书面表达 五年(2016-2020)中考英语分项研究专题(黑龙江专用)

18 书面表达1 五年(2016-2020)中考英语分项研究专题(黑龙江专用)

1 .
难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行"告别初中生活"的主题班会。假如你是班长, 根据以下提示, 用英语写一则通知。要点如下：
1、时间：7月18日下午3:00；
2、地点：班级；
3、活动内容：对老师用话语表达谢意, 同学交流、合影等等。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【答案】例文：
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. We are going to have a class meeting at 3:00 on the afternoon of July 18. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life.  It will be held in our classroom. We should say a thankful word to our teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and take some photos.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于通知写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示介绍主题班会的时间、地点以及活动的内容。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍班会的具体信息，叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：go to the end; have a class meeting; saying goodbye to; chat freely with; take some photos。
句型：we should do和we can do表示建议的句子；and表示并列的句子；Don't do…祈使句的否定形式。


2 .
你校定于6月30日去远足。请你以学生会的名义写一个通知。(30-50词)
通知内容:1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。
2.穿校服、运动鞋。
3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。
4.请准时参加。
【答案】Notice
All the students,
We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning. Please wear our school uniforms and sports shoes. Our school will prepare water and lunch for us. Please be on time
Students' Union
【解析】
【分析】
高分句型：We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning.我们将在6月30日去徒步旅行，早上6:30在学校门口集合。这里go hiking表示不徒步旅行。
Please be on time.请准时。句子无主语，是一个祈使句，以动词原形开头。
【详解】
这是一则通知。根据题目要求可知时态主要用一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称。内容包括：1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。2.穿校服、运动鞋。3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。4.请准时参加。在写作时，首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求，注意理顺要点，防止漏写。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，注意不要出现语法错误。


3 .
为了绿化环境,打造花园城市，你校将组织学生去北山公园植树。请你以学生会的名义写一则通知。要求同学们明天上午8点在学校门口集合，乘坐校车一起前往；穿好校服；自备午餐；不要迟到。
Notice
All the students,
                                                                                
                                                                                
Students' Union
【答案】Notice
All the students,
In order to make our city more beautiful, we are going to plant trees in Beishan Park, We'll meet at the school gate at 8: 00 tomorrow morning and take the school bus there together. Please wear your uniforms and take your lunch. You must be on time.
Students’ Union
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一则通知，应包含题目所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【点睛】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：In order to；plant trees ；at the school gate ；take the school bus；on time.等；采用祈使句，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。


4 .
 假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
家庭安全：小心用火用电, 外出时关好门窗；
游泳安全：不独自去游泳, 不去河、湖游泳；
交通安全：过马路要当心, 不在马路上玩耍。
提示词：electricity (n.电)
注意：
1、词数80左右；  
2、请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Wei
【答案】参考范文：
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。要求根据要点提示，给他回一封电子邮件。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：play with，make sure，what's more，watch out，warn sb（not）to do sth。
句型：It is dangerous to play with fire.玩火是危险的。It is+形容词+to do sth.去做某事是……的，固定句型。
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first. 我认为这些规则是必要的，因为安全第一。I think后接宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句。


5 .
假如你叫Tom，和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。
提示：1. 聚会内容：唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏；
2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息，字数30-50词。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think we will have a good time
Tom
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday.  I’d like to invite you to my home.  Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along green Street  and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing  At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games.  I think we will have a good time.
Tom
【解析】
【详解】
假如你叫Tom，和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。虽然主要内容已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错，一些比较好的句型，如I’d like to invite you to my home.  Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along green Street  and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing等。


6 .
书面表达
假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以下信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。
写作要点：
1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。
2. 介绍学校：
（1）课程有趣；
（2）有多名外教；
（3）活动丰富。
3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的（qualified）中学生提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear new friends，
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Ping
【答案】Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class. I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

7 .
假如你是北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹来北京旅游．请根据以下提示
给她写一封信，并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中学生．
写作要点：
1、欢迎她来北京．
2、介绍北京的情况．
（1）下周天气：白天最高温度超过330C；
（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地铁；
（3）必去的名胜：长城．
3、对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议．
写作要求：
1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．
2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．
3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰．
4、至少80词．
Dear Li Lan，
How are you doing？                                          
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Li．
【答案】Dear Li Lan，
How are you doing？Welcome to Beijing．Beijing is located in the east of China and attracts more and more people at home and abroad to visit，study and even lived there for a long time．The reason why beijing is so popular is that it is neither hot in summer nor cold in winter．Not only is it the capital of china，but also it is recognized as the political，educational，and culture center．If you want to have an enjoyable journey，I suggest you climb the great wall．Because the famous saying in China is that the man who does not reach the great wall is not a true man．The weather will be hot next weekends and the highest temperature is above 30 degrees． So you should wear cool clothes．The transportation is very convenient because the subway nearly covers the whole city．So you had better take the subway to go out．
Beijing is a civilized city and you should be a civilized student．Zunlaoaiyou is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation．If you sit next to the old or the sick，please take the initiative seat．
Looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Li
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以来“北京旅游”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一封书信。介绍北京的情况，以及写出文明旅游的要求。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中Welcome to, the capital of, take the subway, had better, looking forward to，and、so 等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如:句型not only...but also...；宾语从句、条件状语从句、原因状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。


8 .
 A：临近毕业，学校开展了组内自评和互评活动。假设你是Sunshine小组的组长请对组员Li Ming进行综合素质评价，并写一份“综合素质评价报告”。
内容：1.他的爱好；    2.他的优点（两条）；
3.他的缺点或存在的问题；    4.根据所提到的缺点，提出适当的建议。
要求：1.字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，用第三人称写；
2.词数：30—50词，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Report of Quality Evaluation (评价) for Sunshine Group
Name
Li Ming
Age
15
Sex
Boy
Class
Class 9, Grade 3
Score
A
Comment (评语)
Li Ming is a member of my group.___________________________
 
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Li Ming is a member of my group. He likes reading books. He is kind and helpful. He always helps others when they are in trouble. He studies hard and does well in all the subjects. But he is kind of shy. He doesn't like making friends. I hope he can communicate with others.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示内容写一份对组员Li Ming的综合素质评价报告。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据四点内容提示对Li Ming进行了综合素质评价并给出了适当的建议。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：a member of；like doing sth.；study hard；do well in；kind of；make friends； communicate with sb.。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；否定句；宾语从句。


9 .
B：2020年是非同寻常的一年，在举国上下抗击疫情的同时，教育部发出了“停课不停学”的号召，鼓励中小学生在线学习。但长时间观看电脑或手机，缺乏户外锻炼的机会，影响视力和身心健康。假如你是Lin Hui，请从以下三个方面说明在这个特殊时期里你是如何保持健康的。
Exercise
Do eye exercises, do body building exercises (健身操) …
Eating habits
Eat healthy food …
Mood (情绪)
Be happy, smile …
 
要求：1.字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作出适当发挥；
3.词数：80—100词，首句己给出，不计入总词数。
Hello! I am Lin Hui. Let me introduce my life habits._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Hello! I'm Lin Hui. Let me introduce my life habits. First, I need to do eye exercises between classes to make my eyes relax. I can't go out to play because of the epidemic (疫情). So I can do body building exercises indoors every day. Second, I have healthy eating habits. I often eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit. I don't eat too much meat. Last, being happy is another way to keep healthy. When I'm lonely or unhappy, I usually try to make myself relax by listening to music or chatting with my friends. I often smile. I think smile makes me happy and healthy.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据表格内容从三个方面说明自己是如何在特殊时期保持健康的。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据以第一人称，假设自己是Lin Hui，从表格提示的三个方面（运动、饮食习惯和情绪）来写了自己如何在特殊时期保持健康。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：life habits；need to do sth.；do eyes exercises；make sth.+adj.；go out；because of；every day；a lot of；too much；keep healthy；try to do sth.；chat with。
句型：以let开头的祈使句；so连接的并列句；否定句；when引导的时间状语从句；宾语从句。

10 .
 本学期，我省中小学采取网上授课的教学方式。有些同学取得很大进步，也有些同学成绩下滑。对此，你有什么看法呢？请以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。
提示信息：
1）网络直播课是学校避免疾病传播的一种教学方式：（spread 传播v.）
2）作业形式丰富多样：（all kinds of）
3）课后可以观看回放：（playback 回放n.）
4）一些同学对自己要求不严格、不认真听讲、不按时完成作业；
5）Wi-Fi不好，导致网课不能顺利进行：（go on well）
……
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think…______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think learning online is a teaching method to avoid the spread of disease in schools, and the homework is of various forms. We can record videos and share them with our classmates online.
One of the advantages of online teaching is that the video lesson can be played back after class. It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students.
However, every coin has two sides. Some students are not strict with themselves. They do not listen carefully or finish their homework on time. If a student is managed by a teacher in class, of course he may be more serious. But if teaching online, the teacher can't see what they are doing, the probability of a student wandering is probably much higher than before.
What’s more, If Wi-Fi is not good, it will cause the online lessons not to go on well.
I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform. Through communication, students can get answers to questions. Teachers can also understand the students and encourage students to learn.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据所给信息，以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。首先认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；我们需要用正确的英语把所给出的要点表达出来，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：文章在介绍的时候时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称，文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：share… with；the advantages of；What’s more；communicate with；encourage students to learn.
句型：which引导非限制性定语从句。It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students.
宾语从句I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform.


11 .
你即将告别初中校园，请为学弟学妹们介绍一下初中的学习经验，帮助他们更好地适应初中的学习生活。
内容包括：
1、课前的自主预习；
2、课上的具体做法；
3、课后的复习方法；
4、表达祝愿。
写作要求：
1、词数为80左右；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2、写作过程中注意分段和标点；前三个要点至少各写出两句话；
3、句式灵活多样，行文连贯流畅；
4、文章中不得出现真实的学校名称及姓名。
I'd like to share some experience in studying.
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【答案】[例文]
I’d like to share some experience in studying. If you want to be a good student, you must do three things.
First, you must preview lessons for tomorrow in order to follow the teacher easily. Find out the points you don’t understand in advance. Second, you must listen to the teacher very carefully in class. This is very important because the teacher will explain the problems very clearly. Third, you must finish your homework on time. After you do homework, you will know what you have learned more clearly.
Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，题目已给出要点提示，只需要按照要点提示进行写作即可。时态应用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。
2.例文点评：例文分三段，第一段用于引出给学弟学妹建议这个主题，第二段则根据要点提示给出了课前、课上、课后的学习建议，第三段则表达了对学弟学妹的祝福。例文层次分明，要点齐全，思路清晰，熟练使用First、Second、Third等序数词，使句与句之间衔接自然流畅，是一篇优秀的例文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，find out，in advance，listen to，on time。
句型：
（1）If you want to be a good student, you must do three things.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2）Find out the points you don’t understand in advance.（祈使句）
（3）This is very important because the teacher will explain the problems very clearly.（because引导的原因状语从句）

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(B)2020年是不同寻常的一年。“新冠疫情”的爆发使我们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化，同时也引发了人们的思考。请你根据思维导图谈谈“新冠疫情”带给我们的影响以及我们从中得到的启示。要求：不少于90词，可适当发挥。

The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】[例文]
The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to stay at home instead of going out during the Spring Festival. It made us feel quite bored. Since we took online classes at home, there were no teachers or classmates around. We missed our teachers and classmates very much. All of us had to wear masks to protect ourselves from COVID-19 when going out.
What can we learn from the outbreak of COVID-19? First, we should develop healthy living habits to ensure us a healthy body and a good mood. Second, we should help others in need. Third, we should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求就COVID-19的爆发以及其带来的影响写一篇文章。文章时态应用现在时或过去时，人称用第一人称。
2.例文点评：例文分两段，第一段写了COVID-19的爆发给我们生活带来的影响，第二段则写了疫情的爆发给我们带来的启示。例文思路清晰，叙述流畅，包含了所有题目所给要点，符合要求，是一篇合格的范文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：instead of，all of，protect sb. from，learn from。
句型：
（1）Since we took online classes at home, there were no teachers or classmates around.（since引导时间状语从句，there be句型）
（2）All of us had to wear masks to protect ourselves from COVID-19 when going out.（when引导的时间状语从句的省略形式）

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 说起小动物，你的脑海中会浮现哪些画面，干净活泼的猫咪，还是对主人忠诚不二的小狗？这些可爱又有灵性的小动物让我们的生活丰富多彩，充满乐趣。你最喜欢的小动物是什么？你和它之间发生过怎样令人难忘的故事？小动物在你的生活中有怎样重要的位置？写一篇短文来和大家分享一下。

要求：
1. 短文中须包括图表中包含的全部信息，条理清楚、行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等。
3. 词数不少于80词。
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【答案】One possible version:
I think animals are our friends. I like animals very much.
Once my mother bought a goldfish for me as a gift. It looked very beautiful. I liked it very much. I put it in a big bowl and fed it every day. I thought I should try my best to look after it. But one day. I found it was dead. It made me very sad. My mother said that it was too full because I fed it too much.
From then on, I realized I should learn about the habits of small animals in order to care for them well.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你根据提示写一篇短文，讲述你最喜欢的小动物以及你和它之间的故事。
例文点评：文章主要采用第一人称展开叙述，时态以一般过去时为主；文章主要分为三段：第一段总述自己对动物的看法；第二段详细描述自己和小宠物金鱼之间发生的故事；第三段发表自己的感悟，认为我们应该了解小动物的生活习性来好好照顾它们。文章层次分明、逻辑清晰、叙事有条理。
高分亮点：
短语：like...very much；buy sth. for sb.；put...in；try one's best to do；look after；make sb.+adj.；learn about；in order to do。
句型：that引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句。

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初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________
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【答案】The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇提纲类作文，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词
【点睛】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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写作
身为中学生，关爱儿童是我们应尽的义务。本周六我班将组织一次去儿童福利院（the children's home)看望儿童的活动。请你为本次活动制定计划，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
内容包括：出发时间，集合地点，出行方式以及在儿童福利院的具体活动安排。
提示词；tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up
要求：1.参考提示内容可适当发挥。
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名、地名等）
【答案】We are going to the children's home to  visit the children there  this weekend. We’ll meet
at the school gate at eight on Saturday  morning. Then we’ll go there on our school bus. What should we do at the children's home? Here are our plans.
First, we'll take some gifts to them, such as colored pencils, books and some toys. Second at the children's home, we'll draw pictures with them, read stories to them and help with their lessons. Last, we'll have a party. We can sing and dance together. We can also play games with them and tell jokes to cheer them up.
I'm sure they'll enjoy the time with us.
【解析】
本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如such as ，have a party ， play games，tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up等；First, Second，Last等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。


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习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，足见习主席对环保的重视!作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？请用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
要求:1.词数:80-100词。
2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
3.要有复合句的表达。
【答案】The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.
I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps. Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.
How important for us to protect the environment!
【解析】
【分析】
高分句型：I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room.当我们离开房间时，我们应该关掉灯来省电。这里think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。
And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps.当我们刷牙的时候，我们最好关掉水龙头。这里had better do sth.表示最好做某事。
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。要求就习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？写一篇英语短文，表达自己的想法。本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词；词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一，这样会使文章更出色。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。


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话题作文：为了促进中小学生身心健康发展，我省自2018年3月1日起延迟中小学生到校时间，请你联系生活实际，谈谈对这一举措的看法。请以“My Opinions about the New Policy”为题，写一篇英语文章。
提示:1.原来的学习生活
2.延迟后的学习生活
3.个人感受（看法）
提示词：policy(政策)， the time of arriving at school
【答案】My Opinions about the New Policy
As we know, there is a new policy about putting off the time of arriving at school in the morning in our province.
I remember I had to get up early on school days and sometimes felt sleepy in class. If I got up late, I needed to have a quick breakfast.
Now I don' t need to get up so early that I can have enough sleep. I can keep energetic in class. What's more, I can also make good use of this period of time Reading books and doing exercise are good choices.
In a word, the new policy is good for our life and study.
【解析】
【详解】
本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种时态，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【点睛】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：put off； get up ；in class.； make good use of ；be good for等；As we know ；Now ；What's more,；In a word等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
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书面表达
假如你是班长李明，今天你们班针对同学们的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况，并说说暑假期间中学生参加社会实践活动有什么好处。
写作要点：
1. 讨论主题：如何度过一个有意义的(meaningful) 暑假
2. 同学们的暑假计划
(1)一半的同学打算去国内外旅游；
(2)四分之一的同学打算多读一些好书；
(3)你打算参加社会实践活动(social practice activities)。
3. 说一说暑假期间中学生参加社会实践活动有什么好处。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear David,
I’m writing to tell you something about our discussion today. ______________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear David,
I'm Li Ming, the monitor, and today the students in our class have a discussion about the plan for the summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. A quarter of the students plan to read more good books. I'm going to take part in some social practice activities. In order to improve their own literacy. Take part in some social practice activities appropriately. It can make us more outgoing. And improve our own hands.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你们班对同学们的暑假计划的讨论情况。所提供的材料中列举了讨论主题：如何度过一个有意义的(meaningful) 暑假和同学们的暑假计划。主要从：一半的同学打算去国内外旅游；四分之一的同学打算多读一些好书；你打算参加社会实践活动(social practice activities)这三个方面去介绍。并且说一说暑假期间中学生参加社会实践活动有什么好处。时态为一般将来时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. 一半的学生计划到国内外旅行。这句话运用了plan to do sth. 计划去做某事。
【高分句型二】
I'm going to take part in some social practice activities. 我要参加一些社会实践活动。
这句话运用了be going to 结构。


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（2016黑龙江大庆中考）假如你是初四（二）班班长王明，你收到了学生会发来的邀请卡，请你根据卡片的内容向班级同学说明该项活动的情况并鼓励大家踊跃参加。（字数要求：30-40词）
School-leavers' Party Invitation
Time: 6 p.m., 30th June
Place: the Student Hall
Activity: Enjoy traditional dishes, music and dancing
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【答案】Boys and girls, we are invited to the School-leavers' Party. The party is on 30th, June at 6 p.m. in the Student Hall. We can enjoy different activities there, such as traditional dishes, music and dancing. Come and enjoy ourselves.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以班长的名义介绍邀请卡的信息，要介绍清楚what （事件，活动内容）、when（时间）、where（地点）；同时号召同学们踊跃参加。要注意语言简捷明了。用一般现在时态，第一人称形式。
写作亮点：短文第一句用被动语态be invited to介绍出事件；第二句介绍时间、地点；第三句用enjoy, such as结构介绍晚会的活动；最后用祈使句come and enjoy ourselves号召大家踊跃参加。要点分明，重点突出，中心明确。
考点：考查话题作文。

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（2016黑龙江大庆中考）友谊是幸福的源泉之一。请你写一篇短文，要点如下：
1.叙述一件你和好朋友之间发生的事情；
2.表明这件事情中你在他（她）身上学习到的品质。
注意：1.词数80词左右；
2.不得出现真实的人名，校名等相关信息。
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【答案】Mary and I are best friends. We always go to school together and share everything with each other. One day, we were reading a new magazine at the school library. But I broke the magazine. I was so shy that I was afraid to tell the truth. Mary took the magazine and told the teacher that she broke the book and said sorry.
Friends should be honest. If you are honest, your friend can trust you. My best friends always tells me when I do something wrong. It hurts sometimes, but it makes me a better person, too.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以友谊为话题作文，要求结合与好朋友之间的一件事情，表明自己学习到的品质。因此短文要用一般过去时态讲述一件与朋友相关的感人事件，并用一般现在时态说明自己从这件事上的收获、感悟。动笔前要选择好写作材料、理清头绪，写作时要注意语言及句型的选用，叙述自己的感受要注意到情真意切。
写作亮点：短文第一段叙述了和好朋友之间发生的事情，第二段表明作者的感悟。层次清楚，条理分明。短文开头首先总体说明“我们”是好朋友，提出中心词：best；然后用always…together，everything几个词突出中心；接下来介绍了作者与好朋友之间互帮互助的故事，具体生动。其中用到的状语从句，宾语从句等等使文章更加生动；第二段作者围绕honest阐述，表明友谊要真诚，帮助朋友要使朋友成为更好的人。突出并且升华了主题。
考点：考查话题作文。