州省铜仁市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

贵州省铜仁市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、材料作文

1．（2022·贵州铜仁）你校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“丰富的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请撰文投稿，分享学校的课外活动情况及体会。

要求：

（1）短文必须包括左图所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

（2）80词左右（文章开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。

（3）文章不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。

（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。

提示词：

labor practice base（劳动实践基地）

digging the land（松土）；

respect（尊重）。

Colorful After-School Activities

I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.

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2．（2020·贵州铜仁）全球新冠疫情依然严峻，而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目，全国万众一心，团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。你的美国笔友Michael想了解你对此的所见所闻和所思所想。请你根据下面的提示内容，回一封邮件。

提示：

（所见所闻）我们政府采取了很多措施，执行（carry out）隔离（quarantine）治疗（ reatment）的政策（policy）；兴建（build）许多特殊的（special）医院；许多优秀的（excellent）医护人员自愿（volunteer）去帮助灾区（disaster areas）.

（所思所想）作为学生，我们要保护好自己，比如……（至少两点）；希望全世界人民……。（ work together； save more lives）

要求：

1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑；

3. 必须包含所有提示内容，但不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

4. 务必书写正确规范，卷面整洁。

Dear Michael,

I’m glad to receive your e—mail. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID—19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

二、讲稿

3．（2021·贵州铜仁）百年建党之际，铜仁市各个学校都在开展爱国爱党主题教育活动。假设你是张华，将参加你们学校举行的英语演讲比赛庆祝党的生日，请根据以下内容提示及要求，以“How to be a responsible student” 为题写一篇演讲稿，谈谈如何做一个有作为、有责任感的学生。

要求：

1.80词左右，开头结尾已给 ，不计入总词数；

2.句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑；

3.包含所有提示内容，但不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

4.书写正确规范，卷面整洁。

提示：

1.爱国爱党，有理想，诚实守信，善良感恩；

2.努力学习，树立节约意识，不要浪费 (如:食物，纸张，水电等) ；

3.保持身心健康，多参加课外活动和体育锻炼；

4.热爱自然，保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，爱护动植物。

参考词汇keep one’s promise, be thankful to sb, set the mind of saving

Boys and girls,

July 1st will be our Party’s 100th birthday. As teenagers, we are the future of our motherland. We have a sense of duty to make our country more and more powerful. What should we do to be a responsible student?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening!

参考答案：

1．例文

Colorful After-School Activities

I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.

If you want to improve your oral English, you can choose English Club. You can learn about how to recite here. If you are good at drawing, you can join Drawing Club. You can also learn about paper-cutting. If you are interested in growing vegetables and planting, you can join Labour Practice. If you want to keep healthy, you can join Sports Club. You can learn how to swim, play football and so on.

These after-school activities not only enrich our after-school lives, but also teach us some basic skills.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“丰富的课外活动”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，文章开头已给出；第二段根据提示材料介绍学校不同的课外活动，以及参加这些课外活动的好处；最后一段表达自己对这些课外活动的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2．例文

Dear Michael,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID-19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First, we have carried out quarantine treatment policy. Second, many special hospitals have been built. Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas. As students, we must protect ourselves. For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air. Try to avoid going outside or going to places where there are many people. Wash your hands as often as possible, especially before meals and after returning from public places. What’s more, we should wear a mask when going out. I

I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

【详解】1.题干解读：对于写作题考生需认真审题，全面了解写作要求，理清思路，确定短文体裁、框架结构和写作内容。本文要求就新冠疫情向美国笔友Michael写信介绍自己的所见所闻和所思所想，属于书信类写作。写作时需要注意格式正确，用第一人称进行叙述。

2.例文点评：本文首先直入主题I’d like to share my opinions with you，然后分别介绍政府的三点防疫举措和个人的防护措施，最后表达希望I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives。本文是“总分总”结构，以第一人称为主，用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时三种时态展开陈述；内容充实，结构完整，方法合理，表达流畅，条理清晰，是一篇优秀的习作。

3.高分亮点：

高分短语：would like to do, share sth. with sb., as students, stay at home, go out, carry out, volunteer to do, live in, for example, try to do , avoid doing, as often as possible, what’s more, all over the world.

高分句型：

1). Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas.（定语从句）

2). For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air.（并列祈使句结构）

3). I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.（宾语从句）

【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。例文中，First, Second, Third, What’s more等词的运用，增强了本文的条理性。

3．例文：

Boys and girls,

July 1st will be our Party’s 100th birthday. As teenagers, we are the future of our motherland. We have a sense of duty to make our country more and more powerful. What should we do to be a responsible student?

First of all, we must love our country and home. We should have our own dreams. And we should also keep our promise and be thankful to the people who help us. Secondly, we should work hard and be creative in study. We should set the mind of saving and not waste food, paper, water and so on. Next, exercise can make us strong and confident. We should do more exercise and keep healthy. After that, we should love nature. We should do our best to protect the environment. We shouldn’t throw litter everywhere, and we should love animals and plants. If we pay attention to the nature, we will find the beauty everywhere.

All in all, if we show our love in our daily life, we can be anything we want.

Thanks for listening!【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和要点，写出应该如何做一个有作为、有责任感的学生，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，提出建议可以多使用should来表达，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。