2019版二轮复习英语练酷版练习：专题六 应用文写作常见8大文体（八）(含解析)
展开应用文写作常见8大文体(八)——演讲稿
一、 | 写作架构要规范 |
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，该文体通常要有吸引力，明确发言的对象。演讲稿在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。具体写作结构为：
二、 | 靓点句式背一番 |
(一)开头常用语
1．My name is ...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. I shall be speaking about ...
我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
2．Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on ...
大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。
3．It’s my honor to stand here and say something about friendship.
我非常荣幸站在这里并谈谈关于友谊的话题。
(二)主体部分常用语
1．The topic of my speech today is ...
我今天演讲的主题是……
2．As far as I am concerned, I think it is a good idea to ...
就我而言，我认为……是一个好主意。
3．As is known to us all, failure is the mother of success, but few people can really understand what the saying means.
众所周知，失败是成功之母，可是很少有人真正理解这句格言的真谛。
(三)结尾常用语
1．Thanks for your listening (to my speech)．
感谢大家倾听(我的演讲)。
2．That’s all I want to say about this point.
关于这一点，我就讲这些。
三、 | 润色完善很关键 |
在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来从事的职业充满憧憬，你班将以“My dream career”为题举办演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：
1．你的理想职业；
2．选择的理由；
3．实现的途径。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
My dream career
Good morning, everyone！
Thank you for listening.
(一)准审题、准表达保基本分
定体裁 | 演讲稿 |
定人称 | 第一人称为主 |
定时态 | 一般现在时为主 |
定要点 定结构 | 开头：演讲主题(理想职业) 主体：主题内容(选择的理由) 结尾：总结演讲(实现的途径) |
[中档作文]
My dream career
Good morning, everyone!
Today, please allow me to give you a speech on the career I will do❶ in the future. Undoubtedly, I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present❷. And my dream career is to be a tourist guide. From my early age, I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere❸. They share the knowledge of the local culture and customs and enjoy the brilliant landscapes at the same time❹. Also❺， it is a wellpaid job.
To be a good guide is no easy job. I can achieve the qualification and serve the people properly only by hard work❻.
Thank you for listening.
(二)巧润色、大升级创高分
(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)
My dream career
Good morning, everyone!
Today, please allow me to give you a speech on the career I will (1)take up (词汇升级❶) in the future. (2)There is no doubt that I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present (把句❷升级为同位语从句). And my dream career is to be a tourist guide.(3) From my early age, I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere, sharing the knowledge of the local culture and customs and enjoying the brilliant landscapes at the same time (把句❸❹合并升级为非谓语动词作状语). (4)In addition (词汇升级❺), it is a wellpaid job.
To be a good guide is no easy job. (5)Only by hard work can I achieve the qualification and serve the people properly (把句❻升级为倒装句式)．
Thank you for listening.
四、 | “一题两用”错不犯 |
下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处语言错误，请改正。
My dream career
Good morning, everyone!
I feel greatly honour to give you a speech on a career I will take up in the future. My dream career was to be a doctor. As a child, I hoped that I could grow up as soon as possibly so that I could devote myself to save lives. Not only doctors save people’s lives but also we are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledges. In addition, it’s a wellpaid job.
As far as I’m concerned, it is not easy to be a good doctor. It is only by hard work what I can achieve the qualification and serve for the people heart and soul.
Thank you for listening.
答案：第二句：honour→honoured; 第二个a→the
第三句：was→is
第四句：possibly→possible; save→saving
第五句：only后加can; we→they
第六句：knowledges→knowledge
第九句：what→that; 去掉for
